Beneficiary of the LAW (AR)

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Hey guys, yes I am back with a new ff. Hope you all like it, please leave your comment, and if you want a pm, just send me a buddy request.
Beneficiary of the LAW
"I really like this color, it makes my eyes pop. What do you guys thinks?" she looked around at the ladies that were working on her hair. "Ma'am the color looks dashing on you, you look marvelous in that hair' and this was the color we started off with remember?" one of the ladies said in a sarcastic tone. For the past 5 hours they have been working on her hair, and finally she liked a style and a color, which was the original style and color. "Really, I could have sworn the first color was too light' by the way I don't like that attitude of yours, I want a new stylist, and don't expect a tip from me' now fly away from" she signaled the lady to leave, basically firing her. "Hmmm, I need another opinion' Some one who doesn't dress like a clown... you" she pointed out a girl sitting two seats away from her.
"Me?" the girl looked at her confused.
"Yeah...sorry what's your name?"
"Muskaan, do you need something?"
"Yes, well I wanted to get a second opinion on this hair, what do you think?"
"Uhhh' it looks fine on you, your face definitely goes with the dark coffee brown color' makes your eyes shiny and green' you should keep it'" Muskaan said, as she observed her hair. "Thank you so much... I'll keep it, girls just put it in my tab'" she gave her credit card to the lady to charge her.
"Hi, I'm Ridhima'" Ridhima let out a hand to Muskaan, which she shook. "You have really nice taste, and I love your outfit' what are you a fashion designer?" Ridhima asked as Muskaan chuckled. "No' actually I'm studying to become a lawyer' I'm currently a sophomore at Brown law school'" Muskaan said casually as Ridhima looked at her amazed. "Oh my god' I'm going to be a freshmen at Brown law... I'm just getting everything ready for classes to start next week... I am so excited to attend Brown, I'm a transfer from NYU'" Muskaan noticed the enthusiasm Ridhima had, as she spoke about her passion.
"Hey, do you wanna grab some drinks with me? I wanna know more about Brown'. Please don't say no'" Ridhima said, hoping for a yes. "Well I would love to' but I'm supposed to meet up with some friends'" Muskaan said in a apologetic tone.
"Oh it's fine then'"
"Hey you should tag along' you can get to know my friends, they'll
tell you more about Brown'"
"Sure' sounds great, so tell me more about Brown" Ridhima and Muskaan walked out of the salon, as both of them blabbed on about Brown University.
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"Atul' atul get up" she shook him, trying to wake Atul up. "Anjali let me sleep' we are on vacation' you go to sleep also'" Atul put his arms around Anjali, and cuddled next to her. "Stop, I'm going to take a shower' we have to get back to Brown and meet up with Muskaan. Go wake up the rest of the gang'" Anjali got out of bed and headed for the bathroom.
"Rahul wake up' bitch get up" Atul said, he got frustrated and threw a pillow at Rahul. "What the hell Atul' let me enjoy my last moments in the Hampton's before classes start'" Rahul grabbed the pillow, and embraced it. "We have to leave in an hour jackass' Muskaan is waiting for us at Brown, or maybe she's waiting for you'" Atul teased Rahul, knowing that Rahul will definitely get up once Muskaan is mentioned. "You're right bro' I know she's waiting for me'" Rahul smiled to himself as Atul rolled his eyes.
"She dumped your ass, like a toilet of crap" Atul ran for his life, as Rahul realized what Atul has just said. "Atul you bas***d" Rahul chased after Atul.
"Guys stop playing tom and jerry this early in the morning" he got out of his room wearing his boxers. "Armaan, you have no idea what Atul just said' he is so mean'" Rahul pouted and sat down, catching his breath. "Atul stop being mean to Rahul, he's already upset after he got dumped'" Armaan chuckled as Rahul gave him deadly eyes.
"So Armaan, had fun last night? I mean I'm sure you did' I heard a lot of 'oh Armaan' yes yes' harder' I mean this was going on ALL night'" Rahul chuckled, as Armaan rolled his eyes. "Shut up dick' at least I'm getting something at night'"
"I miss sex' me and Muskaan had such an amazing sex life'" Rahul said with a sad voice. "Move on' and I don't want to hear about your sex life' now eat and get ready' where's Jake?"
"Right here' damn last night was amazing' TOUCH was totally crowded, there were so many hot girls' yeah we have to come back" Jake sat down and gulped down his orange juice. "Then how come you didn't bring a girl home last night?" Atul asked. "Well I wanted to relax last night' I mean our last night of vacation, just wanted to sleep and relax'"
"Already then, I think it's time to leave' until next vacation you beautiful home" Rahul said passionately as they all loaded their suitcases in the car. "I'm glad we all bought this vacation house'" Jake said, as they all settled in the car and drove away.

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"Guys this is my new friend Ridhima' and Ridhima this is Atul, Anjali, Armaan, Jake, and Rahul" Muskaan introduced Ridhima to the whole gang. "Hey how come you said my name last? You were saving the best for the last weren't you" Rahul winked as Muskaan rolled her eyes. "Maybe because you were the last one in the line' dumb-ass'" Muskaan mumbled under her breath.

"The name is Jake' and I like to be shaken, not stirred" Jake let out a hand, as Ridhima chuckled. "Muskaan your friend has a really pretty smile.. Not to mention that she is extremely cute'" Jake winked at Ridhima as she slightly blushed. "So you're new here' if you need someone to show you around, please don't hesitate to ask me' I'll just need you number'" Jake said smoothly.
"I thought I was supposed to call you'"
"It doesn't work that way' I mean I offered, so I have to call you to fix a date' I mean a date to show you around Brown'" he slightly stuttered. "Thank you so much for your concern'" Ridhima gave Jake her number.
"Wow, so that's how you get a girls number' I am very impressed Jake'" Rahul said, he was amazed at Jake's skills. "Rahul don't you dare ask another girl for her number'" Muskaan said in an angry tone.
"Play hard to get' make her chase you'" Armaan whispered inside Rahul's ears, giving him useful advice. "It shouldn't affect you if I get another girl's number' we aren't together anymore remember" Rahul said tauntingly as Muskaan looked at him shocked. "What ever, do what ever you want'" Muskaan ignored him. "No I was just kidding' I would never get another girl's number' I only want your number'" Rahul ran near Muskaan as Armaan gave him a 'you're useless' look.
"Wow this whole group is filled with couples' do you have a girlfriend too?" Ridhima looked at Armaan. "Armaan doesn't believe in relationships'" Jake answered for Armaan. "I know how to speak for myself' but yeah, I'm not ready to be tied down'"
"Interesting' you all seem different, this is a very diverse group' Muskaan you seem like the fashionable one' Rahul seems like the sad boy' Atul you are hilarious but a coward' Anjali seems like the mature one' Jake you seem like the flirty one' and Armaan' you are interesting' I don't have a word to describe you'." Ridhima observed him from top to bottom.
"I can describe you though' the annoying bitchy girl, who talks more than she should'" Ridhima made a shocked face. "Asshole'" she said and looked away. "Ignore him babe' Armaan's just like that'" Jake put his arms around Ridhima.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Intro page 1
Episode One: NOT Ridhima page 10
Episode Two: It's all Gone and Done page 21
Episode Three: We are NOT a couple page 34
Episode Four: Caught in Action page 46
Episode Five: Heavy Duty Punch page 52
Episode six: Missed Me? page 58
Edited by SweetnSourMe - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I LIKE it!!'
Plz pm me and continue sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG sazi u gave me a shock u started a new ff :O
am i dreaming coz i still can't believe it 😲let me pinch myself😆
wow i never expected this from u means i am so happy yippee sazi started a new ff🥳
my earnest req u must update regularly must not discontinue it coz u have discontinued many ff of ur & regular updating is not in ur list so u better take care of it warna beware😈
Beneficiary of the LAW
wat a awesome title i loved it u rock sazi i dn't need to tell it
the starting of ur ff was really funny a very different way to start an ff
Brown university sounds interesting😆
loved Muskaan & Riddhima's talks 😛..u have sketched Riddhima's character well her boldness & little attitude talk awesome sazi gr8
OMG sazi i know that it would an hot ff 😆coz u r specialised in it😆
sazi without hot ff is impossible
Atul & Rahul talks was hillarious telling Muskaan dumped Rahul aw poor Rahul
Armaan reply was simply supperb
He doesn't believe in relationship interesting , cool ..In all ur ff Armaan is so hawwttt😳
Jack new character he is fully flirtist & womenizer
Rahul & Muskaan talks i just love it their cute little angry talks
Armaan called her annoying bitch now that seems more cool story is amazing
Riddhima was impressed by Armaan bt Armaan he was not interested at all
i can't wait for ur next update continue soon sazi impatient to read next part & plz updated revenge marriage too u stopped it in most interesting point again can't wait
love u dear fantastic update




Edited by -pooluvsKaSh- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazinggg cont soon pleaseee nd yes keep me on the pm lisstt
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very interesting, please continue soon.
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nice start.. actually shocking start...

cont. soon

n pls do pm me...

love

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hey
nice start buddy
thankx for the pm
lov
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OFF COURSE
BUDDY I WANT PM FOR THIS FF
INTERESTING
WANT TO READ IT FOR SURE
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great start saz...
Armaan is kinda weird...loved ridzi's bindaas nature though:-)

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