OS: Rainy Night Pg 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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You and Rain - Page 1
Rainy Night - Page 3

Hi everyone..😊

I'm not really active in the forum as I've got a busy schedule right now but I try to be updated with the show and I try to visit the forum regularly to see if there's any interesting news 😛


This is going to be a collection of OS. They might be related or completely different from each other, check out page 3 if you want a PM alert after each update 😊



You and Rain!


It's raining once again!

He looked at the glass window, hearing a soft tapping noise. He was not sure what he was expecting, but he was surprised to see the source of the noise. "Whoa! It's raining!" he stood up and walked towards the window and leaned against the glass panes. He looked out, the sky was suddenly covered with smoky clouds and raindrops were falling endlessly, from nowhere, vanishing into nothing. It amazed him. He never managed to follow a single drop, it always disappeared somewhere. But yet, when he looked at them all, it seemed that every drop was falling on the rooftops, on the glass panes, on the passers-by, where not! Everyone and everything seemed to be affected by rain. Why, even such a workaholic man like him was unable to ignore the attraction. He's to stop work and admire it, even for a moment. He opened the window and immediately a rush of wind hit his face, wetting his face slightly and tousling his hair. He was lost in an unknown dreamland for sometime, trying to see something in the far horizon. The constant buzzing in his pocket made him conscious again. He took out his phone and took the call, "Khushi?"


"How do you know it's me?" Khushi asked in a mock surprised tone.


"My heart told me that it was you." he replied, grinning to himself.

"Never knew 'technology' and 'heart' are synonyms." Khushi said and laughed. He listened, mesmerized. For a moment, all thoughts regarding rain or the nature escaped from his mind. All he could feel was the laughter that he loved to hear in her voice, the laughter that'll bring him bright sunshine and happy rain at the same time, at any moment. And when she stopped it pierced his heart. A soft velvet like silence enveloped them. Khushi broke it, "Arnav...say something?"


"Say what?" he asked softly, not knowing what to say.


"It's raining." Khushi stated.

"I know." was his short reply.


"So, you're watching the rain, nah? What about work?"

"I wasn't watching the rain." Arnav replied, "I was feeling you."


'Oh?'


"Yes, I was. You know, when the rain falls, it creates a pattern and it's said that everyone sees a different pattern. Whenever I look at the rain's patterns, I see your face, smiling brightly to me. And everytime i hear the rhythms of it, I feel as if I'm listening to your laughter, mixed with the familiar tinkle that's caused by your anklets and when I take breath, I swear, I can smell your heavenly fragrance."


"Liar!" said Khushi in a pleased tone. "You can make up such things Arnav. Anyway it's good to see that office work hasn't killed your romantic side, Mr Raizada."


"Of all the people, you should not have any doubt about my romantic side, Mrs Raizada." he teased back. She only giggled in reply and once again there was silence. This time Arnav broke it, "Khushi, go inside, you'll catch a cold."

Khushi who was standing in the balcony, leaning out as much as possible, jerked back. "I'm inside, perfectly safe, drinking a mug of hot tea." she lied.


"Liar!" Arnav chuckled. "I know you are in the balcony, getting wet."


"How do you know?" she said teasingly, "Seeing patterns of me again?"


he laughed, "NO stupid, I can hear the constant raining in background. Now go in and dry yourself."

"I'll...one condition..." she said.


"What's that?" he asked trying to guess.


"Come home early." she whispered. "I miss you."


he kept quiet for sometime and then smiled, "I will...but what do I get in return?"

At this she giggled and cut the line. She hurried inside to dry herself and wear something more presentable. She hugged the light pink saree to herself and twirled around. "I love you." she muttered happily.


In his office, Arnav impatiently stacked files after file, hurrying to wrap up the work so that he could be with his wife, as early as possible. "Damn it!" he muttered, "I love her!"


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww i love this, it's sooo cuteee!
How they both knew what the other one was doing
You are a greaat writer!
Do write more, can't wait to read!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWWW!!!!!! that was sooo sweet. they're married. and our khadoos Raizda is being romantic perfect scene. i want it to happen in the real show after they're married. so that is probably going to happen sometime next year. but until then i'll feast on your OS.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely ya...
keep it up...👏
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Awww... this is sooo cute!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW. That was lovely!
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Awww...Beautiful OS...that was totally uber duper cute n romantic!!! Mr. Raizada being romantic is too cute!! I loved how u described Arnavs thoughts being spoke to Khushi..totally loved that part!!! Actually i loved the entire OS..ur an excellent writer dear!!! Please do continue with this OS or write more!!!😃
Edited by Harshiti4Lyf - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey,it was a lovely update.loved their talk.
raunika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear!!
This OS was really lovely. You've described the rain so beautifully, that even someone who isn't fond of it would be happy to get wet...
I like the way you've mixed the feeling of love with the rain. It is further enhanced by the romance Arnav and Khushi share.
Great piece of writing hun!!!
👏
Edited by FebruaryFlower - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg i loved it...sooo cute<3
want more frm ya plzzz

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