MJHT FF! feelings on fire! part 31 pg 138

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drmaha

@drmaha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

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mehak i literally had tears in my eyes while reading this...😭

wht a painful , throbing past was tht if mayank...

i realy feel sad for mayank... he is doing all this just coz he thinks his mother betrayed him... 😭

uff... so he is pretending of wht he is not...

now nupur knows him... his past...

hope now she wont missunderstdd him and tried to chang ehim...

and mayank would definetely be changd...

cont soon if possible then do update today nite...

plsss...

eagerly waiting for the update...

Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago

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Juhi

@.Juhi.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Mehak...u r a writter ?? 😲

gr88 hun...but m a non-reader 🤣 🤣 🤣

though i vl smnt 4 u always 😉

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

it was Horrible, terrible part dnt know what to say..nothing can be worse than this..

but one thing, u r Brilliant Writer..!

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Angel

@hasiniangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

emotions can be felt if one explains them beautifully..😊

u didnt expressed them beautifully but u were fabulous, amazing..👏

iam a silent reader, but could not stop myself from saying this to you..

hope nupur makes mayank believe in love..😍

with loads of love

sindhu👍🏼

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

OMG!!!this is sooo horrible n cruel...

poor mayank...feeling pain n tears for himmm

hope nupur gives him all the love tht he never felt in his life...

can't wait for the next part...

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Lekshmic7

@Lekshmic7

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

SPEECHLESS!! feeling so bad 4 mayanks mom!! dat letter scene was great.now i can understand mayanks actions. continue super soon. waiting eagerly. thanks 4 d pm.

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#327

firstly i dont understand why people think that marrying gives someone else the right over your body. its not a selling system! secondly i dont understand what people mean by these words "made her his''. how can you make someone yours? its not like making a nice painting by yourself or baking pastries!you dont make someone yours just by sleeping with him/her.

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Binal Damania

@binudamania

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

heart touching part...
i lovd every emotions potrayed out der...
do cont... soon...
i lovd it
thanx for pm

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#329

absolutely wondrous mehakuu!!
Each and every emotion came out in it's perfect form and i felt shivers all over.

Beautifully written, but i just worry that nupur should not start feeling the emotion that would ignite mayank's anger - Pity.

Anyways .. wonderful work!
You best so far in terms of concept and execution.
Can't wait!

P.S - Check ur mail box! 😳