The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 - Page 65

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Posted: 13 years ago


Sorry for the delay in comments dear...was not able to come online much...but now a long comment on all the lovely parts...the story is going great...loved the hippi irritating poor simran...glad tht rohan and aditya came with the girls...now what to say about the intelligent family of keerti...rohan has to be careful...father in law to be has sharp observation skills... ;)...and wht to say about deeds...she will not leave them easily...glad both adi and ro are deeds friends...wedding would be fun now...eager to see the wedding masti and chup chupke romance b/w the couples :D

argh hating sims dad...h can sumone be so shameless...hope adi quickly takes a decision for there gud...and lastly happy to see sharan back...was missing his charms...glad he came to help naina in ro's absence...will love to see the bonding b/w these two...

Update soon...wana read more and more...am getting addicted to your fic... :D

Edited by Imaan-Ki-Duaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 89

Things hadn't really improved between Simran and her dad's wife in the days that followed. She had continued to act like a super bitch while Simran continued to ignore her antics...only because she knew the day was arriving close when she would have officially eloped from the Suri prisonhouse. Aditya had been taking all her important and necessary items piecemeal to his place every day. Ever since that incident, he had visited her every night without fail...and had loved her in every nook and corner of the house when they were alone...just so her memories related to the house would be his and his alone...of course after her mothers.

Aditya seemed to have it all figured out...except that she wouldn't be welcome in his house as an eloper. He had not deemed important to even inform his family of her arrival, let alone asking them. It was during one of the plan-out sessions with Keerti and Rohan that Keerti insisted he make sure that that base was covered as well. She didn't want her to face closed doors...and much to Aditya's surprise, her fears had been right. He had received an earful when he told them of the truth...that he would bring her over without knowledge of her parents.

His folks were not at all orthodox when it came to him bringing over his girl. They were rather nice, happy go lucky and jovial in nature and had met Simran umpteen times to know that she was a sweet girl and kept their son very happy. But the thought of giving shelter to a run away daughter didn't sit well with them. They didn't care so much for Aditya and Simran sharing the same room as much as being caught if Mr. Suri happened to find out about it. In that sense, they were not as powerful as Mr. Suri himself.

And so, the now much excited Keerti had been more than happy to offer Simran to stay over hers. And much to Aditya's and Rohan's surprise, she had planned on it already - like informing her folks, albeit not informing them of the entire truth, and making room for her stuff in her bedroom. One could say, she was really looking forward to Simran's arrival.

They chose a day for the final walk-out when they knew Simran's dad and his wife wouldn't be home. Simran and Aditya were still inside the house getting the last few of her things while Rohan and Keerti waited downstairs for them. Rohan's phone beeped to inform him he had received an email. He opened it to read Sharan's reply to his email...

Hey dude,

She's is doing much better, now that he is behind bars. Hope you are enjoying your trip to India. Say Hi to Keerti from me.

Sharan


He read the email and knew that she must have been attacked again. He stepped aside to call Sharan right away to get the details...just in time for Mr. Suri to come face to face with Keerti. She managed a smile when his wife greeted her before going inside the house...leaving Keerti alone with him. He saw her swallow hard as she turned to face him again, her face now struggling not to show fear. But it was noticeable - in the paleness of her skin and the slight quivering of her lips...and in her unconsciously taking steps back...it was evident. He took great pleasure in the knowledge that he affected her so much. He licked on his lower lip as he took a step closer to her...his lusty eyes taking stock of her body moving up and down.

Given that they were out in the open, she should have known he wasn't going to make a move on her. That he was only teasing her, very much in response to her fear. Yet, she found a sudden surge of relief when her back hit Rohan's chest, his hand coming around her back to rest on her hip. His face changed completely when he saw Rohan. He had not expected him to destroy the little sadistic pleasure he was enjoying. His eyes traveled down to where his hand was resting...letting him know that they were now together. And clearly, being with Rohan had some positive effect on her, because her facial expressions were now showing disgust and anger towards him. Rohan gestured with his fingers then - pointing to his own eyes before flipping them to point at his, to indicate I'm watching you. Almost without conscious effort, his legs made him step back..away from them.

Just then, Aditya and Simran walked out with a small carry bag with the last of her belongings that were left...including her mother's wedding jewelry set, which she had managed to steal from her dad's wife's safe. Her mother had saved it for her wedding, and the bitch had claimed ownership of it, along with the rest. There was no way she was going to give it to her if she asked for it, and so she stole it. She didn't care if she would get caught...she had wanted it. Besides, she didn't want to summon trouble or bombardment of questions by asking for it. She had told them she would be back, but she had better plans in sight. She had provided wrong address and phone number for Keerti...knowing they would look for her when she didn't return. And she had been smart enough to not inform them of her departure to the US as well...Aditya had planned it all very well for her.

"I'm going to Keerti's place for her sister's wedding. I'll be back soon after. Bye dad." she told him without the slightest emotion in her tone. He hugged her before she climbed into Aditya's car and then bid Aditya goodbye. He then turned to look at Rohan and Keerti in the back seat to supposedly wish them goodbye as well...but made an angry face at them. He had not been happy with what had happened. He was not happy to see Rohan get an upper hand at his little interaction with Keerti. Nevertheless, he bid them goodbye. Just as the car started, they both wished him goodbye in their own way...by showing him their middle finger.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...dol...
liked the way friends are dealing with each others problems...
No Naina/Sharan today...hmm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yayyy...SIMS shifting to KITZ house...now deeds khanna and sims r going to give sum real hard time to KITZ...:P

sims's dad is such a jerk...and his wife is just*****...
now looking forward to team sims-deeds...

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Posted: 13 years ago
LOOL! Rohan and Keerti showed him their middle finger as thei goodbye..i found that too funny!🤣🤣

Im so glad to know that Simran is finally leaving her dad's home and them...she deserves better and yayy...she's living with Keerti..so more wedding fun! hehe!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I swear my eyes were popping out while reading the part with K and the dad!!

So they are getting married and then she is going to live with K...right??!!

Yay a wedding!!! love A's commitment and utter devotion to loving S.

Okay now i am greedy i want intimate private parts for the couples.
I am getting a feeling you are rushing to finish... Don't even think it!:)

love!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely update...loved the friendship bond between them...gud she decided to move out...all will be well now...hate that man...h he was eyeing poor keerti...gud rohan was there...the last bit was well deserved for such a man...gud going :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
<div align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">That man is utterly disgusting... I mean again... </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">She isn't an item...that he can please himself with...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I loved when she stepped back and Rohan was standing there... and he showed him where Kits belongs ... 😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">His expression was worth all of the crap before... that was the first jhatka.. and one more to come when he find out his daughter isn't coming back... can't wait for that update... 😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">>Wonderful update Dol. continue super soon... :)</font> <

<font color="#990066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">>SilentPrincess<</font></font>

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Edited by .SilentPrincess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wah wah- bhagake le gaya!! Oh well..I am looking forward to deeds and Sims

Waise hua kya ? to deeds jalan? Everything became normal with Rookie?


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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 90

Kanan had arranged for a nice family dinner on the occasion of Simran's arrival...and had obviously invited Aditya and Rohan as well. Even though she was friends with Aditya and Rohan, she wasn't told of the exact reason for Simran's shift in bases. She just knew that she was coming over to get more involved with the wedding...which she greatly appreciated.

The Khanna's were down to earth, simple, elegant and friendly people. They welcomed Simran into their house like their own daughter and made sure she was comfortable and well taken care of. The house was a huge one with a lot of extra bedrooms, but both the girls preferred to share one. Simran didn't think she would be that comfortable staying there in a separate room, and thus thanked Keerti for making the decision on her behalf.

While Keerti was still helping Simran settle her stuff in their room, everyone outside was called for dinner to the dining room. The way everyone else was seated was perfect for the evil mind's next trick. When Keerti and Simran walked to the table, only 3 seats were empty - 1 next to Aditya which of course Simran occupied. And the other 2 next to Rohan and Mr. Khanna each. Of course, Keerti started walking to sit by her father, but Kanan insisted she be let to sit next to him since it was her last few days at home with them. Of course, there could be no counter argument that would outweigh her reasoning so she quietly sat next to Rohan, not after shooting an angry look at Kanan who responded with a smirk. And that's when the fun began...

As cliched as it had seemed to them when they had watched movies, they did it themselves and it was then that they fully understand the sentiments behind that gesture - they held hands under the table. But unlike the couples in movies waiting to be caught, they both held their left hands together. They were squashed so close that the little gap between them was doing something to them. The urgency to hold each other right then was slowly taking over them. But there was little they could do. The way he held it, he didn't think he would be able to let go so soon, which they had to control with great difficulty. They nodded and spoke a word or two here and there to show they were paying attention to the conversation at the table, but their attention was under the table..on their talking hands. They were conversing with their fingers...they had so much to talk...so much to eat...and so much to drink...

As much as they tried to keep their urgency to hold each other inconspicuous, it wasn't going to escape the eagle eyes of her father who was sitting right opposite Rohan who had already noticed their one missing hand. He continued to look at Rohan with that piercing look that he had given him at the airport. And although Rohan's attention was on their talking hands, he didn't miss the look of scrutiny that was being shot in his direction, but he took it lightly thinking he possibly wouldn't guess their hands were glued together under the table - specially because he would let go of it for a moment to bring it up on the table for everyone's show. He was clearly underestimating the man sitting in front of him when he thought the man probably didn't know what was going on. And then he was proved wrong... A fork was dropped on the floor and for reasons unknown to others, Mr. Khanna announced out loud that he was going to bend down to pick up the fork.

The two people it was meant for heard it and prevented the mishap of being caught and in the next instant, their missing hands came back on the table. And when that happened, the evil mind saw it. Ah, so that's what is happening under the table. Interesting!

She turned to look at her father and noticed the slight smile on his face. If her father was having a little fun at the dinner table, why should she stay behind. Right then, she asked Keerti to pass the basket of chapatis and when she did, she exclaimed, "Keerti, what's wrong with your hand? Why is it so red?"

And mission accomplished! There was a smirk on Kanan's face while others looked at her hand all at the same time. While Aditya and Simran figured out what must have happened and held their lips closed between their teeth to stop the laughter, Keerti's mother figured she had missed something that was happening at the dinner table that she was unaware of...and wondered what it was.

On one side, Keerti's face flushed while on the other, her father turned to look at Rohan at the same time he looked at him, a bit alarmed. He saw her father look down to his hand on the table and look up again, mischief again reflecting in his eyes. Rohan immediately pulled back his hand and hid it under the table after getting another piercing look from the man. The man knew how to make him nervous. Everyone at the table was enjoying dinner to the fullest...at their expense. Dinner was ruined for them both... because suddenly they both lost their appetite...under the hovering eyes of all the eagles on the table.


Edited by --dolphin-- - 13 years ago

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