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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello friends.. 😃..

Thank you so much for your awesome response to my previous update .. A big tiight hug to all of you .. 🤗 .. Finally here's the much awaited chapter .. 🥳.. I really hope that I could do justice with the Grand Surprise .. 😳 .. Too nervous, so just read it and comment fast .. 😆 .. Just kidding .. Take your time guys .. 😳

Well, just to inform you all, the update has been divided into two parts as it's showing that it has crossed the words limit .. 😲 .. Maybe cuz I typed it in the document first .. 😕 .. Enjoy the longest chapter .. 😉

Happy Reading!!
Love,
Bidushy❤️
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Chapter 13

The Unexpected Surprise [A]


"Hum auditorium pohoch gaye.", Mayank casually informed Nupur. Getting no response from her, he turned his face to his side and was concerned to see the lines of fear on her forehead. "Nupur, you aren't doing such kind of show for the first time, so yeh nervousness kaisa?", he asked concernedly.

"Kuch nahi bas aise hi thodi nervousness har baar hi hoti hai. Don't worry, main theek hu.", Nupur assured Mayank with a forced smile and continued, "Anyways, main aab chalti hu. Aap shaam ko Samrat aur Gunjan ke saath yaha aa jaaiyega, theek hai?"

"Jo hokum princess!", Mayank peculiarly said and Nupur slightly laughed which was enough to make him smile. "Best of luck!", he wished her with a thumbs up sign. "Thanks!", Nupur said with a grateful smile and getting out of the car, she started walking towards the main entrance of the auditorium.

"Pata nahi kyun lag raha hai ki aaj kuch khaas hone wala hai. Par kya?", Mayank wondered. "Bhagwan ji, please sab kuch waisa hi ho jaise main socha hai.", Nupur inwardly prayed in her heart.


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Soon it was evening. "Yeh Mayank itna time kyun laga raha hai?", Samrat said in irritation while pacing in the reception. "Yeh lo, aa gaya.", Gunjan said delightfully as she saw Mayank, in black shirt and suit, descending the stairs with a princely attitude, and when Samrat caught a sight of him, he was amazed as well as happy.

"Ahem ahem! Aaj kisi ka kisi ko propose karne ka iraada hai kya?", Samrat asked teasingly and looked here and there. "Aisa hi kuch lag raha hai saamne waale ko dekhkar.", Gunjan said giggling. "Guys, stop teasing me and lets go.", Mayank said authoritatively glaring both of them and left. Samrat and Gunjan laughed and followed him.


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"Be ready! The show will start in 5 minutes.", a girl informed Nupur and left.

"This show is gonna be the most special event of my life.", Nupur said to herself. Her eyes, which were beautified with the black eye-liner, twinkled. Her glossy pink lips curved into a glowing smile. Dimples formed in her blushing cheeks. She gathered her long silky hairs on one side of her shoulder exposing a little bit of her back. Wearing the simple diamond earrings and necklace that were kept on the dressing table, she gave an ocean-sized smile and admired herself in an white silver-embroidered gown.

"U look angel in white." ' She remembered Mayank's words and shyly smiled.


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Mayank, Samrat and Gunjan entered the auditorium, just then; a teenaged boy came up to them and asked cutely, "Aap Nupur didi ke khaas friends ho naa?" Surprised, Mayank nodded, while Samrat and Gunjan smiled.

"Chaliye mere saath. Aap tino ke liye special seats booked hai." The boy said, led three of them to the VIP section and made them sit there and continued, "Aap log aaram se baitho, show shuru hone waala hai." Saying that, he left.


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The curtains rose and the host arrived on the stage.


"Ladies and gentlemen, grand welcomes to all of you to the charity function of one of the renowned singing school in India, Sur Singing Institute. Thanks to each one of you for taking out some valuable time of your busy lives and coming here to support the charitable trust called 'Ummeed' that helps in educating the street children. It's truly a pleasure to be together for such a noble cause. Anyways, cutting off the long lecture, I would like to call upon the stage, the star of today's evening, Miss Nupur Bhushan!"

Loud noises of applause from everywhere collided with the walls. As Nupur walked on the stage, Mayank froze and felt his heart fluttering. Mesmerized by her beauty, he couldn't take his eyes off from her.

While her eyes searching for Mayank, Nupur thought, "Chintu ko toh maine unhe VIP section mein bithaane ke liye kaha tha, par kahi nazar nahi aa rahe.", and with this, she frowned, which soon turned into a blushing smile when she finally noticed him gazing her lovingly.

Trying hard not to let her feelings arrive on her face, she held the mike near her mouth and said friendlily, "Hey friends!" As everyone stopped clapping, she continued, "Okay, so seriously, I'm too bad in talking with the audience, but still, I had to do it for a reason."

"What can be the reason?", Mayank thought confusedly.

"You people must be wondering what the reason can be. Oh well, today, I'm going to tell a story to you all through my performance. As usual, this is a story of a girl and a boy, and' Well, abhi I can't say anything. Just wait and watch! CHEERS!", said Nupur in glee.

Mayank keenly kept his eyes stuck on stage, eagerly waiting for his Nupur's performance, while Samrat and Gunjan, being well known of the feelings of their friends, just smiled and waited for the show to began.


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The light of the auditorium turned off and the spotlight fell on Nupur. Her face glittered and with extreme sweetness in her voice, she started telling, "The story begins when the girl went so lost in her dark life that it became almost impossible for her to come back. One day, a boy came in her life, just like a ray of light and hope for happiness. After games played by destiny to bring them together, they became friends, which kept on growing stronger than before as the time passed."

Mayank was at a loss of words. He didn't think even in his dreams that Nupur would dedicate her whole performance to their friendship. While he was in his own amazement, Nupur brightly smiled, started singing and doing simple steps along with the rhythm and the music..

Tu hai to tedhi medhi rahein
Ulti pulti baatein
Seedhi lagti hai

Tu hai to jhoothe muthe vaadein
Dushman ke iraade
Sacche lagtein hain

Jo Dil mein taare vaare de jaga
Woh tu hi hai,Tu hi hai

Jo roote roote de hasa
Tu hi hai wohi

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

Chote chote kuch palon ka
Dostana yeah
Jaane kyun abb lag raha hai
Jaana maana yeah
Cos when smile for me
World seems all right
Yeah saare pal yehi
Yuhi tham se jaaye

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right


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Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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The Unexpected Surprise [B]


Finishing her first song, she continued with her story being totally engrossed in it, "Everything was going normally until the day when they shared a sudden intimacy. They couldn't keep their hearts in control, and why that happened, they themselves didn't know. As the time passed, they realized that they've started falling for each other."

Mayank's amazed expression turned into speechless after hearing the second part of her story. He got the biggest surprise of his life, which was totally unexpected for him. "She loves me!", he whispered to himself and smiled contently, while Nupur started to walk around the stage and sing the second song with shyness depicting from her beautiful face...

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye

Shayad yahi to pyaar hai

Betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal paye

Shayad yahi to pyaar hai

Kuch bhi kaha na

Kuch bhi suna na

Phir bhi

Bechain dil hai humara

Behke kadam hai

Mushkil main hum hai

Dekho

Sambhle bhala kaise yaara

Chahe bina bhi

Nazdeek hum chale aaye

Shayad yahi toh pyaar hai


"At present, they are aware of their feelings for each other. Even the boy tried to confess about his feelings to the girl but the girl rudely told him to stay away from her." As Nupur said that, her eyes were filled with tears which slowly rolled down her cheeks.


Mayank was dumbfounded to see those tears and desperately wanted to wipe them off and take her in his arms consoling her, right at that moment, and he was even about to stand up but stopped when Nupur wiped off her tears, beautifully smiled and continued, "But now the girl has understood that she can't live a second without him. She loves him more than her life and wants him to be by her side FOREVER.."


The last part of her story brought tears of joy in Mayank's eyes. Smile couldn't go off from his face. Suddenly he felt everything so good. His heart was filled with immense love and affection for her, which was easily showing on his face. He felt as if every single cell of his body was dancing with joy. He was very eager to hug her tightly but as he didn't want to spoil her show, he just kept on gazing her and listening to her beautiful and pure voice, which was nothing less the voice of Goddess Saraswati...


Aa paas aa - 2 sanam
Aa paas aa - 2 sanam
Saha na jaaye dooriya ka gham
Tujhe hain kasam - 3
Tujhe hain kasam - 3
Aa paas aa - 2 sanam


Kal ki kisko khabar hain

Bas iss lamhe ko mujhe toh hain jeena

Tera kaisa asar hain

Tere bina toh lage dil kahi na

Naa khwaahishon pe kar koi sitam
Tujhe hain kasam - 3

Tujhe hain kasam - 3

Aa paas aa - 2 sanam


Main hoon tanhaaiyaa hain

Khwaabon ki rangeen parchhaaiyaa hain

Tu hain madhoshiyaa hain
Khaamoshi mein bhi sarghoshiyan hain
Na todd pyar ka haseen bharam
Tujhe hain kasam - 3


The light of the auditorium turned on. Everyone stood up and clapped loudly in appreciation. Samrat and Gunjan exchanged happy smiles at each other, while Mayank and Nupur shared a love-filled eye-lock.

The curtains lowered and in no time, Mayank rushed to the back stage.

"Chalo, finally yeh dono toh ek ho gaye.", said Samrat with his heart feeling content. "I hope ki yeh dono humesha saath rahein!", Gunjan prayed to God.

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Sitting in her make-up room, Nupur was taking off her earrings and necklace and constantly blushing and smiling. There was a knock at the door and obviously she knew who he was. Without wasting a moment, she rushed and opened the door, and there her heart skipped a beat when she saw Mayank. They kept on gazing each other.

"Aap bahar kyun khare ho? Andar aaiye!", Nupur said controlling her fastest heartbeats and led him in. "Darwaza lock kardo.", Mayank sat on the couch and naughtily said, and there Nupur felt that she'd faint right then due to the abnormal speed of her heartbeats. Gulping in nervousness, she locked the door and stood in front of him.

"Kuch baat karni hai aapko?", she asked, pretending that she didn't know anything. Mayank stood up and pulling her close to him by slipping his hand around her waist, he said, smirking, "Sab ke saamne toh kitne aasani se gaano ke beech mein confess kar diya, toh aab itna nervousness kyu?" "Pata nahi!", Nupur said in a whisper looking deeply in his eyes.

They were lost in each other's eyes for a while, and finally Mayank said softly, "I love you!" Nupur blushed, closed her eyes and said in a displaced breath, "I love you too!" Tightening his grip around her waist, Mayank pulled her closer, not leaving a single space for the air to pass in between them. Soon he captured her lips with his, turning it into a deep romantic kiss, to which she too responded in the same way as him. After they broke off, they hugged each other with all love and affection, and this time, their hug was surely different from the hugs they shared before. It was just a pure bliss! ❤️

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Preview of the next chapter:

Mayank planning to propose Nupur for marriage..
Samrat got a clue of the whereabouts of Nupur's step-father..

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The songs used in the above update are - Jaane Kyun [Dostana], Shayad Yehi To Pyaar Hai [Lucky - No Time For Love] and Aa Paas Aa [Ankahee] .. 😳
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Hey bidz!
Finally, i get time to read this.
Well, i'll start with intro
The main post is intersting.
like the CS
on to reading chap 1.

Long comments coming up.
get ready! 🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
res for chap 1

EDITED****
arey wah, chap ka title to rapchik hai
hai!

ohh, scary nightmare!
also a scary scene to watch at such age.
i can understand how nupur feels.
from experience...

Aww! nups, dont be sad.
dont blame yourself
you were too young at tht time,
you couldnt do nything. 😭

uh-oh drugs! 🤢

OMG! m shocked!
ye humari pyari si nupus ko kya hua.
cursing those two girls who gave my nups this idea! 😡

awesome entry of mayank ! 😳
ye tina kaha se tapak gai!
i know, dont say asmaan se
hehehe
well, let's see how this twist works in mayur lives.

tina kitni tiny hai?
sry for my sarcasm 😆

by god! ye mayu ko kya ho gaya.
playing with girls!
hay babaji! ise sudharo koi.

haay! nups dancing, can surely imagine that

now waiting for mayur waitng
i would have said this if i had read this on time.
now, i dont have to wait
i can just go and read it now.

Love khushi
Edited by Princess_Khushi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey tired now.
eyes stressed out.
will cont from chap 2 in morn

Good Night
Dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
*Edited*
heyyy Bidushy🤗🤗it was fabolous update sweety🤗loved it totally😛
Mayur confession was superb😍😍beautifully written🤗
songs selection was perfect and last song is my fav too from Ankahee😳i loved it on Mayur
Their kiss was full of love and passion☺️☺️
beautifully written update🤗
continue soon
Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Reserved for chapter 2😳

EDITED***

oh baap re!
mayu to kuch zydad hi utavla ho raha hai 😆
its really diff to see him see him this way
mayank, aaj ke zamane mai koi ladki itni jaldi nai pighal ti 😉

awesome song choice! 👏
i can imagine her dancing so well
and mayank staring at her.

haha, lyk how he yelled at tina.
great.
she deserves it 😆
coming between my mayur 😡

oh mushkil hai resist karna 😳
like him being protective.
well, i must say he's really nyc from inside.

"Par isse aise toh nahin chod sakta.. Main thoda bura zarur hoon par itni toh insaaniyat hain mujh mein ki iski help karoon.."

love the above line very much 😆

abhi toh sirf uske outside appereance par fida hai
par m sure jald hi uske dil pe fida ho jayega mayu 😉

precap is amazing.
will read more after dinner probably
byeee

love
khushi
Edited by Princess_Khushi - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

res for chap 1


EDITED****
arey wah, chap ka title to rapchik hai
hai! Thank you! 😃

ohh, scary nightmare!
also a scary scene to watch at such age.
i can understand how nupur feels.
from experience... Did you have such kind of experience? 😕

Aww! nups, dont be sad.
dont blame yourself
you were too young at tht time,
you couldnt do nything. 😭

uh-oh drugs! 🤢 Yeah! 🤢

OMG! m shocked!
ye humari pyari si nupus ko kya hua.
cursing those two girls who gave my nups this idea! 😡 Me too! 😡

awesome entry of mayank ! 😳 I know! ☺️
ye tina kaha se tapak gai! Paataal se! 🤣
i know, dont say asmaan se
hehehe
well, let's see how this twist works in mayur lives. Hmm! 😆

tina kitni tiny hai?
sry for my sarcasm 😆 lol i love it! 🤣

by god! ye mayu ko kya ho gaya.
playing with girls!
hay babaji! ise sudharo koi. Sudhar jayega! 😉

haay! nups dancing, can surely imagine that

now waiting for mayur waitng
i would have said this if i had read this on time.
now, i dont have to wait
i can just go and read it now. waiting for ur next comment! 😍

Love khushi


Yaay! I replied to your comment! Happy? 😛 Anyways, you were going to sleep naa? Toh phir dusra chapter ke liye reserve kaiko kiya? 😆 Waise, good for me though! 😉 Thanks for a long comment! I love it! 😳
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Lovely... Loved the way Nupur confessed her feelings to Mayank...
Thank you so much!

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