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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh this is so much fun!! Can you please add me to your PM list too
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Originally posted by: pushpi

Ohh this is so much fun!! Can you please add me to your PM list too


Sure. i'll remember and do it. Thnx BTW 😊
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Here's the next chap. Dedicated to my sweet Anchal di A/N at the end of the post. Do read 😛

Friends, i have a request. those who want to recieve pm's plase ass the username ' Khushi_Princess ' to your buddy list. you'll get pm's i wont be sending pm's from this id anymore as there are other friends in this id who dont want to recieve pm each time an ud is up. I'll send out pm's for next 2 ud's from this but after that all pm's will be sent from other id.'

Khushi_Princess
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Chapter 9

Geet: 'Your time starts now.'


Maan wrote: 'Ahhh who is salman khan?'


With this Geet started laughing so badly that she didn't have control and almost fell from the chair and the laughter grew worse.


Geet was laughing while Maan was waiting for her reply. After few minutes she got control of herself.


Geet: 'Is this how much you know about Bollywood?'


Maan: 'Sorry but hey if you give me one week I can find out things you even don't know.'


Geet: 'Impossible.'


Maan: 'I challenge you. One week and I'll know everything.


Geet: 'You're on Maan.'



Maan: 'Okay you know, I never lose a challenge.'


Geet: 'Then prepare for one.'


Maan: 'We'll see.'


Geet: 'Yes we well.'


Maan was sleepy. It was late and he had a lot of work to do tomorrow.


He wrote: 'I have to go now. Bye.'


Geet: 'Okay bye Maan. Tc and have a good night.'


Maan: 'You too take care. Good night.'


She laughed again but he had already signed out. 'Does he still not remember that I don't live in US? Yet?' 😉


Maan fell asleep quickly...

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Evening in India:


There was a knock on Geet's door. Thinking it would be Ramu kaka or Yash, she said, 'Come in.'


To her shock, it was her father, Karan. he was shocked to see the room. it was so neat, tidy and looked beautiful. He had never seen it till now!


Geet: 'You?!'


Karan: 'I want to talk to you beta.'


Geet: 'You lost the right to call me beta long time ago. Ask what you need and get going.'


Karan: 'Geet, believe it or not, I never meant to say what I said downstairs. It just came out of my mouth. You still are my daughter and always will be.'


Geet: 'Enough of the buttering all ready. With you talking sweetly to me is not going to make me change my decision of throwing both of you out the house. Go tell that boss of your's not to send you to me to talk. And yea, she wont have to worry a lot. Only that she'll have to get used to smaller place like 1 bedroom apt, small kitchen, cook food by herself and do house chores. No biggie.' she said it as if it was nothing.


Karan was again surprised by Geet: 'Geet, listen to me...'


Geet: 'Oh yea, i had to tell you something. Call the lawyer now. I don't have his number. Do the honors for me.'


Karan: 'But Geet...'


Geet: 'Enough! Do what you are told or else start packing. I can find the number through some other source.'


Karan accepting his defeat. 'You won't have to do that. I'll him and tell him to give you a call. Don't let your mood go foul.' Saying so, he left the room lightly pushing the door close so it doesn't bang.

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The challenge was on but who will win it was a mystery.


But the time they spend together was the only time they were truly happy in a long long time. But other then that happy is a word you can't use for their lives.


Coming back to story, Geet was making plans for her 'parent' 😡 to move out. She went to see the flat she saw in net but she didn't like it. She felt it was too big for them. 😆 So she decided to keep looking. She was just in time for the party. Final touches were being given to the living room. While getting ready, she remembered Maan and the chat they had few hours ago and also his challenge. The way he asked 'Who is Salman Khan?' still brought a smile on her face.


How strange is it? How a person we never meet or talk to becomes a reason for our smile. It happens a lot in the world today. One second you mean nothing the the other person and the next second, you mean the world to the other person. Over the net, there are both good sides and bad sides. Both had seen the beginning of good sides. Now, as time goes, let's see if they experience the bad side as well? How much great time will they get?

Precap: UNDECIDED 😳


Pls tell your views in comment as to who should win. i'll continue accordingly
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That's it for today's ud. I know it is short. Hope you think it is sweet. Reason for short ud is that it's already time for me to go to sleep and i still haven't finished my studies. Due tomorrow. Sorry. But i had promised my dearest Anchal di that I will ud today and she will get to read it. So here it goes di. Hope you like it. Anways, looking at the schedule, you should know when the next ud will be.

For now, Alvida . till we meet again.


PLs. leave you valuable respone and do press likes. By next two ud's m hoping to have atleast completed 110 pages. It's not much to ask. is it? 😳

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Friends, i have a request. those who want to recieve pm's plase ass the username ' Khushi_Princess ' to your buddy list. you'll get pm's i wont be sending pm's from this id anymore as there are other friends in this id who dont want to recieve pm each time an ud is up. I'll send out pm's for next 2 ud's from this but after that all pm's will be sent from other id.'

Khushi_Princess


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Posted: 13 years ago
My updating schedule for the remaining month of august.

Mon 22nd - Ud PKN
Tue 23rd - Ud KAHYZ
Wed 24th - Ud LSO
Thur 25th - W PKN
Fri 26th - W KAHYZ
Sat 27th - W LSO
Sun 28th - Ud PKN
Mon 29th - Ud KAHYZ
Tue 30th - Ud LSO
Wed 31st - FREE!! 😳

September's:
Thur 1st: TYPE
Fri 2nd: W PKN
Sat 3rd: W KAHYZ
Sun 4th: W LSO
Mon 5th: Ud PKN
Tue 6th: Ud KAHYZ
Wed 7th: Ud LSO
Thur 8th: W PKN
Fri 9th: W KAHYZ
Sat 10th: W LSO
Sun 11th: Ud PKN
Mon 12th: Ud KAHYZ
Tue 13th: Ud LSO
Wed 14th: FREE
Thur 15th: TYPE
Fri 16th: W PKN
Sat 17th: W KAHYZ
Sun 18th: W LSO
Mon 19th: Ud PKN
Tue 20th: Ud KAHYZ
Wed 21st: Ud LSO
Thru 22nd: W PKN
Fri 23rd: W KAHYZ
Sat 24th: W LSO
Sun 25th: Ud PKN
Mon 26th: Ud KAHYZ
Tue 27th: Ud LSO
Wed 28th: FREE
Thur 29th: TYPE
Fri 30th: W PKN

October: (COMING SOON!)










Reason: I'm doind this so just in case i dont get time to send pm's you can come to this topic on that day and check the Ud. Also, it's so that FF's uding dont interrupt/overlap with my personal things/studies. I never plan things from advance, but this once, i decided to do so and see how things work out.

PS: W= Write. that's for me 😉 PKN= Pyar ki nishani
KAHYZ= Kitni ajeeb hai yeh zindagi
LSO= Love story online
Also, pls add the id listed in the above posts to get pm's. 😳

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Edited by Princess_Khushi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
love the part..maan taken the challenge..eagerly waiting 4 next..
Edited by butterfly.tanu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
short one..next time we want a big one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
ofcourse geet should win.. lol.. cont soon hun.. this is hilarious.. looking for a appt for her parents.. tooo big.. ahahhaha.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part!
and thanks for the schedule
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
shona that was short but it's okay
super brilliant update
wow love maaneet conv
poor maan doesn't know salman khan
i'm not suprise i myself get know him
couple months my friends lough at 😆😆
like where did i come from
so not suprise
i hope geet win the challege
so geet decision to through her parent
she stand firm i wonder how her stepmom i'll
cope with this new change in her
i'm glad maan made her smile again & what she said
it's true
yu narrate everything beautiful
me loving the flow of the story
i'll be waiting next part
muah
God bless yu
luv yu shona
kept my promise
yu better pm


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