My Take on Anant's Shayari - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great work dear. I didn't like shayaris before. But after read your shayaris now I'm loving them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zara990

Great work dear. I didn't like shayaris before. But after read your shayaris now I'm loving them.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Manoj, yeh hui na baat!

I agree that Anant said his lines really innocently, but I am sure Shaheer could have done justice to something deeper like what you've written. I personally found the on-screen shayari quite bland, but I agree that it suited the situation (written by a 19-year old in love).

Thank you so so much for taking time out for our request, I know you must have been really tired with college work.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anantanant

Manoj, yeh hui na baat!

I agree that Anant said his lines really innocently, but I am sure Shaheer could have done justice to something deeper like what you've written. I personally found the on-screen shayari quite bland, but I agree that it suited the situation (written by a 19-year old in love).

Thank you so so much for taking time out for our request, I know you must have been really tired with college work.

A BIG usha .i m glad u liked my efforts😳
@ bold I concur completely😃
@ red thats so sweet of u u understand my plight but making posts in this forum can might be physically tiring but my mind is never exhausted .it just want to make more n more posts
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Manoj you don't give yourself enough credit!!! You are way too modest!! This definitely did Anant's shayari justice!!! In fact, in all seriousness, it was soo sweet and excellently written that you should be paid for writing so wonderfully! (: I can't believe you doubt yourself!! Yours and Anant's shayari can both be great in their own ways can't they?! So don't put yourself down too much!

I do agree though, Anant's poem was also sweet and perfectly written to convey his feelings for Navya... A lot of people say Anant isn't going to be a poet anytime soon, but I think it's the slight amateurity of the shayari that makes it perfect because it didn't need to be a grand gesture to show Navya his love for her, but it was simple and sweet (:
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesOme.! niiice shayari..
and anant's shayari just melted me..super cute and awesOme..just like him

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishi755

hey reall superb 👍🏼

Nishi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: X-xNishax-X

Manoj you don't give yourself enough credit!!! You are way too modest!! This definitely did Anant's shayari justice!!! In fact, in all seriousness, it was soo sweet and excellently written that you should be paid for writing so wonderfully! (: I can't believe you doubt yourself!! Yours and Anant's shayari can both be great in their own ways can't they?! So don't put yourself down too much!

I do agree though, Anant's poem was also sweet and perfectly written to convey his feelings for Navya... A lot of people say Anant isn't going to be a poet anytime soon, but I think it's the slight amateurity of the shayari that makes it perfect because it didn't need to be a grand gesture to show Navya his love for her, but it was simple and sweet (:

@ bold for it nisha .Thats so sweet of u

@blue could nt agree more 👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shenzz

awesOme.! niiice shayari..
and anant's shayari just melted me..super cute and awesOme..just like him

shenz 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hai Manoj Bhaiyya,I'm a new member in this forum.I saw your good bye note in this forum.I know it was not a good bye note.But I don't know which is the exact word to use.Its nice to see you back.
Its a very nice post
Edited by myrtille - 14 years ago

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