abhi na jao chodkar ke dil abhi bhara nahi-part2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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1ce again superbbb epi......

..ArHi scene in d store room kya intensity thi ya...fab....

abhi na jaayo chhodh kar
ke dil abhi bhara nahi

Adhuri aas
Adhuri aas chhodh ke
adhuri pyaas chhodh ke
jo roz yuhi jaayogi......
to kis tarah nibhaayogi
ke zindagi ki raaha mein
jawaan dilon ki chaha mein
kayi makaam aayenge
jo humko aazmaayenge
bura na maano baat ka
yeh pyar hai gila nahi...😳😳😳...

abhi na jaayo chhodh kar
ke dil abhi bhara nahi...
...


Arnav " mujhe tumse baat karni hai...khushi baat suno.."
khushi "hume kuch nahi suna..hume yahan se jaana hai...aap darwaza khol dijiye...."
arnav "pehle meri baat suno...meri taraf dekho khushi..😳😳."
khushi "nahi pehle aap darwaza kholiye..."..
the rapid fire ws rockinggg...
water scene ws cute.😳..he drinks it 1st ..n fills d same glass fr her...😉😳😆
he goes n removes all his frustration on dt door...nw here i gv a thumps up... coz dey din shw him kick d door jus 1ce or 2ce n it breaks..nope rather he kicks it hard..harder next time n so on to final manage to break it...
the intensity in d entire scene...
it shows hw desperately he wants to talk to khushi...😳
d way he says " abhi toh meri baat sunogi na...??...der ws so much pain in his voice..request too....
khushi " hume nahi karni hai aapse baat ...nahi sun ni hai aapki koi baat......aapko nafrat hai na humse..humari hesiyat se...nahi dekhna chahte na humara chehra..toh hum ja rahe hai..humesha ke liye aapki nazron se door...hum wapas ja rahe hai lucknow..."....
arnav " khushi tum aisa nahi kar sakti..khushi..khushiii....." superb i jus loved d way his dialogue delivery n voice modulation...confusion..pain...restlessness.👏👏👏..
arnav "kisi ki himmat nahi hai mujhse kuch kehne ki ..tumhe bhi patah hai...laavanya.."......
he said it bt his disbelief ws clear.😲..more dn sayin it to lavanya he ws askin himself n khud hi apne dil ko samjha raha tha..types...bata arnav hai kisiki himmat tere saamne baat karne ki..😆..
mamiji ws too good..i simply liked how she came forward fr her family n din let sasuma feel ashamed irrespective of her personal equation wid her sasuma⭐️⭐️...
sum crackling one liners from her..😆
"uu gouutwaa toh poorani member hai.".🤣
"kauunse mobell ka network liye ho ki tirrath yatra mein bhi sab khabhar mil gayi.".
"tum kaunse alagh boatwa meiin traivel karat ho.."😆😆😆
"eee kitna pairr pede apne bittwa ki uu mrs singh ki ladki se shaadi karen khatir lekin inka bittwa kisi auur se hi shaadi kar liye...jo uuse ek do teen naahi dus saal badi hai.."😆😆
eek baat bataye tumhar ghar mein haeeiir daaeeii kaun zyaada use karen hai tum ya tumhari bahuriya...
shyam "bahar jaake kuch kar de usse accha ...yahan aapke saath rahen toh unki hadhen tayy kar sakte hai..." aabe langde khudh kya gul khila raha ha ghar ke bahar doosri ladkiyon par ddoorre dalta phirta hai aur yahan ASR ki hadh ki baat kar raha hai..pervert kahin ka...
when ASR came walkin in n replied dt he is in no mood to sit der n talk wid dem..shyam realized sumthin wrong...
khushi "bas jiji chalon lucknow wapas chalte hai...hume yahan par ajjeb lagta hai..."
buaji "waah re titliya bua ke ghar mein bhi hisab-kitab kar ke rehti ho..."
i lkd her...wateva she may b frm outside...she is a good soul widhin...⭐️⭐️
khushi's convo wid devi maiiyan...
"aise nahin hai ki hum darr gaye ..lekin hume humara sabak mil gaya hai...
thode din aap bhi chutti pe chale jayiye..tab tak hum bhi lucknow pohonch jayenge .."
sanaya d way she hs acted n delivered her dialogues wid fab expressions...
ASR's mind haunted wid dos last lines by khushi...shez leavin..goin bk to lucknow..
from d intense convo wid khushi..to comin home in full of anger..to goin in room...frm removin his waist coat to loosing d tie..frm formals to casuals...ASR...Barun u r simply superb....STYLE n elegance...touchwood...😊
precap : just wen khushi n payal r abt to leave ...her mother tells her d situation in lucknow...nw wat..goin bk to lucknow or her parents cmin to delhi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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***res***

Kya timing hain meri...Dekh Dits...I'll post later...

I thought tu aaj nehin aayegi and was abt to sing "Abhi na jaaooo chod kar ke picture abhi baki hain...mere dost... Kya ghatiya rhyme hai...🤣 🤣 🤣
Edited by doodleberry - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res

*edited*

awsumm post dits...luved wot u sed for shyamless 🤣

can't say much...pooju ki poem padne ke baad...


i dn't hv anything better to say...👏 👏 👏

Arnav...ki tarah am speechless tooo😆

juss this song lines i post!!!😉 frm ASR POV~~~!!!


Jaaiye Aap Kahaan Jaayenge
Ye Nazar Laut Ke Phir Aayegii
Duur Tak Aap Ke Piichhe Piichhe
Merii Aavaaz Chalii Aayegii 😍


Aapako Pyaar Meraa Yaad Jahaan Aayegaa

Koii Kaantaa Vohii Daaman Se Lipat Jaayegaa ☺️

Jaaiye Aap Kahaan Jaayenge
Ye Nazar Laut Ke Phir Aayegii 🤗



Edited by NaughtyNihu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Humne chaha bigadi baat ban jaaye
Kash ki woh humein samjh jaaye
Par yeh khwaish khwaish hi reh gayi
Woh humein zabardast thenga dikha ke chali gayi🤣

She bruised battered and shattered his ego ...and he knows it yet he cares ...uske liye jaisa usne chaha waisa kiya yet she didnt hear him out ...ab aage iska return milega jab kabhi wo kuch kehna chahegi he will not hear her out ...scores settled

The angst ,hurt ,desperation,confusion sadness on both ends ...bade dm se keh diya i am going par apni shakal bhi to dekhi hoti jab ye sab keh rahi thi ...if Arnav was not lost in his own battle he wud have noticed

Awww she wanted him to offer the water first and kaise GF ki tarah behave kar rhi when he didnt ...but he is not bhola ...apna used glass hi diya ..smart boy he doesnt see any difference or separation between him or her 😳

Mamiji ke sixer pe sixer ...she is solid boss😆...and Shyam is one smooth operator ...par ye khushi madam hi asanskari lavs ko sanskaari banae ke liye hire hongi😉


yeh kuch i wrote in my post to defend todays epi ...putting it here cause it was made for yr post

When u r close my lips are sealed and the tongue gets tied
the hands try to reach out but the feelings are locked
Into these eyes read the words unsaid

the feelings not laid
for once plunge deeply into my heart
and see the special feeling that is there

U r trampling this special feeling and my heart

With every step u r pulling me apart

In my eyes try n see my wants and my needs,
And don't turn away, leaving my soul bleed.

Leaving me behind as you walk out the door,
I don't think if I can handle this much more.

I simply cannot set you free

Cause I never knew u meant so much to me

I need you to light my night and day

To guide me and show me the way

I wish u don't leave how ever much u try

Cause I cant see my life slip by



Edited by rdfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arnav ki haalat kuch aisi hai...

Zindgi jab bhi teri baahon mein lati hai hamein,
Yeh zaamin chand se behtar nazar aati hai hamein,
Har mulakat ka anjam judai kyon hai,
Aab to har waqt yahi baat satati hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good combination of dialogue again thank u maami is really a sweat heart. about store room . The intensity and his anger. Hum kya bole!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: NaughtyNihu

res

*edited*

awsumm post dits...luved wot u sed for shyamless 🤣

can't say much...pooju ki poem padne ke baad...


i dn't hv anything better to say...👏 👏 👏

Arnav...ki tarah am speechless tooo😆

juss this song lines i post!!!😉 frm ASR POV~~~!!!


Jaaiye Aap Kahaan Jaayenge
Ye Nazar Laut Ke Phir Aayegii
Duur Tak Aap Ke Piichhe Piichhe
Merii Aavaaz Chalii Aayegii 😍


Aapako Pyaar Meraa Yaad Jahaan Aayegaa

Koii Kaantaa Vohii Daaman Se Lipat Jaayegaa ☺️

Jaaiye Aap Kahaan Jaayenge
Ye Nazar Laut Ke Phir Aayegii 🤗





Kya Gana chuna hai ...ekdum zabardast
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dits,pooju,nihu,nargis-awesomeee stuff!!

Waadiyan mera daman
Raastein meri baahein
Jaao mere siwa
Tum kahan jaogi

SUN zara,soniye sun zara
Aaj khaamoshion se aa rahi hai sadaa
Dhadkane hain deewani,
Dil bhi kuchh keh raha hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@pooju..thanks bachaaa 🤗

@geetu...wah wah!!!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"hum na rahe toh yaad karoge samjhe?"

"jaao reh sakoge na tum bhi chain se
Tum toh khair lootna jeene ke maze
Kya karna hai jeeke
Ho re na kisi ke
"

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