MN - Trapped in MAGIC. - Page 26

heartwrenching update kinzu!🥺
Poor MN... i'm feelin deir helplessness !!!😒
i hope evrythng wud 5ne!
cont soon!
luv ya!🤗

finally replying love the first part 😃 its very well written. her bonding with her sister and father is really amazing and for the first time ever i like her father😆 (i hated him like crazy in mjht) the ending was amazing and sad at the same time😔 her thought that something bad was about to happen also scared me since i have experienced it as well sometimes one can tell when something really bad is about to happen👎🏼hope nothing happens to any of them😃

thank u so much people!! 🤗

9. I've become so numb :

Nupur's eyes were blank and horrified, but she looked beautiful.

Her slender and perfectly carved body was fitting in that white shalwar suit to perfection; just to make his him loose his senses. Wet hair, neatly placed on one side of shoulder were even more bewitching, and the water dripping down them, wetting her shirt made things look like ice on fire.

Her face was red and puffy, just like after a hot steamy shower, and her swollen lips made her very kissable.

"can I come in?', her lips curved and she almost murmured, leading mayank to blink his eyes.

"what is it?, we can talk outside,

"but I want to come in", she cut him stiffly and mayank who himself was about to step out of the room, stopped.

He looked at her again, wanting to make sure that what he heard wasn't his illusion, but her eyes were giving him the proof that he heard right. He stepped back and nupur entered the room.

For a moment, he just stared, as she closed the door of the room and then turned towards him.\"what?', mayank asked.

"I can't stay in that room tonight", she said, in a normal tone, looking at him intently.

"why?"

"I am scared."

"of what?'

" rains .. ", she said and mayank knitted his brows, "rains?", he couldn't help repeating and she nodded, "yes, I am scared of rains, of all the thundering and lightening, of all the pouring water from skies"

He yet again observed her and glanced at the window, "but this room also has a window showing all that pouring water and lightning, and .."

but this room also has you', she stepped forward and now standing so close that an inch further would lead to a blind spot in their eyes, mayank breathed deep again, "and you are not afraid of me?",

"no,!", she stated as a matter of fact and mayank's frown increased,

"are you sure?"

"yes!, because now I have live with you forever" she said and mayank looked away, trying to ignore what she said "alright, you sleep on the bed, I'll just be on the couch", he said and turned, but before he could walk out of reach, he felt soft fingers pressing on his hard palm.

His eyes stared at the grip, which now moved on from a mere press to entwined fingers.

He remembered how much he longed for this sensation, those slender white, fragile fingers, in his hands, that soft feather like feeling of her hand in his grip. He had only dreamed, thinking it would never come true, but now when it came, with shock being an understatement to describe it, he was afraid to feel it.

"I think I told you I am afraid of rains", she said, entwining his hand tightly.

He looked up at her eyes, ignoring that pleasure sensation arising from his hand, transporting calmness and serenity to his heart.

"I want you to stay near me", her eyes sparkled in the room, which was just lit my moonlight and being sure of the source of sparkle, which were tears; he pressed his hand back in her grip and pulled her close.

She moved forward with a jerk and collided with his chest.

The wet hair were shuffled due to the pull, leading to a few droplets falling on his face, which he ignored, letting them linger over his skin, because currently, his senses stopped working in coordination due to that bewitching fragrance of hers'.

"this close is okay?", he asked, slipping his arm across her waist, very slowly, letting her feel the movement of his fingers . "yes", she whispered with a slight nod, and due to which, her already filled eyes, poured tears down her cheeks.

He was jerked out of her physical enchantment with that flowing stream of tears down her eyes and dipping his fingers in her waist, he gently brushed his other hand on her tears, "these hurt", he murmured and carried on with wiping them, while she smiled, "then what pleases you?"

"your smile, calmness", he said, with every bit of sincerity in his heart and she swollaed a lump in her throat ,as if trying to gain strength to speak, "and you made sure you snatched that from me", her voice wavered like a stone placed on steaming steel.

"I said sorry"

"and you think that is enough?", her voice, now getting more weak with every passing moment.

'No, it isn't, you can hate me, but something tells me you don't hate me as much as you show", he said, wiping every remaining trace of tear.

"maybe!, you know when I was coming to you, my mind warned that I maybe raped, but my heart didn't agree.", she smiled slowly, and it pricked mayank.

"I am not a rapist nupur", he said, in a low voice, completely desperate.

"but you are a criminal"

"and a human too", he said, feeling his own voice alien, due to choking.

"I am sorry, I just forget that all the time", she lowered her eyes and mayank pulled her an inch closer, "it's not your fault, I wish destiny hadn't brought us in front of each other the way it did", he sighed, looking at her lowered eye lashes hopefully and she raised them.

"don't blame destiny!, only if you were not a criminal", she said it again, with voice conveying undying hope on God and destiny.

"yes, only if destiny hadn't made me a criminal"

"you said it was by choice", she said, a bit amazed.

"yes, and like u comprehended, poor choices by destiny", his face twisted with pain and nupur slowly brought her palm to his face and brushed his finger tip near the corner of his eye, "were you crying?", she asked, observing carefully and he sighed and smiled, "aren't you hungry?, you haven't eaten anything since morning, kuch kaho gi?", his voice turned soft, very soft and she shook her head, "nahi, I want to sleep, my head hurts", she frowned and smiling picked her in his strong arms.

She was so light, just like a flower.

Initially skeptical about her reaction, he smiled, when she placed his arms around his neck., "you must start eating properly, you are so light", he said with a smile, as he placed her on the bed and she snuggled in the blanket, "I can never be like before",, her eyes yet again sparkled and he sat beside her , pulling her close.

For a while he thought what to answer, but then he just made his mind on stroking his head, until he decided upon another question.

"nupur", he said stroking and she frowned, hmm", she murmured

"have you really surrendered?"

"I don't know, I don't feel anything anymore. I am numb.", she said and snuggled close to him.

Ishart ' e- katra hai darya main fanaa ho jana

Dard ka haad se guzr jana hai dawa ho jana

10. Trapped Forever. - Page 45.

oMGGG Fantu...such a beautiful update!!!😍

I had not expected Nupur to behave like that soo soon...She has surrendered...she has no stamina left to fight for herself...but she has begun to trust Mayank!!!😳...Awww...can't wait for her to fall for him😳

sigh... i hope mayank is able to make her feel again...

n i hope nupur is able to make him more humane without getting into any trouble...

dnt have much to say...except that it was a lovely update Kinza...

beautifully written... God bless you... take care 😊

beautiful updt kinza
loved nupur's trust on mayank & progress in mayur's relationship
waiting for the next updt..cont soon
thanks for the pm

such a beautiful update...

very beautiful update.Loved mayur moment.