A Crude Criminal & His Unscrupulous Belle-OS..

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

this was beautiful..... Loved it

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

I imagined RA.It was superb.A very diff story

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Beautiful...

plan toh definately baht hi achha tha...!!! n mujhe yeh OS padh kar Dhoom 2 ki yaad aayi...!!! par vahan mujhe Raj k bike k piche Aish dikhi...ha ha ha...😆!!! main sach me un dono ek movie me dekhna chahungi...😛

par jab ki hum is OS ki baat karr rahe hain...toh sach me plan mast tha...par tune jis tarah se use present kiya na...voh ek dam mindblowing tha...too gud...

& end ko le kar main thodi si dari hui thi...!!! par phir mujhe tera naam yaad aaya...ki tera naam toh Surya hai...isiliye haan par kuch bhi andhera nahi hoga...!!! aur mera guess bhi sahi raha...

itz....lovely...

*cont soon...😆

* aadat padd gayi hai...ha ha ha...😆