Wordless Convo - My take

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Folks: Im not very eloquent - but heres my take. Feel free to improve...
Dee

NAvya: ANANT - I can see you - u r here
Anant (tantrum-y): You are leaving just like that for 6 full weeks...
Navya: Pl samjho
Anant: Cheh hafte ke liye - poora ded maheena?
Navya: Main kya karoon? Mere majboori hai
Anant (hurt): Aur tum ne mujhe bataya bhi nahin na...
Navya: Im sorry; i did not want to hurt you
Anant: And mujhe ab dukh nahin hoga - jab tum mujhe ab chod ke jaa rahe ho ?
Navya: I know - but please samjho
Anant: I am hurting already knowing I will miss you
NAvya: I am hurting too - na? Forgive me?
Anant (hurt and reluctantly): Theek hai - jaana hai - jao
Navya (helpless after father interrupts and realizing lil time left): Pl understand na? I will have to leave soon
Anant realizing he does not have much time - texts her.
Anant (acceptance of the situation): Thhek hai - jao - Im smiling for your sake
Navya (relieved and grateful for his understanding): Thanks - haan tumhara bhi haq hai and forcing a smile while eyes convey I will miss you too
Anant sighs. I love you and will miss you terribly
Navya: I love you 2 and will miss you

Signal lag jaata hai

Navya: Ab tum jao
Anant: Nahin - jaane ka man nahin hai
Navya: Anant - signal lag gaya hai please jao na
Anant: nahin. Mat jao
Navya: Marzi nahin meri ... and a teary bye.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes, yes..exactly..That's what these two said..well done.😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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tumne to anya ke dil ki baat kar di

awesome post
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful, Dee...👏...Today , I , truly,believed, in the adage...Eyes speak volumes...their unuttered convo, pleaded, so many words...😭
Edited by Aanchal15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I so wanted someone to post this...thank You so very much for this.

You have written what they were speaking thru eyes. VERY WELL DONE!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome post,nicely you have written

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww Dee I was going to write this one tomorrow as it was my day off but you have done a fab job on it. I could not have done better. You have expressed their emotions so well
Edited by ilunavya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one Dee!

Interesting that u put the tantrummy tag on navya instead of anant...
I felt he had an entire "Nahin...Mujhe kuch nahin sunna...Yeh tum mere saath kaise kar sakte ho Navya 😡" dialogue...

But that's the beauty of wordless convos - we all put our own slant on it...For all we know, anant was asking her "Hey, where's my lucky pen?...Just because I let u borrow it doesnt mean u dont give it back..."😆

What do u make of the eye popping? (u know, the wide eyed babe in the woods look he gives sporadically) ...i think it's shaheer's "I'm very sinjere navya" expression...any thoughts?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry - meant tantrumy for Anant:)

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