MJHT FF! feelings on fire! part 31 pg 138

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hello friends!!!!!!!!!!šŸ¤— ok i had all teh intensions to keep the writer in side me at bay for a while!!!😳 however this idea struck me and today on a cue i started writing it, only to find, maybe it will work!!!😳 hope u all support me just the way u always do!!! <3
this story is about a Nupur and a Mayank! thast it!! i tried to put the characters in to boundaries but thats not possible yet!!! this time u urself can draw the character skecth! i wil just portray their life! :)

love,

Mehak baig

part 1 page 1 part 2 page 5
part 3 page 10
part 4 page 13
part 5 page 17
part 6 page 22
part 7 page 26
part 8 page 30
part 9 page 34
part 10 page 36
part 11 page 41
part 12 page 45
part 13 page 48
part 14 page 53
part 15 page 56
part 16 page 60
part 17 page 63
part 18 page 70
part 19 page 74
part 20 page 78
part 21 page 82
part 22
part 23
part 24 page 96
part 25 page 99
part 26 page 105


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SILENT PRiNCESS!

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1675503&PID=42109684&#42109684


WAITING TO BE LOVED!

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DESTINED TO MEET!

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1555117


CAPTIVATED HEART!

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TRULY< MADLY<DEEPLY DO!

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Feelings on fire

PART 1

Nupur woke up to find that she was let again late for college. With a *damn* on her lips, she quickly got up and picking any of her dresses she ran to get it ironed- yes she had again thought she would leave that for the next day!

As if things couldn't get any better so they got worse and she was greeted by her brother Udhay who went on , " mama! Dekhen Nupr again didn't press her cloths last night! Now she will start and be late as usual!" and her mother's voice followed, "Nupur tmen kitne dafa kaha hai?"
Nupr replied with a loud, " I know mama! Sorry na! just 5 minutes pakka!"

And with this she moved her hands faster and was soon done with ironing. Not that she took long at getting ready, infact inspite of what Udhay said, Nupur got ready before him. however because of her laziness she always had this running form here to there session every morning.

Sighing , she finally kissed her mom goodbye and sat wither sister , Ayushi and brother Udhay and they were off . after dropping her siblings to their school, Nupr had to reach her college with only ten minutes left for the class and 20 minutes drive left.

"great! U are again late Nupur" she chided herself and did the only possible thing that could distract her at that moment- switched on her mobile. Even before she could open the inbox, she saw the screen display unread message and with a broad smile she clicked it to find it was from one of her best friends- Gunjan.

It was a *best of luck* message as Nupur was participating in the *business week* being held in her college and that day was the final result day.

Nupur was about to reply when suddenly she heard the screech of a car brakes followed by a loud thud. "WOW! FINALLY U DID IT MAN!" she glared at her driver's back and thought about what this day would bring ahead…

Her driver had already stepped out of the car and was yelling at someone. Nupur simply peeped outside to find a tall and broad man standing with her back to him. he was completely hiding Nupur's driver and as she had no wish to see his face, she concentrated on their discussion, well *her driver's monologue* was more appropriate as the man had not said a word yet.

As if on cue , Nupur heard a deep ,authoritative voice say, " ghalti tmare the!"

He had just said those three words and Nupur's ever chattering driver was silent. Nupur sighed and stepped out herself, "excuse me!"

At her voice the man turned around and the first thing Nupur noticed was a raised eyebrow. Irritated by his hauteur , nupur just said a " we are sorry!"
she was hoping that this would be all but she was in for a surprise.

"and what m I suppose to do with ur sorry? This good-for-nothing driver of ur's not only hit my brand new car but his next move could have taken both our cars to that canal right there.

He glace behind him and Nupur felt a lump form in her throat. She made a note to get the driver scolded but the problem was what now?

Just then his mobile rang and he picked it up, "hello… I m coming.. some idiotic man hit my car and almost caused my drowning .. yes yes I know! M coming in 5 minutes."

He disconnected the phone and turned back to nupur.

"m a pretty busy man but I don't let idiots get away that easily." He handed out something that Nupur took as she ahd no idea what else she could have done, " this is my card, and I need u to inform ur dad to call me up..." he was about to turn while Nupur was wondering what why was he so sure she would indeed tell her dad , but right then he turned, " ur dad better not send kids with this guy"

Nupur felt herself go all red wit hfury. *kid* ? he just called her kid? She had turned 21 damnit and he called her *kid*? Glaring at his retreating back, she tried to remember was he that old, but failed as she hadn't seen him clearly. Taking a deep breath to cool down her self, she looked at the card in her hand.

MAYANK SHARMA

SHARMA GROUP OF INDUSTRIES

And that followed some phone numbers and fax numbers.

Nupur: " Mayank Sharma! Thanks for making my day!"

She said sarcastically and got into the car with a glare in her driver's direction to tell him he shouldn't even dare try to brag about what he could have done to that man.

Nupur: " drive slowly! Otherwise u are dead!"

She glared again and shifted her eyes to her mobile, typing a message for her best friends, " I know I am again late.. what I need to know is one reason why I shouldn't murder my driver!"

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Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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oops! .. I spoiled the sequence !
sorry mehakuu! ..


EDIT:

coming to the storyy!! .. as always .. WONDERFUL!! .. ā­ļø ā­ļø ..

I liked the fiery nupur! , she isn''t the typcial timid and shy girl, she fights and has guts and Mayank was ..ohhh .. HOT! . and witty too! .. and the ending had me in splits .. 🤣

Excellent mehakuu .. continue soon! .. šŸ¤—

and no need to think anything stupid! .. 😔 . Love uu! .. šŸ¤—

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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its ok kinzuuu!!!!! mere princess i posted it on first post! love u!!!!!

Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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awww .. šŸ¤—
LOVE UU! .. ā¤ļø

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RESERVEDDD ..*EDITED!!*
you back??? seriously??? WOW!!
congrats for your new ff Mehaku...m sure evn this one will b GREAT!ā­ļø
Nupur...was too good...a very Normal girl..Lazy, n hive-it-a-damn attitude! loved it!! just like me..LOL..college mornings, m into same condition..šŸ˜† always in hurry!
mayank...lol..he called her kid lol...that was funny, leaving that he was Cool!
loved the frst part thoroughly!! šŸ¤—
thankz for the pm...do cont soon...
But take care frst!šŸ¤—
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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nupur... sigh... i can so relate to this character... running around in a hurry and bumping into things... being right in the middle of trouble at the wrong place at the wrong time... šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

awwh i soo loved the start... šŸ‘
and Mayank is whoa... i already liked this guy! ā¤ļø
keep it up mehaku ... m sure this story is going to be a lovely one... ā­ļø
thanks for the PM... God bless, love you, take care šŸ¤—
PS: Congrats on your new FF 😳
Edited by rapunzel_angel - 14 years ago
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res!:D

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congratulations on new ff...🄳

as usual its B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L ā­ļø ā­ļø

and i m loving this mayank nupur...so different !😃 and loved their first meet! uff! 😃

excellent job DIII...šŸ‘ LOVE UU...ā¤ļø

tack care of my sis. *tight hugs*

Edited by pearl10 - 14 years ago
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Mehak...m already liking this ff..waiting eagerly for the next part...
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edited my post on first page. 😃

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