Mini FF : Love struck. (A:R) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey babygirl (what's your name BTW?)
I loved this 2nd part a lot. It was very well written. This ff is becoming interesting now.

He still looked'amazing. Perfect. Words couldn't describe the perfection within him.
I so loved these lines. Perfect words to describe a man who's even more perfect.😍
Waiting or the next part, do continue soon.
Thanks or the pm.
Edited by Nehu_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey, Nehu_1 (:
my names Madeline.
& aww thank you for your kind words
yes i will pm you when ive updated :)
thanks again. xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice update 👏plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jsdoll

very nice update 👏plz continue soon 😃

thank you :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Madeline, what happened to the update you're talking abt?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 3

Bill My heart skipped a beat as I saw him. It really was him. He stood in the street, occasionally glancing around at his surroundings. He looked tired, yet still perfect. He looked immaculate.

I stared at him, unable to remove my eyes from his image. He looked so'beautiful. Like an angel, someone not possibly from this world. I longed to talk to him, touch him, be with him' This was the perfect opportunity. Yet there were no fans around. Hm'That was strange. I ignored it however; this was my chance.

I gathered up my confidence, and headed towards him. All of a sudden, blinding flashes appeared from nowhere. Cameras. Paparazzi. Great, just what I needed.

I cursed into the darkness. If I hadn't stared at him for so long, I would've had a chance to talk to him! I recoiled back a few steps. No use going up yet. I'd never get through to him.

It was dark, but I could make out all their faces from the street lamps. Bill didn't look like he wanted to be there. The bodyguards didn't seem too happy either. Countless numbers of photographers swarmed around them, cameras flashing at every moment. I was well hidden ' the light didn't reach me.

I looked back at Bill. He was trying to say something to his bodyguards, but it was no use. They were too busy fighting off the photographers.

And then Bill did something that caught my attention. He shouted something in German and pointed. My way. At me? He kept glancing towards where I was standing. Was he actually pointing at me? No, I must have been imagining things. Why would he point at me?

However, the guards still took no notice. Bill looked frustrated. I wanted to step forwards, but something was holding me back'

And then a car pulled up. The same one I'd seen earlier. Maybe the rest of the band was inside?

I strained to get a better view.the band was in the car. I didn't know their names, I'd been so transfixed on Bill that I hadn't had time for the other members.

The door opened, but no one got out of the car. What were they waiting for? Why didn't they join Bill?

Bill advanced towards the car. He was going to convince them to come out'No. NO. He was getting in the car. Leaving. No! I couldn't let this happen. I dashed forwards, my hand stretched out into the darkness. I ran, but the car door closed.

"No!"

The car proceeded to drive away. I stopped, my eyes starting to fill with tears. Pointless tears, unnecessary tears. My hand stayed stretched in front of me, my face fallen with disappointment. I looked at the car, desperately trying to seek out Bill's face. I saw him in the window. I looked at him, and he looked back. I was frozen to the spot. He put his hand up to the window, mimicking my own. And then, as the car gathered speed, I couldn't sworn he winked at me. AT ME.

My face lit up. He saw me! My mind spiraled off into depths of fantasy, flashing images of Bill into my head. Bill pointing. Bill with his hand up against the window. Bill winking'

I sighed. Was this my imagination playing with me, or did that really just happen? I pinched myself, hard. I was still on the street. My hand was still reaching'I quickly put it down, realizing what I must've looked like. A smile spread over my tearful face. This was more than just a mere obsession. This was'real. I would make it real. And, thinking of all the possibilities, I skipped back to my hotel. Soon I would succeed.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update buddy
stil i mystry
continuee soon:X
thankx for the pm
lov
maria
Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riarai2346

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*********EDITED***********
nice update buddy
stil i mystry
continuee soon:X
thankx for the pm
lov
maria

thanks(:
lol yeah
& no problem x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice ff. Update soon.
Pls pm me next time.

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