newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 60

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Precap haan 😛 thanks dear

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Ys dear maan is very zaalim ab dekthe hain humari sherni kya karti hain

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Ys maan is DD

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Ab kya kare maan k evil plan ki wajah se dev n geet ko 11 no. ki bus pakadne hi padi now let us see ke maan ka plan kahi maan ko hi baari na pade

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Yes they r jaanidushman bt I hope k they bcm humsafar soon

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Ys dear zaalim singh khurana se toh geet ko bachkar hi rehna hoga. Ys brother dev is toh dere but iss situation mein se shayad geet ko koi aur bhi nikal saktha hain

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Oh thanks dear. Maan ko toh badla lene ka hi bhoot chada hua hai yes this dev is good

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Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 12
Khurana Mansion
Annie: Dadi where are u?
Dadi: Annie hum yaha hai ( I m here)
Annie: Dadi aap yaha baithi hai aur main aapko pure ghar mein dhund rahi thi ( I was searching for u in the whole house)
Dadi: Hum humesha ki tarah akbaar padh rahe hai Annie aur waise bhi aapko humse itna kya zaroori kaam aan pada jo aap itni excited lag rahi hai ( I m reading the newspaper dear n why r u so excited)
Annie: Ofho dadi uss akhbaar mein toh humesha ki tarah wahi gissi pitti khabare aati rehti hai aaj ki taaza khabar tho hum aapko sunaeyege (What is in the newspaper same old stories I will tell u today's breaking news)
Dadi: Achha batayiye (Go ahead)
Annie: Ye dekhiye dadi aaj ke din ki sabse sensational photo ( have a look at this photo dadi)
Dadi: (starts laughing) Geet ne maan ko jhaadu se maara I can't believe this. Achha hai thodi bahut pitai toh maan ki honi hi chahiye ( Geet hit maan with the broomstick good maan deserves such a thing)
Annie: Hai kya nahi ye sabse masaledaar khabar
Dadi: Yes dear lekin maan chup baitnewalo mein se nahi hai wo zaroor apne pitai ka badla geet se lenge... hum isi waqt office jaa rahe hai ( But maan will surely try to trouble geet ... I have to go to the office right now)
Annie: Waha Dev bhai hai na wo samal lenge (Dev will tackle the situation)
Dadi: Nahi bete humhe hi jaana hoga ( No dear I hv to go)
Dadi: Brij gadi nikaliye humhe office jaana hai ( Remove the car I need to visit the office)
Dadi leaves
Khurana Constructions
Dev: Geet ye gyarah number ki bus ne tho haalat hi khaarab kar di. I am really tired yaar
Geet: Yes Dev u r right but atleast hum puach tho gaye
Both of them enter the office
Adi: Dev sir aap itne thake hue kyun lag rahe hain ( u look tired dev)
Dev: Adi wo lift mein koi kharabhi hain issliye humhe seediyon se aana pada ( o there is some problem with the lift )
Adi: Lekin subah toh lift bilkul thik tha ( but it was working in the morning)
Dev: O forget it Adi. Meet Geet bro's new secretary.
Adi: Hi Geet
Geet: Hi Adi
Maan comes out
Maan: (addressing to geet) Lagta hai time ki koi keemat nahi hai tumhe kyun? Office ka pehla din aur aaj hi late ye mat bhoolu ke tum iss office mein sirf ek secratary ho iss ofiice ki maalkin nahi ( It seems you don't have any value for time first day in office and late...don't forget that u r a secratary here n not the owner of this firm that u can come as u wish)
Dev: Bro Geet tho ghar se jaldi hi nikal gayi thi wo toh main hi tha jisne geet ko apne saath chalne k liye kaha aur aap toh Delhi ka traffic jaante hi hai ... geet ki isme koi bhi galti nahi hai aaj wo meri wajah se late hui hai ( bro geet had left early but it was me who persuaded her to come with me and u r aware of the busy traffic in Delhi... it is totally my fault geet is innocent)
Maan (thinking) iss dev ko beechmein taang adane ki kya zarurat thi
Maan: Ok get back to work every one
Maan enters his cabin
Geet: Thanks dev
Dev: Anything for you geet afterall u r my sweet little sister
Adi: Geet come I will show u ur cabin
Geet: Thanks Adi
Everyone starts their work
Maan: (gives a call ) Geet wo rathore's ka project file lekar mere cabin mein aa jao ( get the project file of Mr. Rathore)
Geet: Yes Sir
Call ends
Maan: Ab maza aayega badi jhasi ki rani bankar phirthi thi (gives an evil smile)
Geet: Ye Rathore ki file kaha par hai ... wait let me ask Pinky
Geet: pinky tumhe pata hai k rathore ki file kaha pe hai
Pinky: Geet maine toh tumhare table pe rakh diya tha thik se dhund wahi kahi hoga
Geet: Thanks dear I will check
Geet: Hmm... table pe toh nazar nahi aa raha...
Starts searching in the shelf
Geet: O here it is par ye toh khafi upar rakha hua hai how will i remove the file
She then sees the Stool
Geet: Haan isspar chadkar file nikaal lethi hoon ( I will take the aid of this stool to remove the file)
Geet goes and picks the stool and then gets on top of the stool
But then ... a loud noice
Geet bahut buri tarah se neeche gir jaati hai and she is badly hurt. She is bleeding and lying unconsious
The entire office staff gathers in her cabin
Adi: Geet... geet tum thik tho ho naa
Pinky: Adi geet ke sar se khoon aa raha hai
Adi: o no maine toh pehle hi kaha tha k iss stool ko yaha se hata do par pata nahi kyun maan sir ne mana kar diya
Dev comes rushing
Dev: Kya hua...itni bheed kyun hai
Dev: Geet... ye geet ko chot kaise lagi
Adi: Dev sir lagta hai Geet iss stool mein kahde rehkar kuch nikalne ki koshish kar rahi thi n ye stool k taang mein problem hai she must have lost her balance
Dev: (angry) Adi jab tumhe pehle se pata tha k iss stool mein problem hain toh tumne iss stool ko geet k cabin mein kyun rakhwaya ( when u were aware that this stool is not in a proper condition then why did you keep it in geet's cabin)
Adi: No Sir I was removing this stool but Maan sir did not allow me to do so
Dev: (thinking) O no matlab ye sab bro ne jaan bujkar kiya
Meanwhile Dadi arrives
Dadi: Ramu kya baat hain lift nahi chal rahi
Ramu: Wo dadi actually
Dadi: Kya baat hain batayiye
Ramu tells her the entire truth
Dadi: O toh ye baat hai no problem aap ek kaam kijiye aap humhe 9th floor tak chood dijiye
Ramu: Ji Dadi
Dadi enters the office. She immediately senses that something is wrong
Dadi: Ye sab kya ho raha hai... Geet Ye geet ko kya hua?
Dev tells her the whole thing
Dadi gets angry
Dadi: Dev jaakar Maan ko lekar aayiye ( go and get maan )
Dev goes
Dadi: (thinking) Aap iss hadh tak ghir jaayenge humne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha maan ab aap hi geet ka khayal rakhenge aur aap hi inhe hospital bhi lekar jaayenge
Maan arrives
Dadi: Maan aapke office mein itna bada hadsa ho gaya aur aapko kuch khabar hi nahi hai
Maan: Aise haadse toh aaye din hote hi rehte hain... aur waise bhi ye geet ek number ki draamebaaz hain... kaam se bachne ke liye acting kar rahi hogi ( such accidents are common dadi n I think this girl is just doing some kind of drama)
Dadi: Aapko ye drama lagta hain... geet ke maathe se itna khoon beh raha hai... aur aap itni chothi baat kar rahe hain aapko sharam aani chahiye maan ( U think this some drama geet is badly hurt and u r speaking nonsense u should b ashamed of yourself maan)
Maan: But Dadi
Dadi: Hum kuch sunna nahi chahte aap fauran geet ko lekar hospital chale jaayiye ( i don't want to listen to anything u immediately take her to the hospital)
Maan: Main kaise lekar ja saktha hoon
Dadi: Geet ko apne baho mein uthakar aur kaise ( lift her in ur arms)
Maan: Kya?
Dadi: Don't waste a single minute take her immediately and this is my order
Maan is helpless. He can never go against Dadi. Maan geet ko apne baho mein le letha hain
Dadi: Another thing Maan lift is not working issliye aapko seediyon se jaana padega aur zara samalkar geet ko lekar jaayiyega aakhirkaar aapko 10 maale utarne hain geet ko chot nahi lagni chahiye
Maan: Ji Dadi
Maan: (thinking) Ye tho mera hi plan mujhpar hi ultha pad gaya
precap: Geet: "Thank you"
Part 13: pg 109
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part wow maan apne plan mein khud hi phas gaya
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!!
Buth acha hua Maan kaye sath
Thank God Dadi and Dev was there for Geet
Aab maza aiye ga
Contd Soon
Keep Rocking
Luv
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update piya...too gud...bechara maan kya socha tha or kya ho gya...par ek baat to hai inhi sab ki wajah se they will be close soon...loved it...waiting to know what happens next...!!!


Continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Awesome part
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loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful
wow geet says thanx to whom
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hhey pls updat soon

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