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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
I dont think that Maan is that bad like how Dev's characterize him.
Maan taking Geet for granted like he owns her.
Maan is irresponsible on his work..
why is he like that. He is very suspicious.
But Dev's intention sounds fissy as well.
Geet's reaction at Taj was really an shock.
And now Maan is super angry for her behavioral.
Geet need to explain to maan over her sudden out-burst!!!!
Thx for the pM

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Posted: 14 years ago
That was awesome update !!!! looks like geet in trouble
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👏Woah ...jealous nd crazy geet 😆 ...this maan is making her insane😆 ...aah sumthing is wrong with this Dev dude ... I smell sumthng ...nd Dadi dznt lyk maan maybe he is lying ... aweusm awesum update👏

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wow nice story...
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wowww ur new ss its amazing nd nice ,like d way sumwhere geet feels fr maan everythng is reallyy niceee, continue like dis with full of love nd happinesss

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
geet is falling for maan
gr8 going
do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lot for all the beautiful comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
oooyyyeee di i m waiting...di can i be selfish...aaahhh i mean ek ek update of aprachit and maitri too...
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-Bekhudi-
part 9

She nervously looked here & there. His gaze intensified. She could see it turning red. She could feel the anger flaring.
Tumhe pata hain woh kaun thi?
She blinked couple of times ..nahi.. she shook her head.
Maan captured her chin between his thumb and forefinger, raising it. Geets defiant eyes glittered with anger..anger more on his question.. his concern over Ms. Rathode...her eyes were spitting fire.. something should be more on his act but she didn't even seem to notice that..

She was handling an impt project for me. he spat

Maan felt her pulse race. She was afraid of him still there was a significant amount of fear churning in the almond depths with anger, he was taken a bit back.. but kind of loved her anger when he mentioned Ms. Rathode..


he stared down at her & she seemed irritated when he tried questioning abt the lady who seemed to be over friendly with him. He was used to females flirting around him. He never cared, he never had time to even notice. But he had crossed all his limits with her. Something abt this girl .. he didn't know why he was never himself with her.. or just self..still didn't know he could be like this. he could do things he would have never could even imagine.

He abruptly released his hold and she lost her footing. With her hands holding files & duppata, she could not reach out and soften her landing. Maan instinctively grabbed her shoulders and tried to help her stand upright again. The second he touched her, she started snapping and jerking wildly. The more she thrashed, the tighter Maan's grip became. He looked at the eyes that began to catch their attention now. He gave a stern look to her indicating to calm down she didn't, turning her in a jerk, he walked her walked to the lift leading thm to the hotel rooms. She tried to free herself & his hands gripped her waist, squeezing to self & pushed her inside the lift. The moment the lift closed she was cornered. She knotted her duppata & cuddled back to the lift wall looking down. He exhaled sharply after pressing the topmost button to the executive suit. He hit the side of the wall & rested his head on hers. She closed her eyes feeling scared.

Tumhari problem kya hain
he roared. She stood closing her eyes tight holding the file close to her chest.
Why do u have to be jealous of that stupid Ms. Rathode
she opened her eyes instantly..though addressing Ms. Rathode made her happy..but still..she said
no I am not jealous.. she tried to explain..
why should I be jealous.
His eyes turned wild in anger every word she spoke just made him mad. His gaze fastened on her, his eyes glinting with sudden interest. ..oh really!! he narrowed his brows.
she tried to convince herself more than him.
Why would she!!! though since 2days she has been doing things she would normally won't do.
His typical smirk, as she has always seen, darkened his eyes. She inched backward close to already glued wall. His looks intensified as he inched towards her.

U r ..

samjhi
she gulped hard as his breath now began to fan her skin a burning sensation send shivers down her. She clutched her dupatta on the right side while. Nahi... she denied..with a trembling voice. Still trying her to believe wat she was saying though whole of her began to believe she was!!! but logically why should she be.. she hates him!!!
Maan grabbed her and pinned her against the wall of the elevator kissing her fiercely looking into her big widen eyes.. u r
no
she moaned into his mouth
U r he still insisted.. with the second kiss that took her breath away and her lips trembled against his.
Still with her trebling voice ..she protested.. na..
The third kiss seemed to last forever. In feverish desire, she wrapped her arms around him.. haan..
He growled and pushed her fiercely against the wall, driving his body against hers.

Geet moaned his name maan & he claimed her lips again, kissing her with a raving passion. Easily, his tongue slipped into her mouth meeting hers. His hands and lips were all over her. & she was driven into a different world. Don't know wat he would have done if the lift wouldn't have opened to their destination. He grabbed her hand & pulled her to the suit. She was dragged through the corridor to the room. He slide the card & turned the nob when the light turned green. She nervously looked at him & stepped back ward.. trying to realize wat was happening.

He held her arms gain, she snapped & tried to go away. His intentions scared her more than his her intentions terrified her. Wat was he planning.. wat is in his mind..Was he taking advantage of her obvious, confused feelings for him..? Did he see her as weak, helpless?

No. ..he is not like that.. something in her voiced.. but wat does he keep doing to her all the time..

she kept inching backward nervously.
He looked at her moving away from him..holding her lips shaking her head..
no
nahi..
I am not jealous

Maan grabbed the back of her neck, and pulled her to him. He kissed her hard, and long, and wet. She felt his hands around her now, pulling her towards him. She wanted to resist, but couldn't, she just couldn't. He pulled her into the suit, and pushed her up against the wall. His tongue was in her mouth, probing, & almost making out with her wearing cloths. U r .. he said again.

She looked furiously at him.. breaking free herself & throwing the file at him.. I hate u.. I hate u
don't do this to me..
u have no rights to do this to me.
He wanted to scream out.. then why she did this to him.. driving him crazy
making him do things he would have never thought of doing.
All he could do was punch the wall in anger.

She tried to move away from him.
U can't leave yet
mujhe nahi kaam karna
he flipped the file ..tumne kaam kiya kab? he taunted throwing the file beside her..

u have not completed the file
she looked at him furiously.. after all this he expects her to still work for him
he pulled her in & made her sit in the chair.

She tried to get up.. he pressed her down .. sit down he ordered
ek tho kaam nahi karthi ho
Ms. Rathode ko aapne jealousy ke karan baga dethi ho
I trusted u ..
he paused
I didn't get jealous when u spoke to dev today
he squeezed her cheeks in anger..
that too with a smile he added
she could feel the anger flaring in him when he said that.
Don't know why she felt guilty.. he trusted her!! & she let him down not completing the work.
She felt ashamed. Wat ever it be.. she needed the job & she was not doing justice to it. She dipped her head. He lifted her chin in a jerk to meet his eyes. His eyes was crimson red spitting fire.
Aab tum Ms. Rathode wala project handle karogi. He said thrusting a bigger set of files in her lap.
He crossed his arms & turned his back to her.
U may leave now.

-behkudi part 9- muskan

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-PREV PART 8 NEXT THREAD 2 -
thanks a lot for the warm welcome to behkudi
loved the comments & thanks a million for the likes
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muskan

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