Maaneet and their Arman- (OS/Song Fiction)-SAJDE- - Page 4

awsome update loved it but i think u should add one para more by showing nw armaan handling khurana construction he has given the best gift to geet in behalf of maan thats i think superb ending i know in reality always ending is going to be happy is not sure but here u can write that much i think sorry for my bak bak u feel bad i m really sorry for that its just my opinion not more then that

Originally posted by: naddiya26

it is bit emotional as you showed Maan is dead... you portray very touchy feeling Of Geet how she feel her life is without Maan...but an angel come to make her smile. 👏
do write more Os but PLz MAan should be alive

Originally posted by: ambbiha

i started crying wen i read maan was no more 😭i know that this s just a OS but i felt as such my life s lost bcoz i dont want to c geet wit out maan i really felt bad 4 geet 😭 its very very emotional part u hav done it well 😊

Originally posted by: Razz22

wow this is soo beautiful!! an SOO emotional!! 😭

Originally posted by: 20tullip2000

great os

Originally posted by: sakshi04

awsome update loved it but i think u should add one para more by showing nw armaan handling khurana construction he has given the best gift to geet in behalf of maan thats i think superb ending i know in reality always ending is going to be happy is not sure but here u can write that much i think sorry for my bak bak u feel bad i m really sorry for that its just my opinion not more then that

Originally posted by: shruti_ms

beautiful

Originally posted by: sarita21992

Cant even think abt loosing maan to d hands of death. I thought of leaving d fiction as soon as i read, he died. Nahii:-( loved d mother son bond bt missed maan like hell:-(