Simply Magic - Spell # 2 || NTL - page 147 - Page 54

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Posted: 14 years ago
This OS is so sweet Kinza !!

It is amazing !!šŸ‘šŸ‘


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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely OS Kinza

Thanks for the pm 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello sweets!! .. back with an OS after long, based on MAYUR after marraige time.
and this OS for my candy! ā¤ļø
i love u meri jan!! .. keep smiling always.
šŸ¤—
This OS is yet again a scene i always wanted to see on MN, but couldn't!.

MAYUR OS
Saying it all.

Nupur was going through her notes, and preparing her assignment with dedication. AH!. Preparing assignments with dedication, you have so started sounding like your hubby dear!.

Giggling, she turned towards his picture on the side table, a perfect smiling picture, flaunting that perfect smile with dimples digging in, "sadu kahin ka", pouting she got up from the study table and walking towards the side table, she held the picture and lied down holding it close to her.

"waise tu her waqt frown karte ho, but I wonder what is with your smile!", she sighed and kept on gazing at the silent picture,

"tumhain pata hai, your smile is the best best best smile of this world, total sunshine!, the sunshine of my life", lovingly caressing the picture, she hugged it close.

"sorry for last night, thore ghusey main thi main", she said with a tear, "but I love you, mujhe sorry bhi nahi bolne diya and you came for a patch up, I love you", she separated the picture and looked at it again.

"pata hai mayank, ik larki ko apni life main bus yehi chaiye hota hai, a partner who can understand her, and you do it so well, you know I would have cried whole night and my ego was coming in between the sorry, but you left ur ego aside and came to me, inspite of the fact that it was not ur fault, you don't know how much more I fell in love with you last night", smiling with teary eyes, she planted a soft kiss on the picture.

"aur phir tum aur tumhara romance", she blushed and again hugged the picture, "BY god mayank!, main ne kabhi khuab main bhi nahi socha tha k tum itney romantic ho gey, tum ne tu merey sarey sapne pore kar diye", biting her lip, she sat and placed the picture on her knees.

"waise kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai you give me competition, I mean I am supposed to be the romantic one but tum hamesha hi kuch aisa kar detey ho k I am left speechless!", she lowered her eyes, even shying from the picture.

"but not today!!, aj tu main tumhain ik romantic surprise de k hi rahon gi!!", she sat up enthusiastically , holding the picture high, "after all I need to apologize for last night and give you the prize for being such a sweetheart", she smiled and brought the picture again close to her, "so Mr Sharma, how would you like your wife to serve you?",

"a kiss would be good to start with!"

A deep, love filled voice interrupted her blush and shocked she turned to find the man in the picture, standing, leaning on the door, flaunting his perfect sunshine smile.

"mayank!!", she got up from the bed amazed and hid the picture under the blanket, "tum kab aye?', she tried sounding normal, but her rosy cheeks were giving it away.

"bus abhi, when u were busy planning something romantic" , he pulled her close by her waist and with blush taking over her, she bit her lip, "bad manners, I was talking to my husband and you over heard our conversation!", she hugged him and said slowly.

"oh I am sorry Mrs Sharma, but how about I repent by conveying your blushes to your husband", he chuckled leaning onto her neck and she snuggled more, "I am sorry for last night mayank,", she hugged him leaving the naughty tone behind and mayank caressed her head, "it's alright nupur, even I behave so unreasonable at times and you adjust, so last night it was ur turn, simple", yet again flaunting his smile, he moved abit away, "and now how about the plans you were making, don't you think we are getting late in them, you should start implementing", he leaned in close and nupur looked up in his eyes which were shining with her love, "I love you mayank", she said slowly and pressed their lips together, not even giving a chance for mayank to return the confession, but that didn't matter, the way he kissed back and much more after that said it all!

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantu aww...i always wanted such a scene for Mayur wher she talks to his pic n he comes out of the blue😳

Damn GoodšŸ‘šŸ¤—

Loved itā¤ļø

n Mrs. Sharma turning romantic...PERFECTšŸ˜ƒā˜ŗļø
Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res! :D

*Edited*

Kinzu apuuu šŸ¤—
Glad to see u back.. 😃
On to the OS, well, people say that "beauty lies in simplicity" & this piece of work is surely the example of this statement..😳
Superb OS, purely simplicity and magical personified.. ā­ļø
The best part was when Nupur was talking with Mayank's photo and suddenly he arrives with a mischievous look.. DREAMY! šŸ˜
Loved it totally.. very cute.. ā¤ļø.. & their romance.. SIGH! ā˜ŗļø

You've made my day with this OS .. thank you so much! 😃
Keep writing more.. 😳

Love
Bidushy.. ā¤ļø

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
not fair... nupur ne toh kitna kuch plan kiya tha... aur tumne usey uss plan ko implement karne ke liye mauka hi nahi diya... šŸ˜†
aww i love pulling your leg! but very well sketched out... brilliantly written kinzu... God bless you, tc... ā¤ļø šŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
i guess i'd never be bored of reading on mayur. they make a sweet and simple scene feel like heavenly. sigh!
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Posted: 14 years ago
HAYEEE!!!! BEAUTIFUL OS KINZU!!!! SIMPLY AWSOME!!!! LOVED IT SO MUCH!!! *SIGHS* THE NUPUR TALKING TO MAYANK'S PHOTO!!! AMAZING IDEA KINZU AND SUCH AMAZINGLY WRITN!!! LOVED IT TO THE CORE!!! :) THE BEST PART WAS THE END OFCOURSE!!! ;) BEAUTIFUL IS THE ONLY WORD TO DESCRIBE IT!!! <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful Os kinza
sweet, simple and nice
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very cute os...
The part where nupur ws talking with mayank's photo was adorable...Also the sudden arrival of mayank and nupur's cute apology all was brilliantly written...
Lovely...

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