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Posted: 13 years ago
hey finally caught up!!!😃
phew!!!!
OMG...he kissed her...😳
how cute yaar...😍
just luvd it!!!

n geet equally affected too!!!!
wow...kheechav to dono
taraf se hai😉
bas dekhna baaki hai
who realises it 1st!!!😆

wonder wht n how their picnic turns to be...
hopefully romantic😳 ya hopelessly scandalous!!!
😆
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: soni4eva

awsome ff

luv it cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list x

thank u sooo much
glad that u loved the ff
n added u to the pm list
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: d_sonia

All the best for ur exams and pls update soon

Thank u for the wishes n will update soon
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

hey finally caught up!!!😃
phew!!!!
OMG...he kissed her...😳
how cute yaar...😍
just luvd it!!!

n geet equally affected too!!!!
wow...kheechav to dono
taraf se hai😉
bas dekhna baaki hai
who realises it 1st!!!😆

wonder wht n how their picnic turns to be...
hopefully romantic😳 ya hopelessly scandalous!!!
😆
continue soon

thank u sooo much Ash n finally u commented
yes keechav toh dono taraf hai
n picnic u will have to read n decide whether it is romantic or scandalous or anything else
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: Abhakaran

It's ok hinal
Take ur time no hurry
Best Of luck on ur exams ok
School is more important yaar
Study hard

Luv jyoti

Thanks jyoti for the wishes
will try n update soon
love,
Hinal
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
It's ok hinal
Take ur time no hurry
Best Of luck on ur exams ok
School is more important yaar
Study hard

Luv jyoti

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Posted: 13 years ago
PART SIX

They changed n went to the picnic spot.Geet was wearing a summer dress n Maan was in causals.



Maan,Armaan n Vicky took the bat n ball n went to play cricket. Meanwhile Geet n Shilpa arranged all the things. After that Geet went to the plave where the guys were playing n said "Mujhe bhi cricket khelna hai." Hearing this Armaan n Vicky started laughing n Maan was shocked.

After controlling his laughter Armaan said "Dekh Geet cricket ladkiyo ka khel nahi hai isliye tu waha jakar araam se baith kar hume khelte dekh"

Hearing this Geet got annoyed n said "Bhai aap yeh toh mt kaha ki ladkiya cricket nahi khel sakti.Aapko yaad nahi bachpan mein main aapke saath aur Karan veerji ke saath cricket khelti thi aur jeeti bhi thi"

So Armaan answered her "Geet bachpan mein hum log jan bhooj ke tujhse har jate aur jab tu jeeti thi toh kitni khush hoti thi"


Hearing this Geet's mouth was left open in shock.By then Shilpa had come n thought to interven or else these both would start fighting but before she could tell anything Geet told " Hawww Bhai aapko pata bhi hai ke Jhulan Goswami kaun hai woh Indian Women's Cricket Team ki captain hai aur unho ne India ko kai matches jetwaye hai toh aap yeh toh boliye hi mat ke ladkiya cricket nahi khel sakti" n made a angry face n pouted.

Maan in his mind "Geet kitni cute laga rahi hai abhi bilkul choti bachi ki tarah moh phulakar. Abhi uske laal laal gaal ko kichne ka mann kar raha hai." n then he realised what he was saying n chided himself mentally "Maan tu pagal hogaya hai ke yeh soch raha tha"

Meanwhile Armaan seeing Geet couldnt stop himself n went n side-hugged her n said "Thik hai yeh le bat aur chal khelne chal" n pulled her cheeks n ran towards the direction where Maan was Geet got angry on Armaan n started chasing him.

Armaan hid behind Maan n then ran away. Geet who was running behind Armaan didnt see a stone on her way n stumbled n fell on Maan.


When Geet tried to get up she again fell on Maan n her lips brushed against his cheeks. Maan n Geet got lost in each other's eyes.Then as they heard Armaan's voice both of them snapped out n Maan helped Geet get up.

Geet was really embarrassed n so said "Sorry" quietly n ran away from there.

After sometime all the guys came back n so that Dadi,Shilpa n Geet were playing cards n so the guys joined them n after sometime they stopped playing n had lunch.

After lunch they decided to go for boating n so they all went near the lake.All were very excited but Geet was lost in her thoughts

Geet this is the place I wanted to show u...
I hope u will never forget this place...

Geet then remembered what had happened that day near the lake n tears started flowing from her eyes.

Suddenly she snapped out of her thoughts as she felt someone keep their hand on her shoulder n so she wiped her tears n turned to see Shilpa was calling her.As she saw Geet's tears she asked with concern "Geet are u alright.Why are you crying???"

So Geet replied "Kuch nahi bhabhi woh meri aankh mein kuch chala gaya tha" n then they went to the place allt he others were waiting for them.

Geet then said "Dadi mujhe boating nahi jana aap sab log jaiye main yahi theek hu" n then Armaan said "Lekin Geet tumhe toh boating jane mein bohut mazaa ata tha na toh phir abhi kyu nahi arahi hum sab ke saath???"

Geet told "Nahi bhai mann nahi kar raha aap log jaiye na plz" n so all went for boating.


As all of them returned they saw that Geet was playing with a small girl. She was tickling the girl.

Maan seeing this thought "She looks so sweet when she is laughing.It sounds as music to me" n then he took his mobile n clicked her pic.


Then all of them returned n they played with frisbee for sometime. Maan then went to attend an important call from the office n Armaan n Shilpa went for a walk to spend sometime. Vicky played songs on his mobile n he pulled Geet n Dadi to dance with him.


Maan came back after attending the call n saw them dancing.As he reached there Geet saw him n stopped dancing n sat down.

Maan sat next to her n whispered "Geet tumne dance karna kyu band kardiya mujhe dekh ke???" n so Geet shyly looked at him n said "Woh bas main thak gayi thi isiliye" n then looked down. Maan smiled at her n before he could say anything Armaan n Shilpa returned n they sat next to both of them.

After sometime all of them left for KM.After dinner Dadi called Geet to her room n said "Geet beta hum chathe he ke aap office join kare Maan ke saath."

N Geet replied " Lekin Dadi main waha kya karungi aur aapka dhyan kaun rakhega???"

Dadi answered her "Geet beta aap waha Maan ko help kijiye aur waise bhi aapne architecture pada hai toh aap waha architect ka kaam karenge aur baat rahi humara dhyan rakhne ka toh yaha kitne log hai.Aap fikar mat kijye.Theek hai hum kal Maan se baat karenge" n patted her cheeks n wished her good night.

As Geet was going she saw that it was raining n so she went to the garden to play in the rain.

Maan was going to his room after finishing his tai-chi when he saw that someone was playing in the rain n so he went down to see who it was. He was surprised to see it was Geet playing in the rain.

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Arrey aankh se boondh gira koi, chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara, sehra ki pyaas buja zara
Umeed ko aag laga zara, sehra ki pyaas buja zara
Gan itna baras ke galne lagun main paani ke upar tarne lagun
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Oo behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara
Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara

Maan was mesmerized seeing Geet play in the rain.




He started to walk towards unknowingly n suddenly thunder stuck n this brought Geet back to reality n then she remembered those painful memories.



Geet never ever think that I'm going to leave you for this...
I did all this for revenge... from you n your family...

Sharrt lagi hai marr jaane ki, jeena hai to pyaar mein
Deha kahin bhi ho mera, jaan rakhi hai yaar mein
Beh ja, beh ja, hai sagar ka kehna
Beh ja, beh ja, hai nadiya ko behena
Patte se tapakti boondh ki awaaz sunayi di thi
Nadiya mein tapak kar gum ho jayo
Beh gayo beh gayo, jo reh gayo reh gayo
Beh gayo beh gayo, jo reh gayo reh gayo
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Oo behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara
Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara

Maan touched Geet's shoulder when she turned n just hugged him in the hope that he would take away her pain.




Mera pal pal ang ang bar diya, tune jaan pe junoon sa kar diya
Mera hai kya jo main haar doon, jaan teri hai tujhpe vaar doon
Doob gaye jo suna hai saare tere dere aate hain
Dil ke chulu mein bechaare dubkiyan ghote khaate hain
Beh ja, beh ja, chal tod kinare ko
Beh ja, beh ja, dhar le majdhare ko
Chingari udha ke raakh se ik boondh gira ke aankh se
Chalne ke ishaara kar gaya, kar gaya, kar gaya
Sab bhar gaya, bhar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya, sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Oo behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara
Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara

He was about to hug her back but then he realised what he was doing n again left his hands to his sides but then he saw how Geet was clinging to him as if her life depended on him n so he couldnt stop himself from hugging her back. After sometime Geet calmed down n then she realised that she was hugging someone n so she pushed the person a bit n was shocked to see that it was Maan.


Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Oo behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara
Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara

Maan was surprised by the sudden push but then he saw that Geet was crying but before he could say anything Geet just ran away from there.


Maan decided that he would talk to her tmrw n so he went to his room n changed n went to sleep.

Meanwhile Geet was shocked as she hugged Maan n then she remembered why she hugged him n again started crying. Shilpa who had come to take water saw that Geet came crying n so she went behind her. As she entered Geet's room she saw that Geet was sitting n crying near a wall.

Shilpa went n sat beside her n hugged her. Geet hugged her back n totally broke down. Shilpa didnt ask her anything but let her cry as she wanted Geet to first calm down n then she could ask her.

Precap-
Some truths are out
n some new entries.
Vindhya Tiwary

Dakssh Ajit Singh
Im really sorry for updating so late actually I had thought of updating on weekend only but there was constant power cut n so today I updated it finally.
Lets see who guesses the reason for Geet's crying n who the new entries are...

Thank u of u for liking the part n commenting.

Love,
Hinal
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Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay me 1st lol
luvd da update
luvd da maneet moments
awsome precap
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
loved maaneet moments
so sweet and cute and beautiful and awesome
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok...i am super confused...Revenge...Geet is to take revenge but from whom? and why? Maan is already a loner to phir...
it was a great part but i got confused...maybe next parts will clear it up...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 6 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...

waiting to know her past...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...

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