ff:intezaar updated PT.53 PG122 13/9 - Page 15

Very cute part and moments at the temple,beautiful

LOVELY UPDATE and dev going to mandir and changed and ya waking up at 4:30 OMG only due to our rads ,lovely so lovely yaar
i think all these will result in realizing automatically that other person also loves me ,hai na
will wait for that and before that whats the dev'splan yaar and one mope thing will they realize their love before going to college and then last year will be greattt lovely
now started dreaming already hari

thanks and all the best

Originally posted by: radhika5

very cute episode---liked how you brought out the fact that both are loving each other , but are trying to hide the fact from the other...So Dev is going to try and spend all his time with Radhika???????/
Looking forward to the next part...

thanks for the 2cents

but here i doesn't wanna say that dev want to spend his time with radhika he just changed a lot as radhika told him and i wana show the change in dev

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Very cute part and moments at the temple,beautiful

thanks myra always like to read ur comments

Originally posted by: ekta-avinafan

LOVELY UPDATE and dev going to mandir and changed and ya waking up at 4:30 OMG only due to our rads ,lovely so lovely yaar
i think all these will result in realizing automatically that other person also loves me ,hai na
will wait for that and before that whats the dev'splan yaar and one mope thing will they realize their love before going to college and then last year will be greattt lovely
now started dreaming already hari

thanks and all the best

well thanks for ur comments and yeah our dev always changed for radh and he will be always there for radhs.
well inorder to know whether ut prediction is right or wrong catch the coming updates😉

Originally posted by: anu17

thanks dear lovely update

thanks di and i am glad that u loved the part😊

but at same time angry on u well waiting for ur one dear give it soon😉

PART 10 :"Hi,I am here"

As the purohiths left dev and radhika were in the mandir continuing with their work.

Dev: Radhika kaam katam hain ab chalein?

Radhika;main ghra nahi aa rahi hun main office jaarahi hun aap ghra chalein

Dev: main bhi office ke baarein hi keh raha hun.

Radhika:nahi aap please ghar chalein

Dev and radhika have their argument for sometime how ever finally Radhika wins and Dev went to house.

As dev reached house he saw some new car parking there and ramji and birju taking bags from it. Dev was abt to ask Birju who came and by then Armesh,manoj,rickie,pia and soniya came to dev running.

Dev:hey guys why are u this tensed.

Armesh:Vishaka aagayi

Dev:koun vishaka

Manoj:Dev which vishaka does we all know and we all were worried about.

Dev understood and said "Vishaka Sharma?"

Piya:yep and why did u never said that she was Radhika's cousin.U again hid with us

Dev:oho piya i am only confused and she is Radhika's cousin i don't know that radhika had a cousin named vishaka well any other came along with her.

Rickie:yep she came along with her father ranjiv uncle, and a old woman too came.

Dev: kyaa??????? Vishaka ranjiv kaaka ki beti hain. Oh shit. well did she see u guys.

Manoj:nope dev.

Dev:okay well what should we do now. i am totally confused.

Soniya:dev u came here for radhika only, but what are these obstacles man and i think the villain of ur story had its wntry.

Armesh:soni please stop ur movie language.

Soniya:just still i am just lighting the mood.

Just then athe car came and Rahika came out from car running happily.But she stopped seeing dev and co sitting out side.

Radhika:"hey what happened, why are u sitting here?"

Dev:didn't u go to office.

Radhika:yeah i went but kya karo papa aur vivek bhaiyya ghar lout aaya tha, aur jab main ghar par call kiya mamma ne mujhe bola ki chacha chachi aagaye hain vishaka didi ko saath lekar.

Dev: lekin radhika ye vishaka ko main bhaiyya ki shaadi ke samay mein nahi dekha tha

Radhika:wo kya hua ki didi apne 8saal ki samay mein u.s gayi thi padayi ke liye aur jab shaadi h rahi thi tab vuska samay nahi mila shaadi par aane ke liye is liye tum ne vuse nahi dekha.

Dev:ohhh

Radhika:aao andar chalenge.apna uppar meeting baad mein rakhenge.

Dev:tum jao hum baad mein aaoge.

Radhika: aisa kuch bhi nahi didi tumhe kabhi nahi dekha tha well main tujhe lekar introduce karungi didi ko.

Dev looked helplessly at their friends and radhika almost dragged dev hand to take him along with her.

Radhika:chalooo

Dev and co silently followed radhika.As they entered in Dev saw the whole family talking to vishaka and ranjiv. Ammaji was doing some chatting with daadima.Seeing ammaji radhika loosened her grip on dev and stood a side benting her head down.

Daadima made some lame excuse from ammaji and went to Radhika.

Daadima:Radhika

Radhika:ji daadi

Daadima:shastri ji tereliye poocha tha kuch kaam tha vuse tum vuska ghar jao ek baar.

Radhika:lekin... vishaka didi aagayi na

Daadima: teri vishaka didi yahi rahengi par shastri ji ko kuch urgent kaam tha isliye tum jaldi jaao.

Radhika:thik hain main abhi javungi.

Radhika left and Dev came to Daadima "daadima"

Daadima:"dev tum kab aagaya ek minute tera phone do mujhe ek urgent call karna hain"

Dev:thik hain.

he gave his phone to daadi who called shastriji and sai to give radhika some work so that she doesn't return till afternoon

Dev:ye aap kyun kiya. aap ne radhika se bola ki shastriji vuse bulwa rahe hain, aur ab shastriji ko call karke ye bol raha ki radhika ko ek kaam do takhi vo raat tak ghar nahi lautenge.

Daadima:dev tum jaante hain ki ammaji aagaye , aur main nahi chahte ki radhika ko vus se ek aur tappad yaa koi tantrums mile.

Dev:lekin kab tak aaj nahi toh kal ammaji radhika ko dekhungi na

Daadima; aisa kuch nahi hoga kyunki kal hum aur ranjiv ke family delhi jaa rahe hain..aur ammaji bhi aayengi lekin radhika holidays khatam hone tak yahi rukhengi .

Dev:kya kal hum delhi jaa rahe hain

Daadima was about to answer him but by the time ammaji came and interrupted her self "Dev bets kitne bade hogaye ho tum"

Dev bent down to take her blessings.

Ammaji:"ye to badi sanskaar ki baat hain.hogi koi log jo mujhese milne tak nahi aaoge vo radhika ki tarah"

Daadima:haan kalyani sab log sanskaar nahi hote.(indicating vishaka)

Ammaji:arey dev beta aao mere poti vishaka se milo.vo toh bahut sanskaar aur seedi ladki hain.kyun bahen ji.

Daadima remarked "haan bahut badi sanskaari hain, jakar milo dev, aur armesh aap bhi jaakar vus se mil lo"

Dev looked at her friends who were biting their nails tensedly.

Ammaji:aao bete aap dev ka friends hain kya

Dev:ji daadi ma ye toh mere dost hain

armes,manoj,rickie,pia and soniya folded their hands and said namastey.

Ammaji:namastey bete aap log kitne ache hain vo radhika ko bhi koi friends hain jisko badon se baat karna bhi nahi aata. humesha radhika,radhika kehte rehte hain.

Armesh gave a serious look to her and was about to say something when daadima stooped her.

Ammaji :"Vishaka"

"yeah graneee" Vishaka turned towards ammajii and came there.

Ammaji:aao bti ye hain dev mrinalini ki devar hain. Rp uncle ki chote beta .

Vishaka smiled at Dev and casually gave her hand saying "hello"

Dev was stood there shocked at this guesture and looked at his friends who were also under same condition.

Vishaka:"hello"

Dev startled and said "er,,/. hi"

Ammaji liked their interaction and thought in her mind "thakur ji bali kare vishaka ko dev babu ki saathi banayo"

Daadima:Kalyani dev ke dost se bhi vishaka ko milao

Ammaji:thik hain behen.Vishaka ye dev babu ki dost hain

Vishaka looked them and folded her hands saying"hi, i am vishakasharma, may i know ur names please."

Dev friends were totally shocked with this and also dev

armesh:"don't u knwo us"

Vishaka:"sorry i am meetign u for first time so how can i know u"

Armesh was about to say omething when Dev signalled him not to tell any thing and said "well ms.vishaka he is armesh my best friend and these are manoj,pia,rickie and soniya. every one my best pals."

Vishaka:oh cool.

Daadia noticed the uneasiness of Dev while he was talking to Vishaka and she came to vishaka and said "vishaka beti , tum jakar thoda sa aaram karlo"

Vishaka:no aunty i am fine and i am enjoying my campaign with dev and his rieds.

Daadima:i understand u vishaka but dev was feeling unwel and having fewver so better let him go and take ome rest. u can have his company tomorow.

Vishaka reluctantly said okay aunt and went to others.

Dev:daadima ye radhika ke friends kaha hain.

Daadima:dev kya hua.

Dev:kuch nahi mujhe abhi vus se ek jaroori baat karna hain, aur acha hua ki aap radhika ko bahar bheja.

Daadima:thank go atleast u understood me now. thik hain vo sab log ghat par hain agar tm jaana chahti tho jaao

Dev:thanks daadima and aap please mera ghar ka darwaja bandh kijiye agar kisi ne aap se mere baarein me poocha toh ye boo ki main apne kamarein me so raha hun aur mujhe bilkul disturb mat karein.

Daadima:thika hain par lekin baat kya hain beta.

Dev:main aapko sab kuch bata dungi lekin aap ek kaam kariye aap ek baar ghat pe aayiye please.

Daadima:lekin abhi nahi ho sakta

Dev: abhi nahi daadima at evenbing 4

Daadima:but dev tum itna pareshan kyun ho.

Dev: daadima main aapko sab bataunga please ek baar ap 4 baje ghat par aayiye armesh apko lene aavunga.

Daadima:thik hain beta but please be care ful

Dev:ji daadima.

Dev and his friends left out from backdoor and went to the car.armesh was driving car and Rickie was beside him, while manoj,dev,piya and soni were at back two rows.

Armesh:ab tum radhika ke dost se kyun milna chahte ho.

Dev: tum jaante ki vishaka kya hain. aur wo kya karsakti hain.agar Radhika ko kuch hua toh.

MANOJ:lekin tum radhika ki dost se kya kehoge.

Dev:jo aap log jaante hain vo vnkobhi jaan na hain.

Manoj:kya tum apne pyar ke baarein mein bhi kahoge.

Dev:yeah manoj is se bhi jyaada humaare paas aur koi rasta bacha nahi tha

soniys:lekin vo kyun aisa behave kar rahi thi vo hume nahi jaanti thi

all looked at her and Dev said "Soni mujhe bhi samaj mein nahi aaraha tha lekin what i can say is she was acting infrot of whole family."

Armesh:"Dev agar tum mujhe nahi rokh diya toh vus bitch ko main tappad mar his rakh diya hoga"

Dev:armesh i know she did a very badthing for all of us , and its more in ur case accordingly compare to us but we can't be that rude becoz its a family issue.but u don't worry my friend one day i will get her for sure"

Pia:lekin tum daadima ko kyun bulaya, kya vuso sab sach bolungi hain kya.

Dev:yes pia daadima always wanna see me with radhika and at present situation of vishaka we should definitel need daadima.

Rickie:lekin dev tum radhika ko dost ko jo bola agar vo radhika ko keh diya toh

Dev:no prob rickz up to where i know them they are not like that and i will make them promise me that they won't tell radh any thing.

ARmesh:well dev but we all want every thng to be good for u

Dev: well all will be fine and kanha will always help me.

Dev touched his chain which radhika gave her and said to him self closing his eyes "kanha please mujhe aur mere radhika ke beech kisi ko mat aane do"

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Guys,

this was up to here with tenth part, hope i am not dissapointing u upto now it sailed indeed smoothly but now starts the mad world in my part well now that vishaka made her entry all were thinking what was vishaka upto , don't worry u will egt it soon and the next episode will be revealation of vishaka's truth so wait for next episode.

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jaanu 🤗

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Whats a story without a villan! Nice entry dear...vishaka already making waves,glad everyone knows she is a vamp!! Dadima was sweet sending radh away from amma!! Waiting for dev and co with their plans for exposing the two faces girl and protect radh!