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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx for wonderful update and p.m..)keep it up for ur wonderful analysis👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome analysis yaar..thanxxx piya.. n shivu update soon dear..waiting..lol.
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Awesomeblossom analysis *Hats off*
Very well written, contineu soon :D

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Sorry Guys...for being later... here's Part 14...enjoy


Maan gets up with a severe head-ache. Unable to open his eyes he gropes to the bathroom and splashes water on his face. He searches blindly for his towel and wipes off his face. He opens his eyes in the mirror and then is about to turn back when a thing catches his view. A tabeez kind of thing lay in his neck which he had never seen before. He twisted it in his hand and wondered if he had seen that before. It did look familiar, he thought hard to conclude that he had seen that locket few days back. He rubbed his temple which still ached because of the intoxication he was in last night. He couldn't recall anything but a hazy face in a dark area. That face looked familiar to him and so did the voice. He strived hard but eventually gave up.

Location: Geet's Residence
Geet got up from the unconsciousness with the smell of some trespassers. She rose up only to find acute pain in her chest. She groaned and muttered, Milind!! She called for Ayesha who came in with Milind who looked furious.
Milind: What the f*** were you doing last night?
Geet(scared): Milind, look
Milind: I don't wanna look anywhere and don't want any of your explanation!
Geet: Milind, I saw
Milind: Do you realise, you were about to expose our strength?
Geet: MILIND!! I saw him
Geet almost broke down uttering 'him'. Ayesha stopped Milind from reacting while Leher took Geet out of the room. Geet was shivering with fear and pain for the first time. Leher patted her
Leher: Calm down!
Geet: Leher, I saw him'I really did!
Geet tried to convince Leher innocently.
Leher: yeah! I know you did! But please, calm down!
Geet: mujhe pata nahi kya ho gaya tha!
Leher: Geet!
Geet: I lost my control, I dunno what happened next
Ayesha came in and placed her hand on Geet's shoulder
Ayesha: Geet! Shant ho jao
Geet: main karna nahi chahti thi, woh sab itna achanak
Ayesha: Geet!
Geet: maine bahut koshish ki apne aap ko sambhalne ki, but whenever I see Ma'him I just loose control
Milind came in as he hugged Geet from one hand: Itna explanation ki zaroorat nahi hai! Ssh!
Milind embraced her as she tried to overpower her shivering. Ayesha gave her some fresh human blood to drink so that she felt better. Geet was still really scared from Milind and angry with herself.


DOCTOR!!??!!
A voice sounded from the main door of their house. Ayesha quickly cleaned herself as she was just coming back from hunt and was covered with wet leaves all over.
Ayesha stepped down to find Abhijeet standing on the door with some files in hand
Ayesha: Hi Inspector!
Abhijeet (casually): Good Morning, Dr. Geet kahaan hai?
Ayesha: umm, Geet upar chhat pe hai! Aapko kuch kaam tha kya?
Abhijeet: haan, woh kuch reports tally karwani thi!
Ayesha: oh! Aap upar chale jaiiyye!
Abhijeet: ji Thank you!
Ayesha: you're welcome!
Abhijeet dashed upwards because of the idea of meeting Geet which tickled him though Geet had turned down his confession outright. Geet stood near the parapet of the balcony clad in a shawl and looked outside at the thick forests gloomily
Abhijeet (shocked): Geet?
Geet woke up and turned back: Abhijeet! Hi!
Abhijeet: aap theek toh hai?
Geet: yeah! Kyun?
Abhijeet: aap bimar lag rahi hai
Geet: no! I am as healthy as a horse
Abhijeet: chaliye, aap kehti hain to main maan jaata hoon, waise ACP sir ne aapko bureau bulaya hai, aur yeh files dekh lijiye, medical terms to bilkul sar ke upar se jaate hain!
Geet (smiled): sure! Main thodi der mein bureau aati hoon.
At the spur of the moment, Abhijeet's phone rang
Abhijeet: Sr. Inspector Abhijeet, CID
Voice: Sir! Sir!!
Abhijeet: Hello? Kya hua?
Voice: Sir..laash sir!
Abhijeet: laash? Kahaan pur
Voice: ______
The phone hung up before the man on the other side could tell him the location
Geet: kya hua?
Abhijeet: nothing, I'll speak to you later
Geet: okay! I'll be there soon
Abhijeet: hmm
Abhijeet rushed out as fast as he could.
Location: Hotel
Maan dressed up in his formals, white shirt with a bluish over-coat. He came out of his room and was locking the door when he saw a bellboy staring at him
Maan: What is it?
Bellboy: sir! Aap andar kaise aaye?
Maan: matlab?
Bellboy: woh kal aap, hotel ke bahar gaye the na! raat mein nashe ki haalat mein
Maan: main?
Bellboy: ji sir!
Maan: mujhe nahi pata, main late ho raha hoon meri car ready hai?
Bellboy: ji Sir!
Maan: good!
Maan was on his way to his office when he got a call from Daadi
Maan: haan daadima!
Daadi: Maan bete, aap theek to hain!
Maan: ji?
Daadi: arey, kya hum apne pote se itna bhi nahi pooch sakte kya?
Maan: nahi!umm, main theek hoon!
Daadi: aur, aapko Geet ka pata chala?
Maan: Daadima! Aapko kaise!
Daadi: humein pinky ne sab bata diya!
Maan: pinky ki toh main
Daadi: Maan!
Maan: daadima! Mujhe kaam hai, main aapse baad mein baat karta hoon!
Daadi: achcha! Apna khayal rakhiyega!
Maan: ji
Location: Naitik-Akshara's heavens!

today is naitik and akshara's first marriage anniversary...
they are celebrating (they in mumbai )

naksh home...
N; Happy Anniversary Akshara...(naitik whispered)

(naitik had wished akshi for the 19th time throughout the day... everytime changing his style of wishing.. this time he kissed her near her ears and whispered in akshi's ears...)

A; happy anniversary naitik...!!!

N; (he was moving his hands over her face... feeling his beautiful wife...) he carefully moved a hair wich was akshi's cheek to behind her ear...

A; akshi was njoying the moment... her husband's touch... and the way he stared paasionately into her eyes...

While they were still staring... akshi spoke...

A; lagta hai aaj hum kahi bahar nai jaane wale hai... pura din hum ghar par hi the... (makes a face of mock sadness)

N; smiles... akshara... hamari shaadi ko ek saal ho gaya hai... aur aapko mere saath raat guzaarne k alava bahar jaane ki padi hai???

A; hum bahar dinner toh le hi sakte hai na... aaj kaam karne ka zara bhi mood nai hai...

N; achcha hai... aap energy save kijiye... kaam ayegi...

A; kya??

N; nai.. kuch nai... hum bahar chalenge... aap fresh ho jaiye...

A; while getting ready... kahan jaa rahe hai hum??

N; kuch toh surprise rehne dijiye... mein abhi nai bataunga!

A; theek hai.. theek hai... chaliye.. chalte hai!

Naitik takes akshi to a 5 star hotel.. wer he had booked a room for them...

Wen they are bout to enter a room (wich akshi misunderstands to be a small place just for dinner...) naitik closes her eyes wid a red band... he signals the staff to go away...and then... he holds akshi's hand and he made her open the door of the room, led her in,.. and den opened eyes...

The room had been beautifully decorated wid roses and candles...a sweet perfume filled the atmosphere... the food had already been laid...

A; naitik... yeh bed...

N; shhh... aap aaj kuch nai bolengi

Naitik takes akshi and seats her on the centre table...

They feed each while looking into each others eyes ❤️

After dinner... akshi goes to wash her hands... while she is washing her hands... naitik comes from behind...and hugz her... they wash their hands while looking into each others eyes through the mirror...

He gently kisses her on her neck...akshi blushes...

He kisses her again... she blushes even more...

He leads her to the bed...and makes her stand opposite him...

He kisses her eyes, her ears, her cheeks... akshi's face becomes red...

Naitik slowly moves his hands around her waist... and brings her closer towards her... whlle turning her...

He moves her hair... and kisses her on her back... with some more kisses, he unlocks the strands of her dress... he then turns her again... and makes her sit on the bed... he kisses her arms... moving up.. he kisses her neck.. her chin... and finally her lips...




The whole night they keep cuddling... ❤️


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Geet hopped in the CID Bureau with the information regarding the reports given by Abhijeet but found the entire office looked serious
Geet: Abhijeet! Kya hua?
Abhijeet: Dr. hum aap hi ka wait kar rahe the!
Geet: matlab?
Abhijeet: ek body mili hai! Aapko chalna padega mere saath!
Geet: ok! Chaliye
Geet and the team reached the heart of the jungle and then split to trace the body. Geet was much sure and fast and efficient in her foil because of her senses. She raised up her head to smell the air for blood and within no time she found the body.
It lay deep in a pit and she understood that the man wasn't murdered; it was just made a meal by
Geet: NOMADS!!
She quickly healed the injuries that could have exposed their clan and left only a knife scar on the corpse
Geet: Sir!!
All of them rushed to the corpse and Geet grinned evilly

In the Evening:
Geet was driving home after work when she suddenly felt a deep burn in her throat, she had started feeling hungry suddenly.
Maan came back from work and was resting in his room, recalling the incidents from the morning "Nashe ke haalat mein" he was so pretty sure Geet had something to do with that! This was all his heart said!
He went out that night, on the same road..where Geet was driving home
Geet's Residence:
Chand and Haseena, the nomad leaders, suddenly bumped in the house when all were relaxing.
Chandeena (together): KOI HAI!
Ayesha and Miling descend together: Kaun hai! Yes!
Chandeena: Where's Geet?
Ayesha: why?
Chand: usne bahut ghalat kiya!
Ayesha: kya kiya?
Chand: she messed up with Siddharth-Maithili
Milind (smirked): who the hell are they?
Haseena: don't mess with us
Ayesha: Peace!
Chand: usne hum logon ke saath panga lekar, theek nahi kiya!
Milind: Geet can never be wrong! We'll see!
Chandeena: oh ya! We will!

Next: Geet and Maan... come face-to-face??

Special Note:

Hello Maaneetians... this time...the credit of Naksh sequence goes to Stuti(stuti_naksh4eva)

I love you sweetu...drooling over naksh sequence... my encouragement worked yaar... yippe!!!

Now you guys can comment!!!

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part shivu darling🤗👏👏👏
it was sooo good... woww... i cud feel the return of IT... awesome part!!!

after sooo long... but it was an awesome part!!! waiting for them to come face to face... 😍
and ya.,.. i cud imagine chandeena very very well... "dont mess wid us"😆
awesome part...

ps.. tg u liked the naksh part😃



Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part Shivu
Hmm...maan ko kuch bhi yaad nahi hai...but more than d update the precap is exciting me...yaar jaldi se maneet ko mila do
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

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awesome part shivu darling👏
it was sooo good... woww... i cud feel the return of IT... awesome part!!!

after sooo long... but it was an awesome part!!! waiting for them to come face to face... 😍
and ya.,.. i cud imagine chandeena very very well... "dont mess wid us"😆
awesome part...

ps.. tg u liked the naksh part😃



liked...what do you mean liked the naksh part? I didn't like it...

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