~Maine Pyar Kiya~FF Maaneet *Thread 1* - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...

loving the way u r portraying the characters...

this update was like a roller coaster...everything happened so quickly...

waiting for geet to accept the friendship...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys before I proceed further..need to tell you I have changed the name as follows:

Seema as Sumaira

Ranjeet as Prem Chopra

Kaushaliya as Kumkum

Kishen as Karan

Jeevan as John

As I said before the setting is like MPK but the story will be told in Maaneet style.


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All the Khurana/ Chopra family were dining together.

"Maan what are you thinking of doing after studies?" asked Chopra.

"Uncle I am thinking of helping papa in Khurana Constructions".

"Really that is so good" smirked Chopra looking at Sumaira. A perfect opportunity for her to seduce Maan he thought. Sumaira worked in the same office as Mr Singhania's PA.

"Thats my boy! Maan I am so proud of you...listen you can join from tomorrow but you need a secretary as you are the managing director. Shall I suggest Sumaira as your secretary?"

"No!" Sniped Maan. "Sorry papa but I have found a secretary".

"Really? I am impressed..my son already so pragmatic? Okay may I ask who she is?"

"Uh...well she is Miss Geet". Geet looked up astonished.

"Geet?!!!!" echoed Sumaira and Chopra.

"Yes!" he said in his attitude wala voice. Maan pleaded with his glances to Geet to stay silent.

"Ok my son you are the managing director you will call the shots".

"Thanks papa! Maa aaj aap ne khana bahut maze ka banaaya hain..it so scrumptious".

"Beta maine nahin Geet ne bananya hain". Maan looked at Geet and smiled.

The Chopra family were not too pleased and Geet was angry at Maan. The Chopra family left and Singhania retired upstairs. "Maan ye kiya Geet tumari secretary? Tume uss se poocha bi nahin". Geet made a baby face agreeing with Kumkum.

"Maa...aapko pata hain na Sumaira ke baare main har waqt muj par dore dalti rehti hain..and you know I do not like cheap girls...aur waise bi Geet meri dost hain mere liye itna toh kar sakti hain na?" Kumkum left them alone.

"Maan you did not even ask me and you said I am your secretary and on top I don't know a thing about being a secretary". She was really irritated.

"Geet...I am your friend so I will teach you..you have nothing to worry about".

"That is all ok but when did I become your friend Mister Maan Singh Khurana?I said I will think about it..you don't become friends just like that..ye toh wo hisaab ho gaya 'Maan ya na maan main tera mehmaan ".

Adi gave his typical laugh "Sooo good Geet 'Maan ya na Maan' tooo goooddd..get it Maan!?". He was falling over in fits.

"Adi!" said an irritated Maan.

"Oh...so how do you become friends Madam? Is there a criteria you have or I do not fit your bill?...Geet I know you had accepted my friendship because Maan Singh Khurana has such appeal that people surrender to him like a magnet".

"What arrogance! Maan this is not fair!"

"Life is not fair my friend..listen please save me otherwise papa will make Sumaira my secretary..as a friend you can do this much?"

Geet looked at his pleading eyes and some how fell for his charm. "Teek hain I will help you".

"Thank you and sorry for landing you in it,,friends?" he smiled and gave his hand and she shook it. Maan walked off and Geet called him.

"By the way Mr Maan Singh Khurana in friendship there is no thank you or sorry ok?"

Maan nodded and went off. Maan came in his room and saw Adi. "Adi guess what Geet accepted my friendship..she is so cool isn't she?"

"Yes she is".

"And she will become my secretary also so Sumaira thank god will be busy with papa!".

"Wow your fast!" laughed Adi in his trademark style.

"Waise Adi hows your Pinky?" teased Maan with a smirk.

"My Pinky what do you mean? She is just like Sumaira..you know chipku types". Maan chuckled.

"She loves you alot Adi...you won't get a better girl she is sweet".

"Maan I am a bhaal bramchaari...and you know that...by the way if you find her sweet why don't you propose to her?"

"Fine I will". Adi made a jealous face. "See you cannot see anyone thinking of in that way".

"Maan I do not know what your talking about".

"I'm sure you do duffer!".

Geet went to her bedroom wondering about the latest developments. She had become Maan's friend and secretary within hours of meeting him. *Babaji please help me I do not know a thing about professional work*. She took the cap and put it on her teddy and smiled. Her phone rang.

"Hello?"

"Hi its me Maan...suno don't worry main hoon na...tomorrow I will train you up be up for 9 ok?"

"Maan I am nervous..I have never worked in my life...why don't you hire someone else?"

"Chup bilkul chup meri secretary tum bano gi bas! Muje kuch nahin sunana samji tum? Geet Adi bi waha hoga toh relax...your my friend I will look after you". She smiled and put the phone down and later was left wondering why she surrendered to her newly found friend.

Maan got up and wore his office attire he was looking extra hot. Geet got up and wore her purple shalwar kameez. She came down and Maan escorted her to his car.



[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NT8UZsqvnTM[/YOUTUBE]



Precap; Geet's first day at the office with Maan.

Previous:Part 3
Next: Part 5

I am still looking for someone that can make me a montage of Maan's hot pics plsss...its important for the story. Plus any VM makers plz contact me plzzz...Hit the like button and please let me know of anything you like or dislike.


Ps credit to the VM maker.

Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
haha that was brilliant...
he justt said without askin her geet will be my secetary..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 4
nice part...
so Maan is aware of this Sumaira...
wah Maan made Geet his friend as well his Sec...
the VM is so too good...
drool worthy...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part
love it
cant w8 4da next
amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan is really smart.
He jst said Geet's name to escape from Sumaira.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Cutee part between Maaneet oh and Adi xD
hehehe
cont soon!
thanks for the pm!
btw don't forget to update your other ff's too xD
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww awesome luved ittt superbbb

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