My Take on Anant's Shayari

Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

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note :- hey folks i m back with another topic as u some had requested me to have my take on Anant Shayari' so i have tried my bit .honestly i dont think it had that effect which Anant's shayari had .i dont know if i have done justice to it or not .its upto u all .i would have wanted Anant to say something like this .i m sorry if u find it a bot long

My take :-

jab mere kamre mein Subah ki pehli kiran AYE

Tumhara ruhani Ehsaas meri dil ko chu JAYE

Na jane kya hai tumhe aisi Kashish KHAAS

Dur hokar bi rehte ho dil mein Dhadkano se bi zyada PAAS

jab hoti ho mere saath aur kuch na mujhe Nazar AYE

Dil ko mile sukoon jaisi murjhaye Phool koi nayi Tazgii MILJAYE

Jab rehti ho mere paas mujhe aur kuch na BHATA

tumhare na hone par Dil bechan ho JATA

Navya meri Zindagi se tum kabi bi na hona DUR

Zindagi bhar apne palkon se pita rahu tumhare chehre ka NUR

jab hoti ho tum udaas Navya jaise khafa ho jaye mujhse ye ZINDAGII

Tumhara muskurata chehra mein hai jaise hazaro diyon ki ROSHNII

Zindagi ke pathrele raho par bi rahe mere hathon mein tumhara HAATH

he mere dil ki ye Dua mein rahu ya na rahu khushi aur muskhurahat Kabi na chode tumhara SAATH

Tumhare pyaar ka ehsaas kuch aisa hai mujme SAMAYA

Jaise kale badalon se bhare Asman mein Indradhanush ka Rang CHAYA

jab palkein khuli tum meri zehen mein JHAA JATIHO

Jab palkein ho bandh aks bankar khayalon mein SAMAA JATIHO

Ab tho us khuda se hai meri ek hi DHARKHAAS

ho umar bhar ka sath tumhara jaisi zindagi ke sath ho SAAS

Tumhara muskata chehre mere palkon mein aisi SAMAYE

MAUT ki aaghosh mein jate waqt sirf tumhara aks mujhe nazar AYE

HERES THE SCENE my take just cant match the innocence the purity the love that Anant had in his eyes when he was saying those lines .That was just so splendid so beautiful .No shayar can ever compete with Anant here in this scene both AnYa were so awesome here just loved their acting expressions n lines👏

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rH3Q1JDwLy8&feature=player_detailpage#t=402s[/YOUTUBE]

The original Shayari by the Prince himself for his beautiful Princess

Jab meri khidki par subah ki dhoop Ati hai
Aankh khulti hai aur tumhari yaad Ati hai

Din bhar tumhe dekh karbi dil Nahi Barta
Ghar jane ka bi mann nahi Karta

jab ghar jata hun to sham ko phir tumhari yaad Ati hai
sota hua tho tumhari yaadein baar baar jagati hai

aisa nahin ho sakta ki tum mere paas hi raho
har din paas akar dor kyun chali jati hoo

p.s. i hope i did justice to the request if not then sorry

Edited by manojshonafan - 14 years ago

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Preet

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I m completely flat on this

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Jab meri khidki par subah ki dhoop Ati hai
Aankh khulti hai aur tumhari yaad Ati hai

Din bhar tumhe dekh karbi dil Nahi Barta
Ghar jane ka bi mann nahi Karta

jab ghar jata hun to sham ko phir tumhari yaad Ati hai
sota hua tho tumhari yaadein baar baar jagati hai

aisa nahin ho sakta ki tum mere paas hi raho
har din paas akar dor kyun chali jati hoo

But But after reading your take... I m faint..👏...Tooo awesum

Your shayari reflects their pure love...tooo goood

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Preet078
I m completely flat on this
😍
Jab meri khidki par subah ki dhoop Ati hai
Aankh khulti hai aur tumhari yaad Ati hai

Din bhar tumhe dekh karbi dil Nahi Barta
Ghar jane ka bi mann nahi Karta

jab ghar jata hun to sham ko phir tumhari yaad Ati hai
sota hua tho tumhari yaadein baar baar jagati hai

aisa nahin ho sakta ki tum mere paas hi raho
har din paas akar dor kyun chali jati hoo

But But after reading your take... I m faint..👏...Tooo awesum

Your shayari reflects their pure love...tooo goood

preet

.mine was ok

The way Anant said those lines was just amazingly beautiful .No 1 can match that .he was awesome

Edited by manojshonafan - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hi Manoj

Awesome lines u have written,i like these lines

jab mere kamre mein Subah ki pehli kiran AYE

Tumhara ruhani Ehsaas meri dil ko chu JAYE

Na jane kya hai tumhe aisi Kashish KHAAS

Dur hokar bi rehte ho dil mein Dhadkano se bi zyada PAAS

jab hoti ho mere saath aur kuch na mujhe Nazar AYE

Dil ko mile sukoon jaisi murjhaye Phool koi nayi Tazgii MILJAYE

Jab rehti ho mere paas mujhe aur kuch na BHATA

tumhare na hone par Dil bechan ho JATA

Navya meri Zindagi se tum kabi bi na hona DUR

Zindagi bhar apne palkon se pita rahu tumhare chehre ka NUR

i was totally impressed in these lines.

When Anant said the lines also awesome and your lines also awesome 👏👏👏👏

When Anant said to navya his expression was simply superb

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: yaminirajan
Hi Manoj

Awesome lines u have written,i like these lines

jab mere kamre mein Subah ki pehli kiran AYE

Tumhara ruhani Ehsaas meri dil ko chu JAYE

Na jane kya hai tumhe aisi Kashish KHAAS

Dur hokar bi rehte ho dil mein Dhadkano se bi zyada PAAS

jab hoti ho mere saath aur kuch na mujhe Nazar AYE

Dil ko mile sukoon jaisi murjhaye Phool koi nayi Tazgii MILJAYE

Jab rehti ho mere paas mujhe aur kuch na BHATA

tumhare na hone par Dil bechan ho JATA

Navya meri Zindagi se tum kabi bi na hona DUR

Zindagi bhar apne palkon se pita rahu tumhare chehre ka NUR

i was totally impressed in these lines.

When Anant said the lines also awesome and your lines also awesome 👏

When Anant said to navya his expression was simply superb

yup whatever Anant said was simply fantastic even though it was short it had such a mesmerizing effect .i m dreaming if ever Anant could have said my lines i so wish it .my ordinary lines would become pearls of love quotes if he said them to Navya

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Newly_Born
Ossam!!!

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Bun Maska

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Posted: 14 years ago

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awesome dear...and thks for posting this link once again...oh God since that day I must have seen it infinite times...but still not had enough of it 😳 ...11:50 onwards 😳😍

Edited by tvdost - 14 years ago

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: tvdost
awesome dear...and thks for posting this link once again...oh God since that day I must have seen it infinite times...but still not had enough of it 😳 ...11:50 onwards 😳😍

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barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey manoj, thanks for paying attention to our request and posting your take on the shayari😛...it is beautiful and so romantic..you have portrayed each and every emotion so nicely👏..

I agree, that the love and innocence that Anant had in his eyes😳, as he was saying the shayari is unmatched😛..it was just splendid...

But the literrary work of yours is unmatched to dear😳...your shayari and anants eyes and innocence..wow..what deadly combination that is😉😊...

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: barbie2011
Hey manoj, thanks for paying attention to our request and posting your take on the shayari😛...it is beautiful and so romantic..you have portrayed each and every emotion so nicely👏..
I agree, that the love and innocence that Anant had in his eyes😳, as he was saying the shayari is unmatched😛..it was just splendid...

But the literrary work of yours is unmatched to dear😳...your shayari and anants eyes and innocence..wow..what deadly combination that is😉😊...

di

@ bold i concur absolutely

@ green i so wish for it di 😊

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