IN LOVE WITH YOU SMILE...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi...guys
I am Fizza...:)
This is for the first time , I am writting a FF...so plz tolerate my mistakes...😕
as I am a DMG lover so my ff is also based on DMG's famous characters Arman and riddhima...:)

In love with you smile
is a story of arman and ridhima with lots of twists and turns...
how they fall in love...some secrets...some hidden facts...its not only a love story but a
Suspence love story...❤️

hope you guys like my new ff...plz let me kknow if you like or don't like


character sketch will be uploaded in few mins...













here is the character sketch

Arman Malik


Arman Malik is a 23 year old young and handsome hunk..
larkian jis pe marti hain n larke jisse darte hain...
he lives in delhi
he has done architecthural engineering from Howard University..
and now a days searching for job...

Ridhima


THE MYSTERY GIRL...




Rahul Garewal


Rahul Garewal is 25 year old CEO of Garewal group of coompanies...the hot and happening bachelor of the city...no one knows about his family

Kartick Garewal
The greatest buisness man in India and the owner of Garewal Group of Companies...


rest of the cast will be introduced as the story proceeds...









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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats dear
nice CS
thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 1
we see a taxi stops in front of GAREWAL GROUP OF COMPANIES and a girl wearing jeans and black t-shirt came out of the taxi...her hairs were tied in a pony tail. she gave the money to the taxi driver,as she was going inside she gets a call on his cell..she picked up the phone and one way conversation was something like this

Girl : hello Sir, yes Sir, I have reached here , yes Sir, Dont worry, No one will get to know about me...yes I will take care , Good Day Sir...bye
as she cut the call she look at the time and said
Girl: sh*t man !!! i am late .. I have to rush..
as she was moving really fast she didn't see around her and bumped into some one
Girl: I am... Iam sorry ... I was in a hurry...
as she step aside to see who it was she was stunned to see the person who was standing infront of him... a tall, handsome and the sexiest person she has ever seen .the blue eyes with shade of green looking at her dreamingly while showing his dimples...she was lost in those beautiful eyes...
same was happening with the boy he was also lost in her beutiful hazel coloured eyes...
they come out of the eye lock as they heard someone from behind...both came back to reality and start looking here and there..
both of them look at the clock at the same time and said
Boy & Girl: Sh*t ...I am late..
both look at each other and then rush towards the reception ...
Receptionist : Good Morning , Welcome to Garewal Group of companies...How may I help you?
Girl & Boy at the same time: I am here for the interview..
both of them again look at each other but soon came back to reality as they heard the receptionist
receptionist: Can I have your names please?
Girl : Ridhima Gupta
Boy : Aramn Malik
receptionist : you have to wait in the waiting room which is on the 3rd floor till some one calls you..
both nodded and went to the directed place...
as they reach there they saw few people sitting there
both of them sat on sofa facing each other...
Arman was feeling nervous but as her gaze went to Ridhima he forgot all his tensions and nervousness and start looking at her admiringly..
Arman (in his mind) : she is so beautiful...her Eyes they are just so pretty.. how she look beutiful when she moved the strand of her hair back...coming out of his dream ...Arman dude what is happening to you...have you lost it.?? you are here for an interview so concentrate on the interview and avoid her.
as he came out of his thoughts he heared some one calling him..he look to see a girl in her early twenties wearing an office dress and glasses calling him for the interview..he stands up composed hims self and then went after the girl
as he came out of the office he was confident that he will get the job
as he came out of the office he saw the same girl asking for Ridhima .
Ridhima also went behind the girl
arman wait their for some time to know the reaction of ridhima as he was little tensed that she might also get the job as she was so confident..
ridhima came out of the office smlling..she knew she will get the job...
she came and sit on the sofa as she was directed to do so...after some more interviews
same girl came in the waiting room and announce that the interview is over as we have already chosen the best one for this job..
you will be informed by tomorrow that who is appointed for this job.
Ridhima and Arman look and each other and then went out of the office to their respective homes
on the way to her home ridhima gets a call
the one way conversation was something like this...
Ridhima: hello Sir,
Ridhima: yes sir, don't worry sir I am sure I will get this Job...
Ridhima: Yes sir, no one will get to know about me , I will try my best to keep it a secret
Ridhima: bye...

as Iam a new writer so plz let me know the mistakes.. as my english is not so good so I am sure there'll be lots of mistakes...
but do tell me how was it Good or bad or just hit the like button if you like it...😊

love
Fizza..❤️
Edited by funkyred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 2 (A)

NEXT DAY
ridhima entered in the office and went to receptionist where she saw someone standing there... she went to the receptionist and at the same time that someone turned and ridhima looked at him and he looked at ridhima and the they both said exactly at the same time
TUM...?????
Ridhima: arman...??tm yahan kia kr rai ho..?
Arman: I am appointed for the job...and btw what are you doing here..???
Ridhima: how this is possible...??even I am selected for this job...
both looked at each other confusingly and then heard the receptionist saying something to them..
Receptionist: Mr.Arman and Miss Ridhima, Mr.Rahul have called you guys in his cabin...
Arman: thanks...bt where is his cabin...
Ridhima: 3rd floor..
Arman looked at him suspeciously: how did you know that?
Ridhima nervously: wo...wo...I ...I...I just guessed it...am I right? she asked the receptionist..
Receptionist: Yes, Mam...you are absolutly right...
arman eyed him suspiciously and they both went toward Rahul's cabin...
as they entered in the cabin...
ridhima was first to enter..
when Rahul looked at her he said: Hey...andd then stops as he saw glaring at her ant signalling him that there is someone with him...at teh same time arman came in and look at them curiously...
Rahul hurriedly compose her self: you must be ridhima and arman...
both nodded as yes..
Rahul: I know you guys must be curious to know...how come you both are appointed for this job..??/
so let me tell you that when we take your interview you two were the best and it became very difficult to choose one of you...there for we decided to choose both of you so that we can have more efficient work of the two best workers...
both nodded...
Rahul: but your 1st project will be separate...you both have to 1st prove your self and then we will select the best of the two projects...got it..
both nodded in agreement...
Rahul: and ya you two will share the same cabin...as you guys have to work together...you will have your saperate tables and all the stuff you want...Ok any problem.??
Arman: no Sir...
as arman didnt get any responce from ridhima he looked at her who were giving deadly glares to rahul...
he get a lttle confused by her behavior, 1st at the reception, how she get to know about rahul's cabin, then when they were entering in the office , how rahul was casually saying hi to ridhima and when rahul saw him he just got up and meet them formally and now she is glaring at him as if she know him very well...can some body plz tell me what the hell is going around here..he thought..
his thoughts came to a break when Rahul call his name twice or thrice...
Rahul: Arman...aRMAN...arman...
.he came back to reality...
Arman: yes Sir...?totally confused...
Rahul: I was saying thet your cabin is just after my cabin as I am the incharge of all this constructions and designs , so you two will be reporting me...and now you both can go and check your cabin...its just after my cabin...and let me know what else do you want...Do i make my self clear?
both nodded in agreement..and were going out of the cabin when they heard rahul again saying something...
Aramn thought: ufff kitna bolta hai ye banda...I dnt know how m gonna handle this man...
rahul:I wanna see you both here after one hour so that we can discuss about the project I am giving you...
they both nodded and went out of the cabbin...
Arman: phew...kitna bolta hai ye... I havn't seen such a talking person in my life...
Ridhima just looked at him and smiled at his childish behavior and said: then you dont know...I talk a lot more than him...
Arman looked at him astonishingly and thought: how come on earth some one can talk more than him...
Ridhima: well..I didnt introduce my self to you...I am Ridhima...
Arman: and I am Arman...smilling widely...
she too smiled
he just look at her smile and thought how cute she is na...her dimples complemented her beautiful smile ...and his eyes they are so beautiful...and deep and blue just like a deep ocean...I just cant keep my self for starring at her...how cute she is looking right now...I wont to see her smilling like this always...
ridhima who was standing there from past 10 mins can wait any more and call his name..
Ridhima: arman chalein ..??
Arman : han??
Ridhima: chalein?
Arman : kahan??
Ridhima: by God...tm kitne bhullakar ho...tmhain ye b yad hai k tm kidhar ho...uff pta nai kis bhullakar se pala para hai mera...abhi ye haal hai to kam karte wakt kia kare ga...
Arman: what are you saying...???not understanding any thing..
Ridhima: hey bhagwan...main apne cabbin main chalne ki baat karrai hun...
Arman: oh...Han ...chalo, chalo...we are getting late ...humain 1 ghante main wapis b to ana hai sir k pas...nai to m sure wo hamra bharta bna de ga...
Ridhima: looked at him...smile at his childish behavior...
Arman: chalo tm yahan khari khari kia time waste kar rai ho chalo...
Ridhima: looked at him angrily: amin time waste kar rai hun...itni der se tm apni sochon main doobe hue the...or main time waste kar rai hun...??
Aramn: main ...main kab sochon main gum tha...tm hi apne dreamworld ki ser karne gai hui thi...
Ridhima: tm khoye hue the...
Arman: nai tm khoi hui thi...
Ridhima: tm ...
Arman: tm ...
Ridhima: tm...
Arman: tm...
as ridhima was about to say some thing the door of rahul's cabin opened and then they realize that both were still standing infront of Rahul's cabin and are fighiting like cats...
Rahul came out of the cabbin: you guys still here...???and what was all this noise about...
both said no and then fastly move toward their cabbin...
as they both were not looking here and there when the entered in the cabin they just crashed into each othe and fall on the floor...
Ridhima: ouch...while rubbing her head...
Arman: ouch...he also rub his head...
Ridhima: tm dekh k nai chal sakte kia...??? andhe ho...???
Arman: main...mai dekh k nai chal raha tha?? looking at her disblievingly...you are the one who come and crashed into me...
Ridhima: main...are you out of your mind...tm bager idhar udhar dekhe ja rai the..or mujh se takrai...
Aramn: tm...
Ridhima: tm...
Aramn: tm...
Ridhima: tm...
arman got up ...ridhima who was getting up when she saw him standing in front of her...she thought of an idea...
Ridhima: ab yahan khare khare mera moon kia dekh rai ho...help me stand up...she take out her hand so that he will her stand up...
Arman being a gentle man trried to help but the next second he was also on the floor with ridhima and ridhima laughing like crazzzyyy...
looking at her he also started laughing...
then they stand up and went to their respective tables...still laughing...
after an hour they were again standing out of rahul's cabin...
Ridhima knocked at the door...
Rahul: come in ...
both entered in the office...
Rahul: please to see you guys on time...
both smiles...
Rahul: I am sure you guys like your cabin...
both nodded...
Rahul: so now come to work...I want designs for the best hotel...we are going to build anew hotel and i want the best designs from both of you...the design which will impress me the most will be selected...
both nodded
Rahul: you can get the details from Mr. Atul...
and if you have any problem you can just ask him or even come to me... am I clear...??
both said yes and then went out of the cabin...
Both: phewww...
Arman: I told he talks a lot...
Ridhima: I am not sighing because he talks alot but because i didnt get a chace to talk... and I cant remain silent for that much time...you know I started feeling irritated,,,,
Arman looked at her disbelievingly...
then both head towards their cabin...

so here is the next...i know its a little boring...but i m sure it'll become interesting as the story proceeds...
just let me kow if you like it or not...

love
Fizza❤️
Edited by funkyred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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**PART 2 (B)**


They enter in the cabin...after some time Atul came and firstly introduce them to the rest of the staff...arman being a flirt...start flirting with girls...Atul introduce them to anjali his PA ...and guess what Arman start flirting with her...

Arman: hey beautiful...

Anjali: hey handsome...while looking at atul

Arman turn to look where anjali was seeing and saw Atul glaring at him...

Ridhima looking at the sight giggled but cover her mouth with hands as she saw all of them giving deadly glares to her...

Atul introduced them to rest of the staff and then take them back to their cabin and tell them that he'll be back after an hour as he has a meeting to attend...

As soon as Atul left the room...Ridhima start laughing...laughing like crazy...

Arman look at her confused but his confusion was soon replaced with a dreamy smile...

Arman noticing her facial features...her big eyes...cute nose...tempting lips...he was in his dream but suddenly he felt some thing wet on his face... he came back to reality and noticed ridhima standing infront of him with an empty glasslaughing badly and his shirt all drenched...

Arman shockingly stan up: what the hell...

Ridhima now looking at his serious face stop laughing : wo...wo...wo...amin tm se kitni der se bat karne ki koshish karrai thi laikn tm apne hi khyalon main khoe hue they...phr mujhe koi or idea na aya to maine tm par pani phenk dia...pouting...

Arman: are you out of your mind? Tm ne meri sari shirt kharab kardi...and this was my favourite shirt...he wanted to shout more but looking at her pouting face he forgot all his anger...

After some time

Arman: I am waiting...

Ridhima: waiting for what...

Arman: sorry...

Ridhima: its ok...its ok...

Arman surprisingly: oh hello madam...i am not saying sorry to you...I am waiting for you to say sorry...

Ridhima looked at him with questioning eyes: me sorry...why..??? maine kia kia hai...???

Arman: you must be kidding me...

Ridhima: main kun sorry bolun ulta tmhain mujhey thank you bolna chaie...

Arman: thank you?? Kun.../??

Ridhima: tmhaiin tmhare kahyalon se nikalne k lie...and btw why I should say sorry han...???

You are the one who was thinking about his dream girl and was not coming out of you dream...agar main pani na phenkti to tm sara din apni dream girl k khyalon main khoe rehte...

Arman look at her embarrassingly but not excepting the truth...: is ka matlab ye to nai hai k tm mere uppar pani phenk do gi...and btw main kisi dreamgirl k khab main nai khoya hua tha ...shyly...main kuch soch raha tha...

Ridhima: acha...!!to mr.Malik...kia soch rai the ap..???

Arman: not knowing what to say...wo main...wo main...wo tmhain kia...??/ main jo marzi soch raha hun...

At the same time the door knocked and atul came into the office...

Arman thank God for savng him from ridhima's constant questions and look at atul thankfully...

ATUL: SO GUYS ...READY FOR WORK...???

Both of them: ofcourse...

Atul tell them all the details ...about how this hotel should and where it is going to be built and how should it look like...and other details...

After giving all the detail...

Atul: i am sure you understood every thing...and as you guys know you have to make designs saperately and the best one will be choosen...

Both nodded in agreement ...

And you guys surly wanna see the site...???

Both nodded in agreement

Atul: ok...then tomorrow morning we'll be leaving for kasuli...

Both: kasauli..???

Atul: ya...kasauli...hotel is going to built there...

Atul: so guys ...tomorrow sharp 7 am ...you guys should be here

Arman: 7am...???? itni jaldi..??

Atul: han...because kasauli yahn se 8 ghante ki doori pe hai...or phr wahan ja kar site b to dekhni hai ...isi lie humain jaldi jana pare ga...

Ridhima: ok..

Atul stand up to leave but before leaving

Atul: if you guys want any help you can call Anji...i mean anjali...

Arman: mischeviously...any time...??

Atul with a frown left the place

Arman grins and ridhima nodded in disbelieve...

AFTER SOME TIME

Ridhima was engrossed in the file of the hotel and arman was getting bored...

Arman: tm jo marzi karlo designs to mere hi approve hon ge...

Ridhima(without looking up): dream on...

Arman: you don't believe me...???

Ridhima simply: NO...

Arman: then have a bet...

Ridhima put the file on the table and look at him in surprise: BET...????

Arman: ya...bet..

Ridhima: kaisi bet?

Arman: yahi k kis k designs approve hon ge...

Ridhima: ofcourse mere...

Arman: ya rite...

Arman: theek hai agar tmahre plans approve hue to tm jo kaho gi wo main karun ga...or agar tm har gai to...

Ridhima: to...?????

Arman: to tmhain wohi karna hoga jo main bolun ga ...

Ridhima: jo main kahun...???

Arman: yup...jo tm kaho ...

Arman: so Bet...??taking his hand infront of ridhima..

Ridhima: after thinking for a small time...put her hand on his hand : ok ...bet...:/

Edited by funkyred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey
nice ff
luvd d concept
plz add me 2 ur pm list
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey lovely update...

AR.. so bet is on...

letz see who wins?????

n bechara atul.. kuch khe bhi nahi sakta... armaan ko...hehehe...

cont. soon

love

aditi

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Posted: 14 years ago
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**PART 3 (A)**

next day at 6:30 am ...alarm was continouslly ringing from half an hour but had no effect on our hero...he is sleeping peacefully looking so adorable and cute...

alarm bell slightly register in arman's head and he frowned...thinking

itni suba suba kis ne alarm lagaya...abhi to main raaj ki party se wapis aya tha...

he then cover his ear with a pillow as he was about to sleep again he jerked and sit straight on the bed...

arman: s**t...mujhe to aj 7 bje tk office pohanchna tha...Damn...main kaise bhool gia...and what is the time...

he loocked at the clock and his eyes widened with shock...it was 6:45

he got up hurrily and went to the bathroom for taking a shower...

he came out hurrily in a towel wrapped around his waist...

he was looking so sexy with muscular body and wet hairs and droplets of water on his broad muscular chest...

he opened up his cupboard and take out a white shirt and jeens and pick up a tie...he wore the jeens and put shirt on leaving the buttons undone..he pick up his shoes and other things and ran towards his car...

it was 7:15 now...

while driving he tried to wear his shoes and in doing so he didnt focus on the road and was about to hit a car when he look up at the road and stop the car with a jerk...

Arman: abey yar...kia ho gia hai mujhe...

he soome how manage to wear the shoes and reach the office...

outside the office he saw ridhima standing fumming with anger...

Arman: abey yar...ab to tu gia...dekh zara ridhima ko...kitne gusse main hai...lagta hai k aj to ye mujhe kacha chaba jai gi...he parl the car and came out and was about to say some thing when she heard ridhima laughing ...

arman got confused he looked at her with confused expressions

ridhiam was laughing holding her stomach ...she stop once but then again when she saw him she started laughing...

arman was hell irritated now...

Arman:whats so funny...???

Ridhima: you...and start lauging again...

Arman: what...?? main ...???

Ridhima: (controlling her laughter) tm ye kia bane hue ho??

Arman: kia matlab...??

ridhima: I mean dress jeans and joggers with a dress shirt and tie hanging around your neck, hairs so messy and your socks they are ...she again started lauging...

Arman look at his socks and was embarassed to hell because he was wearing different socks...one is blue and other is black...

arman: feeling really embarassed...wo kia hai na main late utha tha to jaldi jaldi main jo hath laga wo pehen lia and about the tie...wo mujhe pehnni nnai ati...he made a puppy face...

Ridhima: awww...poor baby...tie bandni nai ati...

Arman: tumahin banddni ati hai...???

ridhima:han

Arman: to plz band do na...nai to agar kisi or ne mujhey is halat main dekh lia na to kia soche ge...

Ridhima first hasitate but then came closer to him and starts buttoning the shirt...

as ridhima touch his bare chest arman feel tinge of shiver down his spine...the fragrance of her hairs was making him crazy...he at that time just wanted to embrace her and never let her go...

as she buttoned up the shirt and pick his tie and started tieing it around his collar...

arman was lost in her...the closness was making him crazy and he was finding it really difficult to control himself...

a hair lock was coming into ridhima's eye and was disturbing her... arman slowly caress he face and put the hair lock behind her ear...

arman held her from her waist...ridhima looke up at him and he was lost in those beautiful almond colored eyes...the eye lock remains for 5 mins and broke by the honking sound of car which reminds them they were in parking lot...

both left each other and start looking here and there...

he ask her about atul...

Ridhima: wo atul nai ai ga...he was called for an urgent meeting...therefor we have to go alone...

arman noded and sat in the car...

Arman(thinking) : kia hogia hai mujhe...kia soch raha tha main...main pagal ho jaoon ga... kahin mujhe...

nai nai nai...aisa nai ho sakta...Arman Malik cant fall in love...its just attraction and nothing else...uhhh...she will make me crazy...her fragrance is driving me crazzy...she is so beautiful...uhhh not again arman...u have to stay away from her...try to stay away from her...Arman Malik u can do it...

but the next moment all his focus went out of the window of the car...

she came and sat at the pessanger seat...arman looked at her and was again lost in her beauty...

she snap her fingers in front of his face and he came out of his dreamland...

Ridhima: kia hua Arman...??? Kahan kho gai ho..??

Arman: nai... kuch nai...

he started driving...

Ridhima: tum ne breakfast kia...???

Arman: nai...wo main jaldi main tha na...

Ridhima: main janti thi...isi lie main tmhare lie...she stop miid sentence...

arman looked at himm surprizingly...

Ridhima: I mean ...maine b breakfast nai kia...tumhain aloo k prathey pasand hain...???

Arman ( excitidely): aloo k parahte...I like alooo k prathey...???? I love aloo k parathey...

Ridhima take out the tiffin box from her bag and opened it up...

the dilicious aroma of the parathas fill the car...

Arman: mmm...smells yummmyy...

Ridhima take the tiffin box in front of him so that he have the paratha...as he was about to pick the paratha... a car came infront of him and he turn his car sharply and got saved from the accident...

he keep on driving...

Ridhima: you cant eat while driving...

Arman: but I am hungry...

Ridhima: ok...main tmhain khilati hun...

Ridhma make a morsel of paratha and put it in arman's mouth...

Arman: mmm...yummmyyy...these are the best parathas I've ever eaten...

Ridhima smiles...

She put the morsel in his mouth and he bite her finger...

Ridhima: ouch...armaaan pratha khao meri ungli nai...

Arman giggles and said sorry...

Arman: tm nai kha rai...???

Ridhima: mujhey bhook nai hai...

Arman: dekho tm ne b to breakfast nai kia chalo tm b khao...

Ridhima: but

Arman: no ifs and buts...chalo khao...

Ridhima frowns and eat ...

After 3 hours

Ridhima: arman hum kitni der main pohnche ge...???

Arman: abi to srf 3hours guzre hain ...5 or ghante lage gain...

Ridhima: tum continuously drive krte krte thak jao ge...jab tm thak jao to mujhe de dena...I'll drive...

Arman: tm drive kr leti ho...??

Ridhima: ofcourse...

Arman: gr8...but its ok...I can drive...

Ridhima keep her head on the back of the seat and close her eyes...

After 2 arman look at her she was sleeping

Arman admired her beauty...Arman thought: kitni innocent lagrai hai sote hue...kitni cute hai bilkul bacho jaisi innocence hai...and that smile it'll made me crazzzyyy...and that hair lock is disturbing her...

He slowly put that strand of hair behind her ear...and look at her more closely...

Ridhima shakes a bit and arman came to his senses...

Arman(thinking): Armaaannn...tu pagal ho raha hai tu kia soch raha tha...ufff Arman Malik this girl is driving you crazy...

He then look at a dhabba on the way he stops the car and think ( A TEA MAY DO SOMETHING BETTER) and I can concentrate on driving...

He look again at her she was sleeping ...he didn't want to wake her up...so he get to the dhabba and order tea for himself...

He look back at he car but didn't find ridhima there...

He got worried... he look here and there and find her at the water pump washing her face...

He look at her mesmerized by her beauty...the water droplets were kissing her forehead and then move towards her cheeks and then kiss her glossy lips and then goes down to her throat...

Arman at that time wish that how beautiful it would have been if he was that drop of water...

He then look that a drunk guy was going toward her...he immediately went near her..

The drunk boy were misbehaving with her...

He goes there and stand between ridhima and the boy

Arman: kia hua ...tm yahan kun khari ho chalo main kab se tmhara wait karraha tha...

Drunk guy: oe...piche hat...tu kidhar se agia beech main...??

Arman ignore him and hold ridhima's hand and start walking towards the car when the drunk guy hold ridhima's other hand...

Drunk guy: tune suna nai ...chor ise...

Now it was enough for arman... he turn back push ridhima behind him...and punch hardly on his face...

The guy fall on the floor and arman take ridhima's hand and start moving forward when that guy again stand up and take a knife out of his pocket and was about to hit arman when ridhima look back and scream : Armaaan and put her hand at his back...

The knife instead of hurting arman hurt ridhima's hand ...she got a very deep cut...

ridhima: ouch...sh**t...


Arman saw that and was now fuming with anger...he move towards the guys with blood red eyes...he punch the guy in his stomach ...the guy fell on the ground...arman picked him up and then hit him on his face again and again till some people from the dhabba came and separate the two..


the cut was very deep buut it seems like it was not a big deal for ridhima...she was behaving like it is a small cut...but soon ridhima started feeling dizzy n she fell...arman saw that and leave the boy and ran towards ridhima...he pick her up in his arms and made her lie on a nearby chair...he tried to wake her up by sprinkling water on her but she wasn't responding...

Arman ask from the near by person about the hospital...he tell him that the hospital is at a distance of 15 km from here...

..

He then look at ridhima and then take her to the car ...Make her sit in the car and then close the door and then ran towards his seat...he started driving fastly...he look at road and then look at ridhima ...her condition was piercing arman's heart into thousands of pieces...

He try to wake her up but his own eyes were getting moist seeing her in pain...

He drive ore fast...after few minutes he was at the hospital door...he hurridly came out and take ridhima to the hospital...and ask the nurse to call the doctor...

He was standind at the reception when someone put his hand at his shoulder...

Arman turn back and was shock to see abhimannu standing infront of him...

(Abhimannu is arman's college friend but they separate after the college because arman went to buissness feild and abhimannu selected medical feild)

Abhi: abbey arman ...tu yahn...or tujhey kia hua...tu itna tensed kunhai...

Arman point towards ridhima and then tell him k us k hath pe bht deep cut laga hai and khoon nikalna band hi nai ho raha...or wo behosh ho gai hai...pta nai kun...kabi koi hath pe cut lagne se behosh hua hai...bs isi lie i mm little tensed...

Abhi ask the nurse to take her to OPD ...he himself went in and examin her...he gave her an injection and then stitch her hand and then bandage it...

He came out of the OPD...and saw arman pacing from left to right...

Abhi goes towards him and put his hand on arman's shoulder...

Arman turn back and saw abhi and then start asking him questions about ridhima: abhi ...kaisi hai wo ? theek to hai na...koi ghabrane wali bat to nai hai na...???
tu kuch bol kun nai raha hai...???

Abhi: abbey yar tu kuch bolne de ga to bolun ga na...

Arman becomes quiet

Abhi: she is fine...i think us ka recently koi accident hua tha jis main us ka kafi blood loss hua tha...isi lie is cut k lagne se us ko weakness ho gai or wo behosh ho gai...cut thora deep tha is lie ziada blood loss hua...laikin ab wo bilkul theek hai...maine us k hath pe bandage kar dia hai or pain killer b de di hai...abhi wo so rai hai...1 ghante tk jag jai gi...tu fikar mat kar...she is absolutely fine...

Arman take a sigh of relief...and sat down at the chair...he was so exhausted after todays events...

Abhi: tu thak gia hai ...chal cafe chal k coffee pite hain...

Arman: nai yar wo ridhima...

Abhi: wo abi so rai hai tu chal hum thori der main wapis ajain ge...or waise b nurse andar hai...

Arman nodded and then went to cafeteria with abhi...he was sitting when abhi brings 2 mugs of coffee ...he gave one to arman and sit infront of him...

Abhi: to ab bta kon hai ye...jis k halke se cut ne teri jan nikal di...

Arman: aisi koi bat nai hai...ye meri colligue hai ridhima ...hum dono aik sath kam karte hain...

Abhi: and...

Arman: ad what..??

Abhi: sirf colligue...

Arman: han...

Abhi: arman tu kise bewakoof bana raha hai...??? mujey ya apne ap ko...???

Arman: kia matlab...???

Abhi: agar wo sirf teri colligue hai to us k ek halke se cut lagne se teri jaan kun nikal gait thi..???

Arman: wo to main bs aise hi dar gia tha khoon dekh kar...

Abhi: arman tu muj se kuch nai chupa sakta...acha bta teri kitni girlfriends hain jin k cut lagne pet u itna dar gia tha...

Arman silent...

Abhi: yad hai neha...us ka jab itna savaior accident hua that b b tu ne itna react nai kia tha...

Arman: pta nai ya...mujhe khud kuch samajh nai arai...jb b use dekhta hun use ki ankhon main kho jata hun...aj us k hath pe cut dekh kar to meri jaise jaan hi nikal gait hi,...

Abhi: I think you are falling for her...

Arman: ahat ...no way...main abi use total 3 dafa mila hun...how can I fall in love...???

Abhi(scarsticslly): tu ne love at first sight suna hai...???

Arman: dude...love at first sight doesn't exist...

Abhi: it exists...then how can me and nikki fall in love on our first meeting...???

Arman: I don't know yar...chal forget it ...tu bta niki kaisi hai and kidhar hoti hai...

Abhi: niki bilkul theek hai and wo yahin hoti hai but kuch dino k lie America gai hai for a surgery...

Arman: hmmm.great...he take the last sip of his coffee and ask abhi to lets go ...

They come back to ridhima's room where she was awaken and was sitting on the bed...

He help her in standing and then introduce her to abhi..

Arman: ridhima...ye abhi hai...mera college frnd and best frnd...

Abhi smiles at this and then shook hand with ridhima...

Arman then tell abhi that they are going to leave...humain kasauli jana hai...

Abhi...are yar...abhi bht late ho gia hai dekh 9 baj gai hai n kasauli yahan se 3 ghante door hai...tm log aj raat mere ghar per eh lo kal suba chale jana...

Arman tried to protest but abhi insisted and both ridz and arman agrees to stay...

Abhi gave them the house keys ..

Abhi: meri abhi ek ghante main ek surgery hai to main abhi nai asakta ...tm log jao jake fresh ho or rest karo...han agar kuch khana ho to khud hi manage kar lena...

Both agrees and went to his house...

On their way arman ask ridhima: are u ok...

Ridhima noded...

Arman: tm se ek bat puchoon...???

Ridhima: han pucho...

Arman: tmhara thore dino pehle koi accident hua tha...?

Ridhima's face become pale as she was caught red handed...

Ridhima after composing herself...: nai to...kun tmhain kis ne kaha...

Arman: nai abhi keh raha tha that may be tmhara recently koi accident hua hoga is waja se tmhara thora sa khoon baha or tm behosh ho gai...

Ridhima: oh...nai...nain...aisa kuch nai hai...

Then ridhima's cell ring...

She look at the call and then disconnect it...

Arman: phone kun kat dia...???

Ridhima: kuch nai...wo ...wo mera abi kisi se bat karne ka dil nai karraha...

Arman: ok...

They reach abhi's house...



thats all for today...I am really sorry for updating late...I'll try my best to update regularly...

hope you like this part...hit the like button if you like it ...and do tell me if there are any mistakes...


LOVE

FIZZA




Edited by funkyred - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey that was awsome...

seriously ridz is amystery

cont. soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#10

~PART 3(B)~


on the way to abhi's home...ridhima remains unusually quiet...she answered arman's questions in monosyllables...arman found it a little wierd...

the house look very beautiful from outside...a perfect home with a small garden...the garden needs some attension but over all the out the outlook was great...

arman opened the front door and they both went in...

as they entered the house they get the biggest shock of their life...they were shock to see the most disastrous sight infront of them

the house was a mess ... clothes on the sofa, on the dinning table...pizza boxes on the couch , news paper all around the house...as they move inside arman tripped over some thing and fall on the ground...ridhima giggles but soon stop giggling as she saw arman glaring at her...

he stand up and saw a shoe lying in front of him..

Arman: oh my God...is this a house...what the hell is this...its like a trash can ...uhhh...this is such a mess...

ridhima was also astonished t see the condition of the house

they both walk in roamed about the whole house...

it was a nice house with 3 bedrooms ,living room,dinning room,drawing room and kitchen...

only kitchen was the place which was clean and not messed up...because Abhi always ordered the food or rather eat in hospital cafeteria...

then they move towards the bed rooms...the first one they saw was a huge mess...clothes all over the floor...empty cans wandering on the floor ..pillows on the foot side of the bed...

Arman: I am sure ye abhi ka kamra hai...

then they head towards the next rooms they were cleans may be because abhi had never entered in these rooms...

Arman: ridhma tm b fresh ho jao...phr hum kuch khane ko dekhte hain...I am starving...

Ridhima: ok ...or han tm atul ko fone kar k bta do k hum log kasauli kal jain ge...

He nodded and then both went to their respective rooms...

after freshning up both went to the kitchen to find some thing to eat...but didnt find anyting...

Ridhima: tm ja kar livingroom main betho main khana bna leti hun...

Arman: nai nai ridhima...tmhare hath par chot lagi hui hai ...u cant cook...

ridhima: arman ...chot mere left hath par lagi hai right per nai...I'll manage...

Arman: nai tm nai bnao gi...acha aik kam karo tm mujhe btao k kaise bnana hai ...aj khana main bnata hun...

ridhima: par tm kaise...

arman: dnt worry...main itna bura cook b nai hun...pta hai jab mom ghar par nai hoti to main khud hi apne lie toast or cofee bnata hun...toast or cofee bnana koi asan kam hai...

Ridhima: bilkul asan kam nai hai...

ridhima chuckeles..: ok...main tmhain btati jati hun..tm karte jao..

arman noded...

ridhima jumped up and sit on the kitchen counter

they decided to make matter paneer...

ridhima instructed him all the things ...

he then decided to make roti also...

ridhima tried her best to stop him but our hero says: JAB MAINE AIK BAR COMITMENT KAR DI TO PHR MAIN APNE AP KI B NAI SUNTA...

at the end ...dinner was ready but arman was looking more like a dish than the food he cook...

he was all covered with Floor, haldi, coriander...etc...

ridhima: arman tm ja kar dobara se fresh ho jao utni der main khana serve karti hun...

arman noded and went to the room for freshening up...

in the mean while ridhima serve the food on the table...

arman came and enhales deeply the aroma the food...

Arman: mmm...smelllsss delicious...hope it tastes also...

Both then sat on the chairs and start eating...

Arman: its yummy...I didn't know I cook so well..

Ridhima: ya..its very good...u really cook well...

Then they both finish the dinner...after the dinner arman call abhi to know about his ware bouts ...abhi told him that he has a night duty, so he wouldn't be able to come tonight...

Ridhima and arman cleaned up the living room a little and then sat there talking...actually arman talking and ridhma listening...

Arman look at ridhima who remain quiet throughout the evening ...

Arman: ridhma...

Ridhima: han..??

Arman: kahan khoi hui ho...???

Ridhima: kahin nai...

Arman: waise ridhima tm ne aisa kun kia...???

Ridhima: maine kia kia...???

Arman: mere lie tm ne apna hath zakhmi kar lia...??

Ridhima: ye maine srf tmhare lie nai kia...agar tmhari jaga koi b hota to main yahi karti...

Arman(alittle disappointed): par ridhima

Ridhima: arman...maine aisa kabi b nai chaha k meri waja se kisi ko koi chot pohnchey...

Arman; par is main tmhari kia galti thi...ye sb kuch main sambhal leta na...

Ridhima: choro na Arman...jo ho gia so ho gia ...ab use badla to nai ja sakta...

Arman: han ye b hai..

Ridhima stand up: kafi raat ho gai hai...I thnk we should sleep ...suba kasauli b to jana hai...

Arman: han tm jao main thori der tak jata hun...

Ridhima: Good night

Arman: good Night

Ridhima went to her room...

After some time arman was going to his room when he heared ridhima talking to someone...he stand beside the door to hear her conversation

One sided conversation was something like this

Ya sweetheart...

No sweety...its just a small cut...nothing major...

Ya m absolutely fine...

Rahul ...!!!Don't worry...I'll be back by tomorrow...

Ya...i will take care of my self...

U too take care...

Miss u 2...bye...

As she hung up...she got another call ...

Ridhima: time for 1 more lecture...

In the meanwhile arman who was standing by the door was a little heartbroken...thinking ridhima had a boyfriend...he was about to go when he heard her talking again...

Sir ap fiakr mat karein sirf aik chota sa cut laga hai...I am absolutely fine...PAUSE

I know sir after last month's incident aik chota sa cut b mere lie jan lewa hosakta hai ...but siriously Sir I am absolutely fine...PAUSE

Sorry sir...I'll be careful next time...

Good night...

arman heard the whole conversation and he was confused as to whom she was talking to and what happened to her last month that a little cut is very dangerous for her...

he was very confused...

he walks toward his room and fell on the bed still thinking about ridhima's conversation with some guy called rahul n the other person...

he was feeling jelous of rahul...

Arman: who the hell is this rahul...or ridhima isse aise kun bat karrai thi...I am sure us ka boyfrnd hoga...

Laikin main itna kun soch raha hun...ridhima ki life he wo jo marzi kare...

But ridhima aisi lagti to nai hai k us ka koi boyfrnd ho...

Mujhe kia ...wo jaisi marzi ho...why i am so tensed...

N to whom she was talking to after rahul...n what happened to her last month...

This girls will surely drive me crazy...

i think I should sleep...

he closes his eyes and was soon fast asleep due to today's exhausted events...

arman saw that he was standing in a dark room and suddenly there was a noise of gun shot and then he saw ridhima in his arms unconscious

arman: ridhima...ridhima...

ridhima: armaaan...

arman: ridhima...ridhima...plz ankhain kholo...plz...

ridhima: I...I...I love you arman and I...I am sorry...

n then her eyes closed...

arman wake up with a jerk...

he was all sweating...

he was breathing heavily...

Arman: what kind of dream it was...??

He suddenly get up from his bed n walk towards ridhima's room

The door of her room was slightly open...he push it softly to open it completetly and without any noise...

The room was dark only the moonlight was lightning up the room

He walk towards her ...when he reach near her bed ...he was mesmarized by the beauty infront of her...she was looking out of this world in the dim moonlight...he was lost in her beauty...a strand of hair was disturbing her he came close to her pIck up that strand and place it behind her ear...he was so close to her that he can feel her warm breath on his face...his eyes fell on her lips n he was just lost in the pink glossy lips...

He was about to get more close to her when suddenly reality ht his head and he came back to senses...he back off with a jerk...

Arman:dude...what the hell do u think u were doing...tera dimagh to kharab nai ho gia...agar ridhima ko pta chal gia to kia soche gi wo ter bare main...are you out of ur mind...thinking so...he move towards his room still thinking what happened to him a few minutes back...

He reach his room sit on the bed with his head in his hands

Arman: ye mujhe kia horaha hai...main abi kia karne wala tha...how can i be soo...

Beta arman tu pagal ho gia hai...plz soja nai to or pta nai kia kuch kare ga...

In the morning

Arman...arman ...utho na dekho hum late hojain ge...

Arman...

Arman: ridhima sone do na plz ...

Ridhima: arman main last time tmhain jaga rai hun agar tm na uthe to main...

Arman:plz 5 minute na...sone do plzzz...

Ridhima: enough...and

SPLASHHH...

She pour the bucket full of freezing water on arman...

Arman wake up with the jerk...

Ridhima ran to the door...so that arman can't do any thing to her...(she shouted): tm uth nai rai the isi lie aisa karna para...and ran from there...

Arman: ridhima ...i will not leave you...he ran after her...they ran in the whole house like kids...

Abhi entered the house and was dumbfound by the sight in front of him...

Arman totally drenched running after ridhima...

Ridhima came and hide behind abhi...

Ridhima: plzzz...mujhe isse bachao...

Arman came towards abhi and tried reaching ridhima from sides...

Abhi: arman ...ye kia halat banai hui hai tune apni...kapre pehen k hi nah alia kia...???

Ridhima giggles at this...

Arman: ye sab is ridhima ka kia dhara hai...is ne mujh per poori balti pani ki ulta di...still trrying to catch her...

Ridhima(still hiding behind abhi) : main kitni der se tmhain jaga rai thi laikin tm uth hi nai rai the...(moving side to side to escape from arman's hands...

Arman: is ka matlab ye to nai hai k tm mujh pe pani dal do...

Ridhima then push abhi over arman and ran out of the house in the garden...arman and abhi fall on each other...

Arman hurridly getting up: is ridhima ko to main nai chorun ga...he ran towards the garden...she was still running so that arman can't catch him...

Arman saw a water sprinkler there...

Arman pick it up : ab kahan bach k jao gi...

Ridhima's face become pale seeing water sprinkler in his hand: arman ...nai...

Arman: kun nai...

Ridhima: arman plz...nai...

But it was too late arman started sprinkling water on ridhima..

Ridhima was still trying to save her...she tried to get that pipe from him...both of them were holding the pipe such that it was sprinkling water on both of them...

Arman again lost in her beautiful almond eyes...he was mesmarized by the beauty infront of him...her wet hairs coming on her milky white face and then his eyes got fixed on her lips ...the water droplets were making their way from her cheeks to lips and then to her neck...arman came closer to her...water still showring on them...put the strands of hair behind her ears to have a better look of her face...their face was only inches apart from each other...he cann feel her warm breath on his face ...he move closer and was about to taste her lips...

Suddenly ridhima back off and arman came back to the reality...

There was a awkward silence for a few minutes finally ridhima spoke up

Ridhima: hum late hojain ge...hamain jaldi ready hona chaie...

Arman(nervously): ya...ok...

They bith went inside the house...

Abhi was shocked to see both of them fully drenched...

Ridhima went to her room silently where as arman was still in delema as to what happened few minutes ago...

Abhi: arman...

Arman:No answer...

He again called but still no answer...

Abhi then hit him on his shoulder...

Arman: owww...what was that for...???

Abhi: tujhe tere khabon ki dunya se jagane k lie...

Abhi: tujhe ho kia gia hai... tu pehle to aisa nai tha...tu to hamesha se bht serious kisam ka banda tha ... ye bachon jaisi harkatain tu ne kab se shuru kar di...??/

Arman: pta nai yar...mujhe kia ho gia hai...

Abhi: kher chor in baton ko...i am sure tu iss bar late nai hona chahe ga nai to ridhima tera bharta bna de gi...

Arman: oh...haaan ...main chalta nai...main bhagta hun nai to ridhima mujhe chore gi nai...

He ran toward his room ...while taking shower...he was still thinking about what is happening to him...why is ridhima effecting him so much ...what happened to him when she come in front of him...why it seems that everything is perfect with her...he then thought...dude...what are you thinking...tu kar kia raha tha garden main...mana ridhima me thora bachpana hai...she look as innocent as a child...us ki shararti ankhain...

armaaannn...lakin tujhe kia hogia...tu kun us k piche bhag raha tha jaise tm dono 2 sal k bache ho...main pagal horaha hun...dekho...main sach me pagal horahaun...main apne ap se batein karraha hun...

.he was bought back from his deep thought by a loud knock on the door...

Abhi: arman tu naha raha hai ya pani bna raha hai...jaldi nikal ...ridhima kab se tera wait kar rai hai...

Arman(from inside the bathroom): bus nikla...2 minute...

On the other hand ridhima made breakfast for the three of them after having shower once again...

Abhi and ridhima were sitting at the dinning table...

Abhi: hmmm...kitne dino bad maine ghar ka bna hua khana khaya hai...its sooo yummmyyy...

Ridhima: thanx l

Ridhima: tm yahan akele rehte ho...???

Abhi: han...

Ridhima: and tmhari family...???

Abhi: meri mom ki to mere bachpan main hi death ho gait hi...

Ridhima: oh sorry...

Abhi: ahan...dont be...and my dad and brother sid lives in California...

Ridhima: ok...

then arman came n sit with them and start eting his breakfast...

abhi: arman...

arman:(still eating) hmm...???

abhi: mera 1 kam kare ga...???

arman(sternly): nai...

abhi(disappointed):...

arman started laughing...: abe yar is me poochne ki kia zaroorat hai bol na kia kam hai...???

abhi:tu b na...acha next month ki 12th ko sid araha hai.

arman: wow...sid araha hai...great...its been long na...

abhi: han..but... us ki flight mumbai me land kare gi...meri 12 ko ek bohat important surgery hai...to kia to use airport se receive karlega please...

arman: please bole ga to kabi nai jaoon ga...

abhi : acha baba...i am ordering you to go and recieve him...

arman: now thats better...

ridhima listning to their convo sighed...: arman hum late ho rai hain...plz jaldi breakfast khatam karo...

arman: ok...ok

After that...they bid goodbye to abhi...and arman promised to pick sid from airport...then they leve for kasauli once again...

They reach their destination in 2 hours...they scan the whole area...and then in the evening leave for Mumbai again...

They reach Mumbai by the mid night...

Arman drop ridhima at home... and then leave for his...


OK... THAT'S IT FOR NOW...I M REALLY VERY SORRRYYY FOR UPDATING SO LATE...😳.I WAS BUSY WITH MY COLLEGE...I'LL TRY TO UPDATE REGULARLY BUT I CAN'T PROMISE...

I HOPE U GUYS LIKE THIS PART DO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT IF U LIKE IT...:)😎


LOVE

FIZZA❤️

Edited by funkyred - 14 years ago

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