Upd! MN FF - Love and all that jazz - Chap8 -pg17

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi guys!! been a long time im not sure if anyone remembers me...but im back with a new FF, based on MN.
Love and all that jazz

Character sketch

Nupur: A regular college girl...gorgeous, ambitious but confused, friendly, funloving but level headed...the only thing was she didn't believe in love...she had everything going for her at her old college...but as luck would have it her parents were moving to a new city which mean she would have to move to a new college.

Diya: Nupur's cousin and best friend since they were kids...just like nupur in everyway, except she wasn't that ambitious in life...she had already met the love of her life and had her life all figured out.

Benji: Fun, cute, popular, smart...everything one would want in a guy and soul mate...and thats just what he was ...Diya's soul mate and Mayanks's best friend.

Mayank: U know the guy a girl always went to college for, that one guy who was perfect in every way yet human in so many other ways...he was that guy...Down to earth, gorgeous, smart, funny...and Benji's best friend from kindergarten.

Chapter one:

The alarm on her cell buzzed just to be put on snooze again...while someone punded on the bedroom door...*oh make it go away...this cant be happening already...its just a dream, go back to sleep* thought nupur.

"Nupur wake up now!!! We are going to be late!!! We have a flight to catch...or have u forgotten!! Open the door..." Nupur reluctantly got out of her bed because she knew her mom was not going to stop yelling till she did so. Yes today was the day she was leaving home...Mumbai to move to Bangalore...She loved it here..she loved the crowd, the hustle and bustle, the diversity of the people, her college , her friends...but all that was going to change because her mom had gotten a transfer to Bangalore...she liked Bangalore too...she had visited Bangalore every year since she was a kid..her masi and masa stayed there and so did Diya their daughter...not only her cousin but her best friend. That was the only bright part of the move. As she pulled her door open her mom continued "NUPUR! Gunjan is also here...will u open up...oh finally!! Your not dressed?! We leave in an hour get dressed now!! Gunjan is waiting for u...ill send her up! Baby...there is so much to finish as yet and your still not ready...GUNJAN!! Come up beta...nupur is awake.." Just like a tornado , her mom came and left. I went for a quick shower and came out to find Gunjan sitting on my bed...crying...*oh god...i cant deal with this* Nupur thought *I mean i was the one moving, still i would be the one consolling her...but thats just the way it was, gunjan my best friend here was a complete softy and i had always looked out for her...logically it would be tougher for her to get over it...she hated change.*

Nupur: "Hi Gunjan...please don't start, im the one who's leaving not you. Plus i don't think i have the time for it...mom's already flipping out that we are going to miss the flight."

Gunjan: " I know...i know...its just that i don't know what im going to do without u? Your my only friend in college!"

Nupur: " thats not true, everyone else is still there..." She said only o be interrupted by Nupur

Gunjan: "I know but it wont be the same without you..."

Nupur: "I'll miss u too babe...but u know what this year is going to go by so fast we wont have time to even realise, then i will apply for jj school of arts and get right back here! But please promise me while im gone you will not fall in love with every guy u meet and declare him as the one, till he breaks your heart or you break his."

Gunjan: "I will if you promise to get back out there and actually give a chance to all the poor suckers who fall madly in love with you." Said laughing

Nupur: " Hey! I date...its just not the be all and end all of my life..."

Gunjan: " oh really...when was your last date?" raising an eyebrow

Nupur: " Ah...there was...ah.."

Gunjan: " I rest my case."

Nupur: " oh shut up there has to be someone...yes..yes! Prashant ...yes prashant i went out with him a couple of times...i even met his mom..."

Gunjan: " O yeah...prashant...he was a cutie...why did u break up with him again?"

Nupur: "He took me to meet his mom! It was getting way too serious for me...I mean hello we are only 20, how the hell do we know what we want? I don't even know what i want to eat for dinner ...i have my whole life left to commit myself to one guy...till then im doing just fine enjoying their company."

Gunjan : " yeah..yeah...but mark my words...some guy is going to knock your socks off make you fall madly in love with him one of these days."

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Diya: "he is going to knock your socks off!!"

Nupur: "You know i never realised...how similar you and gunjan were."

Diya: "Gunjan? Where did gunjan come in this? Oh forget it, anyway nupsie please u have to meet him!! He is amazing...i have been meaning to set you two up since for ever but he was in a serious relationship with a b**ch and just broke up with her...your timing couldn't be more perfect...its like cupid orchestrated the whole thing!!" Diya her crazy, love struck cousin...babbled as she parked her car outside a cafe.

Nupur: "Maybe coffee was a bad idea...but i guess decaf would work to calm you down."

Diya: "ha..ha..very funny...im serious, babe...he's perfect!! "

Nupur: "Dee...i just arrived to Bangalore today! College is starting in a week...i have a lot of stuff going on right now...i really not interested in the dating scene right now...maybe in a month or so.." that should get her off my back for a while

Diya: "NOOO! Nupsie he is the perfect guy...he'll get snatched up before then! Every girl in campus has her eye on him...but u have a date with him this Saturday!! Thats huge!"

Nupur: "What!! Thats tomorrow!! And you already fixed it up!! Dee!!! And what kind of a guy cant stay single for a month after he just got out of a serious relationship!! Im not sure i want to even meet such a guy." Getting seriously pissed off at diya for going ahead and fixing her on a blind date, with some stupid college stud...*im sure he's super dumb and cant string 5 words together to make a sentence. * she thought.

Diya: "Nupur he isn't like that...benji had to twist his arm into going out with you too...he doesn't want anything serious right now either...which is perfect for you...plus hes a really nice guy...and its not him who cant stay single its those 100's of girls at school who wont let him stay single." She said a bit calmly.

Nupur: "Ok..ok ...fine ill go out with him...but thats it...no promises! Whats mr.perfects name anyway?" knowing diya...like herself..could get like a tenacious bulldog when it came to one of her crazy ideas.

Diya: "Mayank Sharma."

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Sushma: "Surprise!!" Nupur's mom yelled as diya parked the car outside Nupur's new house.

Nupur: "whats the suprise mom? Why are you standing out side our house?"

Sushma: " well thats because your surprise just arrived and i saw you pull up so i didn't go in. Well don't just stand there come on in girls." she said opening the gate.

Nupur: " Oh mom!! Its a bug!...its awesome...i love the colour good choice...but i thought you hated red, ow come you got yourself a red car?" she said looking at the shinny new red beetle.

Sushma: "Well thats because its not mine its your new car!"

Nupur: "What?! Are u serious? I get my own car? No bumming your car? No begging, no fighting?"

Sushma: "Yes! Well dad and i were talking and Bangalore doesn't have a great public transport system, this way u'll be more independent...plus baby, i know this move has been hard for u and dad both and im so lucky that you guys have been so supportive of me taking this job."

Nupur: " Mom! Ofcourse we would be supportive, this is your dream job! Ur an editor of a magazine now! Plus u know dad he can work from anywhere...its his boon for being a fancy finance consultant."

Sushma: "I know...but i love u'll for being so great about it, so this is my way of showing my appreciation for you and for your dad well, i got him a new golf set and a membership in a golf club! So dia baacha what do u think of nupur's new car."

Dia: "Its fab Masi! You know i have been..."

As Dia and her mom went inside the house nupur hung back looking at her new car. Her dad had taken early retirement from work because he had the financial luxury to do so...he had predicted the stock market crash he had sold a lots of the stocks and had made an unbelievable amount of money for himself and all his clients at that time...now he could work from home, handling fewer portfolios...so when her mom got offered her dream job as the editor of the country's biggest fashion and decor magazine, it was a no brainer to move. Since her mom's job started right away and nupur's college too, her dad was stuck winding up the house in Mumbai. They had decided on keeping that house just incase nupur couldn't adjust and wanted to move back alone. *But there seemed no need for that as of now* nupur thought looking at her car *'cos things never looked this shinny and red back in Bombay!*

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Thats it for today...pls excuse any spelling or gramatical errors..pls friend me if u'll are interested in a pm and let me know what u'll think!! šŸ˜‰
Index
Chapter 1 - page 1
Chapter 2 - page 2
Chapter 3 - page 4
Chapter 4 - page 6
Chapter 5 - page 9
Chapter 6 - page 12
Chapter 7 - page 14
Chapter 8 - page 17
Edited by ivana - 13 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Welcome back ivana
happy to c u with a mayur ff
wow it was a beautiful start dear

loved nups-gunjan and ups-dia convo
wow nups got a new car- great...
lovelyyy update...


keep updating



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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow gr8 start
nupur is lovely
waiting for mayanks entry
continue soon😊
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Nice start... Please PM me when you update. :)
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This is an interesting concept.
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Hmnm dear so different and nice start
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Interesting hun

Nice start

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nyc start!!
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wowww...šŸ‘šŸ‘
gr8888 han...
for a change Nupur doesnt blv in love...😲
its a new thing to digest...šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
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Chapter Two

Nupur: "MOM! Im going to go find out about the gym..." she told her mom going to the kitchen "In my new car!" she added excitedly.

Sushma: "Wow...if i knew u would get up at 8:00 on a Saturday and go do something productive i would have gotten you the car long back..oh and while u are out can you swing by the supermarket? I have the list right here."

Nupur: "I knew it...you only got me the car so that i would have to run errands huh?"

Sushma: "Well whats the use of giving a gift if u cant take advantage of it" replied winking.

Nupur: "Yeah, yeah...ill be back in an hour or so. Bye."

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Nupur: "Dia...wake up!! Where is the gym you were talking about?" calling diya from her cell phone

Dia: "Nupsie? What time is it? What is wrong with u its 8:00 on a Saturday!" having woken up by nupur's phone call.

Nupur: "yeah miracles never seem to seize! Im around there somewhere and i think ..oh wait i think i see it..slamming her breaks...is it the yellow building with..." She got cut off in mid sentence as a car rammed into her hers..

Dia: "Hello! Nupur! What was that?"

Nupur: "Dee im going to have to call you back...cos if someone isn't hurt they are going to be." She said cutting the phone and getting out of her car to inspect the damage and give the diver a piece of her mind. *Oh thank god its just a scratch* But as she saw someone getting out the car she yelled anyway. "Couldnt u see my car!?!"

Guy: "You are the one who braked suddenly! This isn't entirely my fault.."

Nupur: "So u admit its your fault? "

Guy: "I don't know if you have a visual and hearing problem at the same time...i said it WASN'T my fault entirely, you braked in middle of a street...and this dog came out of nowhere so i didnt see you till the last min and thats why i hit you." Looking at the damage he added "oh hit would be a bit of an exaggeration, scratch u."

Nupur: "I don't believe this...instead of apologising...your telling me its my fault for being on the road...b'cos u were distracted by a fictional dog while driving? Ur drunk aren't u?"

Guy: "What! Why the hell would i be drunk its 8:00 in the morning! Look you know what forget it, im late already.. you look like you don't have a life but i have places to go...so instead of prolonging this any further. The scratch will come right off with some rubbing...i think 2000 bucks should cover it..." he said removing his wallet while nupur just stared at this arrogant jerk of a guy.

Nupur: "Keep ur money A*****e and use it to buy a good pair of glasses!" she said turning around and getting in her car. In the review mirror she saw the guy staring at her car with a look mixed with anger and shock at the same time. *now whos standing in the middle of the road...what a jerk!* she thought driving home.

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Sushma: "your back already? That was quick.." said as nupur slammed the main door shut. "Baby are you ok?"

Nupur: "No ma im not...i got into an accident! My pretty red car is ruined!"

Sushma: "What! Are u hurt! come here let me see!" rushing over to nupur and grabbing her hands and face.

Nupur: "Im fine my, its just a scratch!! But its a SCRATCH on my new car!" Nupur wailed...seeing this sushma knew her daughter was fine, cos if something was really wrong nupur would have gone through hell to appear fine so that she wouldn't have to worry.

Sushma: "Well look at it this way...gadi ki nazar utar gayi."

Nupur: " What nazar utar gayi...ughh the guy was such a jerk...it was completely his fault and he didn't even apologize..." She tariled off as she heard a car door slam outside to see diya rushing in still wearing her night suit with masi.

Dia: "Masi!! I think nupur is in..." She stopped as she saw nupur. "Nupur! ur here, why is your phone switched off?! Do you know how worried i got, i thought something happened to you!"

N.Masi: "yeah nupur, diya told me and we rushed right over."

Sushma: "Aarti, Diya everything is fine...she was in a accident but nothing happened except an ill fated encounter with an obnoxious fellow...right nupur?"

Nupur: "Yeah masi, dee im fine."

Dia: "Good i thought something would have happened to you and i would have to cancel your date with Mayank today." She said jokingly knowing it would piss nupur off.

Nupur: "So u only care about my safety cos i have to go out with some guy u found me?"

Sushma: "Wait a minute...girls, what is this about a boy? Your going on a date today? U didn't tell me!" she told nupur "And you fixed it up...diya details... who is he? Is he cute? Does he know what he's getting into?" looking over at nupur.

Nupur: "Ma!!! Masi make them stop!" she said going and hugging aarti.

Aarti: "Nupur bacha i would normally, but diya told me about mayank and your date, and i got to say i approve. mayank is cute and a really nice guy." She replied winking, and dia and sushma burst out laughing.

Nupur: "Oh god u too!! Fine, u know what gang up...but after the start i have had today i don't think the day is going to get any worse..." Mumbling about it she left the room and the rest of them continued laughing.

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Sushma: " Oh baby! You look gorgeous! I wish i didn't have to go meet lalita aunty today, i could have seen your boyfriend." She said looking as nupur came down in a simple black dress which according to diya it accented her body without making it look s**tty. Those were her exact words, much to nupur's disdain.

Nupur: "Mom! Its just a date..hes not my boyfriend...and this dress is dias and you can tell her how gorgeous it is. I had planned on wearing my jeans." Fed up cos the whole afternoon dia had hounded her about clothes and accessories. Normally nupur would have loved such a girly day, but today she had a bad feeling.

Sushma: "Im not talking about the dress im talking about my gorgeous baby! Im glad your doing this, it will help you make friends. And you never know he may be your prince charming after all."

Nupur: "prince charmings don't exist. I thought i was the daughter and you were supposed to impart wisdom."

Sushma: "I am imparting wisdom...there are prince charmings, mine believe it or not is your dad and you will eventually find yours...we just have to deal with a couple of toads on the way." She said winking " anyway you have fun...keep your cell phone on and be home by curfew...im cool but im not that cool young lady." She added sternly only half joiking.

Nupur: "Dont worry about the curfew oh wise one...im just doing this cos diya has the relationship disease." She continued when her mom looked confused "you know the one, when your in love you are convinced its wonderful and everyone should be paired off to complete the noahs arc."

Sushma: "Oh god, where did i go wrong and get such a cynical daughter from" Her mom said dramatically as she left the house. Nupur shook her head laughing and went to see tv till mayank came to pick her up.* I guess maybe it wouldn't be so bad* she thought he was benji's best friend, and she liked benji a lot. Even though she didn't really believe in soul mates , even she couldn't argue the fact that diya and he were meant for eachother...but it was rare to find yours when you were in college and had the whole world ahead of you to experience..she got up when she heard the doorbell ring. *Diya this better be worth it.* she thought. She opened the door and stared in shock.

Nupur: "You!! What are you doing here! How did u find out where i live!" she said staring at the guy from morning.

Mayank: "You are Nupur? This cant be happenening ! " He said looking up at the sky with his eyes closed. "You know what... im not following you, only an insane person would...i was told my by an ex-friend that i was going to meet this really nice girl today and that i would miss out on life if i didn't come here...so unless you are not nupur and shes in there , im out of here to go visit a future murder victim." He said turning around before nupur had a chance to regain her composure.

Nupur: "Yeah that would be good..cos he was clearly out of his mind to think that i would ever go out with such a mentally unbalanced person!" she saw mayank turning to respond but she had already slammed her door shut.

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As benji reached home he saw mayanks car parked in his driveway and looked up to see the lights in his room switched on. *This was bad. Maybe the date with nupur had gone really well and mayank couldn't wait to kiss my feet. Nope that wasn't it, this was definitely bad.* He knew mayank. He knew him well enough to know , that if the date had gone really well he wouldn't admit it, he would play it cool. He was a cautious guy, there was no love at first sight for him. Which was why it had been so weird when he had dated Sheena for almost a year after knowing her all of 2 days. Mayank never really loved Sheena, he had so much as told him so. He didn't love her but he liked her enough to be with her. It made sense in warped way. You had to like the person to spend time with them in order to fall in love with them. Not that Benji agreed with that he had fallen head over heals in love with dia when he had first laid eyes on her. But mayank would call that physical attraction which worked in his favour , as dia actually turned out to be an awesome person. Normally he would never try playing cupid but this had been dia's idea and he kind of agreed nupur and mayank would have been perfect together, didnt know what could have gone wrong. *well time to face the music* he thought as he headed for his room.

Benji: "hey man..what are u doing here...how was the date?"

Mayank: "Upset to see that i made it here alive after you set me up on a date with she devil?" he asked in a eerily neutral tone.

Benji: "She devil huh? So u guys didnt hit it off?"

Mayank: "There was nothing to hit off! We never went on the date i saw her and ran for my life! She was the girl benji! She was the girl because of whom i missed my interview this morning!!"

Benji: "What your kidding! U banged nupur's car? Wow! Small world huh? Well u cant really blame her for yelling at you i mean u did bang her new car. Dia told me how excited she was about it."

Mayank: "Look it wasn't my fault totally...she was just as much to blame over there...she stopped! in the middle of the street for no reason, who does that? And there was this dog and u know what forget about the accident...that is just how i found out she is insane. Im actually glad i had the accident or else i would have to spend a whole evening with her to realise she was crazy! The point is u set me up with a crazy girl!!!"

Benji: "Stop saying crazy...Nupur is not crazy! Even you would have been mad if someone banged ur new car...its just called road rage...it was unfortunate that it happened to be you. Trust me she is really fun and smart and.."

Mayank: "I have heard the speech before...thats how i got into this mess remember." Mayank said interrupting benji.

Benji: "And Hot." He finished, when mayank didnt say anything he continued "U got to atleast admit shes hot."

Mayank: "The crazy ones are always the most good looking, thats how they get away with the things they do."

Benji: "Im serious mayank, shes a nice girl, much better than anyone at college and you know sheena is going to make your life miserable by trying to patch up things again, if your with someone then maybe she would get the msg and leave you alone."

Mayank: "Look i can handle sheena...but im not going to date Nupur. I just came here to tell you to stop trying to get us together."

Benji: "Thats going to be a little difficult seeing how she is going to be attending our college and is dia's best friend who is my girlfriend...u see where im going with this."

Mayank: "Yes i can see that you plan to hang out with a girl who has some serious mental issues because of your girlfriend."

Benji: "Ok mayank stop! For heavens sake dude..u banged her car, ok maybe it wasn't ur fault entirely but u banged her car and if u weren't already late you would never have banged her car. Maybe you don't have to date her but u definitely have to hang out with her, so come Monday you better apologise to her at college like a mature person i know you to be. Understood!"

Mayank: "Ok..whatever..ill apologise but i don't have to like it!"

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Dia: "It was your fault too nupur, you should have apologised to him."

Nupur: "My fault!! He was wrong, rude and anal about the whole thing, he should be apologising to me!!"

Dia: "Look mayank isn't like that...he really is..."

Nupur: "A nice guy...I know u have been telling me that for over two days its like your trying to brain wash me!" nupur finished making dia smile.

Dia: "Babe u know i love you, U can get angry for no reason but you never carry a grudge so cant you forget it this time too? I mean ok don't date him but please be civil to him and who knows maybe you guys can become really good friends. Its going to be really hard to avoid him given that he is benji's best friend. For me pleeease!" she said batting her eyes.

Nupur: "Fine! But im not doing it for that face...that may work of guys but not me...im doing it cos i don't want to ruin it for u'll"

Dia: "Thank you..thank you...!!" she said hugging nupur.

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Hi guys! thanks for the comments...will try to update this ff regularly...suggestions are always welcome!
till later...😃
Edited by ivana - 13 years ago

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