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Posted: 13 years ago

I love Sridevi enjoy😛

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCZlNX423Xs[/YOUTUBE]




Part 8


Maaneet were sitting in the porch that suddenly Geet began shivering. "Geet what's wrong you seem unwell". Maan touched her head , it was boiling. "I don't know I feel cold". Maan instantly got up and picked Geet in his arms and took her inside to her bedroom. Maan instantly covered her with lots of blankets. "Hello Doctor Sheena please come to our house imediatley my friend is really unwell". Maan was really concerned. "Maan don't call the doctor I am okay" Geet said weakly.

"Your okay look at your temperature its hitting the roof" Maan was taking her temperature with a digital thermometer. "You don't really look after yourself Geet...Tume toh har waqt koi sambalane wala chahiye".

"Maan is Geet okay?" Adi walked in getting his SMS.

"No she is really cold..Adi go down and tell Raam Laal to make some kava for her". Adi went and got it made. "Chalo ab isse pee jao...doctor is coming any minute now". Geet made faces but MSK got his way as usual. The doctor came and checked Geet. She left anti-biotics for her.

"Maan what shall we do? Geet is really bad and Maa is asleep..shall we wake her up?"

"No Adi let her sleep..and you go to I will look after her". Adi left for the night. Maan gave Geet some medicines and she held his hand tightly and dozed off. Maan reluctantly stayed with her.





Maan looked around the room and saw her room was filled with cute dolls and teddies. He smiled and shook his head "she's like a little baby". She had a cute teddy with the cap he had given to her. He knew she had accepted his friendship wholeheartedly. Maan tried getting his hand away from her but she held on tighter "Maan please don't leave me I need you...I am really feeling unwell..please be close to me".

Maan came back to the bed and stroked her hair off her face with his slim long fingers. "Geet don't worry I am near you..I'm not leaving you..I'm just here..you go to sleep".

"Ummmhh" she closed her eyes and went to sleep. Maan repeatedly checked her temperature. "Thank god it is going down". He put wet cloth on her forehead. Suddenly she jerked. "Maan my head is in pain please massage it". He started to massage her head. "Does this feel better?".

"Yes..my head is throbbing..please give me paracetomal". He gave her two paracetomal and she rested her head and fell asleep. Suddenly she began to feel hot again she jerked and pushed the blanket off. Her dupatta fell off. Maan looked the other way and used his hand to put it back.

All night she was blowing hot and cold. Maan cared for and was worried for her. Her temperature had settled and she woke up and looked at Maan who was still awake. "Maan your the best friend anyone can have".

"Madam dosti ki hain nibani toh pare gi". Both went to sleep resting against each other.

Kumkum heard about Geet being ill and rushed to her bedroom in the morning. She entered the room and saw them still asleep. She came and slowly woke Maan up. He woke up and began looking at Geet. "Maan kal raat ko uh.."

"Don't worry son Adi told me..you should woke me up..is she ok now?"

"Yes she is better now..her temperature is down".

"Beta you go and rest I will see her yeh?".

Maan left to get some sleep but his heart did not want to leave. He went to his room and lay down but all he could think was how Geet was doing. Reluctantly his eyes gave way and he dozed off for 4 hours. After getting some sleep he had a shower and got ready to see Geet. While going towards her room Kumkum called him "Maan eat something then see her".

"Maa send my food through Shaam lal..I will eat with Geet". He reached her room and saw she was not in her bed. His eyes darted around to see where she was. Suddenly the bathroom door opened and Geet stepped out. She was drying her hair. Shook her hair, the drops fell on Maan's face. Geet was unaware of his presence. He was lost in her freshness, the smell of shampoo was arousing his senses and the black locks on her milky face were exposing some hidden desires. Maan with out any contemplation walked towards her and touched her shoulder. She was taken back and looked into his deep eyes. He smoothed her hair behind her ear. Her eyes were confused and looking for answers. He reached and touched her head "Geet how you feeling?".

"Uhh good now..I don't know what happened to me last night...but I felt terrible...and Maan you were so sweet looking after me like that...I love you for that". She pulled his cheek cutely.

"Love?" he didn't think of love before.

"Yeh love you as your my friend".

Raam laal came in with food and Maaneet sat ate together. Maan looked at Geet. The way she was eating and the way she looked and the way she talked. He couldn't get enough of her. Adi walked in.

"Geet you scared us last night...but are we glad your ok..Maan Pinky is here".

"Pinky?" he asked with a smirk. Pinky knocked and entered. "Maan sir...I need to ask you something...well Madam Kumkum wants to do a concert for the elderly...it's on eternal lovers...we got Laila Majnu which is me and Adi sir..." Maan burst out laughing. Adi cleared his throat.

"well we have Romeo and Juliet..and no Heer-Ranjha".

"Pinky why you telling me this?" said an annoyed Maan.

"Well we want you and Geet to be Heer-Ranjha...well you will look good together and its only one song". Pinky was stuttering.

"Maan Singh Khurana and a song you are having a laugh aren't you?" fumed Maan.

"Come on Maan don't be such a spoilt sport" nudged Adi.

"Maan please do it" said Geet. He looked at the cute way she asked. He was lost in her sweet voice.

"Okay I will do it if only Geet is my Heer".

"What?" everyone echoed.

"I mean if she plays the part of Heer". Geet came near Maan and took his hand and kissed it. "Of course Maan". He started feeling his heart increase. Later on in his bedroom Maan looked at his hand where she had kissed and kissed it back.

Rab ne banaya tuje mere liye, muje tere liye, aur bana ke do tukre kiye, dil tarpaya mera tere liye, tera mera liye

Recap; Maaneet become Heer-Ranjha.

Previous:Part 7
Next: Part 9

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE!!! EEEKKK I LOVED HOW GEET SAID THAT SHE LOVED HIM...AS A FRIEND..AND THEN KISSED HIS HAND...WOW YEH GEET BHI NA BOHOT BHOLI HAI😆😆

MAAN IS SURELY GETTING TURNED ON!!! CAN'T W8 FOR THE NEXT UPDATE😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! Can't wait for Heer-Ranjha! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update
Aww when Geet said she loved maan i was like :D even though it's just as a friend
That's so cute she kissed his hand and he kissed it back 😳
Precap seems really interesting
Can't wait to c Maaneet do a song
Continue soon
Looking forward to the next part
Xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahhh pureee cutenesss<3
LOVED IT!
cont soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
so maan has started loving geet!...nice!:)
awww!!!!...loved the way how maan took care of geet!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update...
loved it...
continue soon...
thanks 4 the pm...:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Naadia 🤗...thank u for the lovely update and PM...the way Maan took care of Geet was so sweet...love the their friendship is turning into love slowly...waiting to see them as Heer and Ranjha...plz continue...TC 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Enjoy

The original Heer-Ranjha


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_S-BzlYx5FU[/YOUTUBE]


Part 9

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"Geet kaha pasa diya, Maan Singh Khurana aur Ranjha? Muje nahin ye sab kuch pasand".

"Oh hoye nakhre aur attitude dekho mere chote sarkar ke...Maan your mother will be so happy think about that and those elderly people well they will love you in the Lover boy avatar..hain na?". Maan began thinking he couldn't let his mother down and most importantly his friend Geet.

All day the couples were practising. Pinky was enjoying Adi's company. "Adi sir aap ko thora romantic act karna hain..ye kiya macho pose bana rahe ho...dekho aise meri taraf dekho".

"Haan Pinky ji aapko toh mauka milna chahiye mere kareeb ane ka". Maan was looking from the stairs and laughing. Adi saw him and rang him "Maan this girl is downright annoying".

"Adi make the most of it..she's sweet use this opportunity to get close".

The Laila Majnu were eventually ready for the performance.

John and Sasha were rehearsing as Romeo and Juliet. "I could get use to this" he twirled Sasha about. "Really? I was thinking John we could out for a drink sometime?".

"Yeh sure why not?" he smirked and looked at Geet who was coming down the stairs. They were ready too.

Maan was talking to Kumkum and Geet walked in "Maan we haven't done enough rehearsal and I have to get ready soon".

"Relax Geet I know what I have to do..this is Maan Singh Khurana muje aik baar baat kahi baar baar nahin sunani..you go and get ready and so am I".

Geet was really nervous as Maan was not really bothered. *Babaji I hope everyone likes our performance, Maan is not really trying".

Maan went up and dressed in a white dhoti kurta. "Wah mera beta toh Ranjha lag raha hain, nazar na lage". Maan felt embarrassed at his mother's non-stop compliments.

She went up and got dressed in a bright red lengha with small embroidery. She had her hair in a paranda. Her jewellery consisted of tikka, joomer and nose ring. She had loads of bangles on. She really looked like Heer. She put dupatta on her head. She was putting her anklets but they were not getting into the hooks. Maan walked in and saw Geet sitting on her bed putting them on but not being successful. She was facing the other way. He looked at her feet, they were very pretty and nicely painted in red. He cleared his throat. She turned around and Maan looked at her in amazement. "Wowww" he accidently let it slip. Geet looked down. He inched towards her taking in her sheer beauty. He could feel his heart thumping. "Maan you look good in this outfit". He broke his gaze "So toh main hoon... meri maa kehti hain ke main har cheez main dashing lagta hoon..wo meri itni tareef karti hain ke poocho mat...you know some people are born with it..you see...arre tum bore toh nahin ho rahi?". Geet rolled her eyes.

"Geet shall I put them on" he gestured at her anklets. Geet reluctantly gave them. He slowly put them on and she looked down shyly. He got up and gave his hand "Heer come on..its show time".

The elderly got together into KM and Kumkum sat with them. Sumaira introduced the show. "Ladies and gentlemen this show is about eternal lovers who we have been hearing since we were kids...we loved their stories their tragedies and we admire their unconditional love that broke boundries of every class, race or religion...Mrs Kumkum has arranged this show for your enjoyment so please bring your hands together for our first act Laila and Majnu". The elderly clapped.

Adi and Pinky started the show. They performed well but it seemed more of a comedy as Adi did not like Pinky's intentions. The audience clapped but were laughing at their act.

Next John and Sasha performed as Romeo and Juliet on "I have just called to say I love you". They were getting too close for comfort and Sasha revealing clothes did not help the matter. When they performed it was total silence with huge gasps. Kumkum looked worried as the people close to her were appalled with the act.

Suddenly there was mist of smoke on the stage and Maan entered the stage looking the part of Ranjha. Everyone clapped and whistled...Ranjha was looking for Heer as she was humming somewhere. Ranjha hummed back. Heer came out looking dazzling as a diamond comes out of coal.


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kHRRyr5wFMg[/YOUTUBE]


Ranjha sang O soniye o Heeriye, agg pyar di lagdi nahi, lag jaye toh bujdi nahin

Heer began dancing O soniya, ve Ranjiya, dori pyar di jordi nahi, jor jaya toh totdi nahi

Ranjha grabbed Heer's hand and intensely put it behind while Heer hyperventilates. Heer rans away and Ranjha plays with his flute.

Kuch kar le aadmi magar ye ilzaam na le, kah ke zehr mar jaye pyar ka naam na le

Geet comes in a fake car. Gadi pyar di, chaldi nahin, chal jaye toh rukdi nahin

O soniye

O soniya


Ranjha intensely looks at Heer and cups her face and Heer shies away and rans. Her dupatta flies away and Ranjha grabs it.

Hai Rabba pyar ne mera ghoongat kol diya, hoton se toh kuch na kaha ankhon se bol diya

Ranjha puts Heer's dupatta on her head.

gali yaar di mildi nahin mil jaye toh chutdi nahin

Ranjha grabs Heer by the waist and hugs her from behind. Heer looks lovingly at his eyes.

O soniya

O soniye

Ranjha is gazing at Heer..and she pulls away...Ranjha comes and takes her hand and traces her arm with his face.

Aaj se tu saat mere, tere sang hoon main

Ranjha takes her hand and kisses it, while Heer shyly smiles.

Yaani meri dor hain tu, teri patang hoon main

Ranjha lifts Heer and twirls her a few times.

Kudi pyar di urdi nahi, urr jaye toh mordi nahin

O soniya, ve Ranjiya, dori pyar di jordi nahi, jor jaya toh totdi nahi

Ranjha kisses Heer on her forehead and picks her in his arms and walks off in the mist.


O soniye o Heeriye, agg pyar di lagdi nahi, lag jaye toh bujdi nahin

O soniya
O soniye

The audience are dumbstruck by Maaneet's performance. Everyone gets up and gives a standing ovation. Sumaira, Sasha and Tasha are jealous with the response. Meanwhile John looks on slyly.

"Geet your lots performance..lagta tah Heer-Ranjha ki aatma aap dono main aa gai ti..you looked so hot as a couple...I mean the way you looked at each other and held it each other and the kiss wowww it was sizzling chemistry". Geet smiled and Maan was beating himself of letting himself go in the performance because they had not planned any of which they were doing on stage- especially the hand and forehead kiss. Everyone came to compliment Maaneet.

"Sumaira sometimes I feel something is brewing between them too...I mean they were acting all lovey-dovey on stage..do you think they are...?"

"Whatever it is we have to stop it" fumed Sumaira

"Yes leave to me sister" smirked John.

Geet was in her bedroom taking her jewellery off...suddenly Maan came in and stood behind her dressing table...he slowly helped Geet remove her tikka.

"Geet we looked good together didn't we?". Maan looked at her through the mirror, she nodded. She reached for her joomar but he was already taking it off. "I told you we will be good together". She looked flustered. She started removing her earrings and he stopped her and started taking them off. "Maan is your mother happy?".



He began taking her necklace and she shivered at his touch. "Yeh she thought we looked cute as Heer Ranjha". She got up and faced him and looked down. He raised her face by gently lifting her chin with his finger. "Geet look at me..are you..". Adi walked in and they both came apart. "Maan dads calling you". Maan left but before going he gave one last look "Goodnight be ready for office tomorrow Heer". Geet was hyperventilating. *Babaji whats wrong with me?".


Precap; Maan buys clothes for Geet.

Previous:Part 8
Next: Part 10


I hope you liked my update I worked really hard on it...please leave your thoughts it helps me to write better...Hit the like button and comments please.😃

Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago

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