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Part 25

Maaneet if'kaisa ye pyaar hai

Flashback

At night

Geet came to washroom and see the maan sat on couch and doing the work.

Geet: maan mein aapse kuch puchu

Maan: geet, tumhe izazat mangne ki jaroort kbse pd gyi

Geet: maan ek baar apne mujhse college mein asa kyun kaha ki wo file really mein meri hai ya nhi'

Maan didn't give any answer.

She turn, maan came near the geet and hugs her from back.

Maan: geet tum hr baar ye sawal kyun puchti ho.

Geet turn around and slides his hand round his neck.

Geet: kyunki aap jwab nhi dete.

Mujhe us din se aajtk ye baat smjh nhi aayi hai, aapne asa kyun kaha tha.

Maan: geet to tumhe abtk smjh jana chahiye mein tumhe batana nhi chahta.

Geet: maan pr kyun

Maan tighten his grip.

Maan: kyun ki

Geet: kyunki kya

Maan: phle tum promise karo bura nhi manogi

Geet: maan ye kya baat huyi, bura manane wali baat hogi to manugi na.

Maan: to thik mein nhi batata.

Geet: thik hai.

Maan: ok, mein jata hu

Maan loose his grip.

Geet : ek minute, meine thik hai, bura nhi manane ke liya kaha hai.

Ab bataiye.

Maan: kyunki us waqt tumhe dekhke mujhe lagan nhi,

Tum jaisi ladki itni samjhdar ho sakti ho''..😉

Geet: tum jaisi se aapka mtlb kyat ha MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Maan: geet tum mtlb chodo na

Geet: mujhe mtlb janana hai

Maan hold geet tight by her waist and moves his face closers to her.

Mahi mein mahi mahi ve''''''''''

''''''''''''''''

Geet: maan

He slowly brushes his lower lip with her upper lip and sucks it.

Geet responds by sucking his lower lip. They start exploring each others mouth and the kiss became a very passionate one'''''''.

Ye do dilo ki alag si kahani h,

ek deewana h, ek deewani h,

kaise ajab phool khile h

Kitni haasee duniya lgti h chahat mein,

koi bhi mausam ho ,

wo hmesha sath ho,

,kaisa ye pyar h

,kaisa ye pyar h

,kaisa ye pyar h

,kaisa ye pyar h

,kaisa ye pyar h

Flashback

Meera: geet juice

In hospital

Outside the patient room

Naina (self talk): ab mein inhe kaise batayu , maine abhi tk geet ko kuch nhi btaya hai.

Aur btaati bhi kaise " mein yha kisi ko janti tk nhi hu'

Mujhe uske naam ke alawa kuch nhi pata hai''''.

''''..

Us accident mein to phone tut gya tha, number tk nhi pata mujhe uska

Ab mein kya karu'''

Inhe kaise batayu''''.

Pr mujhe btana to padega inhe'''..

Unke ghar mein sb pareshan hoge maan ko leke'''''

Nurse: madam''.

Madam'..

Naina : ji

Nurse: aap ye medicine jake le aaiye

Naina: kya mein unse mil sakti hu''.

Nurse: abhi wo so rhe hai,

Madam aap baad mil lijiyenga

Naina: ok

In khurana mension

At dining table

Dev: geet tum mall gyi thi aaj

Geet: ha

Dev: wo bhi akele '..

Car bhi leke nhi gyi'..

Kyun geet ?

Geet: dev mein car mein hi gyi thi, bs wo rashte mein khrab ho gyi thi''.

Aur mall wha se 5 min. ki walk distance pe tha,

To mein chli gyi

Dev: pr geet

Geet: dev, don't worry mein bilkul thik hu

Daadi: ab ye sb chodiye bte, aapke darji ka phone aaya tha

Geet: darji ne kya kha daadimaa

Daadi: wo chahte hai, aap kuch din unke pass rhne chli jaye

To bte aapne kya socha

Geet: daadi maa mera khi jane ka mann nhi hai

Daadi: pr bte, jbse aapki shaadi huyi hai, uske baad aap unse mili tk nhi hai, shi se

Geet: daadimaa, mein unse phone pe baat kr lungi

Daadi: jaise aapki icha

Geet: ji

Flashback

In college

Brij: gudiya sb kuch kiasa chl rha hai

Geet: veerji sb kuch acha chl rha hai

Aur ghar pe sb kaise hai

brij: sb thi hai

tujhe yaad krte hai

geet: mein bhi veerji

brij: teri daadimaa se baat huyi ya nhi

geet: ji wo mein

brij: mein bhul gyi

geet ye kya hai

geet: sorry veerji

wo mein admission ke chakkar mein bhul gyi

brij: admission

geet: veerji ab sb kuch thik hai,

mein aaj hi daadimaa se jake milungi

brij: aapna dhyan rkhiyo gudiya

geet: ji veerji,

veerji mere lecture ka time ho gya hai. Mein phone rkhu

brij cut the call.

In khurana mansion

Nakul: ji aapko kisse milna hai

Geet: ji daadimaa se

Nakul: kiski daadimaa se

Geet: meri daadimaa se

Nakul: aapki daadimaa yha nhi rhti hai,

Aap galat address pe aayi hai

Geet: meri daadimaa yhi rhti hai

Nakul: dekhiye aap yhe se jaiye

(waise chotte sahib ke aane ka bi waqt ho gya hai, aur unhe ghar mein faltu bheed psand nhi hai.)

Geet: khudse kya baat kr rhe ho aap

Daadi: nakul kaun hai

Geet see the daadimaa.

Geet: daadimaa

Daadi: geet bte aap yha

"What a pleasant surprise"

She run and hugs the daadi.

Geet: dekha maine kha tha na meri daadimaa yhi rhti hai.

Nakul: mujhe pata nhi tha

Daadi: koi baat nhi hai nakul

Aap jaiye

Nakul: ji

Daadi and geet sit on the sofa.

Daadi: bte aap delhi kb aaye

Geet: ji , 2 -3 din phle

Daadi: aura b aapko time mila hai humse milne ka

She (geet) make a baby face.

Geet: sorry daadimaa and again hug the daadi.

Daadi: chlo humne aapko maaf kiya.

Geet: thankyou daadimaa😊

Daadi: bs ab aur mska marne ki jaroort nhi hai

Geet: daadimaa sb kha hai

Daadi: dev, bs abhi aate honge

Aur rhi maan ki baat unhe to kaam se hi fursat nhi hai

Geet: to daadimaa aap pure din ghar mein akeli hoti hai

Daadi: ha bte

Geet: aap akele bore nhi ho jati

Daadi: ho jatu hu kbhi kbhi

Geet: aap ek kaam kijiye, aap kbhi bore nhi hongi

Daadi: kya

Geet: shaadi

Ha daadimaa dev aur maan ki shaadi kr dijiye

Daadi: bte chahte to hum bhi hai

Pr maan

Dev: pr bro se baat kaun karega

Geet; daadimaa ye kaun hai

Daadi: bte ye dev hai

Aur dev ye geet

Dev: hey geet

Geet: hello dev

Daadi: koi kuch bolega ya nhi

Aur aap dono ase mil rhe ho jaise phli baar mil rhe ho.

Geet: daadimaa kafi time ho gya hai na mile huye

Isliye'''..

Dev: fir bro ke aage to aawaz hi nhi niklengi

(Geet stand and explain the feature of maan)

Geet: kyun?

Tumhara bhai koi hindi film ka villain hai

Yha khi ka prime minister

Yha fir ghost😆

Dev: what?

Geet: wo kuch aur samajh nhi aa rha tha

Socha kuch try kru

All laugh together.

Dev: bro ke liye jo tumne words choose kiye wo bhut aache the.😃

You select the superb words for bro.

Ydi unhone sun liya hota to abhi tk jwalamukhi ft gya hota.😆

Geet: kyun

Dev: jb milonge to khud smjh jayongi

Precap: kya geet maan se mil payengi

Wo kya jaan payengi

Wo dust danav hi uska maan hai

Uske bachapan ka dost

Pyara sa dost

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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mujhe lagta hai HINDI FILM o ke VILLAIN hi hoga😡...ha ha ha..😆nice priya...👏weldone👍🏼...par iitni jaldi KISSI-WISSI khatam ho gaya...😳soo sad...😭😉😃
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mujhe lagta hai HINDI FILM o ke VILLAIN hi hoga😡...ha ha ha..😆nice priya...👏weldone👍🏼...par iitni jaldi KISSI-WISSI khatam ho gaya...😳soo sad...😭😉😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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awesooome...
superb...
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loved the upd...
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Beautiful update. 👏 👏 👏
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haaahaha.. lol.. geet is sooo funny.. omg maan ko kya hua? cont sooon

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wow wonderful.. update totally rocking :D

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