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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
amazing OS...really lovely...raj and naina are sooo cute...ye nandani naam na hamesha confusion create karta hai...sach mein iska koi ilaaj karo...
that "exam scene" when raj decided not to call her was really cute...bechaare rak ke family members...kahan ki frustrtn kahan nikaal raha tha gadha...
aur last scene to sabse best tha...kya zordaar thapad maara aur explanation dekho...hatke naina ke liye hatke ilaaj dhoonda aur vo bhi ye...hey raam!!!!!!!! sach mein free ka thapad pad gaya bechaari ko...chalo koi baat nhn ant bhala to sab bhala...
i wish ye OS thoda aur lamba chala hota...i was actually smiling while reading it...
chalo koi baat nhn aap ho na...ek aur OS ki umeed to kar hi sakti hun..hai na????????
hehehe...gud work dear...keep it up...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
awww dat was wonderful πŸ‘...shuru ki lines padhkar laga...yeh kahin padha hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ...Till Raj's dialogue came "light band karo πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† uske baad i realised priya ke bday thread par padha tha πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Rajeev ko fever[promoting his film] πŸ˜›πŸ˜†... u are a doc...why didn't u go & cure him 😳😳...

FB was surely emotional 😭😭..Poor Raj πŸ€— ... Naina left him ... this is what a misunderstanding & miscommunication b/w couples results in

Shalini & alekh surely friend indeed πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...

Raj's slap πŸ˜†πŸ˜† surely brought sense in Naina πŸ˜†... kuch zyada hi hat ke samajhti hai πŸ˜†

its was treat reading it all over again 😳😳

look forward to new OS soon 😳😳

πŸ˜†


Edited by -purnima- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
awesome os dear
loved it
love RN so much
thanx for d pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
wow totally rocking and awesome updt...

njoyed it...

gr8...
πŸ‘
362035 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#15
awesooome...
superb...
fab...
wonderful...
loved the OS.
thanx for the pm...
take care...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great OS
Actually i have seen this OS on Priya's birthday post but didn't find time to read and reply. Thanks 4 posting it again. Lovely work πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
they were really fool specially Naina, apne aap ko kuch jyada hi samajhdaar samajhti hai vo.😑 😑 😑 Thank god Raj k pass Shal and Naina k pass Alekh jaise do samajhdaar log the.😊 😊 😊 This was totally immature, good that Raj slapped her. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Finally the confusion sorted and they are together it is the best.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

mere B'day par post hua tha yeh OS...isi liye main yahan par sab se akhiri me aayi hun...ha ha ha...

vaise mujhe voh din aaj bhi yaad hai...jiss din maine yeh OS padha tha...!!! mujhe uss din pata chala tha ke main kitni intelligent hun...ha ha ha...

tune mujhe kitna mana kiya tha ke voh shot tune nahi likha...aur mere ek chote se sawal par tu fishal gayi...ha ha ha...Pakdi gayi Doc...ha ha ha...main baht hassi thi uss din...

pahle toh mujhe Raj ke thappad par shaq tha ke yeh tu hi likh sakti hai...!!! matlab...ziddi logon ka sahi illaz hota hai...EK THAPPAD...jo main bhi maanti hun...aur meri kumbh mele ki bichdi hui behn hi yeh likh sakti hai...ha ha ha...aur bhi kuch tha...jiss ki wajah se tu pakdi gayi thi...voh main tujhe bata chuki hun...

Beautiful...

sare emotions...feelings...Raj...shalini...Alekh ka comments...sab kuch AWESOME... BLOWSOME tha...

aur Naam bhi baht suit karta hai...LAST LOVE...

kisi ko complaint karne ka mauka nahi diya tune...matlab na hi raj ko aur na hi Naina ko...!!! matlab ke dono k paas do samajhdaar log the...raj ke paas shalini aur Naina ke paas Alekh...ha ha ha...!!! matlab Raj aur Naina me se koi bhi yeh shikayat nahi karega ke...hamare paas koi dimagwala inshan nahi tha...ha ha ha...

vaise Raj ka 'Light bandh karo' scene badhiya tha ek damm...maza aa gaya...ha ha ha...aur voh pura first part main mushkurate hue padh rahi thi...aur mujhe tab tak pata chal gaya tha ke...yeh doc ka kaarnama hai...he he he...

dekha mis-understanding se kitna bura hota hai...!!! vaise tujhe ek baat kahun...isi mis-understanding ki wajah se maine apne ek frnd se 100 rupaye ki shart lagayi thi...aur main jeet bhi gayi thi...ha ha ha...

bich ka part kafi emotional tha...uss waqt tujh par gussa aa raha tha ke...yeh mere B'day par rulana kyoun chahti hai...par Last love ka last part padh kar dil garden garden ho gaya...Raj ka THAPPAD scene sachhi me iss OS ki jaan thi...ha ha ha...

Love You Mana...THANX nahi kahungi...πŸ€—

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