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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx for the update & PM. Waiting eagerly to know about Vishaka's truth.hope Radhika's friends help Dev & Radhika to unite.
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update dear thanks for it...sorry for the delay comment just get time to do it...case my studies and exams near na...so busy with that...
lovely update and thanks for it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
VISHAKA'S TRUTH

Dev and their friends reached ghat and seeing their car arshad and other friends of radhika stopped playing and looked at them and rushed towards car.

Arshad:hi guys

Armesh;hi . waise bhi waha ranjiv uncle aaya toh aap log yaha kya kar rahe hain.

Eswar:nothin armu actually we are feeling bored as the people are busy in meeting them so we came here to hang out.

RIckie:okay guys please stop ur discussions and come lets play here for some time.

RIa:okay guys come

All went to play but Dev stood there not being able to say what he want to tell. Varun observed this and he was abt to ask Dev to join where soniya stopped him asking him to leave Dev alone.

SOniya:waise asmitha kaha hain vo dikahayi nahi de rahi thi

Arshad:vo asmi tho radhu ke saath chali thi

Soniya: Lekin radhika ko dadima ne kuch kaam par bheja na

Arshad:haan wahi tha vo yahi raastein par jaane wali thi aur jaatein samay asmi ko bhi apne saath lekar chali thi.

Soniya:ohhh

Eswar:actuallly we planned to saty in house today but as the cats came in we came out.

Nickie:stop it eswar better to shut ur mouth

Eswar:oh my dear i can clearly understand by seeing their faces that they too doesn't like cats whats there then

Soniya:cats matlab vishaka ke family hain

Varun:yep

Armesh: u guys know we not only like those cats but also hate the small cat.

PIa:Armesh bhai ab ye batane ki jarrorat hain kya

Manoj:u get ur mouth shut my dear pia well we came here to tell them abt the small cat only na.

Ria:small cat ka matlab hain vishaka we understood that. but what do u guys had to tell abt her.

Aanchal:i guess u guys met her today for the first time.

"no she is had been our class mate in U.S for last 2 years"

all turned around to see dev saying this with a determined face

Arshad,Eswar,Aanchal,Nickie,Varun,Ria had a small sort of shock on their faces.

Arshad:hey man what are u saying? wild cat ur class mate but radh didn't tell us any time abt it.

Dev: Radhika didn't know any thing abt it becoz i infact doesn't know that bitch was radhika's cousin

Eswar: DEV why are u telling wild cat as a bitch. what did she do?

By the time dadima reached there and seeing dadima arshad said "dadima aap yahan?"

Daadima: pata nahi arshu dev ne hi mujhe yaha bulaya tha , kaha ki kuch jarrori baat karni hain.

Armesh took a sigh and said "dev i think we should move on with the truth now"

DEV nodded his head as if yes and said "friends jo baat main ab aap sab se kehraha ho ye toh completely confidential hain aur kisi k jaane ne nahi dena tha, including radhika"

all nodded their heads as if okay

DEV: " i am gonna tell u abt a topic with which i am suffering since 2 years, the girl i always hate, vishaka sharma."

Daadima: vishaka se tera kya hain dev

DEV: Vishaka is my clas mate since 2 years. We all met her for first time on the first day of our buisness school. We were already friends by then as we are from same school. She always wanted to mingle with us and thinking her to be good we too joined her. First three months all went good then started the problems. One day she proposed me and i firmly said no to her as i am not interested in her.She looked like she took it caually but she doesn't even though i tried to maintatin distance with her she used to take lineance from me and one night she came drank to my room and tried to seduce me which esulted in a slap from me to her. Then overfurious she owed to take revenge on me and make me her's by any way. I just said her to get out. From the next day our batch avoided her in the college which made her more furious. I am alsway s close with armesh's sister lata and we were indeed share a bond of brother and sister. Vishaka inorder to take revene on us spread a word in collee that me and lata wee on date. The whole college started gossiping at us and started to harass us with different type of questions. This made lata ditressed and she committed suicide. I remember that day till now when she called me and said " i am sory bhaiyya for what ever happened and u don't have any more pain in future."Armesh was completely depresed and in such a situation when our whole bath were sad , vishaka spread the word in the college that Lata died because i betrayed her and made lata character less in the college. Armesh was completely shuddered and when i went to vishaka to ask her why she's doing all this she daid she can never see any other girl close with me except for her an my bloodrelated sister.Armesh became a living dead. Unable to see armesh in such a way we all chaged our university lat year and now armesh is slowly transforming into a normal man because of soniya's lov an support of our other friends.but still we doesn't get back our old armesh and i am longing for the day when we wll get our old armesh back"

All were silent and armsh stood there havng tears in his eyes and soniya was holding armsh tightly fearing for him. Dev closed his eyes in anger and the expression moving on every face learly sugested that they were all in anger.

Daadima was the one to break the silence "armesh beta main tumhaare liya bahut dukhit hun.Humesha dev mujhe lta ke baarein ein bataate hain aur mujhe lata ki rakhi ko bhi dikha diya tha.Vishaka buri ladki hain ye main jaanti hun lekin main nahi jaantei ki vo itni giri huyi ladki hain. kaisi natak kiya ki aap log ko pehele mil rahi thi. main vuse ek achi sabak sikha dungi.

Arshad: i know that she was a spoiled brat but i doesn't know that she was such a psycho.U know radhika thinks her to be a good erson and loves her a lot. thank god she's not here other ise don't knwo what might have happned to her.

Armesh: i know radhika loves her , now i am not here o talk abt what happened to my sister i doesn't want radhika also to becom another victim

Arshad,eswar,nickie,ria,aanchal and varun at a time said " Radhika victim??"

Rickie:aan wahi bataane aye hain hum

Dev:aap sab jaanet i main aur rahika kitni khareeb dost hu. Don't u think vishaka will try to get over her. she is such a psycho that she can't see any ther girl wih me, and she dwon't leave them

Daadima: jo dev bl raha that wo bhi sahi hain . waise bhi hum jante hain ki vishaka ko radhika par jalan hain kyun ki sab log vus se bahut pyaar karte hain. aur ab

Nickie: haan daadi dev sahi kehrahe hain lekin hum kya karsakte hain dev

Dev:kuch bhi nahi hum log kal delhi jaarahe hain toh aaj ek din ke liy koi na koi radhika ko vishaka yan ambaji se nahi milne diya toh kaam hoga

all said "okay we all are with u"

arshad: lekin, is mein toh ek baat bhi asmitha ko nahi batao kyun ki she is a leakge house o radhika

All laughed and ria said "'mon guys aunt is calling we need to go home"

Dev: aap log ghar jaaiyiye main ek baar mandir jaavunga

Rickie gave a wink to dev and dev made a serious face toi rickie and rickie sai 'daadima agar aapki koi aitraa na ho toh hum bhi dev ke saath manir jaavege "

Daadima:jaroor beta hume koi aitraaz nahi hain"

Dev batch started to go to temple and rickie asked dev " why didn't u said abt u love"

Dev:"c'mon rickzz jab tak i don't know that radh loves me i won't say it to any one"

Armesh:'dev did u inform daadima abt our stay over here"

Dev:"yep i did tell her but am not disclosing it as i wanna keep it confidential"

Armesh:'thangod we can gt rid of that bitch atleast this year , but what's with varun ,aanchal,and ria id u tell them"

Dev:'yep dad said to uncle and uncle dwana send them becoz i a,m there now uncle to resigned his decison and tonight he will announce it "

Manoj:"that's good and whats with this amba, i think she is doing a lot of overact"

Dev:"yeah , i am there na to cut her, bu gonna miss radh for 15 days man"

Pia:"ahm ahem, dev 15 days miss karne ke liye hi tum itna painful ho rahe ho, 5 saal kaise raha tha"

Dev:pia the situations were different now and then

soniya:"lets go guys

They all rided towards the TEMPLE...


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wel sorry fo no radev scenes i focused this part for sake of dev and vishaka's past and hope i am succeeded in bringing it out. wait for next part where i think u may get a shock over not for u inded for dev and co. wait and seee

Thanks for all ur comments and i feel happy when ever i read ur comments. press the like button if u like update and also silent readers fel free to comment .
Edited by harianjana - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Thnx for the update & PM. Waiting eagerly to know about Vishaka's truth.hope Radhika's friends help Dev & Radhika to unite.

its of no mention dear and thanks fr ur comment. i too hope radhika's friends help dev and radhika to unite
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: radev85

wowww,,,,hari u rocks...

thank u dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anu17

superb update dear thanks for it...sorry for the delay comment just get time to do it...case my studies and exams near na...so busy with that...
lovely update and thanks for it...

u are commenting thats enough for me and don't tel me any sorries. i think u are dong well with ur exams
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Posted: 14 years ago
What a pshyco this vishaka!! I laughed so hard when said he slaped her for seducing him... 😆 😆 I could imagine vish doing that 😆 Anyway,nice part...keep that witch with "b" 😉 away from radh!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg omggg
i never thought that vishakha's past would be like this ,never ever
actually i can imagine that but in ur ff,i didn't expected ,so bad lata socieded
waiting for radev realization of their love.

anu17 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
hope next part also will be a superb one...
thanks dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVELY PART,SO VISK IS FAKING ,WELL WRITTEN N MINDBLOWING.TC .DO COND WHENEVER U GET TIME.

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