Originally posted by: ..KaJenDelena..
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HEYAAA so soorrryyy for the late EDIT!So, its been like a few days since I read your OS and guess what? Its still fresh in my mind, I can recall everything. and I think that should give u an evidence of what a great writer you are.I love the name "THE LOSER SISTER" Fits perfectly with the story! and what I loved even more was that you didnt make Angli the horrible uncaring brat just coz she was the "perfect" sister. It gave depth to the story and made it more adorable. I loved how you wrote this sooo simply but I dont know what is about ur writing, it is always meaningful and has depth to it! its gripping and your stories are generally different to others which I love most.You described Ridhimma's emotions really well and the whole bullying thing she was going through made me goo Nawww poor thing! She was Fat? cant imagine that at all, well I did but I imagined her really young lol! and she was also Stupid? Nawww poor thing! and she commited sucide? Nawww Poor thing! LOL SORRY about the "poor thing" it just fitted with what I was saying, LOL ;)I like how you brought Armaan into her life through her "perfect" sister ahahaa ironic isn't it? and what is more ironic is that ANGLI just breaks her back and dies when Ridhimma has proved armaan wrong and how she isn't a loser, lol! that was a perfect timing for Angli to die bahahahaa ;) The last line is amazing, I can remember it perfectly; "and it's not wrong for me to say that ur love grew from that day on" well not perfectly but It stuck to me okay! LOl.Loved it overall, as usual! Please write more and Update ur FF's ( emphasis on the S ) ;)
