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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... loved Annie.. sneakily reading his diary behind his back, and now reading it in front of all.. perfect little sister😆🤗..

Maybe that is the reason he found a connection with her so suddenly.. maybe subconsciously , living with her and observing her, made him fall for her though consciously he may have wondered if it was guilt..

BUt now he'll know why he could forget Simran so easily like she never was there in his life..

lovely. yayy for the next update😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
this wait is more killing!!
Edited by sweetkj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting . I have to go to school tomorrow . Please fast di
Edited by Swaatii - 14 years ago
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can't wait now after reaing you are pasting 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago


Dreams
part 20

Maan was guilty.. he didn't he never could..not even when he fell in love with her. She was there in his mind all the while.. seeing her ..seeing his desire in reality..he just automatically fell in love. She was just replica of his dream.. actually more than wat he asked for. He couldn't believe she was his..only his..destined to be his & he never realized it until now.

Anni giggled ' pata hain bhabhi.. bhai jab bhi mujhe gussa karthen the ..I used to scared him.. that I will tell u.
Geet gulped..wat could she do any way..uski tho Maan ke samne bolti band ho jathi hain
Anni ' bhai tho bolti band ho jathi
Maan looked every else but not Geet.
Anni ' I used to tease him.. agar woh aisen hi gussa karengen tho unki pari unhe dehk kar hi bhag jayegi
Maan knows even she wants to .. he hated his anger that led to the distance between them
anni '
pata hain bhai kya bolten the
Geet looked at her curiously
aani changed her voice..& spoke like Maan..
main ussen thodi kuch kahoonga
Geet looked at Maan cutely angrily.. he had no explanations to give.
Anni continued in his voice..
ussen dehken ke tho main sirf ussen pyar hi kar sakta hoon..
Geet frowned..mujhe dehkkar tho unhe bas gussa hi aata hain. She turned her face & was abt to leave.. she tripped on the sofa.. Maan immediately held her from the waist.. he softly pulled her closer..his emotions..his desires every thing came alive. He just wanted to feel her. Live his dream..feel his dream.. he loved her.. but knowing that he is been loving her since 14..his feelings became more alive. The emotions that were suppressed under his guilt seemed to surface. Her touch her closeness.. burned him alive.

Geet closed her eyes & held him tightly.
Anni '
dehka kha kaha tha na.. aap main tho bhai ki jaan bas thi hain
Geet immediately pulled away.
Anni '
batvoo na aap bhabhi ko kaisen millen
how did u feel to see ur dream in reality..infront of ur eyes
Maan '
asien kuch nahi hain
anni teased '
umm.. mujhe se chupa rahen ho
Maan was already feeling bad that he could never relate to his dream.. to her.. & the way she has been treating her is been ridiculous. Not acceptable.
Maan '
nahi it was just an
before Maan could complete.. Geet held him back. He looked at her soft touch that was so authoritative, it was firmer than hard chains..wrapped around his soul. How could he disobey.
Anni ' I am sure u would have missed ur beat when u touched her first time
Maan could not take it any longer, he just left them alone to catch up & went to his room...

geet wondered.. seeing him walk away

Innumerable Questions-Single Answer-LOVE
Should I feel blessed for the love that shines through you?
Or cursed that I can't love you back?
Should I rejoice at the admiration that your eyes shower on me?
Or mourn the love that dies in fear each day?
Do you really think I am your pari?
Do you really think that I am fit to be?
Your poetic thoughts burned my cheecks,
warmed my insides, made me fly...
Are those words apt to descibe me?
No, how can they be-an angle they will want to see...
but, let me live in the dream that I wove today,
Those words can keep me warm each day!
I don't think I can be even a tenth of how beautiful your Pari should be,
Yet why did your eyes speak all those feelings for me?
The love I see is pure and serene,
But, how do I forgive you? How do I forget my self-esteem?
My heart though tells a different story,
It screams your name in all its glory...
how can the heinious act be forgiven?
Yet deep down to you my heart i have already given!
So much love, it fills me to the brim,
It is slowly making my life seem less grim...
Can I actually think of moving on?
Has God once again given me the right to DREAM On?
Love
Swati
yes he did miss his beat when she touched him in the mela th every first time. He felt like a current run through him. He hit his head back on the wall.. closing his eyes tightly.. how he snapped her hair that was stuck in his shirt's button. How could he...
the way her lips felt when he took them in passionately first time in the darkness it felt his.. he could feel the every touch ..the way she shivered under him.. the sweetness in her smile.. the naughtiness in those eyes..the fear seeing those armed men.. the trust she had holding his arm hiding behind him .. he banged his head harder & harder..
she was his.. only his.. she just trusted him.. seeked him to save her ..protect her.. all he could do was ruin her. He hated himself.
Anni came looking for Maan.
She first went to his room. He was not there.. Geet followed her & got worried. She didn't want anni to get hurt knowing the truth of their relation.


Anni got confused & went to the guest room. She looked wondering why his cloths were lying here in this room. Geet immediately picked them & shouted at Maan abhi main ne woh kamra teehk kiya.. aur aap yanha pe shuru ho gayen
Maan looked at her in shock.. though the tone was depicting anger but her voice was so meek..
anni held her stomach laughing..
bhabhi aap bhai ko aisen danthi ho
then she looked at Maan.. who actually was taken a back..
aur aap bhai..aap dar bhi jathen ho
Maan gave a stern look.. trying to portray..Maan Singh Khurana kisi se dartha nai types. But he was definitely taken a back when his pari came charging in anger. He found so cute & doll types.
Geet was sweating furiously ..yeh main ne kya kiya.. inhpe chiladiya.. aab kya hoga. Pata nahi kya kya bolen ge. Maan watched her dearly as she fumbled picking up the cloths ..expressing conflicting emotions..anni could read maans eyes.. she left them alone & slowly closed the door behind.

Geet unware pretended to pick the cloths trying to continue her anger at Maan infront of Anni.
She turned after picking all the cloths.. Maan stood crossing his arms. She looked around for anni.. & her face became like a terrified baby not finding her around. Maan suppressed his smile & inched closer..
kya kaha tumne?
She looked down & inched backward
main kapdane phelatha hoon?
Haan..nahi.. nahi..mera matlab hain.. main jathi hoon
he held her hand & stopped her. She tried twisting her hand out of his firm grip.
His firm grip was gentle on her wrist, his whisper insistent silk 'umm'.

It amazed her how he could turn her on with just the raise of an eyebrow. Perhaps his most overused facial expression, somehow it never lost its power to silence, to question, to ridicule & of course to drive her mad with wanting him. Since when did all happen she had no clue.. but she felt herself blush furiously when he looked at her with those eyes. He pulled her in a jerk she bend down & fell on his chest softly..it was more of willing fall. His hand slipped around her waist slowly pulled her closer.. She shivered as he lowered his mouth to whisper in her ear...tho tum gussa bhi karthi ho..
all she could do was blush
Suddenly she sensed a shift in his demeanor, his mouth still hovering over her ear, continued in husky voice,
mujhe aacha lagtha hain
Geet almost closed her eyes in sheer delight & she almost turned into his neck..he brought his lips closer & took her lips to his. She felt his hand come up and lightly caress her neck and the edges of her hair. She chuckled in his arms.


-dreams part 20-

-PREV PART 19 NEXT THREAD 3-

Thanks a lot for all the lovely comments & likes
muskan little disappointed with the likes number
expect a lot more 'pouts'
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowww tht was just awesome and marvelous... lovee ittt... cnt wait to read more... muski dii update sooonnn... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
seriosly yaar...
logon ne waiting waiting kar ke do ek do page bhi bhar diye...
abb to dedo...
intehaaa ho gaiii intazaar ki!! :p
ohhh sorry didnt knew while i was typing this u gave the update..
and stopped it ona cliffhanger!! :DDD :PPP
well great!! i m actully liking annie!!!! :DD
haayee maan and geet,...geet kya mast daanti maan ko!! hehe.. :D
Edited by sweetkj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Innumerable Questions-Single Answer-LOVE
Should I feel blessed for the love that shines through you?
Or cursed that I can't love you back?
Should I rejoice at the admiration that your eyes shower on me?
Or mourn the love that dies in fear each day?
Do you really think I am your pari?
Do you really think that I am fit to be?
Your poetic thoughts burned my cheecks,
warmed my insides, made me fly...
Are those words apt to descibe me?
No, how can they be-an angle they will want to see...
but, let me live in the dream that I wove today,
Those words can keep me warm each day!
I don't think I can be even a tenth of how beautiful your Pari should be,
Yet why did your eyes speak all those feelings for me?
The love I see is pure and serene,
But, how do I forgive you? How do I forget my self-esteem?
My heart though tells a different story,
It screams your name in all its glory...
how can the heinious act be forgiven?
Yet deep down to you my heart i have already given!
So much love, it fills me to the brim,
It is slowly making my life seem less grim...
Can I actually think of moving on?
Has God once again given me the right to DREAM On?
Love
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok last refresh to page byeee ...will read update tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsome update...
Thank god annies reaction was positive...
Loved the drscription of maans dream girl or shpuld i say geet...
Eagerly waiting for the next update...
WAITING...^_^

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