' Completely In Love ' Full poetic story posted

Completely In love

I am completely in love with you I understood,

The last time when angrily in front you stood,

It was the time you were upset with my silly behaviour,

I smiled, hugged and kissed knew u were mine forever,

I held you tight and knew I fell in love again,

With the same person time and time again…

We were friends in the start and became lovers later,

We wanted to be as close as possible in life's eachchapter,

We did not only want to be together,

But be in love and feel loved by each other,

To be united in love, be intimate and feel cured,

With embrace kiss and touch heal and feel secured…

We kissed, we loved and we also got married,

It was sad these didn't long last and love got buried,

We loved we cared but that's not just what we want,

Understanding, compromising, on each others to count,

We argued we fought and yes we broke off too,

We had enough and yelled let's move out too..

We fought as we had our set of sketched priorities,

We fought as we had to get our own individualities,

We fought as we were not getting our space,

We expected more than what was served on our plate,

Spending money on what and not came into picture,

Behaving like this and that, we had issues with our nature…

There was the time when U & ME voices became loud,

'US' word sounded suffocating and a crowd,

We were frustrated upset and things got blown up,

Anger brought the worst of both of us,

Naked about what we instantly had felt,

Didn't care feelings blunt as we dealt…

There was a moment when talking became the most difficult thing,

Facing the same issue and fights as the most stupid thing,

We felt time and silence would make things work out,

It was then others influences, making us feel to break up and move out,

We had moved away but didn't yet file the divorce paper,

We knew that would be our relationship's final chapter…

Took some time off, tried to wrap the memories,

Heart break is surely ones biggest worries,

Staying apart not under one roof,

Realization was life gives situations difficult to choose,

Life teaches what actually loneliness is all about,

How much u try your cheerful self doesn't come out..

We could sense what actually made us to part,

We could not forgive nor forget from the very start,

It was the nights which were the most difficult to pass by,

Nights seemed so long and day far to come by,

The time came when paths were to choose,

There wasn't any other partner on the loose,

We stuck to recollecting, missing our old times,

With memories better n bitter of urs and mine…

We met each other after a long time,

We sharde a Hi, hello and smile saying we r fine,

We were not strangers but still felt a feeling anew,

Why rn't we able to read what each ones going through,

We felt we both looked good from outside,

We felt many emotions were hiding inside…

There was an emergency in the family we rushed together,

We were there discussing and always helping each other,

We use to fight we don't give time to family matters,

Now we could understand only family is what matters,

We had fought argued on money on whom where to spend,

Here we were realizing money be saved but all things it can't amend,

Our problem of space expectation was on our mind,

We could wonder less space let be more issues but not be out of site out of mind…

There was a want of been holding an important place in each other's life,

Impress each other and also to delight,

Don't know why how those past fights felt no worthy of any insight,

They looked now as quick insane reactions and not at all wise,

Didn't have the guts heart and words to start again,

There were so many other things happening in the chain…

My birthday and you gave me what I like,

Perfumes amazing labeled, "U smell as if U r mine"

I dressed best and looked good,

U looked Hot and knew impressed I would,

I smiled, spoke and danced till late,

Still unsure we were to admit we were soul mates..

It was our anniversary and disturbed we were,

Family problems had taken a toll on us,

There was hospital turns we both had to take,

Parent's health was at stake,

Cried in front and revealed our darkest fear,

Thought of loosing someone is hard to stir…

Remember things were getting better,

With years we were getting older and wiser,

A walk under the moon light,

It was time later the day u had to take ur flight,

There was only an hour of time to converse,

Try to speak what our heart wants to serve..

U had said looking into my eyes, "Can't fight with u anymore,

Without U life is bore and sour.."

I had asked, "Only to make life interesting should we get together,

You held my hand saying, "to make life better.."

"Without u don't wish life to be longer,

With u life would be best and much stronger"

You had said, "A want to take you in my arms,

Kiss and let you know ur face brings so much charm,

I feel blessed to have found U in life,

Gone through much and now no one else could be my wife…

I had asked if Love for u is just a reaction of seeking attention,

You had replied it was reflection of deep unending affection,

You want me in ur eyes ever,

Cuddle me to stay close forever,

I had blushed and pushed u as U had come closer,

U had to take the flight so told we will talk later..

U had gone to the airport to take your flight,

Called u up and told come back I am not alright,

U rushed back without taking the flight,

Angry at me as I looked happy and bright,

I fell in love with u completely for sure,

Felt like the most lucky woman as ur love was so pure,

I smiled hugged and kissed knew u r mine forever,

U argued couldn't u stop me then and be clever..

I put on the light and wished u a "Happy Birthday'

Took time off to let the clock be 12 and start the day,

Decorated things as wanted to wish u firstly,

I had let u go to the airport to prepare things secretly,

We had cut the cake and looked at each other,

On the cake it was written, "Truly Complete Love U",

Only a kiss on the cheek it was,

Tears flowed; don't know the reason or the cause..

We embraced each other tightly and got cozy,

Held on to each other, as in past life wasn't easy,

Didn't want to lose each other or get lonely,

Wanted to understand and be in love completely,

It was light music and feet's were softly moving,

Love blossomed and to each other we were belonging...

I presented u the rare iphone brand you wanted to buy,

U loved it so much U excitedly kissed it and later went shy,

On the wallpaper it was written, "Completely in Love with you"

U had said that's what I feel and I completely Love you too,

We kissed each other and eyes were wet,

As if the lost route in life again got set,

Completely I am urs and U r mine,

Today we truly know what love defines.

--- Bhoomikauttam

**Take a step further in love, the step will bring depth not the length**

Thanks to all my readers and friends who have encouraged me so much in my previous works, Thanks asmi123, Lata, pinky901, Sookie, Sharadha, Revolutionbreez, sri_4, daniella05, gopi06, Fatima, rmanu7382, afshanafreen, spvd, monikaseth, sakura_mayur , namita18 ,golu_1677, Himani for encouraging comments.

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Bhoomi Amazing , Superb, Mind blowing , Fantastic , You made me Speechless Well done dear thanks for share with us ..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sri_4

Aww,, i was really excited and was waiting..when i saw u r status saying u will update a poetic story ,,have too say the waiting was worth😃
It's a beautiful love story penned up in simple words..love is very difficult to describe..
but it's just not about loving,it's understanding,being together,helping at the times of difficulties..all these both needed was to understand their love for eachother and fall in love again and that happened with a little time they both took...that made them realise how much they needed eachother..
Great one bhoomi..👏
Sri:-)

Originally posted by: gopi06

beautiful and simple one bhoomi ...really well written one
only family is what matters,
thats true ,but some times we forget about it
try to write more often bhoomi ...thanks for the pm