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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry 1st of all 4 late update as I was not well.And me sorry 4 not able 2 rply u all 4 same reason but will try 2 rply u all 😳

Chap 8(Part 1)

In Morning

Khanna's mansion

Abhi woke up after tht dreaful dream.And he was lost in same thoughts.

Radhika:Abhi where r u?Come on its 1st day of ur college.Get ready fast have ur breakfast

Abhi got ready & joined his family 4 breakfast

Vikram:So Abhi its ur 1st day 2 college r u prepared

Tashi:Dad u r saying as if he is going 2 some war

Abhi was still lost.For the 1st time he was quite.

Tashi:Bro wake up.Neend se jago.College jana hai ya nhi

Abhi:Ya chalo.Oh biee Mom,Bie dad,Biee sexy(Dadi)

Raichand's house

Pia's room

Pia was still wondering abt last night.Her mind was captivated wid Abhay's thought & the voice of Abhay yearning 4 her,calling her.And moreover she was afraid whether she'll b able 2 attend same Mt.College where her love story wid Abhay started

Haseena enters

Haseena:Pia this is ur 1st day 2 college.So b ready

Pia:Yes mom but will I b able 2 face it.Mom tht college will remind me of Abhay

Haseena:Pia have faith everything will b f9.Now smile & go.All the bst.

Mount college

Pia entered college wid mist eyes.Abhay's memories were haunting her.All memories of them was floating infront of eyes touching her wounds which were yet 2 b filled.

Flashback(Whn Pia didn't remember Abhay post-leap)

In empty classroom

Abhay-Pia were standing close.Their lips were jst inch away.Both lost in each other eyes.Suddenly they came back 2 reality

Pia:Leave me.I jate u Abhay Raichand.How dare u touch me?

Abhay:As if I care.My hands become dirty jst by touching.Koi shauk nhi hai tumhe chune ka.There r many gals how die 4 my one touch.

Abhay leaves the room wid smirk & Pia hit the table & hurtself

Pia(2 herself):Oh God thts all coz of tht idiot.Meanie jst coz of him I hurt myself.

She tried 2 stand on her feet but all in vain.Watching her in pain Abhay came back.He made Pia sit on chair.Pia was abt 2 stop him but he said'Shh'.He gently massaged her feet & wid his power he healed her pain.Abhiya were agn lost in their dream.

Abhay:Now dont hit ur table coz if dis time u'll hurt urself I wont came back 2 massage ur feet.

Pia agn fumed & was abt 2 hit table agn but rememebered Abhay's word & left the place abusing him while Abhay was smiling at his furious Pia.

Flashback ends

Misha:Pia where r u lost?

Pia:No where.

Misha:Dont lie.U were thinking abt Abhay.Didn't u?

Pia:Y I will think abt him u think abt prsn whom u forgot but he always live wid in me

Misha:Whtever.

They passed through locker room.

Flashback(Whn Pia got her memory back)

Pia was standing near her locker keeping her books,suddenly two strong arms hold her waist tightly.Resting his chin on her shoulder

Pia(whisper):Abhay

Abhay:So wht my angel was doing?

Pia:Nothing whn did u arrived,and Y r u so late?Did u miss me & did u..

Abhay:God u can never get over wid ur question/ans sec.Can u?.I arrived jst now.Was late coz of dad's work & No I didnt missed u.

Pia:Wht u didn't missed me😡! I m not talking 2 u

Abhay:Pia my jaan u know wht u miss those whom u forgot but I never forgot u toh miss karne ka toh sawal hi nhi hota hai.

Thn Abhay pulled her closer & kissed her lips gently.Pia kissed him back

Pia smiled shyly.

Pia:Abhay will u always b there 4 me?Will u come whn I'll call u?Will u?

Abhay:Ofcourse Pia.

Pia smiles

Flashback ends

Pia(wid tears):Baby so now I m calling u come back.

Abhi(smiling):Ohh wht u r calling me.U started missing me jst after one night.And Abhi se baby bana diya(tapping his own shoulder).God job Abhi ur charm is working.

Pia(shocked):Oh tum.No dont b happy ur charm is not working here.

Abhi:Oh I m upset.Jhoot hi bol diya hota.

Tashi & Misha arrives

Tashi:Bro wht the hell r u doing here.

Abhi:My darling chudail sis this is not ur locker rrom any1 can come here.I came her jst lke tht thn I saw Pia thought y not talk 2 her so dont disturb.

Abhi(2 Pia):So evn u have joined college not bad.Which class

Pia:Graduation 2nd year

Abhi:Oh thts grt tht means v r in same class.

Karan & Pickle enter

Misha give angry stares 2 karan so does karan give 2 Misha.

Misha(pointing at karan):So unwanted ppl r back.

Abhi(Pointing at Pickle):I agree wid u misha some unwanted garbage is back.

Pickle was all over Abhi while Pia was feeling jealous watching her flirting wid Abhi.She wnted 2 suck her blood out but was controlling her emotions.

Pickle:Baby where were u?U know wht I missed u my milky.

Abhi:Milky?

Pickle:Yes.My mumchkin,my milky

Abhi:Oh u called milky

Pickle:Yes baby

Abhi:So pickle u know wht Milk & Pickle bad match.Pickle se milk kharab ho jata hai so milk shuld maintain distance frm pickle😉

Everybody burst out.😆

Pickle:Thts not funny abhi

Abhi:But I m serious Pickle.

And Abhi ran frm there 2 save his life frm chipko pickle.

(Chap 8- 2nd part niche dekho)

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago
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Chap 8 (Part 2)

In basket ball court

Some lafange guys were playing basket ball & as soon as Pia passed frm there they teased her flirt wid her

Boy 1:Hey babe where r u going?

Boy 2:If u r free thn evn v r free.Y dont u join us

Pia was feeling very angry she really wnted 2 kill thm but she cant afford 2 expose her

Pia(angrily):Keep ur f*****g mouth shut.

Boy didnt stopped & they continue.Abhi saw this & was very furious.He straight away went 2 basket ball court & punched guys left-right-center.Pia stopped him

Pia:Abhay leave him.Sorry I mean Abhi leave him plzz.U'll kill thm.Jst leave

Evn tashi,Misha & karan came 2 rescue those boys 4rm Abhi's anger.Abhi finally left thm

Pia:Abhi plzz calm down

Tashi:Ya bro wht happened.Chilled yeh toh hota rehta hai college mai

Abhi excused himself & left the college all fuming

Pia(thinking):Abhi & Abhay r so different yet similar.Today I saw Abhay in abhi whn he was beating those guys brutuallly.Same eyes,ame touch & same anger,same protective nature.Is my Abhay back as Abhi?Or is this all co-incidence.

Khanna's Mansion

Abhi's room

Abhi was still very angry.He really wnted 2 kill those bas***ds.How dare they teased my Pia?'My Pia Abhi thought.How can Pia b mine jst after 2 meet but Y I feel I know her till ages as if she is all mine'.

In jungle

The same 2 boys who teased Pia was passing through jungles suddenly wind blew.The dark forest grew more dark.A tall man wid chisseled body,shap features & hazel eyes blocked their way.He grabed both the boys frm their collar & threw thm in air.His eyes turned deep blue

Man:How dare u touch my Pia?Now u have 2 pay.

Boys:Plzz leave us v wont repeat agn.Plz

Man beat thm brutually thn left thm there.

In morning

Khanna's mansion

Abhi came downstair 2 have his breakfast tht suddenly his eyes came across newspaper.He was shocked 2 read tht same boys who teased Pia were beaten brutually & now r in hospital.

Abhi:How is dis possible?Who beat thm?I guess agn they tried 2 flirt wid some gal.Whtever I shuld go & meet thm

Raichand's Mansion

Pia also read same news & was equally shocked 2 know tht those boys r in hospital.She found it fishy so decided 2 c thm.

In hospital

Pia & Abhi collided

Abhi:Wht r u doing here Pia

Pia:Oh I saw the news of those boy so thought 2 c thm & wht abt u

Abhi:Same here

Pia:So lets proceed

Abhi:Sure.

They ask receptionist boys' room no. & reached there.

As soon as boys saw thm their faces turned pale

Boys(Luking at Abhi):Plzz spare us v wont do tht agn.Plzz v beg

Abhi was confused 2 hear wht those boys were saying while Pia was suspiciously staring at Abhi

Abhi(confused):Wht u both r saying?R u guys mad or wht?

Pia:Abhi did u beat thm

Abhi:Pia wht r u saying.I myself was shocked 2 read the news

They left

Pia was wondering if Abhi is not lying thn who did tht & y boys were so scared 2 c Abhi Y?

while Abhi was thinking tht Y boys were afraid 2 c him.

NOTE:Guys if u think my FF will b very straight thn think agn.Bcoz I m tedhi so is my post & ff.So b ready coz I'll spin ur head.There is more 2 Abhi.He is full of mystery.He will spin the head of all ppl around him.Evn Raichands will wonder who is Abhi?

And keep wondering now who was tht blue eye boy who do pitai of those cheesy guys?

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superbb update Shrish 👏 👏
already Abhi is thinking Piya as HIS... 😳 I was also wondering who the guy would be who bit the 2 guys 😕
Too good.. i love mysteries and Im no sidhi...u sud know tht by readin my FFs 😉 so i wud like to take the risk to read ur FF again na again 😆
and offcourse loved the flashback part... continue soon and hope your health is better now...
luv u 🤗
Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update shrish!!
jalebi ki tarah sidehi stroy hai teri😆😆😆😆
i totally loved d way u av written pia-abhay's past life in college n wat to say abt abhi. he is always perfect n wowww pittofying those boys was too gud!!
bt wat u did in last was totally unxpected ,is abhi going through some double personality sondrome??😕...although i loved d whole thing!! looking forward how wl u take away d veil frm ur little secret!!
pickle n arjun n then milky, woowww..ur ideas r totally awesome
a big hug to u shrish🤗
lov u
Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update ! Shrish
amazing parts dear!!! It was totally rocking!! I loved them all

Awww. . The flashbacks were superb
i can feel abhi turning into abhay !
Bechare ladko ka to band baja barat nikaal dia. .hehe

the locker room scene was nice. .pickle n milky. . Hahaha. .

wow...i m very much sure..dat the guy in jungle was abhi . . He is 18 , so i guess . . Abhay is taking over him. .

Thanks for the pm
Plzz...upload d next part soon..can't wait
tc
Edited by missglam - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb update😊
who is the other guy?
Edited by .rumki. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey shrish😃

awesome update dear👏👏👏...loved the flashback part...locker room scene was superb😳😳...hey tumne yaha par bhi suru kar diya...i mean..."milk n pickle r bad choice...pickle se milk kharab hota hai...so milk shd maintain distance from pickle😆😆😆😆😆...abhi call pia"my pia"😳😳...its superb yaar...hey abhi ka koi judwaa bhai that kya jo bajpan main mele me kho gaya tha...aur directly jawaani me mil gaye😆😆😆😆😆...tumaara koi bhorosa nahi😆😆😆😆...u r fab writter...so keep it up...n thnx for pmplz update soon...n get well soonhav anice dayluv usunita
Edited by sunu123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hai nyc updates,,,wil u pm mi plzz


plzz pm mii

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
Par Abhi hi Abhay hai na? kahin Abhi ko kabhi kabhi apne previous janam ke character ki yaad aati hai isliye us mein ghus jata hai lol
waiting to know who beated those boys
loved the way Abhi said my Piya

continue soon
thanks for the PM
Edited by pari_smart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ausum update shrish..loved it...fab...too good...finally u updated...i hope ur next update wont take soo long 🤣

shrish...sach main mujhe chakkar main daal diya...wo jo bhi tha..had face similar to abhay...i guess😆 😆...ab wo abhay hai ya abhi...that u nly knw...dont tell me abhi will become abhay...😆...ur update is really making me scratch my head...😆...par ab update jaldi karna 😆

thanks for pm...
Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago

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