Mayur FF |Ibaadat| Epilogue Pg#77 [26-Sep-11] - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u guys for ur lovely comments! i'm happy to know that u all liked it and the pace is perfect!
@valiyah: so true! beautifully said! 😳
@jiya: sirf hug? koi comment-shomment bhi toh dijiye! šŸ˜†
B/w only 22 readers' response out of 47 readers? 😲 baki sab kaha hain? busy? šŸ˜”
Me waiting for some more response! šŸ˜
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
This is something subtle as well as simple to understand!
Samrat understood his friend's heart but Mayank is'nt or may be not wanna
understand...but a true friend can understand us better than ourselves.
This is what I experienced with myself.

Loved the way you described it...superbā­ļø

and samy's plan is gr8..hope this trip will bring them close to eachotheršŸ˜‰
waiting for the next part...precap is very interesting...Mayank is going to
confess😃

Do cont soon

Love
Ruchiā¤ļø
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum update bidzy...
true frnds always make our lyf beautiful...
slowly n gradually dey r fallin 4 each other...
aww.. i soo luvd it!
i'm soo excited 4 d precap!
n no.. d pace is perfect!😊
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pm~šŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
NEVR GET DISAPPONTED WITH CHNGING LIKES, IT HAPPENS..plus its ramzan...
yes i missd this update...
it was beautiful
string form her silent prayers, to the awesum frndshi
the teasing ...
her fear n his guesing sumthing is troubling her...it waa soo nice, n perfect...
plus i love sami...n his ideas...
the bst part was the last
the way he consoled him...they way he hold her...the hugg..n the kiss...waoo...
n i want to know the next, as this moment was frm so heart..how thy r gonna face it...
lovely dear...
its perfect...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u everyone for your love and appreciations! šŸ¤—


Chapter #11
Will Love Win Over Fear?


Nupur shivered as Mayank brushed his lips softly on her cheek. Feeling weak to stand, she gripped his shirt in her fist. Suddenly, something struck her mind and fear took upon her. She immediately stepped back. "Yeh theek nahi hua." She said in the midst of her heavy breaths and ran outside. "Nupur, meri baat toh suno.." Mayank said but it was of no use!

Samrat, who was sitting on the couch, saw Nupur running and stood up. He asked curiously, "Nupur, tum theek toh ho na?" Nupur stopped and nervously replied, "Woh.. main.. Samrat, main aap ke pas hi aa rahi thi." "Kyun? Kya hua?", Samrat asked. Nupur forced a smile and said, "Hum log Shimla challenge aaj raat, theek hai naa?" "Wow! Bilkul perfect hai." Samrat ecstatically said. "But Nupur.." Nupur heard a concerned voice behind her and instantly she stepped forward to keep a distance. "Hum log Shimla zarur jayenge." She said with a stern voice. Mayank's lips were curved in a slight smile. He thought in mind, "Nupur, I just hope ki tum aise hi strongly apne past ko face karo." Samrat excitedly said, "Final! Aaj raat hum charo Shimla ke liye ravaana honge."

**

Gunjan was in deep slumber. Laying beside her on the bed, Samrat hugged her from behind and kissing her cheek, he whispered in her ear, "Sweetheart! Get up fast!" "Samrat, sone do naa! Bohot thak gayi hoon.", Gunjan muttered in her sleepy voice. "Hum log 2 ghante ke baad Shimla ke liye niklenge." Hearing what Samrat said, Gunjan opened her eyes in shock and jumped up. "Kya? Sacchi?" she said with a huge grin on her face. Samrat nodded and smiled. "Aww Samrat! Thanks a lot!" Gunjan said in glee and they hugged each other.

After they broke their hug, they adjusted themselves in sitting position and snuggled up to themselves. Samrat said worriedly, "Sweetheart! I hope ki mera plan work kare. Mayank Nupur se pyaar karta hai, bas he needs to realize it and I hope ki yeh trip unn dono ko karib le aaye." Gunjan placed her arms around his neck and said sweetly, "Don't worry my dear hubby! Tumhara plan zarur work karega. After all, you are my intelligent Samrat Shergil." Saying that, she pulled his cheeks gently. "So can your intelligent Samrat get a lovely.. hm?" Samrat said naughtily and winked. Gunjan shyly smiled and sealed his lips with hers in a deep kiss.

**

Nupur was keeping her clothes in her bag. Just then, Mayank arrived there. "Nupur.." he said in his manly voice. Nupur froze as she felt her heart pumping fast. Mayank came close and stood behind her. "Nupur, uss waqt jo hua woh-" he said but interrupted by Nupur. "Mayank, mujhe bohot kaam hai." Nupur said trying to sound normal yet there was a sense of rudeness in her way of saying that.

"That's enough Nupur!", Mayank said to Nupur firmly and grabbed her arms. Nupur closed her eyes and said in a weak voice, "Chodiye mujhe Mayank. Mujhe apna saaman pack karna hai." Mayank made her turn in his arms. She opened her eyes and lowered them. "Meri aakho mein dekho Nupur!", Mayank said in the softest manner.

Nupur raised her eyes slowly. They shared an intense eye-lock. Mayank pulled her closer by holding her arms and asked looking directly in her eyes, "Kya mere chune se tumhe kuch ehsaas nahi hota?" "Chodiye mujhe please.", Nupur turned her face to the other side, pleaded and struggled to free herself from his tight grip. "Mere karib aane se kya tumhari dharkane tez nahi hoti?" Mayank questioned and came nearer leaving few inches distance between them. "Please chodiye mujhe." Nupur requested again and her voice got weaker, but Mayank paid no heeds to her and buried his head in between her silky hairs, inhaling its fragrance. Feeling the warm breath of Mayank on her skin, Nupur sighed which soon turned into moans when he placed wet kisses on her neck, and in the next moment, the lifeless face of her mother flashed in front of her eyes and she pushed Mayank very hardly.

"Aap ke karib aane se mujhe kuch mehsus nahi hota, samajh gaye aap? Aur kabhi bhi kuch mehsus nahi ho sakta, kabhi nahin!", she shouted at the top of her voice. "But Nupur..!" Mayank calmly said but cutting him off, Nupur screamed in a painful voice, "Mujhe darr lagta hai Mayank! I'm scared of experiencing those feelings because i know that those give nothing but only pain and i don't have the strength to tolerate it. So please stay away from me."

Mayank thought that it was better to leave Nupur alone, so he turned towards the exit. "Ek aur baat, maine trip ke liye haan kiya SIRF Samrat aur Gunjan ke liye!" Nupur sternly said. Mayank heard it and left. With oceans of tears gushing at the highest speed from her eyes, Nupur sat on the floor numbly and kept her head on bed.

Teri meri, meri teri
Prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzoon mein yeh
Bayaan na ho paye
Ik ladka ik ladki ki
Hai yeh kahani nayi
Do lafzoon mein yeh
Bayaan na ho paye

Mayank came in the garden and sat on the swing. His face was expressionless and his eyes were shining with tears. "Nupur is in pain because of me." He thought and cursed himself for hurting her.

Ik dooje se huye judaa
Jab ik dooje ke liye bane

Teri meri, meri teri
Prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzoon mein yeh
Bayaan na ho paye

"Mujhe uske saath yeh nahi karta chahiye tha." He said to himself guiltily. "Kya nahi karna chahiye tha Mayank?" he heard a friendly voice behind him and quickly he wiped off his tears. "Kuch nahi Samrat, bas aise hi!", he said and pretended to smile.

Samrat sat beside Mayank on the swing and said seriously, "Mayank, main tujhse ek baat poochna chahta hoon, honestly answer karna!" "Haan bol!", Mayank said trying to behave as if nothing happened.

"Kya tu Nupur se pyaar karta hai?" Samrat asked Mayank placing his palm on his shoulder and looking directly at his face. Mayank was speechless at this sudden question. He simply couldn't understand what he should say. "Samrat.. yeh.. tu..", Mayank fumbled with words but cutting him off, Samrat said, "Ghuma firaake baat mat karna aur sach bata. Kya tu Nupur se pyaar karta hai? Agar aab bhi confusions ho rahi hai toh apne dil par haath rakh aur time lekar jawab de."

Mayank took a deep breath and put his hand on his heart. He closed his eyes and unconsciously a sweet smile crept on his lips. After few moments of silence, he said, "Bohot pyaar karta hoon Nupur se, aur yeh pyaar mere liye mera ibaadat ban chuka hai." Samrat smiled contently but soon it vanished when Mayank opened his eyes and frowned. "Par Samrat, shayad woh mujhse pyaar nahi karti!"

"Are you sure ki woh tujhse pyaar nahi karti? Yaad kar unn moments ko jo tune uss ke saath bitaaye hai aur deeply soch ki kya uss ki aakho mein tune apne liye kabhi bhi pyaar nahi dikha?" Samrat asked and hoped to get a positive response.

Going down the memory lane, Mayank remembered all those golden times he shared with Nupur including their cozy moments and finally he landed upon a conclusion, "Shayad woh mujhse pyaar karti hai par-" Just then, Nupur's words echoed in his mind, "I'm scared of experiencing those feelings!", and he completed his sentence, "Par woh darti hai pyaar se. Usse lagta hai ki yeh ehsaas dukh aur taqleef ki ilaava aur kuch nahi deta." Saying that, he frowned more.

"Toh uski iss darr ko dur kar aur usse pyaar par bharosa karna sikha. Come on dude! Don't be so disappointed and get your love! Fight for it.", Samrat said firmly and Mayank felt as if he got a new ray of hope.

"You are right Samrat. I shouldn't be so upset! Tu theek kehe raha hai." Mayank said with a victorious smile and the next moment, he hugged him. "That's the spirit!", Samrat said and patted his back.

After they broke their hug, Mayank informed Samrat, "Aur ek zaruri baat, Shimla wahi jagah hai jaha par Nupur ke mom ka murder kiya gaya tha." Samrat replied, "Thanks for the information dude, kyuki yeh ek information hi humhe uss kamine tak le jaayegi, and one more thing, i promise ki main ek mahine ke andar Nupur ke mom ko justice dilwaayunga." Mayank slightly smiled at his assurance.

**

Samrat, Gunjan, Mayank and Nupur were on their way to Shimla. Samrat was driving while Gunjan rested her head on his shoulder. Mayank was gazing Nupur, while Nupur was blankly staring at the dark sky. She was baffled in the midst of the battle between her heart and her mind.

"Kaise bharosa karu uss ehsaas par jis ki vajah se maine maa ko kho diya?"

"Par iss mein Mayank ki kya galti hai? Main unhe kyun sazaa de rahi hoon?"

"Lekin mera yeh darr jaayez bhi toh hain naa."

"Darr tab jaayez hoti agar Mayank par bharosa nahi hota. Lekin mujhe unn par khud se bhi jyada vishwaas hai. Unhone mera humesha saath diya hai."

"Phir bhi mujhse nahi hoga! Dard sehene ki taakat aab mujh mein nahi hai."

"Come on Nupur! Stop being a coward! Tu Mayank se pyaar karne lagi hai aur tujhe unn par khud se bhi jyada bharosa hai. Bas aur kya chahiye? Just let the past go away and embrace the happiness which is just beside you. Unhe dekh Nupur aur realize kar ki tu kya khud se dur kar rahi hai."

Nupur turned to face Mayank. Her heart skipped a beat when she saw his gaze was already on her. They couldn't take their eyes off from each other. Samrat smiled noticing that.

"Saccha pyaar naseeb waalo ko hi milta hai Nupur. Usse khona mat. Baad mein tujhe hi afsos hoga."

**

I know you all are ready to strangle me as I ended it on a cliffhanger! But I would suggest you to just wait and read as a grand surprise is coming up! šŸ˜‰

Stay tuned to know if Nupur will listen to her heart or mind. Waiting for your comments and don't forget to press the like button! 😃

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
true friends r blessing of God who never let us fall apart n sammy is indeed a blessing to mayank...!
nupur's fear is understandable...hope she overcomes her fear n give herself a chance as she has all rights to be happy in life...may heart wins over mind...!

p.s...desperately waiting for ur Grand Surprise so make it soon dear 😊...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
loved samrat and mayank conv and nupur's mind & heart war..hope nupur listen to her heart..cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
samrat is really a blessing for mayank...
nupur knows tht she is love but scared to confess this hope this shimla trip bring new hope, new light in their lives...
update soon ...
waiting for the surprises...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
hope nupur listen to her heart
samrat and mayanks convo was nice 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
whoa!! what an update bidzyy!!! loved it!!
waiting for your grand surprise now!!😃

šŸ¤—šŸ¤—..

and gaane pe kaam chal raha hai.. bas thoda intezaar karo.. meri studies se thodasa fursat mil jaaye..😳

thnks for the pm!!šŸ¤—

ā¤ļøā¤ļø..
~jiya~

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