Mayur FF |Ibaadat| Epilogue Pg#77 [26-Sep-11] - Page 40

v nice update..just hope nupur listens to her heart now...story is moving at a right pace...plzzz continue soon...cant wait 4 it😊

awesome part!!!!!

i am happy that nupur trusts him.

hmm...it was amazing...so perfect

Wao lovely Update

Thank you for the PM..

nicely written though I haven't been ur FF's regular reader but I can say by reading this part that u write superb..

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Bidz- u know i just loved Sam- he is a true frnd of Mayank..
He knew that maynk loves nupur and he helped himto realize this love ...so sweet...

bidz - i loved d following- Gosh maynk is such a sweet heart



"Bohot pyaar karta hoon Nupur se, aur yeh pyaar mere liye mera ibaadat ban chuka hai."

and abt nups fear- i can understand it- she has acerbic experience on it.. she saw how her step dad killed her mom...so its natural for nups to beliee in such a relation
but i know everything will be fine soon- now Maynk, sam , gunji -i mean the whole gang will support nupur and will washed away her fear

Sam is a great friend...i know😳
Glad u liked it...thank u so much..n just wait n watch..;)
will update now..:)

Originally posted by: Lekshmic7

BEAUTIFUL part. loved it.

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

very nice Bidzz...i am really liking samrat...and mayur offcourse...:):)

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

It was beautiful..
Hope that Nupur will be able to get over her fears and love Mayank..
cont soon Bidushy😊

Originally posted by: fend

hey bidz
awesome part loved it
loved sayank convo very nice
hope nupur is able to overcum her fears
very well written
do cont soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Superb update

Loved nupur confession to herself, hope she soon confessed her feeling to mayank.Sajan part was gud.

Cont soon and tnx fr pm.

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

i wish love will win over fear...

Originally posted by: -moona-

very nice update, loved it..

and Nupur was right in her place she has faced so much so it was difficult for her..

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

v nice update..just hope nupur listens to her heart now...story is moving at a right pace...plzzz continue soon...cant wait 4 it😊

Originally posted by: daniella05

awesome part!!!!!

continue soon...

thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

i am happy that nupur trusts him.

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

hmm...it was amazing...so perfect

waitng for grand surpise

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Wao lovely Update

So Mayank indirectly confessed his love great

Hope Nupur will get off her fear soon

Waiting For GRAND SURPRISE

Thanks For pm

cont soon

Originally posted by: -Honeybee-

Thank you for the PM..

nicely written though I haven't been ur FF's regular reader but I can say by reading this part that u write superb..

All the best.

With Love,

Honey

thank you so much everyone for your wonderful comments! means a lot to me! lots of love!

Helloo friends 🤗..

Thank u for ur wonderful responses.. See I've replied to ur comments.. Haha surprising, I know! Anyways, here's the next update! 😳

The grand surprise is not in today's update, sorry for that. But still I would suggest u to guess if u can. 😉 Plz forgive me for any errors.. 😳

Happy Reading!! 😃

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Chapter #12

Nupur's Decision

Mayank lazily opened his eyes feeling the heat of the sunlight on his face. "Samrat, aur kitna time lagega?", he said in his sleepy voice. "Shimla mein aa gaye, 5 mins mein hotel pohoch jayenge.", Samrat tiredly replied.

"Hmm!", Mayank muttered and yawned, and in a second, his sight landed on Nupur, who was innocently sleeping, resting her head on his chest. A slight smile curved on his lips. Gazing her intensely, he gathered the strands of her hairs behind her ear as those were coming on her face and disturbing her sleep.

Nupur opened her eyes and was amazed to see herself so close to Mayank. She pulled herself back immediately and started fixing her dupatta. Mayank turned his face to the other side, understanding her uneasiness.

"Lo ji, hum hotel pohoch gaye.", Samrat said and heaved a deep sigh. Mayank and Nupur got out of the car. "Sweetheart! Hum pohoch gaye. Uthjao!", Samrat sweetly said to Gunjan and placed a soft kiss on her forehead. "Good morning!", Gunjan whispered sleepily and they exchanged sweet smiles at each other. "Please jaldi hotel chalte hai, saari raat drive karke mera bura haal ho raha hai.", Samrat pleaded cutely and giggling, Gunjan nodded, and then they got out of the car.

**

Mayank was unpacking his clothes, just then; his eyes spotted the medicine bottles at the corner of the bag. "Yeh bottles Nupur ko dekar aata hu.", he said to himself and headed for Nupur's room, which was fortunately beside his room.

Standing beside the window, Nupur was blankly staring at a point outside. She was in a trail of thoughts, from which she came back when she heard a knock at her door. She walked to open the door and as she opened it, she was surprised to see Mayank.

"Aap yaha?", she asked trying hard to sound normal. "Tumhare dawai ki bottles humesha mere pas reheti hai toh isse hi dene aaya tha.", Mayank replied plainly.

Hearing him, somewhere Nupur felt a prickle in her heart, and why she felt so, she couldn't understand. Turning around, she entered inside. Mayank followed her.

"Humesha aap ke pas reheti hai toh aab aap yeh mujhe kyu de rahe hai?", Nupur asked in a weak voice, and Mayank could sense that.

"Bas aise hi! I mean, maine socha ki tum apni medicines apne pas rakhna prefer karogi so-", Mayank said sounding casual but cutting off his statement, Nupur said in an authoritative tone, "Koi zarurat nahi hai. Yeh aap apne pas hi rakhiye. Kab medicines leni hoti hai, mujhe yaad nahi reheta. Aur waise bhi, mujhe accha lagta hai jab aap mera khayal-" and there she stopped realizing what she was going to say. Mayank contently smiled as he understood what she meant.

"Theek hai. Main yeh apne pas rakh leta hu. Anyways, abhi tum yeh yellow bottle wali dawaai lelo.", he said tenderly and Nupur simply nodded. Smiling, Mayank left.

Nupur quietly ate the medicine and sat on her bed. Remembering all the moments she had spent with Mayank in the last one and half month, tears formed in her eyes.

"Jis insaan ke bina pata nahi main zinda bhi hoti ya nahi, aur agar hoti bhi toh kis andheri dunia mein bhatak rahi hoti, jis insaan ne mera itna khayal rakkha, mujhe ek nayi zindagi di, unhe hi main itna dukh de rahi hu. Laanat hai mujh par!", She thought guiltily, and the next moment, a teary smile crept on her lips as she said to herself, "Jo insaan mera itna khayal rakhta hai woh kaise mujhe khush nahi rakkhega! Aab bas bohot ho gaya. Mujhe apne darr ko apne pyaar par haavi nahi hone dena chahiye.", saying that, she wiped off her tears and made a firm look.

At the end of her talking-with-herself session, her phone rang and on the screen, it flashed - Singing School. "Main toh leave lekar aayi thi, phir waha se phone!", she wondered and picked up the phone.

"Hello!"

"Hello, Nupur! Main Mrs. Gupta bol rahi hu."

"Haan Mrs. Gupta. Boliye kya baat hai? Achanak se mujhe phone kia?"

"I'm sorry beta ki main tumhe tumhare leave mein disturb kar rahi hu par baat hi kuch aisi hai."

"Kya baat hai? Aur aap itna serious kyun sound kar rahi hai?"

"Woh tum toh janti ho ki kal shaam ko humare singing school ka ek show ho raha hai."

"Haan toh?"

"Jo ladki gaane wali thi usko achanak se tez bukhaar ho gaya aur doctor ne usse bed rest karne ko kaha hai. So I was thinking ki agar tum uski jagah-"

"Main?!?! Main kaise? Main toh Shimla mein hu."

"Tum Shimla mein ho?!?! Yeh toh aur bhi acchi baat hai kyunki show Shimla mein ho rahi hai. Please beta, tum yeh karlo naa. Humare school ki izzat ka sawal hai. Aur waise bhi, final selection mein tum 2nd aayi thi, so tum karlogi toh bohot accha hoga."

"Theek hai Mrs.Gupta. Main yeh show karlungi, aap plz address sms karke bhej dijiye."

"Thank you beta!"

"Iss mein thanks kaisa? After all, apne school ki reputation meri responsibility bhi hai."

"Yeh hui naa baat! Anyways, abhi main phone rakhti hu. Kal mulakat hogi."

"Jee theek hai. Bye."

"Bye beta!"

Disconnecting the call, Nupur smiled broadly and excitedly said to herself, "Ek aur show ke liye ready ho jaaiye Nupur Bhushan." But suddenly, something struck her mind.

"Hum log trip pe Shimla aaye hai, mere school ka show bhi yaha ho raha hai, yeh kaisa ajib coincidence hai? Ya phir destiny ka koi khel. Pata nahi kya hai!" she wondered.

Just then, her cell phone beeped flashing - 2 text messages. One was from her singing teacher and the other one was from Mayank, telling her to meet in the restaurant downstairs. Reading it, a slight, beautiful smile arrived on her lips. She got up and went to the washroom to freshen up.

**

Mayank and Gunjan were sitting opposite to each other around a table. "Lo, Nupur aa gayi.", Gunjan smilingly said. Mayank turned back and was speechless.

Nupur, in a white churidar with her hairs untied and spread on her back, was descending the stairs. Mayank stared at her and admired her angelic beauty.

"Mayank, aise besharmo ki tarah Nupur ko ghurna bandh karo." Gunjan teasingly said. Mayank looked here and there in nervousness which made her giggle.

Nupur arrived there, said in glee, "Hey guys!" and sat beside Gunjan. In awe of her change in behaviour, Mayank smiled in satisfaction.

"Hey Nupur!", Gunjan casually said, and in the next moment, she mischievously said, "Tum itni khubsurat lag rahi ho ki koi tumhe dekhta hi jaa raha tha."

Mayank, who was drinking water, suddenly choked, hearing Gunjan. Nupur covered her mouth to suppress her laugh. Gunjan patted Mayank's back to make him feel better.

"Thanks for the compliment, Gunjan! Waise, Samrat kaha hai?", Nupur asked friendlily. Gunjan smilingly said, "Arey woh bechara saari raat drive karke thak gaya hai, iss liye abhi so raha hai aur mujhe strictly kaha hai ki usse disturb naa kare."

"Haan! He should take rest. Anyways, tum logo ko ek khush khabri deni thi!", Nupur said and her face glowed up. "Kya?", Mayank and Gunjan asked curiously in chorus.

"Kal shaam Shimla mein mera ek show hai.", Nupur ecstatically said. "Par yaha? Tum toh leave mein thi naa?", Mayank questioned confusedly.

"Haan woh lead singer ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi iss liye mujhe karna padhega, and coincidently, show Shimla mein hai.", Nupur informed.

"Wow! That sounds cool. So we can hear you sing. Super exciting haan!", Gunjan said in a jolly mood and Mayank pleasantly said with a little smile, "Haan!"

Seeing the sweet little smile on Mayank's face, Nupur's heart filled with immense love and affection. She thought determinedly, looking lovingly at him, "Mayank, I promise, kal ka show mein kuch aisa hoga, jo aap soch bhi nahi sakte. Sab se memorable hoga yeh show, aap ke liye bhi aur mere liye bhi."

**

The day passed in roaming around different tourist places near the hotel. At night, they came back and went to their respective rooms.

"Lovely weather! Bohot time ke baad snowfall dekh rahi hu. Iss ka full enjoyment toh lena hi chahiye." Seeing the snowfall from the window, Nupur said to herself with a blissful smile and taking her shawl, she went to the terrace.

As she reached the terrace, she was surprised as well as happy to see Mayank there. Going near him, she placed her palm on his shoulder. "Aap ko snowfall acchi lagti hai?", she asked with a charming smile.

"Haan!" Mayank turned around and answered lovingly. "Mujhe bhi!", Nupur replied in the same manner. They shared a smiling eye-lock.

Mayank felt something different in yesterday's Nupur and today's Nupur but he yet couldn't guess the reason of this sudden change, or maybe he could, maybe she was joyful because of her show the next day, he thought.

"Mayank, mujhe aap se kuch kehena hai.", Nupur said to Mayank looking deeply in his eyes. "Haan bolo!", Mayank replied, inwardly praying to hear something his heart wanted to hear, but according to his mind, it was not possible.

"Mayank.. woh.. I wanted to tell ki.. humhe past ko bhulkar phir se pehele jaise acche dost banne chahiye.", Nupur said in a single breath. "Kya ajib hai! Sirf 3 words bolne mein itna nervousness? Aaj yeh haalat hai toh kal kya ghaas kaatungi?!", she told herself in her mind and made an irritated face.

"We are friends and always will be friends!", Mayank said affectionately, and smiling whole-heartedly, Nupur pulled him in a tight hug.

Mayank didn't expect something like this, after whatever happened in the last few days, but still he felt extremely happy to get this moment back. He missed it really badly. Smilingly, he enveloped Nupur delicately in his arms.

After a while, Nupur broke off the hug and said worriedly, "Arey aap toh kaap rahe hai. Ek minute, yeh shawl lijiye."

"Arey that's okay Nupur. Tum shawl mujhe dogi toh tumhe thand lagegi."

"Nahi lagegi."

"Kya matlab?!?"

"Matlab yeh!", Nupur said smilingly and lessened the distance between them. Wrapping the single shawl around themselves, she snuggled up to him. They embraced each other again, feeling each other's warmth in the chilly snowfall. It was a heavenly moment for both of them.

Tightening her grip around Mayank's waist, Nupur closed her eyes, hid her face in his chest and breathed heavily due to the effect of his nearness. Mayank was amazed to see how easily she was close to him without any hesitation.

"Kya Nupur bhi mere liye wahi feel karti hai jo main uss ke liye karta hu? Warna suddenly this change! This can't happen just because of the excitement for the show. I hope ki jo main soch raha hu wahi ho.", Mayank thought, dreamily smiled and kissed her forehead gently.

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Preview of the next chapter:
Nupur's show and the grand surprise. 😉

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