FF 'Eternal Love' (promo, page4),24july

Two Friends driving in the car.Anant on driving seat "Ranveer,this is our last moments in this village,,honestly ,,i really don't want get back to mumbai,,,,i will miss this village a lot".Ranveer on other side,little bit sleepy ,pats on Anant's shoulder"journalist sahib i know that you will miss Ramgarh but i have girlfriend ,,think about my relationship". Anant stops the car on a side."why you stopped here,Anant?" asks Ranveer suprisingly.Anant steps out of car with his expensive camera and starts clicking Photos, of the old temple on the right edge of Land."oh no ,,not that same mandir,,i thought you have forgottten that girl with oldie looks"Ranveer says irritated.The irritated guy stands on the gorund and looks here and there for something intresting rather than watching Anant's photography skills.After taking 2-3 Pictures ,anant shouts teasingly ,,"step in the car,,we gotta go,,we are already late,,we have to give this car back right on 11 am,,if we will not,,then we have to pay extra for it and i don't want your relationship in trouble".Both the friends get back in the car ,,Anant drives,,"wow sir,,,if you were not my best friend ,,i would have quit this job ,,and don't worry Ritz trust me very much i was saying that because of only her family,,,,by the way ,,you met that girl a year ago and did you think that she was waiting for you here,,,or Am i getting any other better reason for your stupidness?"says Ranveer.Both the friends went to airport ,,gave the car back to the owner and flies to mumbai.

"Navya" shouts a lady ,,in an apartment ,,wearing traditional indian saree,,a lunch box in her hand,,looking in very hurry "Navya,,,beta jaldi aao,tumhare papa bahar wait kar rahe hai"Navya comes ,running from her room,,wearing a salwaar kameez with dupatta,,a bag on her right ,,must be books "sorry maa ,,wo book dhoondh rahi thi".Meeta handing the lunch box to navya"kitni baar kaha hai ,,raat ko hi tayyari kar liya karo subah college ki,,ab jao ,,papa wait kar rahe hai".Navya runs downstairs ,,like if she has to catch delhi express.After reaching "kya huya beta ,,phir se books dhundh rahi thi ki kya"Deepak Mishara asks easily.Deepak knows his daughter's habit,,the college girl is always confused,,always in hurry ,,always little bit scared of others,,never discuss her problems with others,,she hasn't that much confidence like today's generation has.In the car ,,Navya looking outside,,Mishra driving ,,asks navya,very much knowingly ,,that he will get same answer "navya new college ,,darr to nahi lag raha".Navya replies "No papa,,i m not scared,,bas ek do din ghabrahat hogi ,,ab toh main last college ko miss nahi kar rahi,,aur waise bhi appy hai,,she will take care of me,,,,aap usse kitni baar baat kar chuke hai".The rest of the drive to college went very boring ,,both the papa and girl were silent,,,It seems they don't talk too much,,like father like daughter.After reaching the college,,mishara went to his office.Appy welcomed her best friend with a tight Hug."chal navya main tujhe Ritz se milati hoon,,she one of my best friend here in the college"

hope you guys like it,and please do reply if i should continue or not

Originally posted by: barbie2011

I loved the prologue..its interesting..and you keep me wanting for more..

please come back soon with the FF.

nicely written

Originally posted by: Newly_Born

Its really nice,but try to introduce somewhere the actual scenes from navya.

Originally posted by: navyaalex8

Interesting! Would like to read more...😊

Can I make a request, if u don't mind? The light green colour and the italiccy font are making it a bit difficult for me to read (maybe its bcos I'm a praacheen vastu 😉)... the lack of separation/paragraphs between the dialogue and action also makes it confusing to follow...if possible, could u rectify these?

Originally posted by: Preet078

Nice prologue...