Maaneet and their Arman- (OS/Song Fiction)-SAJDE-

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sakshi

@tanvi04

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

awsome update loved it but i think u should add one para more by showing nw armaan handling khurana construction he has given the best gift to geet in behalf of maan thats i think superb ending i know in reality always ending is going to be happy is not sure but here u can write that much i think sorry for my bak bak u feel bad i m really sorry for that its just my opinion not more then that

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sakshi

@tanvi04

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: naddiya26
it is bit emotional as you showed Maan is dead... you portray very touchy feeling Of Geet how she feel her life is without Maan...but an angel come to make her smile. 👏
do write more Os but PLz MAan should be alive

i m also thinking the same

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ambbiha
i started crying wen i read maan was no more 😭i know that this s just a OS but i felt as such my life s lost bcoz i dont want to c geet wit out maan i really felt bad 4 geet 😭 its very very emotional part u hav done it well 😊

Thank you 😊

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Razz22
wow this is soo beautiful!! an SOO emotional!! 😭

Thanks for liking.I am never gonna write anything like this...ever !😛

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: 20tullip2000
great os

Thank you 😃

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sakshi04
awsome update loved it but i think u should add one para more by showing nw armaan handling khurana construction he has given the best gift to geet in behalf of maan thats i think superb ending i know in reality always ending is going to be happy is not sure but here u can write that much i think sorry for my bak bak u feel bad i m really sorry for that its just my opinion not more then that

Oh absolutely not , I did not feel bad.About writing next para , I'm not sure if I can do that but I would not mind you adding one.Go ahead if you have any idea...no objection 😃

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: shruti_ms
beautiful

Thanks 😊

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sarita21992

Cant even think abt loosing maan to d hands of death. I thought of leaving d fiction as soon as i read, he died. Nahii:-( loved d mother son bond bt missed maan like hell:-(

Thanks...

Seriously , now I'm regretting it .I did not think it would hurt everyone like this...sowieee everyone