~Destined To Be One~MG ff pt 10 pg 130 nt pg 141 - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part..When are U updating next part?
I hope Maan try to trust her..Geet don't show any interest him..
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Posted: 13 years ago
eagerly waiting dear...😍
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PART 8

Geet still did not eat from the morning and she was feeling very weak and tired.

Evening

Everyone was going home and geet also started to pack her things so that she sould go.As soon as she stepped out of her cabin sasha stopped her

Sasha:tum

Geet:ji

Sasha:kaha jaa rahi ho

Geet:ghar

Sasha:kyu

Geet:main ghar jaa rahi hoon

Sasha:tum ghar nahi jaa sakti

Geet:kis liye

Sasha:kyunki MK abhi tak ghar nahi gaye hai

Geet:toh main kya karu

Sasha:tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha

Geet:par

Sasha:cabin main jaake apna kaam karo

Geet:baaki sab bhi toh ghar jaa rahe hai

Sasha:baaki sab jaa rahe hai toh kya

Geet:main bhi jaa kt hoon phir

Sasha:tum nahi jaa sakti kyunki tum MK ki secretory ho

Geet:par

Sasha:jao cabin main

Geet:ji

Geet went to her cabin and she started feeling dizzy so she went and sat on her chair and kept her head on the table

Around 8:30

Maan was working in his cabin and saw that the lights from geet's cabin were still on.He opened the blinds and saw that she was keeping her head on the table

Maan:yeh abhi tak yaha kya kar rahi hai ghar nahi gayi

He called her on her phone

Geet:hello

Maan:geet

Geet:ji

Maan:mere cabin main aao

Geet:ji

Maan kept the phone and geet came to his cabin and she was still feeling dizzy

Maan:come in

Geet:aapne bulaya

Maan:tum abhi tak nahi gayi

Geet:kaha

Maan:ghar

Geet:ohh

Maan:bolo

Geet:wo.. sasha maam na mana kar diya ghar jaane ko

Maan:kyu

Geet:wo keh rahe thi ki jab tak aap ghar nahi jaye main bhi nahi jau

Maan:sasha ne kaha

Geet:haan

Maan:kab kaha

Geet:jab main nikal rahi thi toh sasha maam ne kaha ki main aapki secretory hoon issliye jab tak aap ghar nahi jaate main bhi nahi jau

Maan thinking:sasha ne aisa kyu kaha main toh kisi bhi staff ko nahi rokta hoon

Maan:tum mujhe mr mehra ki file laake do phir tum ghar jaa sakti ho

Geet:ji

Geet went to her cabin and took her bag along with the file.She came and gave the file to maan

Geet:sir main jau

Maan:hmm

Geet turned to go and she started to feel extremely dizzy due to weakness.Next moment her bag fell from her hand. Maan looked looked up and saw that she was standing in one position and her hand was on her head.He got up from his chair and went to her and kept his hand on her shoulder

Maan:geet

Geet did not say anything and she closed her eyes.Maan came in front of her and saw that her eyes were closed

Maan:geet kya hua

She did not say anything and next moment she was going to fall down but maan caught her

Maan:geet geeet kya hua geet aankhen kholo

Maan kept calling her but she did not open her eyes.He carefully lifted her kept her on the sofa and sprinkled water on her but she was not getting up.

Maan:geet geet ankhen kholo

Geet was not getting up even after so much trying

Maan:main geet ko iss halat main yaha nahi chor sakta

He lifted geet and took her to his car and after keeping her carefully he tells the driver ti take him home.Whole time maan was trying to wake her up but she was not getting up.As soon as they reached home maan carried her and was going to his room but dadi came.Dadi didn't notice geet.

Dadi:maan beta

Maan:ji dadi

Dadi saw that maan was carrying a girl.She came near him and saw her face and thought that she has seen her somewhere

Dadi:maan beta yeh kya hua inhe

Maan:dadi yeh behosh ho gayi hai

Dadi was looking at geet intendly and remembered that she was the same girl whose maang maan had filled.She noticed that she was still wearing the mangalsutra and her maang was also filled.Dadi remembered her words from the temple

*flashback*

Geet:theek hai aap yeh shaadi nahi maante maine aapko kaha bhi nahi hai maan ne ke liye main bas suhagan ki tarah hi apni zindagi bita lungi samjhe aap

*falshback*

Dadi thinking:iska matlab wo sach keh rahi thi ki wo suhagan ki tarah reh legi lekin kahi iski shaadi toh nahi hui hai

Maan:dadi kya hua

Dadi:yeh toh wahi larki hai jis se aapki shaadi hui thi

Maan:dadi main kaha na main iss shaadi ko nahi maanta maine geet se bhi kaha lekin aap sunte hi nahi

Dadi:matlab geet yeh shaadi ko maanti hai

Maan:?

Dadi:boliye maan

Maan:ji dadi

Dadi:inhe kya hua

Maan:dadi pata nahi

Dadi:aap inhe room main le jaiye main doctor ko phone karti hoon

Maan:ji

Maan took geet to his room and dadi called the doctor

Dadi:maan yeh aapke saath kya kar rahi hai

Maan:dadi yeh mere office main kaam karti hai

Dadi:kab se

Maan:issne aaj hi join kiye hai

Dadi noticed that geet was looking very pale and she her head and hand was aslo bandaged

Dadi:maan hum aapse ek baat pooche

Maan:ji dadi

Dadi:yeh inko itni chot kaha se lagi hai

Maan:wo dadi

Dadi:boliye na maan

Maan said all that happened how she came for the interview'.. he threw her out and he didn't let anyone give her the job'..how he met her in night'.the goons following her and giving her lift to home.He said all the things that had happened how her aunty was beating her and not giving her food

Dadi:aapko sharam nahi aati aise karte hua

Maan:wo main

Dadi:boliye maan isme iss bechari ki kya galti hai aapne in inka maang bhara aur saara inzam aap inpe laga rahe hai

Maan:dadi

Dadi:agar geet ko kuch hua toh hum aapko kabhi maaf nahi karenge

After sometime the doctor came and checked her

Maan:sab theek hai na doctor

Dr:inhone do dino se kuch nahi khaya hai iss liye weakness ke kaaran behosh ho gayi hai

Maan:nahi khaya matlab

Dr:do dino se yeh bhuki hai yaha tak ki inhone paani tak nahi piya hai main kuch medicines likh kar deta hoon aap de dijye lekin uss se pehle inhe kuch khila dejiye

Dadi:ji doctor

Doctor left and maan went to get the medicines.Dadi was sitting next to her and caressing her head.After sometime she woke up and tried to find where she was and then she saw dadi sitting there.She tried to remembered who she was and then she recognized that she was maan's dadi

Dadi:aap kaise hai

Geet:main theek hoon

Dadi:aapne do din se khana nahi khaya

Geet:wo maam

Dadi:aap hume maam nahi dadi bulaege

Geet:nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti maam

Dadi:par

Geet:nahi maam

Dadi:acha yeh bataiye aapne khana kyu nahi khaya do dino se aapko pata hai kitni weakness ho gayi hai aapko

Maan:geet

Geet:ji sir

Geet got up from the bed as soon as she saw him but could not stand properly also due to weakness and she was going to fall but maan caught her from falling

Maan:kya jarurat thi tumhe uthne ki tumhe pata hai na tum kitni kamzor ho

Geet whispered:sorry

Maan made her sit on the bed carefully

Maan:tumne aaj khana khaya

Geet:wo

Maan:bolo

Geet:nahi

Maan:maine tumhe canteen main bheja than a phir kyu nahi khaya

Geet:mere paas paise nahi the

Maan:jhooth mat bolo

Geet:nahi the

Maan:maine tumhare purse main dekha tha

Geet:kab

Maan:jab tum kal raat ghari main chor kar chali gayi toh mujhe pata nahi tha kiska purse hai toh maine khol liya

Geet:oh

Maan:bolo tumher paas paise the na phir

Geet:ghar main paiso ki jarurat thi iss liye maine

Maan could se the pain in her eyes

Maan:ab tum khana kha lo phir medicines bhi leni hai

Geet:nahi sir main ghar jaa rahi hoon

Maan:geet tum kahi nahi jaa rahi ho

Geet:par

Maan:maine kaha na

Dadi:main khana lekar aati hoon

Dadi left while maan was watching geet

Maan:main abhi aata hoon

Maan also left the room .After sometime there was a call on geet's phone.It was her chachi's call and she started to shiver seeing the number.Her hands started to shake while picking up the phone and instead of picking the call she clicked on the speaker button

Geet:he ..hello

Chachi:geeet😡

Geet:ji

Chachi:kaha hai tu😡

Geet:main

Chachi:bol kaha hai tu😡

Geet:main office main hoon

Chachi:tujhe naukri mil gayi

Geet:ji chachi

Chachi:tune mujhe bataya kyu nahi😡

Geet:chachi aaj hi mil gayi thi main batana bhool gayi😭

Chachi:paise mile tujhe

Geet:paise

Chachi:haan teri salary

Geet:nahi chachi

Chachi:kyu nahi mila

Geet:chachi aaj pehla din hai toh aaj salary kaise milegi

Chachi: tu ghar main bina paise liya nahi aayegi samjhi tum😡

Geet:par main kaha se paise lau

Chachi:mujhe nahi pata

Geet:par

Chachi:jaake apne boss se maangle

Geet:chachi

Chachi:tu ghar kab aa rahi hai

Geet:thori der main

Chachi:itni raat ki ghar aane ki zarurat nahi hai

Geet:ji

Chachi:tu office main hi reh ja raat kaafi ho gayi hai aur kal subah ghar aa jana paise lekar

Geet:ji

Chachi:AGAR TU BINA PAISE LIYE GHAR AAYI TOH DEKHNA😡

Geet didn't say anything instead tears came from her eyes and outside both maan and dadi were seeing and they were shocked to hear all this.Dadi came inside with the tray of food for geet and maan also came.As soon as she saw them she wiped her tears

Dadi:kya hua geet aap ro kyu rahi hai

Geet:kuch nahi maam

Dadi:boliye na

Geet:maam mera sir bohut dukh raha tha

Dadi:geet aapko yeh chot kaise lagi

Geet:wo maam main bathroom main slip ho gayi thi

Dadi:bathroom main

Dadi looked at maan and he understood what she was trying to tell

Dadi:aur haath main

Geet:wo khana banate waqt jal gaya tha

Dadi:aapko dhyan rakhna chahiye tha

Geet:ji maam

Dadi:main aapke liye khana lekar aayi hoon chaliye kha lijiye

Geet:par

Dadi:aap chup chap kha rahi hai

Geet:ji

As soon as dadi brought the plate near her she was feeling like throwing up after smelling the food.She just closed her mouth with her hands

Dadi:geet kya hua

Geet:washroom

Dadi:udhar hai

Dadi said pointing towards the door and geet rushed inside it closing her mouth.Maan also rushed behing her and then dadi.She was continuously throwing up and was not able to stand properly also.She was going to fall down but maan came and caught her by her waist

Maan:geet tum theek ho

She didn't say anything and she rested backwards on maan.Dadi gave her water and she drank it

Dadi:chaliye apna chehra dho lijiye

She forwarded her hands to wash her face but could not as her hands started to shiver

Dadi:maan aap geet ko ache se pakar ke rakhiye main inka chehra dhoti hoon

Maan:ji dadi

Maan caught her tightly by waist with one hand and the other was holding her head carefully not hurting her wound.He bend her down and dadi washed her face.Then maan carried her to the room nad kept her on the bed

Dadi:maan hum nakul ke saath inke kiye juice bhejwate hai shayad do din se khana nahi khaya hai iss liye aisa ho raha hai pehle aap juice peelwa dijiye

Maan:ji dadi

Maan brought a towel from the cupboard and wiped her face with the towel while she was just closing her eyes

Precap1:

Maan concerned about geet

Precap 2:

Maan bringing medicines for geet

Precap 3:

Geet in maan's lap and sasha sees

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Edited by sweety.2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first

& Congrats on 100th Page of the FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
R
emotional
y u update after a week
whole week i was thinking what will be next
wow she is at home(sasural)
i thing dadi will not let geet to go to her chachi house
Edited by raj_202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😕 So sad for geet! That aunty is a devil! Hope maan will shower her with love soon! Loved this part,tnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow loved it yaar ...awsome one !! definetely i want to kill that sasha & cachi.

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