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devradfan

@devradfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

cb story is moving so ffast that cv's are in a mood of hurry. they need to just slow down the pace at which at story is going. editing is so poor that so many scene were abruptly cut. and most importantly radev scenes are so small they need to be a bit longer.marriage should be like that which we seen in cbi1 but no burning and wife swapping etc.

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sia

@sia_lovely

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Posted: 14 years ago

I agree, the story's pace is too too fast. Usually TV weddings take more than weeks (months as well!) but here they seem to be pacing things up so much. Indian audience love watching slow, but logical...laden with dollops of emotions, drama! Any wedding sequence with some logical, sweet emotional drama and hungama never fails to catch the eye of indians. But the problem here is pace.

Even today, after the Purohit's left Mansa's house...the next day, they were right in Purohit house??!

Instead they could have shown...how Shanti is all irritated with Rads' getting all importance, anger at Mansa spending money, Chanda's usual bickering and making faces etc! But they showed none and instead proceeded to the engagement. Rather they could have shown all these today and could have started with sagai tomorrow and should have devoted the entire day for sagai!

Chanda stealing the ring could have become one of the hungama points herein. Fine, Chenu guessing it was smart. But they could have shown the sagai first...than the dance seq...how Chanda steals it and sagai is halted...people speaking on this...then enters chenu and gets the ring from Chanda cleverly and presents...then sagai happens and then comes the song/dance! Phew! This could have taken an entire episode and Pandit coming and stopping the sagai could have been tomorrow's precap! But they paced it so quick!!

Any story's foundation is the emotions of characters that need to be exploited nicely. Majority of the top shows when include shaadi scenes, take their own sweet time in including every single bit of aspect from every character. This itself takes them a long week. And people dont mind watching that. Because people love watching, the characters' pov...their dilemmas and try understanding them from this.

But here, they never make an effort to show that!

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Shankar

@-Shankar-

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

story is moving a bit too fast but I prefer it this way than dragging a track

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Cristina Hriscu

@instcris

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Kinu

@kinu17

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: devradfan
cb story is moving so ffast that cv's are in a mood of hurry. they need to just slow down the pace at which at story is going. editing is so poor that so many scene were abruptly cut. and most importantly radev scenes are so small they need to be a bit longer.marriage should be like that which we seen in cbi1 but no burning and wife swapping etc.

thank god it is moving so fast...instead of stretching the same track days after days...
btw..why do u guys think of bride swapping ? they wont repeat that same thing ..and once they have shown the fire with #2 but 1/2 marriage of Radhika with Rohan (1rst was childhood marriage with dev),so i dont think so there will anymore fire may be FLOOD this time bcoz it is a raining lot..😆