The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 - Page 66

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Posted: 13 years ago
Dol...its awesummm =))

but plz dont tel that u r gng to end stry in nxt few updates...coz as far..it is very smooth n eveything z perfect... but i m MISSIN SHARAN .. :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
woah!

i knew it ...it was bound to happen...DEEDS khurana and DAD khurana r giving tough time to rookie...:P

keep it up guys...its awesome ..
dol🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Dol that was jus awesomee!!!! 😃 lovee this storyy soo much!!! 😃 plss continuee soon!!! xxx

sowii i knw this is very stalkerishh😳 buhh i jus can nevaa wautt for ur updatess😉
ooo jus realisedd im a groupbie now!!!!!! lool
Edited by Cutiee_Ashh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww...rookie...cute...
Family is cute ..as well...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 91

She opened the box and looked at the jewelry set for a long moment. The soft scent of her mother's perfume that was still fixed to the box spread around her like an envelope...causing her to be teary eyed. Keerti had been on the phone with Rohan for a half hour and had showered and gotten ready for bed; and she still hadn't been able to let go of the set from her hand. Her fingers trailed over the dangling pearls over and over again, her hands held the set up closer to her face for her to inhale her mother's scent, her eyes formed images of her mother wearing the set...

None of this had gone unnoticed by Keerti...but she let her be for some time. She had often found Simran looking lovingly at her mother's picture...remembering her...probably missing her dearly. She couldn't even imagine what it must feel like - to lose your mother...and father too. In a sense she had also lost her father, right after she had lost her mother. She couldn't imagine her life without either of her parents - let alone one. And yet, Simran had endured all this...hiding all her hurt and pain beneath her bubbly exterior. That was the harsh reality of life - not everything worked your way. For a moment she felt tears in her own eyes looking at Simran...but a small smile also formed on her lips when she thought about Aditya. It was true - when life closes a door on your face...it opens a window somewhere too...

She gently placed her hand on Simran's shoulder while sitting close to her on the bed. Simran looked at her and then looked back at the set smiling. She gave it to Keerti to hold while saying, "This is my mother's set..." There was much pride her in voice even though it cracked a bit.

"It's gorgeous!" Keerti told her honestly. The set was really very beautiful...and delicate.

"My mother wore this on her wedding day. She looked out of this world. It was as if her own beauty had escalated the beauty of the set. You have seen that picture I carry with me right?! I had made her wear this set and pose for that picture. That was the last time she wore it. Because after that she kept it for my marriage..." her voice started breaking again, but she still continued, "...hoping she would be able to put it on me some day. But..." She tried hard to hold back the sobs as she pressed her lips together.

Although she had never treated her father like one ever after his second marriage, she still had strangely never felt like an orphan...until that moment when reality struck her. All of a sudden, she was flooded with sadness as she realized she has no family left. She had no parents, no siblings and she had never really kept close contact with any of her relatives. Tears started rolling down her cheeks forming a wet stream as she realized how alone she was in life. There was something about abandoning her house that heightened this feeling of loneliness that she couldn't really comprehend...but she was aware of it.

Keerti shushed her while taking her in her arms. She held her tight as she spoke, "You have us...you belong to us...you are one of us. My parents are your parents...my deeds is your deeds. And more than anyone, you have Aditya. If God has taken away your parents, he has given you Aditya...who loves you with all he has. People would die to get a person like Aditya in their lives...specially with the way he loves you."

She didn't know which part did it - whether it was that she belonged to them and had them in her life or the fact that she had Aditya in her life - but her sobs had quieted down considerably. She must have been very emotional, because she was clutching Keerti very tight now. While she was still pacifying her, she asked, "When are you guys planning to get married?"

She pulled apart and answered while still sniffing, "I don't know, but I hope soon. I cannot bear to be called Suri anymore."

It was the perfect moment to lighten the mood and thus Keerti elbowed her as she teased her, "Ah, someone is desperate to get married!"

She finally saw a shy smile creep on her face and sighed. She got up to walk to the kitchen to fetch her a glass of water when she saw Kanan stand by the door. From the looks, it was evident that she had heard their conversation, because she quietly placed the glass of water in her hand on the dresser and left the room after mouthing a good night to her. Keerti smiled as she grabbed the glass of water for Simran...after all, her evil sister was not all that evil.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Doll.

It was really emotional but cute to read... If she lost relations she also gained some new ones. Precious ones...Kits consoling her and Kanaan silently supporting her too.. It was a real sweet update... :)

-SP-


Edited by .SilentPrincess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great updates...loved rohan and keerti's cute romance...loving keerti's sis teasing the couple and his father eyeing poor rohan's every action...indeed parents are very important part of ones life...but glad tht simran does have aditya and her friends support...waiting for the marriage bells to start ringing for this couple too...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for the double update Dol..you totally rock!
Loved both of them...ahhh i missed the Rohan-Keerti romance..i want moree! lol!
and Kanan is evil but i like her evil mind and the way she thinks..i actually want the truth to come out!

Btw..how were your talks? did they go well? :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
and you are back better than ever!!

Chapter 90-

LOL! It completely makes sense for her to be the girl next door, she comes from such an ordinary yet extraordinary family. I love how they are bugging her and torturing her in the sweetest way. Not going to lie I am craving some some alone time with R and K... I think as much as they are!!

I kind of wonder who she will tell or be forced to confront first her sister or her father...? or maybe her mother...!!! LOVE IT!

ps- I am a family of four sisters, I would do EXACTLY what Kanan is doing! lol...nothing gets better than bugging a sister! :)
Edited by bushrayou - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 91-

I like how K understood her thoughts about being alone and how she worded it all so perfectly for S to know that she is not alone, definitely not with someone like A in her life.

I wonder where you conjure up characters like A and R... they are characters only dreams and stories can take on...

Sometimes certain people are just not meant to be parents, kinda think that way with S' dad.
Looking forward to a K and K interaction, love the evil mind!

Thanks for updating twice! Hope life is swell!! :) you rock!
Edited by bushrayou - 13 years ago

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