Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 14

Too good storyteller...
Daksh's imagination of pregnancy 🤣 too funny ...
The adoption idea was really touchy... 😊
I too would love them adopting aku's child... Dakshna will be the worlds best parents... 😉

thnx, dakshnafan and sou.

Contd,,,after dinner

Continuing from bangles FF

N: Meri pyar tumhare liye kabhi kam nahi hoga, sirf barti rahegi, har ek pal.

D: Main bhi aisa feel karta hoon. Mere bas me chalta toh mein ek pal ke liye tumko mujhse dur nahi hone de ta, par aab humko tore der ke liye alag hona parega. Raat bohot hogayi, ab hamein sona chahiye, Aao, main tumhe tumhari kamre tak chod aata hoon

N: Mujhe meri kamre tak chod aaoge, Koi zaroorat nahi hai, tum fikhar mat karo, tumhe chor kar main kahi nahi ja ungi.

D: Mujhe chod ne do na, me tumhe chodna chahta hoon,

N: Tik hain, Par kisine dekh liya to.

D: Sab so gaye hai, koi nahi dekhega

As they are walking to Naina's room

N: Daksh, hum sab ko hamare bare mein kab batayenge. Mujhe jhoot bholna acha nahi lagta.

D: Pehle toh tumhe aisa nahi lagta ta.

N: Tumhari saath saath rehnese, mujh aisa lagne laga hai, Daksh, jaante ho, kisine ek baar mujhe kahata, ki jab hum sacha pyar karte hai, toh hum behter insaan banjaate hai. Ab main yeh khud experience kiya hai.

D: Tumne tik kaha, Naina, Jab se maine tumse pyar kiya hai, main bhi kitna badal gaya hoon, main KP aur akhdoo tora kum ho gaya hoon. Shayad yehi farak hai, hamari pyar mein, aur Abhi aur Sonakshi pyar mein.

N: Haa

Naina smiles but doesn't say goodbye back

D: Tum mujhe goodnight nahi wish karogi

Naina goes upto Daksh, pull him closer, puts her arms round his shoulders, and gives him a kiss on his cheek

Daksh is a little shocked first then he smiles

N: lo, tumhe wish kardiya, tik hain, Goodnight

D: Tumne jistara se mujhe wish kiya na,

D:toh mera night ab good hi nahi, very very good hoga

They both laugh and have one final hug.

N: Ab jao, Daksh, agar kisine dekh liya toh

She pushes him out of the room. They look at each other one last,

D: Goodnight, toh me ab jaraha hoon

N: (Smiles) toh ab jao na.

D: Jaanta hoon, lagta hain kisiko meri shakal pasand nahi hai.

And leaves pretending to be annoyed but then can't help smiling

Naina smiles and closes the door

But then she opens the door again

And Daksh is still standing there and was staring at Naina;s door. They both see each other

They both smile and at the same time Naina closes her door and Daksh turns around and goes to his room.

Next day

Aai is in the kitchen, making breakfast, Naina wakes up and sees Aai in the kithchen

N:Aai, main tumhari madat karu.

While Naina helps Aai make breakfast

A: Tik hain, tumne dekha Naina, ki Chintu jaag gaya hai ki nahi, aaj woh jagne me bohot der kar raha hain, iski tabiyat kharab toh nahi hai

N: Nahi, Aai, uski tabiyat kharab nahi hain, woh der se soya ta isi liye, ap uski fikar maat ki jiye.

A: Tumhe kaise pata ki Chintu der se soya ta, Naina

Naina worries at what to reply

N: Aai, woh ... woh main raat ko pani khane ke liye jab jaagi ti, maine dekha ki Daksh abhi tak uski kamre mein jaaga ta.

A: Acha. Ab main use jaake utata hoon, varna woh kam keliye der hojayega

N: (Slightly too excitedly) Main Daksh ko jakar utati hoon, (Aai looks at Naina weirdly, then to distract Aai from what she just said, Naina says cheekily ) ab jaake Baba ko utayi hain.

A: Naina, tum bhi na,

Aai pulls Naina's ear

N: Aap ne suna, Aai, Baba ne aapko bulaya hain, use chai chahiye, woh bhi sirf apki haat ke aur aap ke haat se.

Aai tries to pulls Naina's ear again but Naina runs away laughing

N: Main Daksh ko jaake utati hoon.

A: Jao

@lucky what to say... Too sweet, cute & romantic...totally can imagine the scene... 😳 loved it...

@storyteller u do wonders with dialogue yaar... Love both the scenes... It seems Daksh overslept after getting the gn kiss from Naina 😉

it is being long time I have seen an FF abt Dakshna. Since I am a little bit busy I cannot take part in it also. But I do read every FFs u wrote. Lucky, Storyteller, DakshnaFan etc... pls keep writing new FFs. It is good to read it.

Here is one I just tried to write fast.

Dakshna after mrg.

Daksh comes after Office. It was good raining and Daksh comes wet. Naina who is in room sees Daksh and runs to take the towel. She starts to scold him
Naina: Aree.. baarish ho raha hai.. umbrella kyu nahi lete ho? muje bulakar pata sakte the na?
Daksh sits on the chair and Naina dries his hair. Naina is in saree. Daksh feels warm and he pulls Naina towards him. Naina shrinks a little bit. She smiles and pushes him back. She goes to the wardrobe and takes another dress and tells
Naina: Kapde badal lo.. bimar pad jayega...
Daksh gets up and comes near Naina and looks at her... he slowly takes the dress from her hand and goes to wash room.
Naina is busy with cleaning the table and arranging the things over there. Daksh comes near her and hugs from her back and kisses behind her ear. Naina smiles and lovingly hesitates and continues her job
Daksh: Arre... pati hoo mein.. zara bhi parava nahi?!!!
Naina smiles herself and turns towards Daksh naughtifully: Nahi tho.. kyu?
Daksh wonders and holds Naina's hand and asks: Kya matlab?
naina as usual changes the subject: Ayi khane ke liye wait kar rahi hai.. chalo. der hote to dand ho jayenge. Naina walks towards the door.
Daksh feels bad... he thinks naina is disintersted to romance with him. his face is like KP.
Naina finds Daksh has not come with her and she turns towards him. Seeing his face she understood whats in his mind. She comes closer to him.
Naina: kya huva..?
Daksh sharp voice: tum javoo... muje bhookh nahi hai.
Naina mischeviously: sachmuj bhookh nahi lagta?
Daksh: Naina tum jaavo, muje bohot neend aa rahi hai..
Naina feels bad. she walks and daksh feels more bad. his face turns like KP. naina goes and closes the door and comes back. at that time only Daksh noticed door was opened. and he could get why Naina hesitated...
Naina: ab bata do.. mere ziddi pati kyu KP ka muh dikhakar khade ho?
Daksh does not look at her, still like KP.
Naina puts her arms around his neck and leans on her tove and kisses on his cheek. Daksh feels better but does not show it to her.
Naina sad face: ab muskuravo na??
Daksh smiles and pulls her towards him and asks: sirf ek hai??
Naina smiles and kisses on his other cheek also.
Naina: Ab Khush??? chalo... ayi wait kar rahi hogi..
they both leave happily...