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Bhoomi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-
Hey Bhoomi di,

A very beautiful piece and true to its essence completely poetic!
It took my breath away...how do you write such beautiful poetic stories...
I'm in love with them that they've rendered me speechless !

The journey of life, the ups and downs put up beautifully and love expressed in the most subtle and purest forms...yes certain situations do bring people together and also drift them apart...its all in the moment and the time...just a moment that it takes and life completes in that one moment!

Wonderful story dear...keep writing and I'll keep reading and commenting :)

Take Care.

Hi Fatima,

Dear thanks so much for ur lovely words.. I surely am not as talented as u r putting in.. I just have thoughts and try hard to frame it.. and u r brilliant when it comes to choosing the right words.. thanks for reading and also commenting dear... Ur comments mean a lot as I know u r very talented...

Yup I dont have any other way to put but a simple way to tell a story whcih has simple aspects whcih every life has... thanks for ur lovely comments.. ur comments were no less than a poetry in itself... luvu for encouraging and supporting my work..

Bhoomi

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Again I have a smile on my face dear!! 😊 (just like this one...hehe) Loved the way u described sum very realistic things...then again...I did always say I love ur writings for that!! However I really loved these lines:

There was the time when U & ME voices became loud,

'US' word sounded suffocating and a crowd,

So once again...a wonderful job dear!! 👏 Keep writing always...and thanks for ur PM. 😃

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710
Again I have a smile on my face dear!! 😊 (just like this one...hehe) Loved the way u described sum very realistic things...then again...I did always say I love ur writings for that!! However I really loved these lines:

There was the time when U & ME voices became loud,

'US' word sounded suffocating and a crowd,
So once again...a wonderful job dear!! 👏 Keep writing always...and thanks for ur PM. 😃

HI,

Aww so ncie to know u r enjoying reading the story so much.. And I want thats mile to remain like that forever.. Feels really nice that u enjoyed reading this story.. and enjoyed the small small things mentioned here.. and those lines r ur fav.. feels good to know.. and its so true so many times na... Happy to know that u liked my work..u r reading them..and I like to read and know whats ur views on it.. thanks for ur encouragign feedback.. tc

Bhoomi

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

bhoomi di
thanx for writing this ...i think i need this in that time of life...god just give me the strength to follow this...
thanks a tone for writing this

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
bhoomi di
thanx for writing this ...i think i need this in that time of life...god just give me the strength to follow this...
thanks a tone for writing this

Hi,
where have u been... busy na.. hope u doing well.. I am so glad that u read this poetic story and liked it... awww u read at a time when the story made some sense i guess.. glad dear that it gave u strength ... u all wonderful readers r always my inspiration ..my strength and when u like my work ..its what u all brought out through ur comments.. so no need to thank dear... am happy u enjoyed..

tc
Bhoomi

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