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Posted: 14 years ago

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#642

dear lovely readers.. it really motivates to see ur valid inputs & likes

I feel sad when I don't see all of u reading but not even clicking like button

forget leaving a comment..😭

I wished it was mutual the joy we share

but I guess I have to be left with my sweeties who take an effort to like me

I am really greatful to each one of u..how take an effort to click like button & those who comment.. a lot of my happiness gets filled by those who give me sugesstions their creativity & inputs..there poems, the small bit like.. like the one in the chruch.. i was so touched...Smriti Agarwal. sugeested me to add the scene where maan takes care of her wounds, angelic told me to update maitri today..since it is friendship day.. I love to be part with u all.. Thanks to each one of u.. to give so much of meaning to my efforts.. thanks a lot

did I forget to mention nidzz & her creation..nandu's photos..sia's VM..

oh god u all just super excellent..I love u all

escpiaclly nidz the way she keeps me alive..even when I am not around..

rahki., sim. dia.. dilsay..& hena.with her beautiful descriptive comments.. nanad to bring out the esscence..i shall add as i get there...lot of u on top of my mind..

i am really blessed to have u all

sameena at times multiple comments.. shruti di's morning exoectation.. faby..oh my coffee mate😆.. I could just update hearing her send a coffe to me.. 😳

I am getting senti types

sonia's & farri's countless request on my FB..making baby face..oh so cute..

love those silent readers.. thanks.. special to u

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yes me greatful to u.. & feel honoured when u say that

Dreams
part 19

his phone rang again. Geet patiently waited..

Maan ' hi sweetheart
Geet preferred not to hear that.. but that word did bother her. Wondered why she was
Maan excused himself & went out.
Geet kept waiting but he never came back. She logged out of her mail & came down looking for him.
Her eyes restlessly scanned the room
Daadi smiled kisen doond rahi ho
Geet knotted her duppata..ji. woh
Daadi teased nakul ko
Geet made a baby face nahi Daadi .. she looked here & there unhe

Daadi was happy to see her feeling softer to Maan. By now Daadi began to understand her. She felt geet was really a great person from heart she will eventually will love Maan.. just that she needs time to forget her past. Daadi very well knew, the past her grandson scared in her soul is not forgivable. She never expected her to either. But Geet was some different person altogether. She only knew to love & spread happiness.

Maan picked anni from the airport.
Anni ' yeh sab kya hain bro
Maan was prepared to hear her blasting
anni ' mujhe simran se pata chala ki u got married, that too its been over 4 months now.
Simran's name already made him uncomfortable. He didn't know wat simran told her abt Geet.
He tried to be normal ' it was all of a sudden sweety
anni ' don't sweety me. How could u bhai
he exahled sharply ' tu ghar chal, then we shall talk
anni ' mujhe tho aap se baat hi nahi karni. I will straight away talk to her. How could she come between u & Simran
Maan ' anni tu aisen kuch nahi karegi
the moment Maan stopped the car anni ran into the mansion

Daadi ' woh anni ko lena gaya hain
Geet looked at her blankly
before Daadi could explain...
anni marched in angrily.. Geet & Daadi looked at her in amuse. Daadi knew she will say something odd to Geet ..daadi inched forward to stop her.. Maan came running behind as well
anni dropped her purse & looked at Geet in shock. She didn't utter a word. Her mouth was open & her eyes popped out like she saw something unbelievable.

Geet was unconformable with the glare anni gave her. She looked at Daadi & then at Maan.
Both Maan & Daadi were taken a back with Anni's silence. Maan came beside Geet before he could say anything. pari!!! she said in shock
Maan, Daadi & Geet said it together..pari!!

anni smiled ..bhabhi aap tho bilkul bhai ki pari jaisen ho
nahi nahi.. pari ho
Geet felt embarrassed & looked down.
Anni ' haii.. bilkul pari !!!
Daadi questioned..yeh kya pari pari laga rakha hain?
Iska naam Geet hain
anni ' nahi merin liyen tho yeh bhai ki pari hi hain
Maan ' yeh tu kya bol rahi hain
anni - ek min. she ran to his old room & pulled out his diary.
She came back running in real excitement. Yeh dehko bhabi.
Maan felt little uncomfortable it was his personal dairy. He tried to snatch from her hand. Geet smiled seeing his different side.
Maan warned ' anni kisi ka personal dairy nahi padthen
anni ' main ne puri padhi hain..
Maan was irriated
anni giggled & winked at Geet ' ek bar nahi bar bar
Maan rested in his hand on his waist.
Geet looked at him.
Anni turned her face.. bhabhi idhar dehko
Geet looked at him feeling scared
anni ' bhabhi bhai aapni pari ko kuch nahi kah sakten
Geet looked here & there
Daadi preferred not comment.
Anni ' bhai tho aap se tab se pyar karten hain jab se shayad woh janthe bhi nahi the pyar kya hota hain

geet looked at him .. he was fuming.. she looked down immediately

Anni opened the page where he had mentioned abt his dream girl for the first ever time.. like 10yrs ago when he was 14 & anni was 13.
they both were more like twins. Anni would land up reading & sharing all his feelings & so would he.
They where really close. But as time passed he seemed to forget wat he wrote but she never did. Probably because she read it so many time, sometime just to tease him. He stopped writing diaries when he met Simran. It was very dangerous with anni reading his personal details.

Anni read it loud..
pari..meri pari..
my dream girl
jaisen koi asman se uttri ho..
pure, serene.. like dew drops.
dark long hair..
I love her locks to fall on her cheek.. so that I could always push them away
Geet blushed & looked down, pulling her locks backward
her big black.. nahi nahi.. he cut it & wrote..brown colored deep eyes.. should only talk to me
(oops possessive MSK even at 14)
anni looked at Geet ' pata hain bhabhi..I asked bhai.. wat shade of brown just to tease him. He actually said.. he wanted ..like the shade to almond..
Maan was all embarrassed.
Anni continued to read & chuckled
Her eyes should be so innocent trusting with her heart. soft voice soothing & itna soft.. mano.. usen sunne ke liyen..saren phisayon ko bhi khamosh hone paden

itni nasuk ho.. jaisen hawa bhi uske pas se guzarne se daren...
ke kanhi usen chot na lagjayen
the movements of wind carry her in and out of varied moods of love and sadness shown in lips that pout. Anni smiled..
Geet felt so concious
anni this bhai wrote when he was in college.. thoda.. ahem ahem...
Maan ' anni bas kar
anni pulled the dairy away from him & hid behind Geet. Maan stood facing Geet
anni read
Her body..hain..
Geet chukled
sultry as it sways towards her heart's desire fingers touch within a soul starting the endless fire.
Maan looked at her voluptuously
anni shied reading ..
Creaseless the passion she carries deeply hidden in plain sight,
pyari si .. warm in daylights glow mano jaisen koi kavitha jisen main padon raath bahur aapni in pyasi nighavon se.

this is funny ok..anni said teasingly..& romantic too
Geet was left flushing.. under his gaze
agar usen padhna chaho tho..
anni bit her lips
kaisen rohk pavogen khud ko uski aghosh main khone se
the more u read her your heart is lost, paradise you'll always know.

& she indeed was..every word wat he wrote.
Anni put her hand around Geet..- pata hain bhabhi.. jab main simran se milli thi. The word simran filled the air with hatered. Geet moved little away from anni & Maan. Even Maan was uneasy.
Anni was quit excited ..she didn't notice the discomfort she continued telling wat she felt ' jab main ne simran ko dehka. I thought dreams never come true..
Geet looked at Maan intensely
she was not like wat bro wrote abt u
mujhe laga ki sapne tho sapne hoten hain
Maan tried to break his gaze with Geet.. but she looked at him like she was looking at her dream
anni sighed. Pata hain 1000 bar socha main ne agar aap bhai ke samne aavghe tho kya woh aapko pehchan payenge? Years went passed I almost lost all hope especially when bhai got engaged with simran.
Geet eyes twinched a bit..when she said engaged, but she still continued to look at him confused.. kya sapne sach main sach hten hain. She broke out of the gaze when anni shook her holding her shoulder.
Anni ' dehko ..bhai ne tho aap ko jhat se phechan liya
Maan was guilty.. he didn't he never could..not even when he fell in love with her. She was there in his mind all the while.. seeing her ..seeing his desire in reality..he just automatically fell in love. She was just replica of his dream.. actually more than wat he asked for. He couldn't believe she was his..only his..destined to be his & he never realized it until now.

-dreams part 19-

-PREV NEXT PART 20-

Thanks a lot for all the lovely comments & likes
muskan little disappointed with the likes number
expect a lot more 'pouts'
trying to update more
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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abinash079

@abinash079

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#643

me first in this FF 🥳
coming to update awesome update maan actually wrote everything whic he desired and all those were in geet continue soon

Edited by abinash079 - 14 years ago

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Ambibamby

@Ambibamby

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#644

Muskan great update, next update should reveal Geet's identity.
For a secod I thought anni recognized geet as royalty but she was her brothers dream. So cute

Edited by Ambibamby - 14 years ago