New Maneet OS: My life, My Family!!!

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Hey guys I m back with another OS. Hope u guys like it. plzz avoid any mistakes. If u like it plz press like button.

My life, my family!!!

A huge Mansion just like a palace was located far from Delhi city's noises. The house was surrounded by many trees, a river just passed by their dream House. A big water-fountain front of their mansion. There was swimming pool inside and out the mansion.

It was a house in every way she dreamed of, the life she always admired of living, A perfect and loving husband.

"A Jannat Of Maneet"

That was a name of their Dream house, where they are living.

A typical morning @ 7 O'clock

Somebody singing….

aghupati Raghav raja Ram, patit pavan Sita Ram
Sita Ram Sita Ram,Bhaj pyare tu Sitaram
Ishwar Allah tero naam, Saab ko Sanmti de Bhagavan

a lady wearing a red saree, doing a arati from of god,

she takes arti thali gives it to dadi, who always joins her morning arti. Then geet takes blessing from her dadi ma.

Dadi ma blesses her saying, "jite rahiye bte, sada suhagan rahiye!" and smiles

Geet also smiles and geet starts to go to upstair, same time shouting for nakul to get everything on table for breakfast.

With a huge smile geet enters her master bed room, which is more like different house. In their room they have living room then bed room, a gallery, a terrace, a swimming pool, a exercise room.

The room is all decorated with maan and geet's pictures. the pictures were captured in every little moments of their memory.





Geet put arti all corner of their huge room. And slowly she walks to their bed room.


She smiles looking at her sweet hubby, who is sleeping on his stomach. A spread covering him from waist till knee. She can see his bare upper body all muscular.

Smiles and put a arati on his face. And loving pats his head. And puts thali on side table and starts to wake him up

"Good morning, shona…. Chalo utho 7:30 baj gaye hai.."

Maan stirs a bit and takes her hand and puts her hand underneath his cheek and goes back to sleep.

Geet smiles and leans on his shoulder and kisses him there.

"uthoo na….. chalo…dadi ma hamara wait kar rahi hai!"

Maan moves and sits up a little and resting on bed post and takes geet in his arm..

Yawning… "Gooddd morninggg, jaan!"

Gives her pack on lips, geet smiles

They remain in each other arms.

"chaloo…taiyar ho jaoo.."

"umm…."

And moves out of bed, just in boxer and just before entering wash room giving her fying kiss.

Geet shakes her head and smiles shyly and maan again comes out of wash room and says

"geet…. Can u join me for bath??? Nahot din ho gaye tum ne muje bath nahi di…"

Geet with shocked face… then shys

"maan… jao naa, ur getting late!"

Maan smiles seeing her shying

and goes back to bath room

geet starts tiding then takes out his office cloths

as usual maan shouts for his towel.

"geet, mera towel dena.."

Geet takes his towel and goes to give it to him, maan opens his door and instead of taking towel, he grabs geet's hand.

"shonaa… chodo na, der ho rahi hai dadi ma hamara intezar kar rahi hogi"

"pehele muje meri coffee?"

Making fake angry face

"abhi?? In this state?"

"ohh come on, coffee k liye hum kya aur kaise hai ye thodi na dekhate hai.."

"accha baba, app se me kabhi jit pai hu!"

And shyly moves to give him a pack and hurrys out not without giving him towel though

In next 10 mins maan is all ready to leave for office

Geet is tying his tie and maan's hand on her waist doing his mischief

Maan is slowly moving lips to touch hers but geet

"shonaa….chup chap khade rahiye na..!"

"hump.." maan fakely gets upsate and moves his face to other side

Geet understands this and smiles

"accha.. suno, appne iss bar kya plan kiya hai?"

Maan acks unknown and says

"kis liye?"

"maannn…..app ko yaad nahi hai kal kya hai?"

And again gets upset

"haaa muje yaad hai kaise bhul sakta hu, kal hamari 4th anniversary hai!, me ye kaise bhul sakta hu ki tum meri zindagi me 14th feb ko ayi thi…aur hum dono EK ho gaye the…aur maine to sub kuch plan kar liya hai… tumhara kya hai?"

"umm vo to surprise hai…."

maan turns her around and puts his both hand on her shoulder circling around her neck and says

"job hi karna vo karna, lekin kuch aise karna ki agale saal jub hum hamri 5th anniversary manaye tub hum do nahi tin ho!"

And moves closer to her and geet shys

That's when dadi calls

"bacchoo….chalo breakfast karne!"

Maan gets annoyed

"ye dadi bhi….hummp"

And he moves toward door with helding her hand but geet stops him and gives him tight kiss.

Maan gives her big wide smile and one last time kisses her tightly

And they move downstairs.

Maan gives dadi kiss on forehead and sits on his sit. Geet sit between dadi and geet.

They spend their family time on breakfast table laughing, discussing.

And maan finishes his breakfast and moves to leave

Geet also follows him and before sitting in his car maan kisses her forhead and leaves for the day.

During a day he calls home multiple time.

Their life have become so used to each other.

4 years ago they were just strangers, but one day maan saw her in park playing with handicapped kids and he was just passing by their and was stoped their due to traffic light and saw her. she was in love with her at first sight.

He found out everything about her within an hour. Whole day he was restless. Went home early told dadi ma everything and dadi ma more than happy for her grandson. She right away sent proposal for geet at her place. In her family it was only her father, and her father was also cancer patient. He was more then happy for his daughter after seeing maan and dadi.

But geet wanted some time. they met few times and then geet looking at her father's heath agreed and right after her marriage he died. Maan handled everything and won geet's trust and her love.

Since then they are living happily. With there little family of dadi, maan and geet at their home sweet home. Waiting for jr. in their house.

Every day, Geet makes lunch, feeds dadima and goes to office to give launch to maan and have a little romance

Maan come back home at 7. They have dinner and after that move to living room

They talk and have family time

And at 9:30 -10 pm move to their room.

Geet goes to dadi's room and gives her medicine. She plays all the role of being a ideal daughter-in-law and a wife.

Right after she kisses dadi ma good night kiss, moves to her room.

As she enters the room first goes to bath room grabing her night dress and goes to maan.

They have sweet-romantic talk and retire to sleep.

This little family waiting for their new guest.

Next year..

Same day, geet singing same song..

aghupati Raghav raja Ram, patit pavan Sita Ram
Sita Ram Sita Ram,Bhaj pyare tu Sitaram
Ishwar Allah tero naam, Saab ko Sanmti de Bhagavan

gets dadi's blessing, moves to her room

gets up maan and jr maan.

Have a little family time

Like geet gets kiss from jr then senior demanding his. Then trio end up having their kiss.

They are spending a good, ideal life. any one can admire of and somebody can dream of.

And that was geet's dream of having dream house, dreamy life and loving family.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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really sweet OS dear.
liked reading it.
so nice 😊
Edited by Princess_Khushi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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cute OS.
nice job. hope to see many more from you
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amamzing OS!
thnx 4 the pm!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Niceee!
me likey
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww...it was totally a cute one...
i loved it...made me smile 😊
thanks for writing...and for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice os very sweet lil family
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi dear...thanks 4 da pm n superb OS! Loved it...Maaneet n their wonderful family! Beautifully written...pm me wenever u write something! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really sweet & awesome os :)
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cute story... i loved it...

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