Opposite shores of a sea LAST Prt & EPILOGUE Pg 91 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81


Loved the 1st update 👍🏼
Very nice flow ; Geet's flashback esp. her last phone convo with Maan was superbly penned down 👍🏼

Thanks for pm ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
brilliant part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved da starting with maaneet
sooo cute
poor geet
were has maan gone
cant wait more
who r da kidnappers
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
very nice start
luved it
wonder what happened to maan
the flashbcks were very sweet
im guessing maan is the kidnapper right ?
please do continue soon x😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
very nice
awesome
lovely part
maan has kidnap geet
hope maneet get married
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
hey guys im gonna update part 2 today but i was thinking of changing the name of the SS... share ur views if its ok??!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
waiting...waiting...waiting😃
pls update soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

hey guys so im back with the next part. dont forget to tell me how was it😊😊


Part 2


A guy in a black vest is standing in a shabby place looking out of the window lost in thought.


He is impatiently waiting for someone.


He thinks in his mind 'they should have come back by now! What is taking them so long? What if they had got caught?'


He gets more restless and looks at his watch and thinks 'I should have gone by myself!'


Suddenly a guy comes into his room and says "Boss, Munna is back!"


Maan looks at him relieved and asks "Kaam ho gaya?"


"Yes Boss. Munna us ACP ki mangetar aur uski behen ko utha laya hai!"


"Hmm." He said and thinks in his mind 'ACP Dev Oberoi! Now you will understand what it takes to mess up with Maan Singh Khurana!!!'


He dials a number on the phone


Dev: "Hello"


Maan: "Maan. Maan Singh Khurana."


Dev gets angry and says


Dev: "Maan Singh Khurana?! How dare you call me? I'm gonna---"


But Maan didn't let him say anything more and said


Maan: "ACP, I don't have time to waste on your empty threats. Just called you to tell you that your little fiance is visiting me for few days. Don't worry about her. I'll take good care of her."


He said with a smirk. Dev said angrily


Dev: "how dare you touch---"


But Maan didn't let him finish again and said


Maan: "If you want to see her alive and untouched, then do as I say. Leave Yash and Raju! Or else..."


Dev: "Or else what?"


Maan: "I'm sure you have heard the word gang rape, haven't you?"


Dev felt so angry that he can broke the phone in his hand


Dev: "how dare you? Are you trying to blackmail me?"


Maan: "who said anything about blackmailing you?! I'm just informing you ACP. Leave my men or else find another girl for yourself!"


And he hangs up.


Somewhere deep inside, he was feeling bad. He didn't wanted to kidnap some innocent girl, but he had no other option.


ACP had arrested Yash and Raju, and he was planning on killing them in fake encounter.


Maan couldn't let that happen. They were depending on him.


So he had to take serious steps fast. He could have tried to attack the lockup and rescue yash and raju but they were being kept in a high security cell and there was a good chance that they might get killed in the process as the police has already decided to kill them.


So he was left with no other option.


He planned to kidnap ACP's fiance and demand for yash and raju's release in return.


Munna comes inside and tells him "Boss, all is set."


Maan said "Hmm." And suddenly some unknown feeling hit him and he said "Munna, make sure the girl doesn't get any kind of problem over here. No one will touch her."


He doesn't know why he said this. He knew his men would never touch her immorally. But still somewhere in his heart he felt to comfort that unknown girl. He did not know why he felt like that.


He doesn't even know her. He hasn't even seen her face ever in his life.


But there was something in his heart, that he couldn't pin point at.


When he has threatened ACP for killing the girl or doing wrong with her, he has felt a strange pang in his heart. His heart didn't want to say that, but it was necessary. It was just an empty threat. He cant even think of hurting that unknown girl outside even in his dreams.


And suddenly he was again feeling restless. He doesn't know why???


A sudden urge in his heart was craving to go outside and have a look at the girl whom he has never set his eyes on ever in his life. She was a total stranger for him and he for her. But he was feeling that some unknown invisible thread was pulling him to her.


He cursed himself for feeling like this. He doesn't have a heart!! He has killed his heart 5 years ago... So why is he feeling restless for someone???


At last he couldn't take it anymore and he went outside to have a look at the girl.


And what he saw, made his heart skip a beat. He couldn't believe that he was actually, in real, looking at her beautiful face; that he was looking at his Geet...


Geet and Pinky were both still unconscious. Maan started moving towards her absentmindedly. As if she was pulling him towards her. For him, nothing mattered at this moment than his Geet...


The whole world made no difference to him right now. He has almost forgotten how beautiful she was!!! She was looking like a little angel in the moonlight. His angel!!!


He looked at her lovingly and caressed her every feature of her face with his eyes.


He realised that he has never fully appreciated how beautiful she was.


He went close to her and sit on the side.


For that moment, he doesn't know who he was or who she was. All he knows was that she is his Geet and he is her Maan.


He gently picks up her hand and kissed on it.


Geet's hand moved a little in his hold to hold the hand that was holding her. It was as if her subconscious mind knew that was the place where her hand belongs... In his hand.


A smile came on his lips and he found wet drops of water falling on their entwined hands and he realised that these moistened drops have escaped from his eyes.


He lovingly caressed her forehead with his hand while putting her hair back from her face.


All those feelings that he has buried deep down somewhere in his heart 5 years ago, have come out in a huge force by mere looking at her face.


And he remembered his decision that he has taken almost 5 years ago. He has decided to go from her life and never come back. He had decided never to look back on his decision again and leave her alone.


He hasn't explained anything to her and just disappeared from her life with the hope that she might someday start hating him and move on in life.


Because they can never be together anymore. They were like the two opposite shores of a sea, to whom the water, in their case their love, does join but they can never be together.


He remembered all the promises that he has made her but couldn't keep them...


How could he??? He couldn't ruin her life...


And suddenly he saw a ring on her finger and realised that it was not the same ring that he has put on her finger. It was a different ring.


And he came back to his senses. He realised that geet is engaged to the ACP. And he felt like someone has stabbed him right through his heart.


It isn't easy to see your love engaged to someone else. And the most painful part is that you know that is best for her and this is what you have wanted for her. To be happy in her life...without him.


Even when he wanted it for her, doesn't make it less painful for him. But he will take this pain with a smile.


He can still die a million times to keep her happy.


He realised that he had made a mistake. He has made the biggest mistake of his life by kidnapping her.


He thought that maybe she has forgotten him by now. After all, 5 years is a long time. Just because he couldn't forget her for his entire life, doesn't mean that she will be the same too. That's the reason why there's someone else's ring on her finger.


He thought sarcastically that just like his ring, she has thrown him out of her life too. Isn't this was what he wanted too!!!


And if she saw him, all her old wounds will get fresh.


He gets up determinedly to go out of her sight as soon as he can, before she wakes up.


But suddenly his eyes fell on her neck and he stopped in his steps.


She was wearing his ring in a chain around her neck... Near to her heart!!


And he realised that she hasn't forgotten him. Something that his heart already knew deep inside.


He thought happily 'she doesn't hate me.' And a million emotions passed through him. It was like his dead heart has become alive again in his chest.


But then his expressions changed as he realised what he was wishing for and he said to himself determinedly


"But you will hate me Geet! I will make you hate me!!"


And then his expressions changes to hurt and he looks at her face caressing with his eyes and said


"This is for your own best!! I'm sorry Geet! Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena!!" [forgive me, if possible]


And a lone tear escapes from his eye.


so guys im ready to take all the chappals and tomatoes as i know that none of us want to see maan in pain.. but i couldnt do anything😔 as its story demands it. im very sorry if made u sad with the update...

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Edited by jazz07_dh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
great update :D i'm eager to find out what made Maan turn into a criminal :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Yeahhh i knew it was maan...
thank god..
now just wake geet up so she can see her Maan...
and hopefully maan wont suceed in making geet hate him .. :)

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