MANEET FF: KISMAT KA KAMAAL

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MeriAashiquithh

@MeriAashiquithh

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Posted: 14 years ago

HI FRNDS(MAANEETIANS)😊

THIS IS MY FIRST FF HOPE U ENJOY THE INTRODUCTION😊

FIRST SCENE STARTS IN AN ELIMENTARY SCHOOL😃

third standard class room( shh class test is going on😭)

MAAN:madam ye ladki mere paper mein dekhrahahi copy karne ke liye.

madam look at the girl(hamaari geet) angirly.

GEET:nahi madam nahi.mein sach bolrahahu.ye ladka mere paper copy karne ki khoshish kiya.mein ne kaha copy karna acha nahi.mein inko paper nahi diya.usliye ye bekhar ladka tumko mere baare mein jhoot bolrahahi.😆

MADAM(looking angrily and at geet while this conversation is going on):geet mujhe patha kisne jhoot kaha(holding geet's ear)aao mere saat .tum ek bekhar kaam kiya aur phir se jhootboldiya.kneel down karo 2 ghante aur ye class test tum 10 times likhne ke baad mujhe dikhadhijiye tum ko mein 2 days derahahu understand.😲

GEET:(WITH FAINT EXPRESSION SELF TALK)ye kya hi babaji vo ladka ne kya kiya vo bevakhu unki paper khajana ke jaise samajrahahi.mein unko bilkul sada doongi bilkul.geet ke baare mein nahi maalum hi unko.unko vo sada jeevith bar yaad karungi ha.(with crying expression)karo geet kneel down karo lekin vo bhoot madam dekha tho 20 times hogi meri imposition😃

precap:maan and geet looking angrily at each otherstanding on a round table with group of boys and girls clapping around them in a closed room

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MeriAashiquithh

@MeriAashiquithh

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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 2

Geet after two hours punishment go to class and look angrily at maan.Maan looking at her from eye corner had a smile at her situation.

GEET:(self talk)😊arey ye kya babaji vo haskarenge mujhe dekhkar.hey babajhi mujhe ek bahut acha idea do usko maanre ki.mein tumko mere bada bada theen chocolates deduna tumhare khaane ke liye.ok deal.

then pinky comes with chips packet in one hand and juice in other hand

pinky:hey geet kaise hi tumhari punishment acha hi na and she laughs 😆

GEET:mat hasna aur mat bolna.tum ko hasi aarahahi mujhe dekhkar vo maan ke jaise.chale jao yehase.tum mere friend nahi,chale jao.mein aaj unko bajaana doongi aur tumko bhi.chale jao

pinky:sorry geet mujhe maaf kardo.kya karna padega mein haa mein tum ko help karungi vo bajaane ke liye mujhe maaf karo please

GEET:teeke aaj school ke baad tum principal room ke saamne wait karo mein tum ko kya karna bataadoongi😲

after school geet go after maan and dashes him

GEET:aankhe mastak par hi kya.dekhkar aao.😃

MAAN;mujhe dekhne ke liye sirf dho eyes hi.tumhari jaise dusronka paper dekhne ke liye adhikh aankhe nahi hi👏.tum nahi dekha aur mujhedaantana karta hi.

GEET:ye ruko tumhari bhagwas tum tumko bhagwan samjogi hi kya.aur tumhari paper ek khuber ka khajana.ye class mein sirf tum achi student hi kya.

MAAN;ha mein achi student hi.isliye tum mere paper me dekha

GEET:ek minute tumhara matlab sirf tum talented

MAAN:mein talented ya nahi mujhe nahi pata par mein tum se talented hu😉.

GEET:acha tum mere se talented hi.ok mein tum haare liye ek challenge deta hu.is mein tum jeet gayi to mein karungi tum kaho.aur mein jeet gayi to mein kahungi tum karo.teeke

MAAN:tumhare saat challenge so funny 😛tumhaare jaise log ke liye timewaste karne ke mere paas time nahi hi

GEET:mujhe pata hi.tum ko dar aagaya hi na😆.ok geet tumko choddungi😃

and she walk away from maan

MAAN:challenge kya hi

GEET:mere saat aao.

geet and maan enter into a dark room

after they enter lights focus on a round table aur pinky with their classmates enter into the room

GEET:challenge kya hi ki mein aur tum ye table mein khade karna padega.table ki corner mein hum fight karna padega.koun pehle neeche jirna to vo looser hi. simple hi na.challenge ko ready tum ab bhi⭐️

MAAN:mein tayyar hu

geet and maan looking at each other stand on the and tells each other they are ready.

GAME STARTS

they start fighting geet hits maans leg but he balances and maan pushes her and she balances.and this is going on all are clapping and telling geets name suddenly some one forcibly opens the door and calls out maan.ye aavaz sunkar vo bahut stun hua ye samay mein geet pushes him away and he falls down 😲

precap:the man come to maan and gives him a tight slap.koun hi vo?😭