FF Abhiya: In ur Arms Forever Chap15-Pg-120 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Anurag--

Srish fabulous update.,..d way u described d fight scenes plus abhaya romantic moments were awsum...😳and i am sure abhay will surely cum back may be as punarjanam...😆

Thnx. haha ur near anu😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I have read everybody's comment.But I m a human so i was not able 2 rply all but frm nxt time I'll try 2 rply all😊
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chap 3

Present

Pia:Agn God is in pain I guess 2 c me unhappy...

Thn a wind blew flying her hairs away.As if wind was here 2 whisper something in her ears.Something very important but wht?

Haseena:Pia b ready v have 2 leave 4 Dehradun.

Pia:Ya mom but is it important 2 go there.Tht place reminds me of Abhay.It hurts

Haseena:But v have 2 go bacha.Come on I m wid u na.Nothing will happen.U have 2 face this.

Pia:Hmm

Pia staring at moon talking 2 her Abhay

It's been 18 years Abhay & I m still waiting 4 u.I dont know wht Dehradun has stored 4 me but I have 2 face it.Misha specially invited me.Ya now Dobriyal know abt us & they accepted us.Tht night was so troublesome.The news of vampire vs warewolf was spread lke fire.Although v were able 2 convince tht its jst a rumour.But hiding frm my family was impossible finally v gave up.And now agn I m going 2 same Dehradun which gave me everything & thn snatched away everything evn my soul & i.e. 'U'

Khanna's House(Dehradun)

Khanna's house was decorated wid flowers,lights.It was luking lke palace.Being one of the richest ppl in town they had organised a lavish party .Mrs.Radhika Khanna was shouting on her servants. She wnted a perfect & well organized party after all her only son was coming frm London after completing his studies. He will finally live wid thm & will celebrate his 18th birthday wid thm 'Abhi Khanna'.

'Tashi' shouted Mrs Khanna come v have 2 receive ur bro frm airport. 'Yes Mom' replied Tashi.Tashi was a wild chick wid & her bindass attitude was her attribute.

Tashi got ready came downstair:Mom jaldi chalo I really wnt 2 meet bro.

Mrs.Khanna: Wait abi time hai.Remember Abhi ko pta nahi chahlna chahiye abt his surprise b'day party

Tashi:Yes mom.I will keep tht a secret.Tomorrow on his 18th b'day v'll surprise him

Mr Vikram khanna:Oh ladies chalo.V have 2 pick our man

Tashi:Dad I m already ready. Ask ur wife.She will take time 2 get ready

Mr.Khanna: I m tolerating her for 19 years haha

Mrs khanna: Ya ya udda lo mera mazaak whn my son will come thn I'll c u both.

Grandma: Abhi chalo my bacha must b waiting 4 us.Kyun mere ladle ko dhoop mai bithana chahti ho.

Whole family: yes ma'am

They parted 4 airport.

Airport(Dehradun)

Raichands family finally arrived in Dehradun after 18 long years.Haseena & Pia were staring at everything wid mist eyes. On other hand Abhi flight also landed.He was coming frm other side & Pia frm other.Both were walking 2wards each other.Both were busy on their phone.

Abhi:Ya mom I m here in airport.Where r u guys?

Mrs khanna: Son v r jst on our way.

Abhi: Mom wht was the need 2 receive me.I could have come myself.

Mrs Khanna: Come on Abhi u r coming 2 dehradun 4 1st time

Abhi : Ya ,ya I know

On other hand Pia was talking 2 mish

Pia: Mish now don't eat my head.C I m here

Misha: Hey shuld I come 2 receive u

Pia: No need.Mom-dad r wid me.I'll reach home safely.

Misha: Oh I forget 2 tell u tht 2morrow v have 2 go 2 Khanna's party.Their son will celebrate his 18 th birthday & Khanna shifted Dehradun 2 years ago but their son had 2 complete his study & now he'll stay wid thm so they called us & evn Raichands

Pia: I don't wnt 2 come.Mom-Dad will come.U know I hate parties

Misha:Plz Pia move ahead in life.U have 2 come + their daughter tashi is my gud buddy.Plzzz plzz

Pia: Ok

Thn suddenly both of thm collide.Without luking at each other they said sorry.But after walking few steps they both felt an urge 2 luk at each other.After 18 years Pia's dead heart started beating.She felt the same toch.She luk behind 2 c him but he was moving & he too was feeling the same restlessness he too turned his back but she was luking somewhere else.Both tried so hard 2 c each other but all in vain

Misha: Pia Pia kho gayi phir se

Pia: oh sorry mish.Will talk 2 u later.

Abhi:Ohh hoo Mom.I missed u so much.Arey sexy bhi aayi hai(pointing his grand maa)

Grand ma: chup rey badmaash

Abhi: No seriously I haven't seen any woman as hot as u.

Tashi: shut bro

Abhi: evn motto is here

Tashi: U r jerk

Abhi: Thnx 4 the complimet.Waise r there hot chicks in dehradun

Tashi: U mean dumb

Abhi: No I mean hot

Tashi: Oh ur hot chicks r always dumb.Ur ex Gf was too much

Abhi: I know but she was a time pass.I hope here I'll find someone way 2 hot

Tashi: Whtever

Abhi(to himself): Girls Beaware Abhi is here.Abhi means fun.Chalo now I'll make dis boaring Dehradun rocking

CWB(He is compulsory in my FF.I m his fan LOL😆):Aag aur patange ko toh milna hi tha.Patange nai aakhir bula hi liya aag ko.AB 18 years ka intezaar kya rang layega.Kaisi hogi PKYEK

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was awsm, continue soon m w8ng
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chap 3 updated will give u Character sketch later & those who wnt PM tell me b4
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shrish awesome update..
Wow so nw the tables hav turned..
nw Piya is the Vampy n Abhay as human..
Oh dat scene in airport was too filmy...😆😆
I actually while reading knew wots goin to happen.. 😆😆
But i'm xcited for dat khanna's party i realy want to see Abhi-Piya's face off..😳
Wel so tashi is i guess lik misha ryt???😳
Omg abhi to himself covo.. attitude haan..😆
CWb's note as hilarious... 🤣 🤣 18 years k intezaar k baad fir shuru hogi PKYE Nayi Kahaani..
Update soon dear..👍🏼
Thanx fow the PM..😳
Edited by Ayesha066 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Abhi=Abhay?? oMG,I hav a feeling dat dis Abhi is gona be Abhay's look-a-like...n da same Abhay-Piya-Maithali Pre-leap scenarios r gona take place,but dis tym,Piya is vampire n Abhi is human!! its Abhay-Piya-Abhi nw.😆
waiting 4 da next chappy.. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello!!!!first of all i want to appreciate the ff writers and their efforts..i am a great sucker of abhiya ff's ... ...so just tell me which ff you read or write...here you can advertise your ff , inform your readers when u update it!!!!
Guys if u wnt 2 know my update thn do check dis thread as I wont b able 2 PM u all.So keep checking this thread
And soon I'll update my character sketch on 1st Pg
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so abhay is reborn as abhi. love it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

Abhi=Abhay?? oMG,I hav a feeling dat dis Abhi is gona be Abhay's look-a-like...n da same Abhay-Piya-Maithali Pre-leap scenarios r gona take place,but dis tym,Piya is vampire n Abhi is human!! its Abhay-Piya-Abhi nw.😆
waiting 4 da next chappy.. 😳

Ya u r right Abhi will have Abhay's face but it wont b same.I mean & know same scenes lke Pre-Leap.U have 2 wait antara dear.I have no luv triangle.Let me give ur character sketch 1st😊

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