FF Abhiya: In ur Arms Forever Chap15-Pg-120

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heena mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

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shrish wen r u going to update nxt part...i don't want to get late this time...jaldi karna😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: heena_mehta
shrish wen r u going to update nxt part...i don't want to get late this time...jaldi karna😉

2day I'll update heena😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
2day I'll update heena😊

Good Shrish... coz I will update tomorrow inshAllah so monday Heena's turn...Im happy we are maintaining the circle 🤣

Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago

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heena mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Good Shrish... coz I will update tomorrow inshAllah so monday Heena's turn...Im happy we are maintaining the cirle 🤣 hehehe tanzie its reli cool, waiting for both ur n shrish post, specially wanna read more n more abt abhay-pia, so u n shrish ..."ye dil mange more n more abhy-pia"😆😆😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@tanzie v r doing ringa ringa roses.one by one sabki baja rahe hai

@heena ya ya evn I wnt more of Abhiya ahha😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 5(1st part)

In Morning (Abhi's room)

Abhi wake up & was very furious wid the thought tht his parents didn't came 2 wish him on his 18th b'day.He straight away went 2 bathroom 2 take shower.He dressed up in gud clothes & thn agn thought 'May b dad-mom dont wnt 2 wake me frm my sleep.I m sure as soon as I'll go out of my room everyone will stand in queque 2 wish me'

Abhi went out all happy & glee.He was sure his family will wish him but 2 his shock nobody wished him. All were so normal.He became more furious.He proceed 2wards main gate of Khanna mansion

Radhika: Where r u going Abhi?Have ur breakfast 1^st?

Abhi: Mom I m not hungry

And without giving a 2^nd luk he moved out.

As soon as he left Tashi called every1 to invite 2 her bro's 18^th b'day.Radhika was busy in decoration while Vikram was calling his business partners.Dadi lke a queen was ordering every1.

Mr Vikram called Mr Dobriyal,Mr Mehta,Mr Mehra & Mr Raichand 2 attend his son b'day party.

On the way 2 jungle(Abhi)

Abhi was angry but as soon as his car come across jungle path he felt sudden calmness. He was smelling soothing air.The scent in air was driving him crazy.He stop his car & went 2 Tea stall. He sat their 4 sometime & phamous chai wala baba was smiling at him.Abhi felt tht weird.He stand & moved 2wards jungle. Somebody called him frm back

Baby chai wala(Chotu): where r u going?

Abhi: In jungle

Chotu: Don't u know tht jungle is dangerous

Abhi: I m not scared of anything

Chotu: But..(Chai wala baba interrupted Chotu)

CWB: Jane do usse. Woh uski Manzil hai. Kismat phir leke aa rahi hai aag aur patange ko kareeb

Abhi straight away went 2 jungle.More he go more he was losing himself.He felt as if he knows this jungle well & this jungle is his home.He felt as if he found his destiny.But suddenly a bark of tree fell on his hand causing him 2 bleed.He saw a gorgeous bunglow there which was calling him

Raichand House

Mr.Raichand got the call frm Mr.Khanna. He asked Pia 2 go 2 party but she refused.

Misha entered Raichand house all chirruping.She took Pia wid her forcefully 4 a long drive

In cafe

Misha: So r u set 2 go 2 Khanna's party

Pia: No mish I m not coming 4 party

Misha: But Y pia?

Pia: Mish u r asking me y?Dont u know 2day is Abhay's funeral & u wnt me 2 come & enjoy somebody's b'day party.No(tears rolling down frm her eyes)

Misha: Ok do tell me the date whn u will stop all this.I know u love me.He was evn my frnd.Raichands son but still v all r living na.U know wht u r selfish Pia.Everybody is trying 2 forget tht heartbreaking incidence especially ur Haseena mom but u always remind her.U need 2 b happy not 4 urself but atleast 4 her.Come 2 party 4 her sake.

Pia realized her mistake & said 'Yes

Raichand Mansion

Abhi was abt 2 enter the house but guard stopped him

Guard: Where r u going?

Abhi: Are u blind? ofcourse I m going inside the house

Guard: But who r u?U r not allowed 2 enter the house

Abhi: Oh I guess u don't love ur job.Dont u know me?

Guard: Who r u?

Abhi: I m their close relative.Tell me who live in the house?I know Raichands but I doubt u.So I wnt prove

Guard: Oh u know their name. Sorry sir. Mr Raichand,Mrs Raichand & their daughter love there

Abhi thinking 'Wht a fool?Come on any1 would tell after reading their name plate tht they r Raichands'

Abhi(smiling mischievously): is their daughter gorgeous?

Guard: Ya she is very beautiful

Abhi(fake scolding): Yaha ladkiya taakne aate ho.Abhi mai Raichand mommy ko bologna

Guard:Raichand mommy?

Abhi(naughty smile): Yes, don't u know I m fianc of Raichand's daughter.

Guard(all scared): Ohh plz sorry Sir.Plz don't complain abt me.

Abhi: Ok ok..

Abhi entered the house unable 2 control his laughter

Abhi 2 himself: Gud job Abhi.U r too gud.I m proud of u.

Abhi (shouting): Is anybody home, hello. No one.

He walked further

Haseena felt restless hearing this voice.She & chand straightly ran 2 main hall & 2 their shock they saw a similar face.Face of their beloved son.Both were standing still jst staring at Abhi

Abhi breaks the silence Abhi: Oh I m sorry 4 entering ur house lke this.But can u please help me?I m bleeding & ur house was near so I came here Haseena(wid mist eyes): Ya, sure son.Let me apply u first aid Abhi: Oh thts very sweet of u. Haseena applied oinment on Abhi's wounds & was so overwhelmed 2 c him while Abhi felt so comfort,warm & safe.He was keen 2 c this house.He had urge 2 take a round of whole house Abhi: I need 2 use a bathroom.If u dont mind Chand: 1st floor.Left Abhi: oh thnx As he left

Haseena: Our son is back chand.Our Abhay is back

Chand: Dont b fool.He is jst has Abhay's face

Haseena: No Chand,I can feel he is my son

Chand:Its jst ur illusion & No need 2 tell Pia abt this

Abhi upstair

He was staring at everything very carefully.He felt a bond wid thm.Without any intention he entered a room.He dont know Y but he really wnted 2 c tht room

Abhay's & Pia's room

He entered the room & was admiring it classic furniture

Abhi 2 himself: This room sounds lke a woman room.So clean & tidy.I guess it's Raichand's daughter room.Whtever but her smell is driving me crazy.

He saw everything without blinking his eyes.He felt a connection a strong connection.Thn he saw bunch of black rose.

Abhi 2 himself: Black rose in gal's room.Strange.Oh this gal sound mysterious.Not bad Abhi aate hi homework.

He smell the roses & kissed its petal

Thn his eyes came across 2 a photo frame.He was abt 2 go & c tht Haseena bumped into room.Abhi jerked suddenly

Abhi(nervously): Oh sorry I jst bumped here by mistake

Haseena: Did I said anything.Its ok.How's ur injuries now

Abhi: It's better.I think I shuld leave thnx 4 the help.

Abhi left & Pia entered

Part 5(2nd part bhi hai neeche deekho)

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

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Loved the connection between Abhi and Piya 😳 Loved it Shrish and tumne Abhay ko Character Dheela me dance kerwa diya 🤣 🤣

you r too much Shrish...but maza agaya 😆 This Abhay is more naughty and smiley for sure and I love it...can't wait for the first dance of Abhay and Piya...😃

Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 5(2nd part)

Khanna's Mansion

Khanna house was all decorated.Abhi was shocked 2 c this.His whole family came frm behind & wished him.He was so happy

Abhi: oh God u guys remembered it.I though u forgot

Tashi: how can v 4got such a disastrous day

Radhika: shut up Tashi.Oh baby ofcourse v remembered ur b'day so how's the surprise?

Vikram: And this is ur gift(He gave him keys of sport car)

Abhi: Awesome Mom.Love u,Dad & Dadi & hate u Tashi.Can I drive the car?

Radhika:No, 1st go & change ur clothes.Guest aate hi honge

Abhi went 2 his room.

Raichand House

Pia smell the house & tht smell was so divine.She felt as if it's her Abhay's smell

Pia: Mom koi aaya tha

Hassena(nervously): No Pia,jst a guy who got injured thts it.Are u coming 2 party

Pia: Ok,Yes mom I m coming.U & dad go I'll come later

Haseena: Ok Pia.Invitation is on table.Address is written on it

Pia: Ok

Pia's room

As soon as Pia entered the room she felt something very similar.She was smelling the scent,the same aura.Thn she saw her black roses which were kept on bed instead of study table.She grab thm & the same smell.She kissed thm at the same place where Abhi kissed & same tender touch.She was thrilled at this.She came out of her dreams & smiled wid sad tears thinking How much Abhay used 2 love black roses.She got ready 4 party.

Khanna Mansion

Radhika & Vikhram were welcoming guest

Mr Dobriyal(along wid Madhu & Misha): Congratulation Mr Khanna on ur son's18th b'day

Vikram: Oh u welcome Mr.Arnab.

Arnab: So where is ur son?V all r excited 2 c him.

Vikram: He is getting ready.

Misha: So ur bro is back tashi.How r u feeling now?

Tashi: Oh I envy him as soon as he came everybody is giving him more importance

Misha: Oh I know yeh sibblings bhi naa

Tashi: And misha u tell me where is ur soul sis cum bst frnd Pia

Misha:Aati hi hogi

Raichands came

Mr Raichand: Congratulation Mr.Khanna.Where is ur son?

Misha 2 haseena: Aunty where is Pia?

Haseena: She is on her way

Vikram: Welcome Mr.Raichand.He must b coming

Vikram 2 tashi: Go & call ur bro

Abhi's room

Tashi: Bro come na all r waiting 4 u

Abhi: No sis Abhi ki 18th b'day party hai.Hum style se aayenge

Tashi(immitating him): Hum style se aayenge.Bhag

Tashi went out

All r waiting 4 Abhi & there comes Abhi in full ishtyle

The song played

Kudiyo ka nasha pyare nasha sabse nasheela hai

jise dekh yah woh husn ki baarish mai geela hai

kishan k naam pe karte sabhi yaha raas leela hai

Main karoon toh saala Character dheela hai

He danced 2 its tune wid gals & showcase his everlasting cute yet naughty dimple smile

Dobriyals,Raichands,Misha all were shocked & were staring at him continuously.

There comes Pia.

Pia lke others was staring at him without blinking her eyes.Suddenly her dead heart started beating.Abhi too was staring at him wid smile.He dont know y?but he really wnted 2 c her forever.Pia felt so weak tht she was unable 2 stand on her feet.She was abt 2 fall whn same strong arms caught her frm falling.She stared at him wid baby brown eyes

Pia(whispere):Abhay

Hearing this Abhay cute smile turn into confused expression

HAHHA YAY I always wnted 2 c Abhay dancing in 'character dheela hai'.Show mai na sahi yaha toh maine Abhi ko nacha hi diya.Ok guys after dis part Abhiya story will kick start.

PRECAP: Abhi will flirt wid Pia & Abhiya 1st dance.

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago

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heena mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

shrish u r so damn dead,...how dare u to end it at such a point...gosh u r so mean!😆

yepieee today i m first or second(confused😆), bt still nt dat late

bt seriously i m sparing u coz u av given us such a terrific update...gosh shrish i wish ye abhi mujhe mil jaye😉...i m in love wid d character abhi, u av potrayed it so well, dat wenever i read abt him...i go ga ga over him😳...n abhai-pia's connection...eternal...😊...i loved where haseena said chand dat he is my son...n ofcourse "character dheela hai"...an awesome choice of song

...bt nw u av to post nxt part tomorrow only n seriously i don't need a long update abhi-pia ka part bahot hai😆

shrish a big bear hug to u🤗

luv

heena

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago