SS:-Kadva Karelas and Jhakkas Jalebis(Pg 25 Note) - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update! Bye shyamu! Teehee! Good luck in university ! N yay a dazzler! Ik the yellow gets annoying after a while :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks muchly for the pm!
ahahaahahahhahaa! shyam you foool! justice is serrrved! ;)
whats in the baggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
read all of it in one go and i love your work!! its truly fantastic !!! you have an amazing talent!! plzz send me a pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

And cos I've kinda finished all my packing I thought I'd provide you guys with a quick little update. I hope you enjoy it. Dunno when I'll next be able to update but I can PROMISE PROMISE PROMISE I'll try my best cos I love writing this and then reading all of your comments! Enjoy 😳

Part 8

"Dartboard." Arnav handed it to her.

"Arnav? Dartboard?" Khushi questioned.

"Haan dartboard. Turn it over" he replied

As she slipped off the cover and turned it over she saw a sight that frightened the living daylights out of her. Her grip weakened and she dropped it on the floor. Shyamji? Arnav had bought a dartboard and customised it with Shyams face. This was exactly what Arnav had been expecting. He picked it up again and hung it up on the wall.

"Khushi daro mat. Yeh tumhe kuch nahin karne wala. Aao yahan aur mere saath khadi raho. Thoda sa maza kar lete hai aaj" Arnav consoled.

Khushi took minute steps towards Arnav and handed over the darts.

"Isko ab pheko. Uske naak par, unki aankhon mein, unki moon mein. Jahan bhi phekna hai'pheko. Sirf mujhe mat mar dalna na. Abhi abhi mein tumse itni zyada nafrat nahin karta" and he chuckled.

Khushi also giggled a little bit and stood in position. She positioned her arm and aimed the dart accordingly. Stretching her arm out she threw the dart. It shot right through Mamiji's forehead in the family picture.

"KHUSHI! MAMIJI KA KHOON MAT KARNA! Please!" Arnav teased.

Khushi just gave a smile and a shy little "Sorry. Humne kabhi darts nahin khele. Isliye."

"Hum, Arnav Singh Raizada, aapko darts khelna sikhayenge." He said in a KKG style.

He walked up to Khushi and placed himself behind her. Holding her right arm with his right arm he leaned in closer to her face.

"Ab dheere se dekho ke tum kahan shot marna chahati hon. Aur phir...BULLSEYE!" he whispered into her ear.

Khushi felt good. She aimed for Shyams nostril. It'd hurt him a lot there! With Arnav's hand holding hers she controlled the movement and threw it!

SHOT! Right in the nostril. She couldn't help but laugh. It looked so funny. Arnav saw her laughing heartily and he felt pleasant inside. As if he was in heaven. Her smile was infectious. For a good half an hour they played with the darts, each time aiming at a different part of Shyam. Khushi had perfected this and she was enjoying it. He had caused her pain. Now she was doing the same.

After Khushi just sat on the bed. Her bruises and cuts had still not healed and she still felt a bit weak but this was the first time after the incident that she had felt good about herself. And she didn't want to lose this feeling again. Arnav made her feel good and it was a sure fact that she could not deny.

"Arnav. Di ko bhi bulao na. Yeh karengi toh unka bhi mann thoda sa halka ho jayenga." Khushi asked.

Without a word Arnav went to fetch Anjali and in no time he had returned with Anjali hand in hand.

Khushi walked up to Anjali. She had been crying a lot as her eyes were swollen red and the sparkle in her face was lost.

"Di. I'm sorry. Woh meri waje se aapko..."

Arnav intervened.

"Tumne kuch bhi nahin kiye. Tumko ko kaise bata hota ke woh aisa aadmi hain. Usne aap dono ko dukh pochaya hain. Uske liye toh sazaa milegi. Waise Khushi mujhe ek baat batao. Only if you feel comfortable though. Tum Shyam ko jaanti kaise ho?"

Khushi recited everything. How he had saved her from gundas in Lucknow to how he was staying as a tenant at her home. Although occasionally she repeated that she knew nothing about his connection to the Raizadas.

"Wow! What a disgusting man!" Arnav said in disgust. "Chodo yeh sab. Di, maine aapko ek doosri waje se bolaya tha." And he pointed towards the dartboard. "Khushi madam ne toh jee bharke khel liya. Ab aapki baari hai!"

"Nahin Chote. Hum aise nahin kar sakte. Aisa theek nahin honga!" Anjali retorted.

"Di. Hum bhi shurooat mein dar rahe the. Lekin baad mein bohot hi mazaa aaya. Chalo, aap bhi upna ghussa nikaldo." Khushi tried to explain. She held Anjali's hand and positioned her as Arnav helped her too. Anjali shot the dart right into his eye. She gave an unexpected smile.

"Chote, tum bhi na...har waqt kuch na kuch larte rehte ho!" Anjali was enjoying this!

Khushi just sat there on the bed. She'd seen Arnav's gift. What was this proposal he was talking about?

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome hun!! Sorry I couldn't comment on the other parts!! Was busy preparing and packing for my trip as well 😆
Well all I can say is you've written all of them wonderfully and I love how you're heading with this playful,cute romantic story with strange and fun twists 😊
Love it!! Keep writing!! Maja avigyu!!🤗
Kevi saras varta che!❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
I L:OVE THIS PART! dart board! brill idea.
arnav and khushi are getting closer too fab!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome yaar...u r really a fantastic writer nd i will give u ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ starsss...updte sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_gurl

Awesome hun!! Sorry I couldn't comment on the other parts!! Was busy preparing and packing for my trip as well 😆

Well all I can say is you've written all of them wonderfully and I love how you're heading with this playful,cute romantic story with strange and fun twists 😊
Love it!! Keep writing!! Maja avigyu!!🤗
Kevi saras varta che!❤️


No worries man!
I have so many ideas in my head! I just need the time to implement them all! Mane bhi maja avigayi aah kahani lakh wama.

Mana bhi khabar che ke me kekli saras varta lakhi che 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

What a funny update!! Ur such an amazing writer! Sorry couldn't update on your other parts..busy preparing for uni!...Anyways awesome awesome awesome AS USUAL! 😊 xx

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Yazzy91

What a funny update!! Ur such an amazing writer! Sorry couldn't update on your other parts..busy preparing for uni!...Anyways awesome awesome awesome AS USUAL! 😊xx



:O You're off to uni too???

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