FF Abhiya: In ur Arms Forever Chap15-Pg-120

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan
ossum dear
i read all the parts in one go

so pls add me and send me the om ear

Ohh thnx a ton dear.I m glad u lke it.Will update soon😳

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#462

Thnx a lot guys 4 lovely comment I m happy tht u guys liked my FF & thnx 4 ur precious comment as I m busy wid my studies & in 12th so I'll update only in weekends.I'll update 2morrow😳

And many ppl thing Abhi is the one who beat those guys.Chalo ok thn how come his eyes turned blue whn he is human.Plus their r many secrets 2 b reveal.There r many entries which will shock u all😆

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Chap 9(part 1)

Abhi-Pia both were trying 2 solve this unsolved puzzle.But both remain quite.

Outside hospital

Pia was proceeding 2wards her home tht suddenly Abhi stop her.

Abhi:How will u go Pia?U havent brought ur car

Pia:Abhi I'll walk 2 my house.Wise bhi walking is gud 4 health.

Abhi:No need.God u gals jst luv doing dieting & exercising 4 losing kilos but infact whn u already luks lke match stick

Pia(smiling):Oh really.Do I really luk match stick?Thnx 4 the compliment

Abhi(disbelieving):God do u really thing it was a compliment.Oh better not 2 fight wid gals especially u.Let me drop u.

Pia:Oh no need

Abhi:Did I ask ur permission?This is not request but an order

Pia:Oh v met jst 1.5 days b4 & u evn started ordering me

Abhi:Remember v became frnds on the very 1st day.And in frnds no permission only order.

Pia(laugh):Oh God u tell me its impossible frm winning gal & wht abt u MR.Abhay.I mean Mr.Abhi khanna.So u wnt 2 b my driver huh

Abhi:Oh God now toh i really wnt 2 c my competitor Abhay.God kya baat thi uss bande mai tht evn whn he is not here u r thinking abt him.Waise I wont mind being ur driver.Afterall u'll never get hot & sexy driver lke me.

Pia was numb.She had tears.

Flashback(Whn Abhiya were engaged)

Pia had small fight wid Abhay coz of his over caring attitude so she left him & went 2 meet his frnds who jst came frm paris.While Abhay was standing far away staring at her

Jessi:Hey Pia babes how r u?

Pia:Me f9

Rose:U know v missed u a lot dear.Evn ur crazy designer.Afterall his muse left him all alone.

Richard(kissing Pia's cheek):Hey sweetheart whts up?I missed u honey.Y did u left me & broke my heart

Abhay who was staring frm far could not take dis & came their furiously.He wnted 2 rip Richard apart 4 kissing his Pia & calling her honey & swthrt.He was staring at him angrily.Thn suddenly pia's frnds Rose & Jessi asked her'Who is this handsome man?'

Pia:He is my bodyguard cum driver

Abhay was staring at her shockingly

Abhay:Driver & bodyguard?

Rose & jessi:Oh I must say ur bodyguard cum driver is very sexy

Pia was feeling jealous.She wnted pull their hair while Abahy was giving his evergreen smirk.

Pia pulls him 2 corner

Pia:Y u came here?

Abhay:1st u tell me whn I became ur bodyguard & driver?

Pia:Toh Bf wali harkat bhi kab karte ho.U always guard me or give lift 2 me 2 home.Have u ever romance wid me lke BF?

Abhay:So u wnt romance?

Pia kept her chin up wid attitude.Abhay pulls her close & kissed her lips infront of every1 in restaurant.Rose,Jessi & Richards jaws were dropped while Pia was surprised.

She kissed Abhay back & went 2 his frnds all smiling.

Rose:U said tht he is ur bodyguard

Jessi:Evn driver

Pia:Ya he is my personal driver cum bodyguard .Oh dont b confused.I was jst lying.He is my Boyfrnd cum fiance.I was angry wid him so was jst teasing him.

Pia had her meal wid her frnds & thn she left wid Abhay

Abhay:Let me drop u

Pia:Agn driver ban gaye

Abhay:Well whtever u may say u will never get hot & sexy driver lke me

Flashback ends

Abhi brought her back 2 reality frm her dreamland.

Abhi:Shall v leave

Pia nodded(Thinking):Abhay was my hot & sexy driver.

Abhi opened the gate of his car lke a true gentleman made Pia sit & thn proceed 2wards

Niche dekho(Part2 of 9)

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#464

Chap 9 (part 2)

Outside Raichand mansion

Watchman 2 Pia:Gud morning ma'am

Watchman 2 Abhi(wid fear & guilt):Morning sir.

Abhi was unable 2 control his laugh remembering wht he said 2 watchman on the very 1st day he came 2 Raichands house.Watchman seemed so terrified.He was still feeling guilty 4 stoping Abhi frm entering in house as according 2 him he was would b son-in-law of Raichands & fiance of Pia.While Pia seems confused luking at watchman & Abhi.So 2 clear her doubt she tried 2 read watchman thought & as soon as she came 2 know y watchman was so terrified she stared at Abhi & started laughing 4 his mischievous act.

Abhi:Pia Y r u laughing?

Pia:Y cant I laugh?Am I luk bad while laughing?

Abhi:No u always luk gorgeous

Pia:Oh thnx I love compliement.

They entered Raichand mansion.Haseena welcome them wid warm smile.Haseena's face was glorifying as soon as she saw Abhi as 4 her Abhi was Abhay.

Haseena:Hello beta

Abhi:Hello aunty

Haseena:How come u r here?

Abhi:Oh can't I come like this.U only told me I lke ur son

Haseena(happily):Ofcourse u can come anytime.U r lke my son or better u r my son

Abhi:Aunty I was jst kidding.I came here 2 drop Pia

Haseena:But I was not kidding.U r my son.

Abhi smiles

Haseena:Would u lke 2 have something

Abhi:No thnx aunty.

Haseena:Oh come I'll bring choco shake 4 u wid cookies

Pia:Mom evn I m here.Mera bhi thoda khayal rakhlo.Abha..Abhi ko dekhte hi u forgot me

Haseena:Oh sorry my baby.Ur special juice is on the table

Abhi:Oh so special juice 4 Pia hmm.I m jealous

Pia:Dont b.Special juice 4 me as I m special.

Abhi:Indeed u r.

Pia:U r quite a flirty.Arn't u

Abhi(naughtily):Am I?Am I really?

Haseena come wid shake & cookies

Haseena:Have dis Abhi

Abhi had it

Abhi:Aunty its yummy

Chand enter.He was giving serious luk 2 Abhi

Abhi(thinking):Lo aa gaya Hitler

Pia & haseena had read his thought so had chand.Pia & haseena were unable 2 control there laugh.

Chand(in his hissing voice):Abhi how come u r here?

Abhi:Oh I jst came here 2 drop Pia.

Chand:Oh thnx 4 dropping her.Plz 2 meet u

Abhi:Same here

Chand:U r really plz 2 meet me.Aisa lagta toh nhi hai

Abhi(stammering wid fear):Ya.aa O-fcour-se.I m pleased

Chand:Thts gud

Abhi:Ok I take my leave

Chand:Y.Wont u spent some time wid me?

Abhi:Some other time uncle.Thnx aunty 4 shake & cookies.Take care Pia

Abhi left Raichand house

Chand:Why was Abhi here

Pia:Dad he came here 2 drop me

Chand:Pia I can c u r attracted 2 him.He is not Abhay.So maintain distance wid him.Evn if he is he is human & humans r not allowed in our world

Haseena:Chand Abhi is Abhay & I m damm sure abt it.Evn if he is huamn he'll always b p[art of our family.

Chand:Haseena talk logical.Abhay cant come back.He was vampire.And Vampire can never reborn

Haseena:But v freed his soul.

Chand:Many a times vampires had freed soul of death vampires but they never came back

Pia:But may b Dad Abhay is 1st vampire 2 reborn

Chand:U 2 stop ur nonsense & end of discussion.

Chand take a leave.

Next day

In college

Pickle:Abhi Y u always leave me?I came here jst 4 u baby

Abhi:Did I ask u 2 come.I m not ur baby.4 God grace leave my poor soul alone

Pickle:Y r u saying so?U know I love u

Abhi:But I dont.Evn in london I told u same thing tht I m not in luv wid u.

Tashi:Oh hoo how s my bhabhi

Abhi:Who bhabhi?😕

Tashi:Come on bro I m talking abt Pickle Bhabhi

Pickle(shyly):Thnx tashi

Tashi burst out😆:Oh its ok PICKLE Bhabhi

Abhi(angrily):Apna muh band rakho Tashi behna

Pia & Misha made their entry

Misha:Wass up guys?Kya chal rha hai?

tashi:Kuch nhi main toh apni pyari BHABHI se baat kar rhi thi.

Misha-Pia:Bhabhi?

Tashi:Ya Bhabhi PICKLE Bhabhi

Pia(jealous):Oh so pickle is Abhi's GF

Abhi(Angrily):Shut up tashi.If this is a joke thn a very bad joke.Pia no Pickle is not my GF

Pickle:Oh dont worry Pia soon I'll become his GF

Abhi:Shut up Pickle.

Karan came running 2 thm & by chance he pushed Pickle she falls

Pickle:Oh god stupid karan.Abhi pick me na

Abhi:Oh sorry gira hua kharab ho jata hai & Mom told me giri huyi cheez ko nhi uthate

All laugh.And their small fight & fun continues

Far away frm dehradun

2 shadow talking 2 each other

1st shadow:The day is near.I have been waiting 4 dis moment since long

Shadow 2:I dont think its right

Shadow1:Shut up I will kill thm.I wont spare those RAICHANDS.

Shadow2:Wht happened was jst an accident.

Shadow1:No it was all planned.V r coming Raichands very soon

PS:Ok guys I hope u all will lke it.Now keep wondering who those 2 shadow r?And soon there will b more entries

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago

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heena mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#465

dat was indead a beautiful part shrish!!!

it was beautifully written!!! abhi is so damn so sweet!!!! actually ur this ff is full od sugar cotted characters...specially abhi, uski swetness se to mujhe diabties ho jayegi!!!😆😆

pickle part always crack me up!!!

chand-abhi part was totally rocking😆😆

enjoyed reading it to d fullest!!

nw i cn't say update soon. bt do update nxt sunday, cn't wait more than this!!

luv u n bear hug to u shrish🤗

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago

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Rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#466

Wowww WONDERFUL UPDATE DEAR... 🤗 LOVED ABHIYA...who were the two shadows I THINK WEREWOLF... SUPERB WORK Waiting 4 next part update soon dear...,,,... I THINK YE PART THORA CHOTA NAHI THA??? NEXT PART PLEASE THORA AUR LONG KARNA PLZ... Love you:-) THANX...

Edited by rashi.rose - 14 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#467

Superbb update Shrish 👏 👏

Piya already feeling jealous for Abhi... so cute 😳 and Pickle bhabi... hahaha!!

I loved the Abhay and Piya flashback scene... your dialogues are always hit...bodyguard and driver but no romance... which is actually true 😛

poor Haseena... mother's heart and Chand as always practical 😕

Eager to know who the shadows are... i love suspense... u know that 😉

Continue soon...loved it 👏

lots of love 🤗

Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#468

Chap updated ab rail ka dabba bhar do😆

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#469

tumhara FF sach mein bahut teda hai yaar.

Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago

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Peehu24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#470

wow shrish...ausum update...loved it...too good...i loved flashback and pickle bhabhi...poor abhi..so there are chances that abhi can be abhay and shadows...another suspense...loving it...now plz update soon...

Edited by peehu24 - 14 years ago