Maaneet FF-KASHMAKASH- WHEN REALITY STRUCK - Page 2

Originally posted by: mahimak

OMG.. its really awesome.. loved it..
So geet marrying dev.. babaji aisa hona tho hai nahi.. haina..
Hamari geet tho bas maan ki hi hai.. kyun..
I wish dev hi kuch gadbad karde jis se geet ke pariwar wale geet ki shadi us se na karyaen..

And my maan cricket player.. woww... & that pic.. oh god... gurmeet is looking so so so hot in it.. I mean I just fell for him all over again.. mujhe tho unse aur bhi zyada pyar ho gaya.. I mean just look at him yaar.. (nahi nahi u don't look at him.. woh bas mera haq hai.. hehe) He is looking really so hot.,. & sexy.. yeah.. mai pagal ho gayi!!!

Chalo let me stop blabbering abt my love.. so yah.. just loved ur FF.. its simply awesome.. me waiting for the next part.. I'm sure maan will hit a 4.. akhir sadda hero jo hai.. plz plz update soon..

Originally posted by: 810Kankana

dear all thnks to u...aapki wajahse hi main motivate huyee, & u hav learned me also how to post on IF...waise if u r really want u can read PART2 to part5 on my FB 's NOTE pad...

PART-2

The bowler bowls that last delivery'..Maan hits it with all of his strength, the whole Stadium stops shouting for a moment'..as the ball goes straight to the fielder. Within a second the commotion in the whole stadium has changed into a supreme silence. This is a most weird thing. Maan can't believe himself that what he has done to his team; he goes down on his knees with extreme sorrow & pain. Does Delhi lose the match'.!!! But suddenly things get changed as umpire signals for a NO BALL. Maan keeps his head up as the whole crowd is back on their previous state. Still there is a hope, still they can win this match'.Delhi needs only 3 now'.this thought makes Maan more & more stronger & confident than before, he straightens himself, takes the stance. Bowler delivers the ball. Maan whacks the ball away thrashing through the ground to the mid-wicket boundary line just like a bullet reaching out from a gun. It's a cracking 4!!!!

Delhi wins the match. The whole stadium becomes mad in joy, the crowd starts cheering, dancing, and waving 10 times more than before. Delhi wins the Ronji Trophy Championship. No doubt Maan wins the MAN OF THE MATCH award as he has scored a 114 not out along with 4 valuable wickets from the opponent team. His team members take a round of the whole ground by carrying him on their shoulder. Everyone looks very happy with him. A party has been announced to celebrate this grand victory in a grand style. But Maan is not very keen to attend such parties, as he feels quite awkward with large gatherings. Still his bosom friends Armaan , Samir & Pari 'Maan's Girlfriend make him convince to join the party tonight at 8. Maan halfheartedly agrees to them.

In Handa house, Rano calls Dev's Mom & requests for her permission , so that Dev can take out Geet for a special meeting. Finally Geet is all set to go for her 1^st ever dinner date with a guy. Rano also requests Daarji for his permission. At first Daarji says a complete 'NO', but gives his consent finally, when Dev calls him back. Geet is quite surprised that how come Dev has made that call. Rano smiles & tells that she requests Dev to do so as she knows that it's gonna be too tough for her to convince Daarji or any other man in Handa family. Rano proudly stares at Geet as her daughter looks very pretty in her black salwar suit. Exactly at 8 p.m Dev's black Mercedes stops outside the Handa house . Dev himself reaches there to pick her up for the dinner. After a formal greetings to the family both of them have left for their much awaited DINNER DATE. Dev has already booked the table in Grand Hayat-the best place where he generally comes to party with his business colleagues. Geet feels quite awkward as this is going to be her 1^st dinner date & that too in such a grand place. Today she finds a little change in Dev's behavior, as today he is quite communicative towards her. Dev offers her the chair to sit comfortably & then starts the conversation.

Dev: I am sorry Geet.

Geet: Par kyun?

Dev: Woh kal ke liye '., actually mujhe kal ek bahut zaruri file dispatch karwana tha , you know it was very important for our company, so'

Geet: Its ok Dev.

Dev: Waise bhi you know mujhe yeh sab shadi-wadi mein kuch jayda interest toh hai nahi,bas Mama ne insist ki thi toh i just had to come'.again i am very very sorry for last night.

Geet: Jii'!! Geet looks quite awkward.

Dev: Yah , actually mujhe yeh shadi nahi karni thi'.lekin'

Geet: Aapko yeh shadi nahi karni hai,'.. toh aapne shadi ke liye "Hain" kyun kaha'..!!

Dev: Geet , meri puree baat toh sun lijiye'mujhe abhi yeh shadi nahi karni, lekin hum ENGAGEMENT toh kar sakte hain naa'.aur waise bhi mujhe kuch kaam poore karne ke liye wapas U.S. jana hoga about for 5-6 months. Usshke baad hum shadi kar sakte hain. Aur waise bhi main abhi bhi shadi ke liye mentally prepared nahi huin'.Geet'.aap sun rahi hain naa'.he pauses a little bit to get Geet's reaction. Geet looks very much confused as she doesn't know what to say or how to react.

Geet: Jii'main 'woh'

Dev: Dekhiye, maine suna hai aap abhi bhi College mein padh rahi hain, so kyun na aap iish beech apni study khatam kar lein..aur tab tak hum ek dusre ko thoda bahut jaan bhi jaayenge.

Geet can't understand this man, here he doesn't want to marry her, on the other hand he wants to get along with her'.what's the matter with him, still she likes his suggestion of completing her studies , as she always wants to study more & more.

Geet: Par aap mujhse shadi toh nahi karna chahte'.. toh phir yeh ENGAGEMENT kyun'.!!

Dev: Maine kaha key main shadi nahi karna chahta 'tha''..lekin tumse milne ke baad main''..suddenly his cell phone rings up, which just interrupts that unexpected sweetness in his approach. It's a business call from his office. Dev excuses himself to take that call & leaves the place. Geet still tries to sense what this guy wants to state. She waits there for Dev & after a while she gets up from her seat & visits the bar to get a coke for herself. She orders her coke to the bar tender, just moves backward and suddenly gets banged on a tall, handsome physique.

Geet: Aap dekh ke nahi chal sakte hain kaya'.!!!

PRECAPE: THEY MEET'..!! 😆😛

Part-1

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Originally posted by: mahimak

Ohh I loved it..
Dekha maine kaha tha na.. Maan will hit a 4.. see see.. meri bhavishyavadi bilkul sahi thi.. hehe
And sameera maan's girlfriend.. umm.. nahi yaar.. thats not done.. I hate this sameera sab FFs me ghus jati hai maan ki GF bankar.. ab tumhare me bhi ghus gayi.. umm.. dekho.. plz is sameera ko jaldi se rafa dafa kardena.. I just can't handle har.. she is urrghhh.. abhi tho sirf uska naam padkar mera yeh haal hai.. jab woh kuch karegi tho rab hi jane ki hona hai..
What is it with this dev.. shadi bhi nahi karni but engagement bhi karna hai.. I mean is he crack.. sahi me yar.. once he will say shadi nahi karni.. then engagement karni hai & then shadi bhi baad me karni hai.. is geet looking a fool to him..
I'm sure there is some prob with him.. geet's parants should definately not marry her to dev..
And ab takkar.. yippeee.. me so happy.. I'm on the ninth cloud.. ofcource woh apna maan hi hoga.. haina ji..
Mai tho bas next update ke liye wait kar rahi hun.. update soon..
PS:- I will read ur ff here itself.. agar ek ek part dheere dheere aram se padun tho comments bhi aise lambe lambe dungi.. thats why I'll read it here only whenever u update.. & plz PM me the link whenever u update.. just love ur FF

PART-3

She orders her coke to the bar tender, just moves backward and suddenly gets banged on a tall, handsome physique. Two big, dark, deep innocent eyes are lost at Geet's dark almond -twinkle eyes without a blink.

Geet: Aap dekh ke nahi chal sakte hain kaya'.!!!

Geet's voice suddenly distracts Maan from a indescribable, unspeakable world of dream. Suddenly he realizes that what he is doing. He immediately comes out from the grip of those enchanting eyes, which have made him mesmerized totally for a while.

Geet: Ohh hello, aapse baat kar rahi hun'dhyaan kahan hai aapka'.dekh ke nahi chal sakte'

Maan: Excuse me Madam, dhakka aapne maara, bina dekhe piche aap chali aayee, aur mujhe suna rahi hain'kamaal hai !!!

The Bar-tender offers Geet the glass having coke in it, she doesn't even look into the glass as she is thoroughly pissed off with this stranger. She puts the glass on to the table in front of where she is standing.

Geet: Ek minute'.. kaya matlab hai aapka' meri kaya piche ankhein lagi hai'.aap saamne nahi dekh sakte'.!!

Bar-tender serves Maan the glass containing some sort of hard drink in it, but Maan keeps in on to that same table, nearby to that coke glass of Geet & continuing his argument with her. Samir watches Maan quarrelling, he immediately reaches there & tries to resolve the matter.

Samir: Maan'kaya huya, tuh jhagad kyun raha hai'?

Maan: Main nahi jhagad raha' Madam ne khud hi mujhe dhakka maara , aur sorry kahne ke wajaye'.

Geet: What !!! Sorry !!!, main aapko Sorry kyun kahun'aapko mujhe Sorry kahna chahiye..

Samir finds that the argument is stretching a bit too far. So, he interrupts.

Samir: Ok , Madam, main iishki taraf se aapko Sorry kahta huin'..Maan , chal yahan se'chal'.he is trying to drag him away from there.

Maan : Par tuh kyun'..

Samir: Bola naa chal'..ek drink lene aaya tha aur '.yeh teri drink hai naa, Samir is pointing at one of the glasses keeping on to the table, leh iishe aur chal. Maan gives Geet a stern look, takes the glass from the table & leaves from there. Geet also stares at him disgustedly until he's gone. Then gets her glass & comes back to her seat. Dev is already been there waiting for her.

Dev: Geet, aap kahan chali gayee thi?

Geet: Jii main woh Coke lane gayee thi.

Dev: Ohho'..i am so sorry, maine aapke liye kuch order hi nahi kiya, ek minute'waiter'.he calls up the waiter & places the order.

Samir takes Maan back into their place where the whole team is gathered to enjoy the party tonight.

Samir: Maan, actually huya kaya tha wahan 'uush ladki ke saath ladh kyun raha tha tuh?

Maan: Main ladh raha tha '.!! yah woh ladh rahi thi.

Samir: Arre kuch bhi ho, tujhe khamkha pange lene ki zarurat kaya thi. Dekh, agle mahine team-selection hai'iish beech aisa kuch mat karna key baad mein pachtana padhe'samjha na' yaad hai naa kitna struggle karke tuh aaj yahan pe pahuncha hai. Yeh ek life-time opportunity mil raha hai tujhe, be very careful. Their conversation interrupts as Armaan comes in there.

Armaan: Hey Maan, tuh Pari ke liye drink lene gaya tha naa'iitni der kahan laga di'aur drink kahan hai'?

Samir: Drink toh hum le aaye hain, par Pari kahan hai'!!

Armaan: Aare chalo toh sahi '..woh ek surprise hai Maan ke liye'

Maan: Surprise'.!!

Armaan: Lekin sabse pahle'. lets open up the Champagne guys.

Maan: Champagne'..aare par main sharab '.

Armaan: Hain ,hain, humein pata hai that you don't like to drink'par ek peg se kuch nahi hoga'.Sammy samjha naa yaar iiishe'.

Samir: Hain, par Armaan'.

Armaan: Oh God, please aab tuh mat suru ho jaa'.don't be a spoil sport dude.

Samir: Achha thik hai , but only one peg'..ok, tujhe pata hai agle mahine Maan ka selection hona hai '.

Armaan : I know baba'.i promise, only one peg'.aab chale'.

Maan: Tumlog bhi naa'.chalo'.he gives a gentle smile & joins in the party. Maan opens up the Champagne bottle & all of them raise a toast to their success & victory. Maan doesn't want to drink, but its Armaan , who insists him to drink.

Suddenly the light of that place goes mild. The anchor announces that a huge surprise has been presented over there only for Mr. Maan & that too by his girlfriend Pari. The spot light falls on Pari, who is now standing on the dancing floor surrounded by all the other dancers. The music starts. Anchor invites everyone to join in there. Maan looks very much surprised as well as quite awkward with such an unexpected gesture by Pari. He stands right there on his place still watching Pari dancing, but Pari comes down from the floor & drags Maan up to the floor for dancing.

The drinks do their job, as Maan starts shaking along with the bits. It seems that everyone enjoys the party a lot. Pari makes Maan dance & also to carry herself on his embrace. Maan does the same as he is out of his actual state. It might be the hallucination or something like the effect of the drink that Maan has consumed, but he feels that he is not dancing with Pari, but someone else, someone having dark almond -twinkle eyes, more similar to those which he has found just few times back nearby the bar area.

Maan doesn't understand what is happening with him, how could he imagine himself dancing with her, how come he feels himself in her embrace although he knows he doesn't like her at all, just few minutes back he has a big spat with her, then how come he'. why'..why''why'!! Maan pulls Pari away with a jerk & shouts out.

Maan: Tum phir aa gayee , kyun pareshan kar rahi ho mujhe !!!

Everyone gets amazed , including Pari.

Pari: What happens Maany'kaya huya'!!

Maan suddenly feels that almond-eyed woman has changed into Pari. He murmurs.

Maan: Abhi toh yahin thi'. kahan gayee'

Armaan , Samir both are there with Maan. Armaan teases him.

Armaan: Kaun thi bhai'.kiski baate ho rahi hai'.!!

Maan: Kuch nahi'.lagta hai mujhe chad gayee hai'.pata nahi bahut ajeeb sa feel ho raha hai yaar.

Armaan: Aab issh kuch nahi ka kaya matlab hai''!!! waise 'chadne' se yaad aaya'woh jo drink aap laaye the janab, zara dekh ke lana tha naa key bar-tender Rum de raha hai yah Coke.

Samir: Coke'!!

Armaan: Aur nahi toh kaya '.yeh dekh Coke uthake laya hai yeh. He shows that glass which has been brought by Maan just a while ago from that bar-tender.

Maan: Kaya bol raha hai, maine bar-tender ko Rum hi kaha tha'.!! Maan looks disgusted.

Armaan: Really'.!! chalo uushise puchte hain'.Armaan takes Samir & Maan to that bar-tender who has served that drink to Maan.

Armaan to the bar-tender: Excuse me, aapne iinh bhaisahab ko Rum ke wajaye Coke serve kiya tha'fingering at Maan.

Bar -tender: Nahi Sir, bilkul nahi , maine Sir ko Rum hi serve kiya tha, Coke toh uush lady ke liye tha, jo yahan khadi thi, jisske saath Sir ka'.Samir interrupts ..achha ,achha ok'ok'

Armaan: Yeh kaunsi ladki ki baat kar raha hai yaar'

Samir: Armaan, 1 sec yaar'.looking awfully at Maan'.Maan, iishka matlab uushka Coke tuh le aaya, aur tera Rum'''

Both Maan & Samir gape at each other & jointly yell out'.OHHH NOOO'.!!!

Armaan looks puzzled up.

PRECAPE: OHH NOOO!!!! 😉

Part-2

Part-4

Guys, don't u like this FF, why there is a few LIKES & COMMENTS...i am so upset😲 😭😭😭